Masquerade (DevAkshi SS) Part 4 Page 12 (July 26th)

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basket_101

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: awesomecouples
Its lovely! do continue soon!! :)
I wish we could see something like this on the show!

Hey!! That's so sweet of you!!

I'm really glad you think the story so far is worthy enough for that 😳

Thank you sooo muchh 🤗

I know I'm delaying it quite a bit, but the next installment will be up very soon!! :D

Hope you don't mind the delay :)

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Originally posted by: Sp8699
When u update next part do PM

For sure! :) That should be the case very soon 😊

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Originally posted by: Ksgrkfan
Beep!!!! I want to read this. Totally different Dev and Sona in a different back up. Continue soonish and please pm me if you can.
Great work. You write really well. I love the sense of humour and fun loving nature of Dev and Bunty. They sound their age. And that vixen!!! Wow!!!
Update soon.

Heyya!

Wow thank you soo muchh 😃😃

As much as I love Dev and Sona as the characters they are in the show, I couldn't help but imagine an alternate universe with these characters resembling those that I'm more used to being around 😆 And with that, this story was born :P

I shall definitely PM you (:

And awwh, thank you soo much! Really glad to know that you are enjoying the story! 😃

It took me quite the courage to be able to write such a piece, so it really is very exciting to receive such wonderful comments 😳

Thank you once againnn <3 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Loved reading this version Of Devakshi.

Please update soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Its okk..will wait for your update.. 😊

Thank you so much for understanding!! 🤗

I will try my best to make the next part worth the delay 😃

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Originally posted by: littleshine
Loved reading this version Of Devakshi.
Please update soon.

Awwh thank you so much!! It was really fun imagining them in this new light! Only glad to be able to share the view 😃

The next update shall be up within a couple of days for sure :)

Thank you once again!! 😳

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basket_101

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello everyone!! I am finally back with the next bit of Masquerade! Though a little shorter than usual, I do hope you guys still enjoy this part as much as you enjoyed the first part!!

The next ( and most likely last) installment will be up very soon as well 😳

Enjoy!!

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Masquerade Part II

We found a cab and took it to my place. Feeling a little frisky on the ride itself, we sat as close to each other as possible. If the mix of alcohol and want hadn't influenced me, the driver checking the mirror constantly would have been at the other end of a pretty nasty outburst. But I couldn't care less as I allowed my lips to linger on the nape of her neck while her hands caressed my back.

"Sir, 300 rupees please," the taxi driver spoke, his eyes unwaveringly glued to the back mirror.

"Mind your business," I snarled as I handed him a 500 rupee note. "Dixit, let's gooo," she slurred yet again, her heels in her hands as she waited outside the main gate of my house.

"You live here?" she looked around in awe, "Self-made or family wealth?" she smirked. "Family-made," I winked back, not leaving the chance to grab her from the waist as I led her in. Fortunately, I had the house to myself tonight - well to be honest, it was less luck and more planning. But regardless, I felt excited. A surge of adrenaline rushing through my veins as I let myself loose - something I never knew I could do. Of course the alcohol has a role to play in this as well, I thought to myself.

I was going to ask her if she needed a drink or something, but it seems like she really wasn't in the mood to fool around. No pun intended.

She pushed herself against me, crushing her lips against mine as I put my hands under her thighs and lift her up, taking her into my bedroom.

Caught in the heat of the moment, my breath was ragged and it felt hot and stuffy all of a sudden. In an attempt to carry her to the room and maintain the kiss, I tried shifting my balance.

"OWWW," she screamed, obviously having broken the kiss.

"I'm so sorry Ms. Bose!" I quickly stepped away from the door frame I had so casually bumped her head into.

"Call me Sona. And it's okay Dixit..."

"Dev!"

"It's okay, Dev. I can see it's your first time," she smirked, taking the chance to kiss me again.

I put her down and locked the door - to say I was nervous would be an understatement at the least.

Click HERE for Part III

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