Masquerade (DevAkshi SS) Part 4 Page 12 (July 26th)

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Hello to everyone!!

So I am Hinal, some of you may know me from the other 2 OS' I've posted. I am back with yet another story, though this time, it is going to be a two-shot.

And before I lead you to the story, I'd like to give you guys a warning. Although I am not writing explicit scenes, there is an adult theme which is implied. If you guys are uncomfortable with the idea, then please do not proceed to read the story. *But apart from that, it shouldn't be a problem*

Also, one last thing, if you guys haven't already done so (and are interested), then check out my other stories!! :)

1) A Poignant Scene - Dev OS

2) Salad Woes - DevAkshi OS

And now, without further ado, here is the first part of the story finally. Please don't forget to leave your valuable comments 😳
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Masquerade - Part I

I was at the bar with Bunty, chugging down the last sip of beer. He left me to join a girl on the dancefloor, while I remained seated. Asking for another bottle, I spun the chair and faced the live band. Although this whole ambience wasn't exactly my scene, I had agreed to the plan and didn't have it in me to back out now.

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Come on Dev! It's my 27th birthday! It's the perfect way to celebrate! Not to mention, get some "action" as well.

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Get some action, I laughed recollecting the way Bunty had smirked at that. A bottle in my hand and my eyes on the band, I was almost done convincing myself to leave. And that I almost did too, until my eyes met the eyes of a very, very... very beautiful girl.

"Is anyone sitting here?" she asked with an enchanting smile.

I gulped and tried to speak. But what came out was definitely anything but coherent words. Oh come on, why are you acting like such an idiot Dev?

She chuckled, "I'm assuming no?"

I coughed and smiled sheepishly, "No, no one is. I'm so sorry. I was too lost in your eyes to comprehend what you were asking."

Her laughter accompanied her as she sat beside me, "Smooth!" she raised an eyebrow.

"A gin and tonic for the lady," I told the bartender, leaning a little closer to this intriguing woman. Taking her hand in mine (and of course asking her permission), I kissed it, "Dev Dixit is the name. And yours milady?"

"Sonakshi Bose milord," she shuffled closer as well.

I gave a side-glance to Bunty, who - although was enjoying himself - was smirking and giving me a thumbs-up, adding a shameless wink as well.

We had just finished our drinks as the band began playing one of the more popular songs. "So Ms. Bose, care for a dance?"

"I can't really dance though," she shrugged. "Oh don't worry about that! Two neat shots of Tequila."

Quickly taking down the shots (her and I, both, of course), I grabbed her hand and led her to the dancefloor. Her hands were around my neck, and mine were on her lower back. It was after a song-or-two that I felt one of her hands pry off my neck and pushing my hands even lower than her lower back... Much, much lower.

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"What fun are bars without hookups?" Bunty said.

"Are you for real Bunty?"

"Honestly Dev, you'll only understand if you give it a try!"

I laughed, "Yea, let's see about that"

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"Mr. Dixit," she whispered in her ear, coming dangerously close. I felt her breath fanning my cheek, a mix of passion and longing rising in me.

"Do you want to go someplace quiet?" her eyes twinkled with raw passion, or was it lust?

I looked around to find Bunty, but he was nowhere to be seen. What do I say now? Do I go with her? Do I back off and find Bunty?

"Dev..." she slurred a bit, the alcohol really kicking in now. "Let's go to my place!" she whispered again, fidgeting with the buttons on my coat. "Have I told you just how sexy you look in this blazer?"

I knew I had to say something now if things were to progress. Albeit with a little hesitation, I finally gathered the courage and replied with an equally suggestive remark, "Can you imagine just how sexy I'd look without it?" I smirked through the silly smile that was threatening to appear.

She leaned in completely and gave me a peck on the lips. Then, grabbing me from my tie, she pulled me away from the dancefloor. I called out Bunty, who was near me, and waved him a goodbye.

"Enjoyy," that idiot said to me. Though for once in my life, I actually think I was going to enjoy.




Click HERE for Part II

Click HERE for Part III

Click HERE for Part IV

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome..i could imagine each scene..wish we get to see something like that in the show..coz devakshi surprised all of us today..so i believe everything is possible..hats off to CV's 👏
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Originally posted by: saumya07

awesome..i could imagine each scene..wish we get to see something like that in the show..coz devakshi surprised all of us today..so i believe everything is possible..hats off to CV's 👏


Awwh thank you so much!! :D
Uff I have to wait to be able to watch the episode in a decent print.. So unfair 😭😆
But yes, I'd like to see Dev and Sona in another perspective like this. Exploring a realm that is ways beyond their primary characterization. I'm sure we will gradually get the exploration of their characters :) Looking forward to it!!
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It's really different and too good
Continue friend ..
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Different and really nice :)
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Originally posted by: uthraa.m

It's really different and too good

Continue friend ..


Yaay! Glad you enjoyed it!
You have no idea how nervous I was about posting this 😆
I shall have the next part written hopefully very soon :)
Thank you for your feedback 😳
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Originally posted by: Asma-

Different and really nice :)


Awwh thank you soo muchhh 😃😳
That's really nice to hear (or well read 😆)
Glad you are enjoying it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Different.. Nd interesting..
Update soon


Thanks a lot!! 😃
Happy to know that you're liking the concept (:
Will try to be quick with the next update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am here! Exams are over and I can finally comment without any stress (or guilt at being on IF and not studying😆)
As soon as as I read this, I was instantly taken into an alternative universe which is the aim of an alternative universe story, so a job well done babes! I loved the new and bold Dev-Sona, very sensual and hhmmm☺️

I feel like you are trolling us though. I don't know want to comment here what I am thinking about you are going to do with the next part of this OS, but I have an inkling of an idea. But they are all just speculations anyways!

UPDATE SOON! LIKE THIS WEEEK!

-Pari ❤️
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Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I am here! Exams are over and I can finally comment without any stress (or guilt at being on IF and not studying😆)

As soon as as I read this, I was instantly taken into an alternative universe which is the aim of an alternative universe story, so a job well done babes! I loved the new and bold Dev-Sona, very sensual and hhmmm☺️

I feel like you are trolling us though. I don't know want to comment here what I am thinking about you are going to do with the next part of this OS, but I have an inkling of an idea. But they are all just speculations anyways!

UPDATE SOON! LIKE THIS WEEEK!

-Pari ❤️


Hey Pari!! ❤️
😆 Lucky you! I have my midterms next week and I'm literally not in the mood to even read my notes let alone study 😭 This week's episodes aren't helping me focus either 😳

Thaaank youuu 😃 It was quite interesting for me to write this because it's not the typical genre I like to touch. I'm good with deep talks and stuff like that, but all this is not my forte, not even close. Lol
So I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that :D

I'm not going to comment anything on that just so I don't give any clue from the way I phrase things 😆 But let's just say, I have yet to write the next part, so I could very well make it go either way 😉

I will try to update soon! But worst case scenario will be late June. Let's hope I don't laze around much and get my studying done so I have time to write 😃

Thank you once again for the review!! ^_^

Take care 🤗

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