Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: uthraa.m

Really hats off to u friend

Wat a nice update ...




Thank you for compliment

Glad you like it 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm...and yeah wonderful creation...the dance was nice...wow lipstick and all...dev to rubber band K sath imagine karke bohot funny...love the father daughter time...
Love you...
Come back soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dear😃
read al d parts in 1 goo😳n it was getting very intrestingg

haha tat pink madness n lipstick fadingg was soo cuteee🤣

well i must say ur daughter n son r sooo adorablee dearr😳

continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Last update was really hot yar. And that peticot vala scene was very unique😆
If ur daughter is like devki than I am falling in love with ur daughter.
I always love baby girls 😊
I thought you will show again separation when I read in starting but reading last part I came to know that you are talking about past.
I am just loving your story.
Continue soon.
And give my tight hugs and kisses to that cutie pie
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayu1982

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I am Mayu:)
This is my first try as os.


The initial promos said " kya khote hai kya paate hai jab dil ke faisle dimag se hote hai " ...
So here is my version story as on Devaskshi love story ..
Flashback

Dev and Sona broke up and promised each other that they will never meet in their entire life

---------------------After 5 years -----------------------------------
Current situation

Delhi : At airport

Sona : Wow it feels so good to come back to this city .. My city

Saurabh dada after kicking and punching few taxi drivers who are shouting at top of their voice: Sona!!! am here Sona!

Sona : Dada!!! Oh Dada!!Tumi k"mana ch?( How are u ?)

Dada with tears in his eyes : Ami Bhalo ( am fine)!! pani baluna ( you tell )and gave tight hug to her ..

Sona with tears in her eyes as well : mi' bhl chi( am fine too) and both laughed ..

Dada : But where is princess of Bose family ??? Where is she ? Am dying to see her ..

Beside Sona, small nearly 5 year old little girl holding her doll with one hand and bag at other hand with smiling face..
Sona: Dada !!Woh rahi jo apne favourite pink doll and pink suitcase ke saath khadi hai ( laugh).
Sona : Devki come here .. See your favourite Mama is here..

Devki: Mama!! Mama and quickly jumped over Saurabh Dada searching his pocket for chocolate..

Saurabh dada : Chocolate toh tabhi milegi jab hum pyaari si kissi milegi humari devi se ...

Devki : Kiss !! Bass ye lo .. She gave him 10 kiss in exchange of big cadbury chocolate..

Devki, Sona and Saurabh dada went into taxi stand and somehow quickly dumped their luggage into taxi and off they go..

Sona and Dev reached home ..
Asha : Bijoy come fast !! Maa Sona aa gayi hai ..

Bijoy : Sona !! Beta tu gayi ..

Sona: Maa and Papa And Dadi am so happy to see you all after so many years ..

Asha : Devki kaha hai ..

Devki : Nanii !! badi Nani!! and Nanu! ( Sorry I don't know anything about bengali ) hugged and jumped over.

At night Sona was in her room , feeling nostalgic about her childhood and of course why she was forced to left this place..

Tears in Sona eyes look at moon remembering her time with Dev , confession, their first hug, their rain dance and of course their love night : Pata nahi kitna time ho gaya.. Aab aap kya kar rahe hoge.. Meri yaad bhi aati hogi ki nahi..Nikki,riya , Neha kaise hoge. And Auntyji hope she is taking care of herself.. Aisa ek din bhi nahi jaata jab main aapko yaad nahi karo Dev. Ek din bhi nahi..

Aur sach kaho toh aapko bhool bhi nahi sakti hoon - mere pass hai jo ho.. Dev and Sonakshi ki Devki ... Humari Devki..

Asha : Sona beta Soi nahi abhi tak. Thank you Sona yaha wapas aane ke liye. Tujhe pata hai na Bijoy ko kitna guilt hai ki tujhe yaha se jana pada. Jab tujhe humari sab se jayada jararoot thi tab humme tera saath nahi diya. Shayad itna sab kuch aachanak ho raha tha ki kuch sochne and samajhne ka time hi nahi mila. But aaj dil se tujhe sorry bolti hoon beta..

Sona: Maa aap kya ye sab lekar beeth gayi.. JO gaya So ho gaya.Aap toh mujhe ye batao ki Baba ki report kya hai? Doctors kya bol rahe ? Kaun se stage ka cancer hai Baba ko? Maine Dr.Sinha se baat kar liye hai kal hum log hospital jayege reports lekar.. Aur aab aap baba par dhyaan do and purni baato par nahi.OK

Asha: Jaanti hoon Baba ki bemari ke karan hi tu aayi. Samaj nahi aa raha hai ki khush ho ki dhukhi.

Sona: Maa !! Aap bhi na ..Sach mein ..Always emotional mode par raheti hai. Jake Soo jaiye and aab main bhi aapke saath.

Devki was again wake up from the sleep and started crying. Sona quickly ran towards her ,patting her. Today after 5 years Sona will sleep properly in her own bed while cuddling devki..

Next part-

Sona meeting with Ishwari and Mamaji at hospital
Ishwari - Wohi Chehra , wohi ankhe , wohi.. !!nahi...
Mamaji Shocked : Devki bilkul choti dev hai..


If people like this story then I will continue otherwise my first and last os..

Part 1- Page 1
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Part 2 - Page 6
Part 3 - Page 14

Part 4 - Page 20

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Part 6- Page 32


<font color="#0000FF">P.S. This is not proof read and is written from a smart phone , therefore do pardon any typos, grammatical errors and plot holes.
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Murdered the bengali 🥱 😃 enjoyed otherwise. Write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
u r an amazing writee can't get over it its superbly amazing plz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love with your story
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates
Loved it
Read all in a go
Both met after 5 years. Liked the way he inquired abt her. Confrontation was nice. Father daughter time was wonderful
Still love each other. He realised his mistake/sin & he can't forgive himself whatever he did with her. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: adi35

Awesome update
continue soon



Glad you like it and thanks for the comment.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: randommusings

What an emotional os. Sad they were seperated, Sona had to do everything alone and Dev had to lead a miserable loveless life.

I hope they will be together soon



Hi Abi

How are u ?

Glad you like it and thanks for the comment.😊

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