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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Amazing :)
So beautiful :)

Thank you. 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ---Anu---
Holy!! This is awesome Gurleen! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ I m awed. This is beautiful! I m feeling so mushy right now.. Imaginations running wild...all coz of you..🤣

Thank you so much Anu! 🤗

Now you know why it took me so long to write it out. If this is your state from just reading it imagine mine while I was writing it out. 🤣

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon
Simply amazing.
It was full of romance but what i loved more about it is the passion. Dev is really soo passionate. ❤️
Flawless writing.👏

Thank you so much! 😳

I definitely see as Dev being the more passionate one. Bahar se shareef zaada but andhar se raw animal.. ☺️

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Lepzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Oh My God! Oh My God! What was that? 😲 Its freaking awesome. Believe me or not I've read it 3 times and still..STILL cant get over it. No offence with ShaRica but I so want to see this on DevAkshi or just at least a part😳. Om my Holy God! 🤢Dev is so...damn damn dominant.

Emmran eh? Seriously? I would suggest Ashiq Banaya Apne and Phir Mohabat for dominant Dev and Itni si Baat, Bol Do Na Zara for soothing romantic Dev. Whatever I suggest Sonakshi will be under his spell.

Man! You nailed it. Seriously I want to read more and more of your work in DevAkshi. It was all magical and freaking awesome. Seriously I'm in love with your work. 🤗 I'll have to keep a pack of ice before reading your OSss it seems. My cheeks are paining. My God...Now pakka I'll make a list. 🤣

P.S : Keep writing more and more and more...😈

Edited by .Leprechaun. - 9 years ago

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: .Leprechaun.
RES...
P.S : I need some time to digest☺️

Aaahh, man!

I'm waiting for you to comment for so long. 🤣

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princesspipi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

This is so good... Amazing... Just wow... Please continue writing like this... Waiting for more...

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Thank you so much! 😳

I definitely see as Dev being the more passionate one. Bahar se shareef zaada but andhar se raw animal.. ☺️

You are most welcome. 😃

And i agree he is soo passionate, and i loved the simplicity and last day where he asked her to tell him everything about her, that was something i never saw on television.

Thank you for writing this, would love to read more about our passionate dev. 😆

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bharkha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

OS was ultimate.. I felt like the script s written.. actors did their job perfectly n directors cut.. all in one.. gr8 writing...

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: princesspipi
This is so good... Amazing... Just wow... Please continue writing like this... Waiting for more...

Thank you so much! 🤗

Have a lot of ideas in mind, it's just a matter of writing them all down now. 😆

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon
You are most welcome. 😃
And i agree he is soo passionate, and i loved the simplicity and last day where he asked her to tell him everything about her, that was something i never saw on television.
Thank you for writing this, would love to read more about our passionate dev. 😆

YES!

I mean Dev's lines are really simple but they hold SO much passion to them. His intentions are noble but there is SO much desire in them. Sonakshi may be the dominant one when it comes to other matters, but jab passion aur romance ki baat hoti hai, tab Dev babu mahir hai. ☺️

You are most welcome once again. 🤗

I have quite a few ideas in mind. Just a matter of picking which one to write first. 😆