DevAkshi One Shot: With Each Kiss - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: masooma98

Woahh!! This was beautiful!

Loved every bit if it ❤️


Thank you so much! 😳🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os..well written..Loved it..😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Simply amazing.
It was full of romance but what i loved more about it is the passion. Dev is really soo passionate. ❤️
Flawless writing.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt

oh wow it was superb👏

u write so beautifully.
keep writing


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you. 😳
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Thank you ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kcharekar

it is so well written dear that i actually was imagining it happening between them. You are an exceptional writer and you have penned all their romance in such passionate way. Amazing work , please do contiinue such errotic imaginations.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: andy1245

its so amazing want it in d real show show as well


Thank you so much! 🤗

If we can get even just a tidbit of this on the show, that will be amazing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: shanayaroxx

all i did while reading was blushing

in b/w mom came nd asked ''itna smile kyu kr rhi he''🤢
i cooked up some silly story and i can tell by her looks that she didn't believe me😆
and yeah keep writing such os because i like to keep cooking silly stories🤣


Oh god, that's the story of my life. 😆

Every time I would laugh, my grandpa would ask me to show him what's so funny. 😆😆😆

Ab bataon, yeh bechari abla nari bole toh kya bole? 🤣

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