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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Omg she left it to the last day of college to tell him 😆
Now what will Shaurya do..we he reject her and make her go to Kavya sir or will he accept turning thier friendship into something more 😛
Hmm i wanted to see Kavya khush 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
Part-15...Shaurya:what r u telling?
It starts raining.S takes his umbrella.
Anjali:no need of umbrella.enjoy rain is the best background 4 confession of luv
S is confused.
Anjali:I no that it's a surprise 4 u.actually only garv sir new my luv 4 u
S is shocked.S thinks:after knowing his own beloved's luv 4 me also,kavya sir treated me like his own brother.he is such a sweet man.but what did anjali do 2 him?
A:I no that I've a place in ur heart too
S:I'm sorry anjali,u r my gud friend.but plz don't expect more from me
A is shocked:shaurya?
S:u shud no what true luv is.i'm not ur true luv
A:but shaurya..
S:sorry
S goes.A cries.
S thinks:its bcoz of me,poor kavya sir lost his luv
Tears fall down from his eyes.
S:my luv died in my heart.so I hate rain if its romantic
He opens umbrella.
While he passes by the park,he was heartbroken 2 see Yug & Reeva hugging
He felt unbearable & goes fast.
Reeva:yug this rain is so nice.its really lovely 4 lovers
PYug:u r right.its getting late.i've a meeting.i'm sorry I've 2 go now
A:oh!we were enjoying so much.but…
Y:within a few days,our wedding is going 2 take place.after that we'l b always 2gether
R smiles.They hug.
Y smiles:bye
R:bye
Y walks backward looking at R.Suddenly a bus cums in high speed
R screams:pYUg…bus…
But that time,he was already crushed.R screams:YUggggg

Yug is hospitalized.R is waiting outside the operation theatre with her's & Y's parents.
R is crying. DR cums: yug opened his eyes
R smiles.
DR:he wants 2 see Miss.Reeva
R goes inside.R sits besides Y.R weeps:yug...
Y holds her arm slowly.R's tears fall on him.
Y:don't b sad.i cant bear ur tears.it burns me
R wipes her tears.
Y:promise me reeva that u won't liv alone even if I go
R is shocked:yug?
Y:its my last wish.promise me
R is stunned

WILL YUG DIE?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
😭 😭OMGGG tht chapter was full of sorrow..i so did not expect Yug to have an accident 😭
Oh no..if Yug dies will Reeva find comfort in Shaurya's arms but then that leaves Anjali hurting. I'm sure Kavya sir will be there for her.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Part-16..Reeva cant belive:Yug?what did u say?how cud u say this?
R cries.Y is very sad:promise if u truly luv me
R:yug…no..
R cries. Y:won't u fulfil my last dream.plz promise
R hesistates.
Y:its my last wish
R weeps.Slowly she holds Y's arm:promose
R cant control her tears.Suddenly she realizes that Y's arm on her arm is still.R looks at Y.
Y is still with eyes open.
R:yug..
R removes her arm from him.His arm fall down.
R screams:yugggggg

Yug's funeral is over.R is lost.

Anjali goes 2 Shaurya's house.His mom Naina opens the door:yes
A:I'm shaurya's classmate
N:I'm his mom
A:hello aunty
She touches N's feet
N:hey no need beta
A smiles.
A:shall I meet shaurya?
N:shaurya has gone out.i'l take tea 4 u
A:no thanks aunty
N:no,u've 2 as u've cum here 4 the 1st time
N goes 2 kitchen.A enters S's room.
A sees a diary.She opens it.She was shocked 2 see Reeva's photos in it.
Its written 'I luv u reeva' by shaurya.
A is shocked:so shaurya neglected me bcoz of his feelings 4 reeva?


Later after reaching home A phones S:I'm Anjali
S:anjali?
A:I'd cum 2 ur house
S is surprised. S:I'm in my car now
A:I want 2 see u
S is speechless as he's not interested
A:don't worry,its not 2 desturb u confessing my luv


S meets A.
A:do u luv reeva?
S is shocked.
A:u mayb thinkin how I no about it.leave it.that's not imp now.why don't u confess ur luv 2 her
S:its too late.she loves another man
A:its not late.did'nt u no that reeva's lover yug is no more?
S is shocked:what?
A:he died due 2 an accident.reeva is shattered.he needs sum1 as a comfort.shaurya,u need 2 go 2 her.she needs u now
S is stunned

WHAT WILL SHAURYA DO?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
good job 😉 😉 ....now plzzzz contiueee
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
Part-17..Reeva is in the temple.she is dull.R is shocked 2 see shaurya infront of the temple
R:shaurya?
S:I'd gone 2 ur house.they said u r here
R:God is my only comfort.otherwise I wud've died
S:god sends different ppl 2 world 2 comfort us.do u no that?so god wud've sent sum1 2 comfort u
R:never
S:u feel so.mayb there is a friend 4 u 2 comfort
R looks at his face.
S:myself
R is surprised.
S:why not?u cant belive?but I promise that I'l b ur gud friend
S goes.R is confused.

R's mom Gayatri is feeling difficult 2 breath.R is upset.Does'nt no what 2 do.suddenly she remembers S's words.
R phones up S:hello
S:reeva?
R:plz cum 2 my house.its urgent.i need ur help
S:sure

S goes there & helps R 2 take G 2 the hospital.R is tensed.
S:don't worry reeva.ur mom wil b alright.sure
G gets ok.R is relived.
S:did'nt I tell u that she'l b alright?
R smiles
After S goes,G tells R:what a nice boy
R smiles.

Later R phones S:hi anshaurya,I'm..
S:reeva,I can recognize ur voice even during sleep
R is dull
S is now aware of what he said.he tries 2 change the topic:how is gayatri aunty?
R:fine.actually I dunno how 2 thanku.no one was there at home.that time its only bcoz of u,my mom is well now
S:there is no need 2 b thankful & all.ok then bye
R:wait..i did'nt finish
S:tell,anything imp?
R:I agree with u now that god has sent me a friend 2 comfort me
S is extremely happy.R smiles & keeps the ph down.

Kavya is driving the car.He sees a crowd.He gets down & see.He was shocked 2 see anjali lying on the road with blood covered all over the body.Sum1 says:I think this girl is no more
K cant believe:noooooooo
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
wow great part! do cont soon, isnt this like ur other ff though?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Kavya:no,Anjali cant die
He touches her:she's alive
K is relieved
K takes her 2 hospital.
DR:who r u 2 the patient?only then we can do the surgery
K:i..i'm her husband

The surgery takes place.Dr:u r a lucky husband.ur wife is well now
K is very happy:thanku dR

After sum time,anjali opens her eyes.
A:where is this?
DR:after a heavy accident,u hav been brought here.now u r ok.its ur husband's prayer
A:husband?
Dr:ya.he was so nervous.poor man
A is confused:who brought me here as wife?
A:DR,shall I meet my husband?
Dr:why not?I'l call him here
Dr goes out & tells kavya:ur wife wants 2 see u.i told her that her husband only brought her here at the right time
K is nervous:what'l b her reaction knowing that I lied 2 the dr that she's my wife?
K goes inside.A is surprised:kavya sir?
K:sorry,I'd 2 lie that I'm ur husband 2 do the surgery
A smiles:why r u telling me sorry?I must thanku 4 saving my life.thanks a lot sir
A's eyes r full of tears.
K smiles:hey anjali..whats this?wipe ur tears
she keeps crying.K wipes her tears.
K:I'm sorry
A smiles:u r always telling sorry unnecessarily
A-K smile.

Shaurya-reeva become really gud friends & they share precious moments.
anjali is at home.Shaurya phones her:hi anjali,how r u?
A:I'm taking rest after a big accident
S is shocked:accident?
A:ya S:then I'm coming there 2 see u

S goes there.S:I cant believe this
A smiles:whats ur news.i no that u wont call me unless there is sum pretty news
S smiles:ya,reeva has got sum changes.she started smiling.started behaving like b4
A smiles:that's why I told u 2 b a gud friend 2 her.i new that ur influence wil make her smile again
S smiles.A:u no who saved me?kavya sir.he lied 2 the dR that I'm his wife 2 hav the surgery.if he was'nt there,I wud'nt hav there in this life 2day.i'm really gr8ful 2 him
S is surprised.S thinks:I cant hide that truth anymore.i've 2 tell anjali abt kavya sir's luv 4 her

WILL SHAURYA TELL THAT 2 ANJALI?WHAT'L B HER REACTION?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
plz continue as soon as possible .. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
Part-19..Shaurya:do u no how much kavya sir cares 4 u?how much he luvs u?
Anjali is shocked:what?
S:yes anjali.kavya sir loves u from the beginning.he was heartbroken wen he realized that u don't luv him.how can u not see the heart of such a nice person?
A cant belive.
S:do u no what true luv is?u think deeply about it.then u'l realize that ur true luv is kavya sir.if u become late 2 realise that,u'l regret a lot
A is stunned. A thinks abt her moments with K.

Anjali is waiting 4 bus outside.sHe sees Kavya's car going.She runs after it:kavya sir
K stops it:anjali?
A:I was waiting 4 bus 2 my house
K:get inside I'l drop u
A:no thanku
K:cum on anjali
A smiles & gets inside the car.K is driving.A is looking at K & smiling.
A:is this not my luv?
IT rains heavily.
A:wow,rain.i luv rain
K stops the car.A gets down & dances in the rain.K smiles.
A:cum sir,dance
K:no,I cant dance
A:I'l not leave u unless u dance with me
A holds K's hand.K is stunned.They look at each other.
Then they both dance.They 4get themselves & become very intimate.Song:pyar aaya {barsaat}
Both of then hug.It was really passionate.K becomes conscious.K moves away.A is upset.He becomes very emotional:I'm sorry anjali.i was wrong
A:no u were right
A goes closer & keeps her arms on his face:bcoz I luv u
K is shocked:what?
A:I luv u like u luv me
K is surprised. A smiles.They both hug again.

Kavya-anjali's engagement party.K is in costly shervani.A is in decorated red choli.Kavya-anjali exchange ring.Then they put music:aria RAI ARAI{DIL TO PAAGAL HAI}
Kavya-anjali dance.Shaurya has worn jeans & white shining t-shirt.Reeva is in tight black outfit with a pony hair style.
S-R look at each other.S cums near her:wil u dance with me?
R hesitates.S extends his arm with hope.R catches his arm & they dance 2gether.

Shaurya with a mike:in this wonderful occasion filled with luv,I wud like 2 inform every1 a sweet news
All r eager 2 no. S:I want 2 confess that I luv reeva
All r surprised.Reeva is shocked.S cums near R:reeva wil u marry me?
R is stunned

WHAT'L B REEVA'S REPLY?

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