Barsaat-fanfic - Page 5

Oh tht was really sad that Yug died infront of Reeva.
Awww Shaurya is so sweet being there for her..i think Reeva will heed to Yug's dying wish soon enough 😉😊

OMG u scared me saying tht Anjali is no more! 😭
Phew thx God Kavya is better educated at taking a pulse then the ppl standing by. Awww he said he was her husband..such a cute interaction at the hospital…he does say sorry too much 😆

Oh wow the best scene of the whole fic was the dancing in the rain and confessing that they love each other 😃..yayaya Kavya sir got his love 😳. And a perfect opportunity for Shaurya to propose to Reeva was at K-A engagement!! 😳

Great fic Jas di 😊..please continue. U sure do put a lot of suspense in ur stories like Ekta!! 😆

Part-20..:Reeva slaps him.All r shocked.
R cries & runs away.Kavya-anjali r upset.Tears fall down from shaurya's eyes.
Kavya:shaurya,don't b upset.everything wil b alright.if ur luv is true,favour cums 2 u.i'm telling this from my experience
Anjali:like I was late 2 realise who my true luv is,reeva wil also realize who her true luv is
S is silent & goes.All r sad.

Reeva's dad Suryaban:I wont blame shaurya.after knowing abt yug also,he's willing 2 accept u.he is gr8
Gayatri:yes.shaurya is a nice boy
R is irritated:stop it
S:r u planning 2 remain unmarried 4ever?
R:why cant I?
S:u r taking such stupid decision 4 yug.but don't 4get that yug wanted u 2 marry & liv happily.
R is stunned
K:shaurya loves u very much.
R weeps & goes 2 her room.
She sees yug's face on mirror.R smiles with tears:Yug!
Y:did u 4get that u promised me that u wont remain single?shaurya is a nice guy.i'm sure that u'l b happy in his arms
R weeps:yug..
Y is vanished.R gets irritated & she throws the powder tin on the mirror & it gets cracked
She was shocked 2 see shaurya there.R gets irritated:why did u cum here?
R turns back.S catches her hand.KR is angry:how dare u?
S starts singing:luv tujhe..{Barsaat}
After R realizes that it was her illusion.R is confused:whats happening 2 me?

R reaches a hill where S was standing.she shouts him:Shaurya!
S luks at her. R:I came her 2 tell u not 2 wait 4 me.bcoz I don't luv u
S:u ask ur heart whether u luv me or not
R is speechless.S pulls her closer 2 him & sings:humko sirf tumse pyar hai{Barsaat}
R 4gets herself & she sings along with him.R hugs him with tears:yes,I too luv u
S smiles.

5 yrs leap ..

4yr old Sur at school.Seeing sum ppl she runs 2 them:papa…mama…
Sur's parents hug her.

WHO R THEY?

Part-21:They r Kavya & Anjali.
Sur:papa,u'd promised that u'l take me 2 amusement park
K:papa remembers it beta,wel go 2day itself
A:Sur is completely papa's beti,whatever she tells,u
agree.usually teachers like u make kids obey u.but here
sur makes u obey her
K laughs:that's a fun
A smiles.

A-K go & enjoy in amusement park with Sur.
They r back in the car.
K:this place is so different
A:ya.after moving away from Bombay,I feel strange


A party.Shaurya cums in a glittering outfit:hi,I've
invited u all here 2 attend a lovely person's b'day
party.
The smiling Reeva cums down from the staircase with
matching jewellery.She was holding the small fingers of
a small cute boy
S:that person is none other than our dearest son Prateek

All smile.S & R wish P:happy b'day beta
They both kiss him & he kisses them back.
R holds P's hand & cuts the cake.S-R puts their own cake
piece int P's mouth.
S-R sing happy b'day song

S gives a gift 2 P:this is papa's gift
P:thanku papa.but where is mama' gift?I'm angry with u
R smiles:how can I 4get 2 giv gift 2 my pyari son?
R also gifts him.
P:thanku mama
R:welcum beta

Shaurya seems 2 b upset.Reeva:what happened shaurya?u luk
sad
S:there is a lot of work 2 do in office & its urgent 2
go 2 Delhi 4 meeting.i dunno what 2 do
R:its ok shaurya.i'l attend the meeting
S:but reeva..
R:don't worry.i'l manage everything.u take care of the
office
S smiles:thanx a lot reeva
R smiles.

Reeva is ready 2 go 2 delhi. S:I cud've easily arranged
a flight 2 delhi.but u refused
R:my family background is different from urs.i want only
a simple life.i'm not used 2 the journey by flight.i'm
more comfortable with bus
S smiles:as u wish
R:bye shaurya S:bye
R turns back & walk.S:reeva
R turns back S:I'l miss u
R:I'l miss u too

R gets inside the bus.The bus has almost reached
delhi.but unexpectedly it meets with an accident

WIL REEVA DIE?

great part! i kno she wont die! cont soon!

👏 awsome cool really nice
i think reva wont die 😃
loved this fanfic its very unique keep it up n continue soon 👏
love
anu

Part-22


The bus is crushed heavily.Many of the ppl r taken 2 the hospital.Kavya-anjali's car passes by that way.They go near the bodies.They feel unbearable seeing the dead bodies in a pathetic stage.
Sum1 says:this one is not dead
K-A look at that person.they r shocked
A:that's reeva

They take R 2 the hospital.
A cries:we r seeing reeva after 5yrs & its in this situation
K is sad:don't worry anjali.nothing wil happen 2 reeva

Dr cums:reeva has overcum the danger
A-K r happy.
A:thanku so much Dr
Dr:but…
K:but..?tell DR
Dr:she lost her eyesight
A-K r shocked

Hearing the news of Reeva's bus accident,Shaurya screams:noooooooooo
He goes 2 Delhi.he cud see only the dead bodies.S weeps.Naina cums near him with tears.S:mama,kripa…
N cries & hugs him.They use sum1 else's dead body which is completely spoiled 4 funeral thinking that its R's.

2 days r passed.
They enter Reeva's room with tears.Dr removes the cloth stuck on on R's eyes.
Anjali:reeva,open ur eyes,its ur old friend anjali.Ur fav kavyasir is also with me
R is surprised:Anjali-kavya sir?I'm so surprised
R tries 2 open her eyes,but feels difficult,finally she opens.
A-K r tensed.R is stunned:I cant see anything,DR I cant..
Dr:sorry reeva.u wont see anything anymore
R is shocked:noooooooooo
R cries loudly.Anjali weeps & hugs R:don't worry reeva.everything wil b alright

A-K take R 2 their house.Sur runs 2 them:who is this?
Anjali:this is mama's classmate & ur dad's student too
Sur:this aunty luks so nice
Every1 smiles
K:Sur liked reeva very much
R:Sur?
A:Sur is our daughter
R smiles:so sweet
Suddenly she becomes emotional:but I'm so unlucky that I cant see ur sweet kid
K:tell about shaurya.do u hav kids?
R's eyes get filled up with tears

great part cont soon, poor reeva!

Part-23:Kavya:my college students r crazy of ShaURYA;the cool rockstar
aNJALI:Earlier u used 2 perform.then why did u stop?
rEEVA:after my son's b'th,I cud'nt find time 4 it
A:wow!u've a son?whats his name?
R:yes.Prateek
A:so cute.we'l inform shaurya now itself.whats his number?
R weeps:no plz
K:what do u mean?
R weeps:if shaurya sees me in this condition he'l b heartbroken.i don't want 2 make him upset.so its better not 2 inform where I'm
K:what nonsense?he'l b upset not seeing u.he'l b searching 4 u
R:ya.but but that pain is bearable.but this is not like that.shaurya was planning 2 conduct a grand show 4my return 2 this industry.but if he sees me blind…no shaurya shud'nt see me
A:ok.u can stay here.but don't b shattered.u'l get ur eyesight back.then we'll inform angad.u'l do more shows & wil b a famous rockstar again.God wil bless u
R is still weeping.R thinks:but I've no hope

Shaurya & reeva r crying thinking of the moments they've spent 2gether
Song:tum kahaan…{salam namaste}

R cries thinking of Prateek.Sur cums there:Aunty,why r u crying?
R has no answer.S wipes R's tears:u must not cry anymore.ok?
R smiles.
S:aunty,cum with me.we'l go outside
R:outside?no Sur
Anjali cums:why not?
R:u no that I am…
A:u r not alone.Sur is also there with me.reeva,just bcoz u cant see anything,u shud'nt think that ur life is confined 2 a room.u shud go out.enjoy
R:what enjoyment is there?
A dunno what 2 say:I cant explain u that.but still going out with this innocent kid wil b a relief
S:cum on aunty
S takes R out.A smiles:sur,luk after aunty well
S:ok mama

Sur-R go out
S:small shops r there.1 old uncle is drinking tea.he is cute
R smiles.
S:1 aunty is going with her sweet twin children
R smiles.Suddenly Prateek cums 2 her mind & her eyes r filled up with tears.
They hav reached the garden. S:this is a beautiful garden
R tries 2 touch the plants.
S:now u r touching a white flower
S picks it & keeps it on R's hair
S:it'l luks gud on u
R:thanku Sur
Its raining. S:wow rain.aunty do u like rain.i luv it
R:yes yes,rain..i can feel it
S starts dancing.S holds R's hand & makes her dance.R enjoys

Part-24:Sur & reeva cum back.
Anjali:whats this?u both r wet?
Sur:oh no mama.sitting inside the house,u did'nt even no that its raining?we both danced in rain
A:really?
R:u r right anjali.i even 4got that I'm blind walking out with sur.i cud feel the beauty of rain
A smiles & luks out thru the window.she smiles seeing the rain.
She puts her arm out.then goes out & dances in the rain.
Sum1 pulls her red sari 2wards him & hugs her from behind.A got scared & luks at him.she was surprised 2 see kavya.
A:u?I got scared
K smiles.They both hug.then they dance.Song:jaana…{aapka abhijeet}
Sur laughs seeing their dance thru the window.
Reeva:why r u laughing sur?anything funny?
S:mama papa r dancing in rain like shahrukh-kajol in kuch kuch hota hai
R smiles:really?
R dreams of dancing in rain with shaurya & smiles
Sur goes near kavya-anjali.K carries sur around in rain.A smiles.
Unexpectedly K carries A around in his arms.A was excited.

shaurya is sad seeing the rain.He remembers dancing with reeva in rain.Prateek cums:papa rain.shall we go & dance
S:no beta.my mind is not allowing 2..
Naina cums:why?reeva has gone.why cant u think of ur son?
S is upset.S takes P out & they both dance in rain.
Sum1 catches S's arm.S was shocked 2 see Reeva there in sleeveless pink salwar.
R smiles:why did u avoid me?wont u dance with me?
S smiles & they both dance2 the song tere liye{Aapka abhijeet}
After the dance S realizes that it was only his imagination.he becomes upset.

Naina:shaurya,this is not gud 2 always dream of reeva.prateek's life wil b spoiled.so u need 2 marry again
S is shocked:how cud u think like this?
N:bcoz I care 4 prateek.he needs a mother.i've found a girl 4 u.she'l cum now

Calling bell is ringing.N smiles & opens the door.N is excited.
That's a girl:hi aunty
N:shaurya,this is the girl I told u about
S luks at her.she has worn yellow short skirt with white sleeveless top.S is irritated

WHO IS SHE?

Whoa 5yr leap.it really is a serial! 😆
Yay Yug's spirit united Reeva n Shaurya! 😃
Sur is so cute..and Prateek..aww the kids of our two couples!! 😳 😊
OMG nooo Reeva lost her eyesight 😭..tht was so unexcpected..gosh seriously the twists keep coming and poor Shaurya thinks she is dead!

Reeva cant stay away frm her husband n child like this even if she is blind..they are her life 😕
Sur is soo sweet..jus like her parents! Loved their KKHH rain scene..the family is so lovely..i wished this was shown in KA! 😳 😊

Nahi bichara Shaurya has to remarry coz he thinks she is dead..this it too much.Anjali cant let Shaurya live in sorrow thinking he has lost his wife 😭

Please continue Jas di..this fic is one of ur best yet!