Barsaat-fanfic - Page 6

Part-25:She:hi shaurya,I'm pammi
S:ok
P extends her right arm 2 shake hand.But S goes.P & Naina r dull
N:don't worry pammi.everything wil b alright.did'nt I tell u how crazy he's about reeva
N goes 2 S's room. N:this is the way u've 2 behave 2 a guest?
S:if she was simply a guest I wud've been nice 2 her.but she is trying 2 b a host.then why shud I?
N:why don't u understand?
S:if she tries 2 get reeva's place in my heart,I'l even become violent
S goes out.he was shocked 2 see pammi at the door.P's eyes were full of tears.
S:I'm sorry pammi
S goes.N is sad while cums out & is shoked 2 see P:pammi!
P:its ok aunty,I'm going
N:no,u wont go anywhere.u'l stay here
P is surprised.
N takes P 2 the drawing room where S is sitting.
N:listen,pammi wil not go anywhere.she'l stay here.its my decision
S:ok,I don't care
P & N smile. S:but ur plan is not going 2 work
S goes.P & N r upset.
N:I'm sure that shaurya wil agree 2 marry u.but u must hav patience.that's it
P smiles.

Prateek is playing football.Pammi cums there:u r playing alone?shall I play with u?
P:aunty,u play football?
Pa:why not?

They both play.Shaurya sees it. Naina cums there with a smiling face:how fast prateek became close 2 pammi
After playing,they cum back.P goes inside without saying anything
N:prateek beta,did u enjoy playing?
P:yes dadi.pammi aunty plays well.so I enjoy playing with her
N:did u see shaurya?
S is speechless.

4 two months,S was observing the chemistry btw prateek & pammi.
Naina tells him:plz cum out of dreamworld atleast 4 ur son.pammi & prateek luv each other very much.if prateek loves her company very much,why don't u allow him 4 that?
S is speechless.Prateek runs 2 them.
N:prateek beta,don't u like pammi aunty?
P:very much
N:what if pammi aunty stays here 4ever?
P:very nice.it'l b a fun.we both wil play 2gether
N:did u hear this shaurya?
N:instead of being in a stupid dreamworld do sumthing nice 4 ur son
S is dull.
S thinks about it.Then he goes 2 the drawing room where naina & pammi r sitting.
S:I've taken a decision.i'l marry pammi
Both r happy & smile.S goes 2his room & looks at reeva's framed photo with tears:I'm sorry reeva.circumstance makes me do this

😭 😭 OMG Pammi came to replace Reeva 😕
Uff when will Reeva come home..she cant distance herself from her family forever, does she want to miss out on her son growing up
Nice progression in the story Jas..please continue 😃

Part-26: Kavya,Anjali,Sur,Reeva go 2 park.
R & sur play with ball.K-A observe it.
A:reeva is used 2 this condition.she has learnt 2 play ball without seeing
K:ya,but I hope she'l get her eyesight soon

1 guy sees Reeva with them.he is shocked:reeva!she is alive?oh my gOd!

Kavya,anjali,reeva r infront of Tv.
News: Again wedding bell rings 4 the famous rockstar shaurya.shaurya is getting married 2 Miss Pammi.The late reeva was his ex-wife
All r shocked.Reeva bursts into tears.
K-A r upset.
K:don't get upset reeva.shaurya is not doing this purposefully,he thinks that u r no more.did'nt I tell u 2 inform him immediately?but no one heard it.now itself I'l inform him that u r here
R:no need
K:what nonsense
R:its better 2 marry a healthy pretty girl instead of living a sad life with a blind girl like me.so plz don't inform angad
R cries & hugs anjali.A weeps & does'nt no how 2 console her

R is crying in her room thinking about Shaurya:why did I lose my luv?
At the same time,S is outside.His eyes r full of tears.S says in his mind:by this marriage decision,everyone else is happy,but I'm completely shattered.i feel that my life has cum 2 an end
Song:zindagi mein koi..{musafir}

S's mobile rings:Mr.Shaurya?
S:yes shaurya speaking
He:I want 2 giv u a shocking news about ur ex-wife reeva
S is stunned:about reeva?whats that?
He:cant tell it now.i want 2 see u directly.
S:now itself we'l meet
He:its impossible.bcoz I'm from delhi.i think u shud cum 2 delhi atleast 2morrow.u can see a special thing here
S is confused. S thinks:what'l b that?

S goes 2 delhi by next flight.lots of fans r after him 4 autograph.he gives them.then wen he is about 2 leave the airport sum1 cums near him:hi shaurya,we r meeting after a long time
S is surprised:Sir..u.it's a surprise?
He:the real surprise is coming.I only called u here 4 that surprise
Is surprised

WHO IS HE?

Wohoooo Kavya sir is sneaky, i loved that he was the one who called Shaurya 😃..phew talk about cutting it fine, Shaurya was about to marry tht Pammi but its a gd thing the media flashed it all over the news coz it prompted Kavya to call S.
I love the pace Jas di and the suspense is killing, cant wait for the next part to read about S reaction to Reeva being blind and Reeva's reaction upon meeting him.
Keep it up the gr8 wrk! 😃

part-27..He is none other than Karthik Sir.
Shaurya:whats the surprise sir?u said its about reeva
K:ofcourse.but u'l b heartbroken
S is confused.
K:during college,u all were after kavya.no one used 2 trust me eventho I was a teacher like kavya.u were too close 2 kavya that u used 2 trust him blindly.after these many yrs,ur trustworthy sir kavya's true color is coming out.he snatched ur luv reeva
S is shocked:what nonsense
K:u might b feeling difficult 2 digest the truth.but the truth is that he separated u from reeva
S:what do u mean?
K:I'l show u now

Karthik takes S 2 Kavya's house.They ring the calling bell.Anjali opens the door.She is shocked 2 see S with karthik there
S:hi anjali
S:hi
Kavya cums.he is shocked 2 see S.
S:how r u kavya sir?
K:fine.how r u?
S:I hope u no my present condition.after reeva went,my life became dry.i did'nt even do a stage show.now I'm forced 2 marry a person whom I don't luv.if reeva was there with me,it wud'nt hav happened
A-K r dull. Kar:but I'm extremely happy that I cud a solve a riddle 2 shaurya
A-K felt strange.K:cum inside
S-kar get inside.
Kar:do u no why shaurya came here?he wanted 2 no why u snatched reeva from him?
K is shocked.S notices his dull face expression.
S:why r u silent sir?is karthik sir true?did u separate me from reeva?
K is speechless.S becomes emotional:that means what karthik sir said is true?
S shouts:I trusted u more than any1.but u..why did u kill reeva?
Anjali:enuf shaurya.he has'nt killed reeva.she is alive
S is shocked:what?
Kar:this is the way kavya snatched reeva from u.after the accident,they took her home.they hid from others that reeva is with them.after knowing the news about ur 2nd marriage with pammialso,he did'nt reveal the truth.bcoz he wanted 2 separate u from reeva.that was his only intention
S cant belive.he shouts:why did u do this kavya sir?
Reeva hears it from top:shaurya?
S catches K's shirt's collar.
Suddenly he hears a voice:Shaurya,don't shout
S turns back.He is surprised 2 see reeva:Reeva!

part-28:Shaurya goes & hugs Reeva.
S holds R's face:r u ok?did they harass u?
R:who?kavya sir or anjali?how cud u think that they harass me?
S is speechless.
R:I cant believe this change
S:but what he did 2 me?
R:he hid that I'm staying in his house.u no why he did it?bcoz I told him not 2 inform u that I'm here
S is shocked:Reeva!I cant believe this.u r forced 2 tell like this by them
R shouts:don't b rubbish.this is the truth
S:but why?why did'nt u cum 2 me?u dunno how my & prateek's life wil b without u?
R's tears fall down:I did'nt want 2 giv u more pain.that's why..
S:how wil our life wil b more painful wen u r with us?
R cries.S:Reeva!
R:luk at my eyes.do u notice anything?
S is speechless. R:in the accident I lost my eyesight.now I cant see anything
S is shocked:Reeva!
R:yes shaurya.i cant see u
S is shocked. R:I thot u'l b sad with me.so I wanted u 2 b happy with a healthy girl like pammi
S weeps:no reeva.however u r,I want u.prateek wants u.no one can replace u
S hugs R.They both weep.Song:woh lamhe{Zeher}
S goes near kavya-anjali & cries:I'm sorry.i dunno how cud I 4get how nice u were 2 me
Kavya:don't say sorry.this reaction is normal.every1 in ur position reacts in the same way
Karthik:I'm sorry
Kar goes.

S phones naina & tells this.N is surprised:really?Reeva is alive?then bring reeva here.i'm waiting 2 see her
S:we'l cum after within 1 week
N:ok
After the call,she turns back.there was pammi
N:pammi..the thing is that..
P:reeva is alive
N is speechless.
P packs her bags.N:pammi?
P:I don't hav 2 remain here anymore.it'l b disturbance
N:but.. P:don't tell anything aunty
P goes.

Kavya-anjali r going 2 Sur's school.All r crying in the school. K:whats the matter?
Teacher weeps:Sur…
A:what happened 2 Sur?
T:she got stuck up inside the damaged lift & was severely injured.she has been taken 2 the hospital
A-K r shocked.A:noooooooooo

They both go 2 hospital.They cry.DR cums.A:Dr,is my daughter alright?
Dr:we r sorry.we cud'nt save her
A screams:nooooooo…sur…..
A-K cry.

K phones S:shaurya,cu 2 UJC hospital immeadiately with reeva.its urgent

Part-29..:Shaurya cums 2 the hospital with Reeva
Kavya:reeva's operation shud b done now
S-R r surprised.

R's operation is done.
DR:operation is successful.reeva wil b able 2 see like b4
Kavya,anjali,shaurya smile.
S:but I want 2 no with whose eyes reeva is going 2 see
Dr is dull:they did'nt tell u that
A luks at A-K.their eyes r full of tears
Dr:its their daughter Sur's eyes
S us shocked:what?Sur..
K-A cry.
K:we lost Sur
K tells everything.
S weeps:I cant believe how this happened 2 nice ppl like u.Sur..she was such nice girl.she & reeva loved each other very much
K:sur loved reeva so much that she presented reeva her most valuable thing

Sur's funeral is done.

After a few days,R got ready 2 open her eyes.R opens her eyes.she was very happy 2 see K,A & S
R:where is sur?I want 2 see her.she was the one who made me 4get my pain of loss
K-S weep.A bursts into tears.
R:what happened?
A:Sur left us
R:what?
S:Sur is no more.its with her eyes now u see things
R is shocked:Surrrrrrr!nooooooooo
R cries loudly.

R is discharged from the hospital.R weeps looking at Sur's framed photo:Sur,1st u gave me happiness.u made me smile.but now u gave pain along with happiness.u gave my eyesight back.but u left me 4ever
S cums:sur went away after giving the most precious thing 2 u
R weeps.

After 2 yrs.A party. Shaurya,reeva with Prateek.
S:2day is our son prateek's b'day.also another cute girl's 1st b'day.that b'day girl wil cum soon
Kavya-anjali cum with their cute baby girl.
S:this us our sweet baby girl.Her name is Sur
Al smile.They celebrate Prateek's & Sur's b'day 2gether

END

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

part-28:Shaurya goes & hugs Reeva.
S holds R's face:r u ok?did they harass u?
R:who?kavya sir or anjali?how cud u think that they harass me?
S is speechless.
R:I cant believe this change
S:but what he did 2 me?
R:he hid that I'm staying in his house.u no why he did it?bcoz I told him not 2 inform u that I'm here
S is shocked:Reeva!I cant believe this.u r forced 2 tell like this by them
R shouts:don't b rubbish.this is the truth
S:but why?why did'nt u cum 2 me?u dunno how my & prateek's life wil b without u?
R's tears fall down:I did'nt want 2 giv u more pain.that's why..
S:how wil our life wil b more painful wen u r with us?
R cries.S:Reeva!
R:luk at my eyes.do u notice anything?
S is speechless. R:in the accident I lost my eyesight.now I cant see anything
S is shocked:Reeva!
R:yes shaurya.i cant see u
S is shocked. R:I thot u'l b sad with me.so I wanted u 2 b happy with a healthy girl like pammi
S weeps:no reeva.however u r,I want u.prateek wants u.no one can replace u
S hugs R.They both weep.Song:woh lamhe{Zeher}
S goes near kavya-anjali & cries:I'm sorry.i dunno how cud I 4get how nice u were 2 me
Kavya:don't say sorry.this reaction is normal.every1 in ur position reacts in the same way
Karthik:I'm sorry
Kar goes.

S phones naina & tells this.N is surprised:really?Reeva is alive?then bring reeva here.i'm waiting 2 see her
S:we'l cum after within 1 week
N:ok
After the call,she turns back.there was pammi
N:pammi..the thing is that..
P:reeva is alive
N is speechless.
P packs her bags.N:pammi?
P:I don't hav 2 remain here anymore.it'l b disturbance
N:but.. P:don't tell anything aunty
P goes.

Kavya-anjali r going 2 Sur's school.All r crying in the school. K:whats the matter?
Teacher weeps:Sur…
A:what happened 2 Sur?
T:she got stuck up inside the damaged lift & was severely injured.she has been taken 2 the hospital
A-K r shocked.A:noooooooooo

They both go 2 hospital.They cry.DR cums.A:Dr,is my daughter alright?
Dr:we r sorry.we cud'nt save her
A screams:nooooooo…sur…..
A-K cry.

K phones S:shaurya,cu 2 UJC hospital immeadiately with reeva.its urgent

OMGGG this was the most intense ch of them all..i am heartbroken to knw lil Sur has passed on 😭 😭 😭 she was soo cutee and her parents pyar ki nishaani
Just wen i thgt everything was fine now tht S had Reeva back in his life and knew abt her blindess..even Pammi had packed up and left! But no the worst part was to come..i'm actually very shocked tht she died.
Brilliant story Jas di 👏..i'm overwhelmed with the twists n turns.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Part-29..:Shaurya cums 2 the hospital with Reeva
Kavya:reeva's operation shud b done now
S-R r surprised.

R's operation is done.
DR:operation is successful.reeva wil b able 2 see like b4
Kavya,anjali,shaurya smile.
S:but I want 2 no with whose eyes reeva is going 2 see
Dr is dull:they did'nt tell u that
A luks at A-K.their eyes r full of tears
Dr:its their daughter Sur's eyes
S us shocked:what?Sur..
K-A cry.
K:we lost Sur
K tells everything.
S weeps:I cant believe how this happened 2 nice ppl like u.Sur..she was such nice girl.she & reeva loved each other very much
K:sur loved reeva so much that she presented reeva her most valuable thing

Sur's funeral is done.

After a few days,R got ready 2 open her eyes.R opens her eyes.she was very happy 2 see K,A & S
R:where is sur?I want 2 see her.she was the one who made me 4get my pain of loss
K-S weep.A bursts into tears.
R:what happened?
A:Sur left us
R:what?
S:Sur is no more.its with her eyes now u see things
R is shocked:Surrrrrrr!nooooooooo
R cries loudly.

R is discharged from the hospital.R weeps looking at Sur's framed photo:Sur,1st u gave me happiness.u made me smile.but now u gave pain along with happiness.u gave my eyesight back.but u left me 4ever
S cums:sur went away after giving the most precious thing 2 u
R weeps.

After 2 yrs.A party. Shaurya,reeva with Prateek.
S:2day is our son prateek's b'day.also another cute girl's 1st b'day.that b'day girl wil cum soon
Kavya-anjali cum with their cute baby girl.
S:this us our sweet baby girl.Her name is Sur
Al smile.They celebrate Prateek's & Sur's b'day 2gether

END

😳 Hai such a sweet ending..one life was lost to give Reeva back her sight..tht was beautiful Sur was a saint! 😃
I know KA had another daughter and named her Sur but u still never get over the greif of losing ur child 😭
Excellent fanfic Jas, i had no clue it would end the way it did..i think this is one of ur best stories yet! 😊