DevAkshi One Shot: With Each Kiss

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masooma

@masooma98

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Woahh!! This was beautiful!

Loved every bit if it ❤️

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zaara610

@zaara610

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome os..well written..Loved it..😊

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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

oh wow it was superb👏

u write so beautifully.

keep writing

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Ketaki

@kcharekar

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

it is so well written dear that i actually was imagining it happening between them. You are an exceptional writer and you have penned all their romance in such passionate way. Amazing work , please do contiinue such errotic imaginations.

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Antora

@andy1245

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

its so amazing want it in d real show show as well

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SHIVANI

@shanayaroxx

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

all i did while reading was blushing

in b/w mom came nd asked ''itna smile kyu kr rhi he''🤢

i cooked up some silly story and i can tell by her looks that she didn't believe me😆

and yeah keep writing such os because i like to keep cooking silly stories🤣

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Holy!! This is awesome Gurleen! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ I m awed. This is beautiful! I m feeling so mushy right now.. Imaginations running wild...all coz of you..🤣

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ssimmy
That was sooo intense. Still at a loss of words. Your writing is so eloquent- I could visualize everything clearly. Amazing ❤️

Thank you so much Simmy! 🤗