DevAkshi One Shot: With Each Kiss - Page 7

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

OMG, YES!

For me it's like, I start writing down one concept and keep ten other in the back of my head but don't start on them until I jot down all of the first concept first. It'll become too confusing to sort everything out once I start writing. It has to be all linear with an appropriate beginning, middle and end.

LOLL, I can guarantee you I can connect with all the weirdos on some level or another. 😆😆

Thank you so much once again. 🤗

Originally posted by: .Leprechaun.

Done editing. I lost the number of times I read the OS. ☺️

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon

Hehe...

I have the same problem, i once even mixed two concepts and wrote one. 😆

But i found a solution that, just a keep a note of the pending concepts.

Because you are a weirdo like me. 😆

Originally posted by: .Leprechaun.

Oh My God! Oh My God! What was that? 😲 Its freaking awesome. Believe me or not I've read it 3 times and still..STILL cant get over it. No offence with ShaRica but I so want to see this on DevAkshi or just at least a part😳. Om my Holy God! 🤢Dev is so...damn damn dominant.

Emmran eh? Seriously? I would suggest Ashiq Banaya Apne and Phir Mohabat for dominant Dev and Itni si Baat, Bol Do Na Zara for soothing romantic Dev. Whatever I suggest Sonakshi will be under his spell.

Man! You nailed it. Seriously I want to read more and more of your work in DevAkshi. It was all magical and freaking awesome. Seriously I'm in love with your work. 🤗 I'll have to keep a pack of ice before reading your OSss it seems. My cheeks are paining. My God...Now pakka I'll make a list. 🤣

P.S : Keep writing more and more and more...😈

OH MY GOD. MY SEARCH FOR YOU FINALLY GOT OVER TODAY. You don't have any idea that since last night I'm searing and asking for you everywhere on Twitter that what's your name? 'How can I reach you?', What's your username? And at last last finally logined my India forums account after after year chasing you. I'M SO SO THANKFUL FOR YOU FOR WRITING THIS. OMG FROM WHERE TO BEGIN MAN!!! I'm so nervous. You slayed my whole life!!! I and one of my friend have been talking about this fan fiction since last night and thinking how magistic, how enchanting, how mesmerising, how magical this is. Usually I ignore such type of parts when I comes in a novel thinking like no I won't read these things but your ff has become a drug for me now. I can't even look for words to praise you. This peice of art was actually about how two people have fallen in love not like those where the leads seem more interested in kissing a stuffs which seems that they aren't in love but all the want is to do sex. This was so touching and your mentioning in between that they have huge amount of respect for each other made me die!! Thats true love. Obviously the paragraph where they both crashed down the best and kissed alternatively sweet and slow. Rough and hard deserves Oscar! Thats ultimate and I had goosebumps when I read. It seemed as if I wasn't reading, I'm actually watching it. You're the best. I and my friend are dying to read the next update. We are your biggest fans I can guarantee you! The last paragraph of this ff is so beautifully worded. Why don't you write a novel?? A best selling novel actually? I'm gonna buy several copies then. I hope you notice me and pm me whenever you write a next one. I've made my mind that now I'll login here just to read your updates. I keep on smiling while reading your ffs I'm so so happy I got to read this! This is a peice of art and very very rare amount of population in this world has got the latent to make readers imagine the same way as the writer imagines while writing. I thought I can feel sonakshi and Dev everytime. So so thankful to you today. My search for you ha accomplished today. Also can you tell me your username of you have twitter so that this fan keeps in touch with her favourite writer??

Originally posted by: twilight_lover

OH MY GOD. MY SEARCH FOR YOU FINALLY GOT OVER TODAY. You don't have any idea that since last night I'm searing and asking for you everywhere on Twitter that what's your name? 'How can I reach you?', What's your username? And at last last finally logined my India forums account after after year chasing you. I'M SO SO THANKFUL FOR YOU FOR WRITING THIS. OMG FROM WHERE TO BEGIN MAN!!! I'm so nervous. You slayed my whole life!!! I and one of my friend have been talking about this fan fiction since last night and thinking how magistic, how enchanting, how mesmerising, how magical this is. Usually I ignore such type of parts when I comes in a novel thinking like no I won't read these things but your ff has become a drug for me now. I can't even look for words to praise you. This peice of art was actually about how two people have fallen in love not like those where the leads seem more interested in kissing a stuffs which seems that they aren't in love but all the want is to do sex. This was so touching and your mentioning in between that they have huge amount of respect for each other made me die!! Thats true love. Obviously the paragraph where they both crashed down the best and kissed alternatively sweet and slow. Rough and hard deserves Oscar! Thats ultimate and I had goosebumps when I read. It seemed as if I wasn't reading, I'm actually watching it. You're the best. I and my friend are dying to read the next update. We are your biggest fans I can guarantee you! The last paragraph of this ff is so beautifully worded. Why don't you write a novel?? A best selling novel actually? I'm gonna buy several copies then. I hope you notice me and pm me whenever you write a next one. I've made my mind that now I'll login here just to read your updates. I keep on smiling while reading your ffs I'm so so happy I got to read this! This is a peice of art and very very rare amount of population in this world has got the latent to make readers imagine the same way as the writer imagines while writing. I thought I can feel sonakshi and Dev everytime. So so thankful to you today. My search for you ha accomplished today. Also can you tell me your username of you have twitter so that this fan keeps in touch with her favourite writer??

With all the love & best wishes.

-Ani

Sooo soo good!! You write so well!! Loved it

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Umm... oh.. wow! 😆

To say that I'm speechless is definitely an understatement. I mean, first of all I had never imagined that my stories are read by members outside of IF let alone discussed. People talk about my stories! That is so unreal for me right now. And then to hear that you have actually been hunting for me just to read my stuff - again, so unreal.

The of sex conversation was not pre-planned. It had sort of just cropped itself up as I was writing. For DevAkshi, it's not just sex. It's not just a physical act that is happening out of lust. It's rather more intimate and more personal than that. It is about the union of love and of two souls for them. Sex is just too profane of a word for it.

As for future updates, there won't be on for this as it is a one-shot. It is meant to be about one specific topic, thought or story that I had in mind. It won't be going further than this. However, I do have other one-shots written out in case you are interested in them. 😳

A lot of people have suggested me to actually write a novel but it's really not that easy as writing fan-fiction. It's easy to write here because I already have an available audience - the fans of the particular couple I am writing on. However, to write an original story with an original set of characters and to expect people to buy those novels at a face-front value... that's really tough. It's a really noble idea and it definitely is in the back of my head, but if it ever happens, it happens. I'm not actively pursuing it right now. Again, I'll see how it goes. :)

The best way for you to keep in touch with me will be through IF as I'm the most active here. :)

Thank you so much once again for your extremely lovely comment. 🤗

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Sooo soo good!! You write so well!! Loved it

Intense and beautiful.