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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
PaRT-9….Reeva meets Yug:happy news.Our collge won in
the music fest.my performance…
Y:no need of telling that.i no that u've performed
well.i trust u completely.u've a future as a rock star
R hugs him:u r so sweet

R is sleeping & dreams of her as a famous rock
star.She's performing on stage:haath udake..{barsaat}

Kavya cums 2 the class:there is happy news 4 u guys.Since
our college won,we r going 2 giv u treat.we r going 4
picnic
All r happy.
Shourya:wow!
K:where do u all want 2 go?
S:what abt Switzerland?
K:what?don't u no that its just a picnic?u cant expect a
long trip.so sorry guys
S is embarrassed.R laughs.
Anjali:we'll go 2 a village?
All feel weird.
S:village?r u mad?
K:I'm shocked that usually no college student suggest it

A:we city guys r not aware of the village beauty.so I
think we must go there
K:I think it's a gud idea.being Indians,if we still
dunno what Indian villages r.i really respect ur ideas &
maturity
A smiles.
S winks at K.K is embarrassed.

Wen they r out of the class,K tells S:whats this
shourya?why r u teasing me?afterall I'm ur sir
S laughs:not only a air.u r my best friend.we both hav
shared our feelings.then whats the need of of this
feeling?
K:nothing.i just joked
S smiles.

A tells R:reeva,4 picnic,we shud hav a new luk
R:what look?
A whispers sumthing 2 her ears.
Rsmiles:nice idea

The bus is ready 4 picnic.S:girls r always late
1 girl:all the girls r not late.only anjali & reeva r
late.don't think they r the only girls in this college
All including kavya laughs.S is embarrassed.
S:where r they?
S hears R's voice from behind:we r here
S-K turn back.They r shocked
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#22
Part-10...Reeva-anjali hav worn old fashioned salwar kameez that r still used by village girls
Shaurya:whats this?Traditional dress?
R:ya,why not?
Anjali:why?don't we look god?its told that its in traditional Indian dress ppl look better
Kavya:u look very pretty
A:thanku
R:only anjali ?I'm i bad?
K:no.u also luk nice
S:but u don't look as gud as anjali
R is angry.A smiles.

S whispers 2 K:ppl look better in traditional Indian dress?then we'l also cum in that dress
K:what?
S:why not?
K:but where is the dress?
S:that we can manage.there r traditional dresses in our college 4 boring dances.we shall use it
K:nonsense.i'm a teacher
S:right now u r not a teacher.u r one among us

All r waiting 4 S-K.
R:shaurya was blaming us 4 becoming late.now they r late
A laughs:ya
S's voice from behind:we r back
Both A & R start laughing seeing S-K in traditional dress
K-S r shy.
S:anjali,u only told that ppl luk better in traditional Indian dress.but now u r laughing at us
A:sorry,u both luk very nice
S:we both means..only kavya sir..?how do I look?
A:u luk really cute
S smiles.
R:kavya sir luk hot.but sharman u r pathetic
S is irritated:fine.i don't need ur comment afterall u r not so brilliant.Anjali;the best student of class gave a gud compliment.that's enuf
R is irritated.
All get inside the bus
They all reach the village.
R:wow!so beautiful
S:cant believe that there r siuch beautiful places in our country
K:we all shud thank anjali 4 suggesting this
A smiles.
They all sing & dance with enjoyment:chori..{Barsaat}
terenaam3 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#23
hahahaha pretty funny
keep it goin
heheheheheh
such a love twist ;)
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Part-11..Anjali is sitting alone near the river
Kavya cums:why r u luking at the river like this?
A:I like river very much.see how freely its going.it
looks lovely
K:I agree with u
A:I think river is the sign of luv.if we look deeply
into the river,we can see the person whom we luv
K smiles.K looks at the river.he cud see anjali there in
his imagination
K:ya,u r true
A luks into it.she imagines shaurya's smiling face in
it.she becomes happy
A:I can see my lover in it.shourya
K is shocked:shourya?what did u say anjali?
A is shy:actually..i luv shourya
K is shocked:u luv shourya?
A:yes.i see u not only as my sir but al;so as my
friend.that's why I confessed it 1st 2 u
K is upset:does shaurya no abt it?
A:I'vent told this 2 shauryayet.but I think he nos abt
it.i feel that he loves me.what do u think sir?he loves
me?
K is speechless.K thinks:whats this?my anjali..she
does'nt luv me.she loves shourya.but he loves anjali.what'l
happen wen anjali cums 2 no that shourya loves reeva?Oh!
A:I'm confused whether he loves me or not
K is upset.A walks 4ward thinking abt it:he loves me.he
loves me not.no,I cant bear it.he loves me
A smiles.she dreams of having romance with S.song:ye jo
dil..{barsaat}

Reeva is luking at birds.While walking backward,her leg
slips & she's abt 2 fall down.But shaurya catches her.S
smiles.R gets angry:how dare u touch me?
S:u were about 2 fall down & so..
R:u cud've let me fall down instead of touching me.that
was better
S:why r u talking like this always?why r u avoiding me?u
no how I feel 4 u?I really luv u
R shouts:enuf shaurya
S is stunned:reevaa
R:what do u think of me?u thot seeing ur smartness I'l
fall 4 u?no way.bcoz I cant imagine falling in luv with
a guy like u.i can only b happy with the person whom I
luv.i can luv a person only wen he makes me happy
S:I long 4 ur happiness.i promise that I'l always make u
happy
R:if u try also,u cant make me happy.i've never felt
happiness with u.u said u want me 2 b happy.right?
S:yes R:then leave me alone with my happiness.my
happiness is another person.Mr.Yug
S is shocked

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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
hey cooool jasmine but its the same as kk one 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
Part-12..Shaurya:YUg?who is he?
Reeva:yes yug.He is my lover
S:reeva,what r u saying?u r lying just 2 avoid me.2 make me jealous.
R:why shud I make u jealous?4 that I don't luv u dammed.i luv yug
S:nooooooo
R:don't shout
S becomes very emotional:think oncemore.that wont b luv.it'l b just a crush
R:no,I luv him very much.no doubt
S:what if he's not gud
R:never.i trust him more than any1 in this life.i no since childhood.u no we r engaged.we r going 2 get married soon
S is shocked R:so leave me alone
R goes.S is upset.he screams:Reevaaaaaaaaa

Kavya & shaurya r very sad while going back.

The next day,Kavya cums 2 class.He does'nt see shaurya there
S:where is shaurya?
Anjali:he is absent
K:why?
A:I dunno sir
K:reeva,do u no why shaurya is on leave?
R:how can I no that?
K is speechless.
R thinks:2day there is some relief without shaurya.but why this kavya sir is after him?why cant he b peaceful without seeing shaurya?nonsense

Kavya is driving the car.he sees the drunk Shaurya coming out from a bar.K is shocked:shaurya!
S is too weak 2 walk.He is abt 2 fall.K goes & holds him from falling down.K places him inside his car.

S is sleeping on bed.He opens his eyes. S looks around. K cums there:u r in my house
S is surprised:but how?
K:I brought u here.u were not even able 2 walk.u were fully drunk
S is embarrassed. K:what happened 2 u?why did'nt u cum 2 college?I don't think u bunked class bcoz of sickness.any problem?
S:no K:I wont believe that.don't lie 2 me.u always tell that I'm not only ur teacher,but also ur friend.cum on,tell me.whats ur problem?

WILL SHAURYA TELL HIM?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
Kool college picnic and a change of styles..aww traditional dress..so sweet 😃
Awwww no bichara Kavya..she confessed her love for Shaurya to him 😭
And Reeva so bluntly told S tht she does not care for him..she is mean. She should have told him from the start as she knew how he felt about her. Now look..he's all drunk.
Hope their hearts mend..but i still want Kavya to get Anjali 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
Part-13..

Shaurya bursts into tears:Reeva does'nt luv me.she loves sum1 else
Kavya is shocked:what?
S:yes,I cant imagine a life without Reeva
K becomes upset.he thinks:why did shaurya also hav my fate?
K:so u started drinking like dEvdas?
S is speechless.
K:taking drinks 2 4get the painful luv failure is gud only in movies.in real life u gain nothing
S:its very easy 4 u 2 tell,bcoz u'vent experienced this
K smiles slightly:who told u that?u no,anjali does'nt luv me.she loves sum1 else.am I drinking ?
S is shocked:what?how cud she avoid u & fall 4 another guy?who is he?
K keeps silent.K thinks:its better not 2 tell him abt it.its anjali who shud tell that.but what'l b shaurya's reaction?
K:shaurya,don't ask anjali about it,plz
S:ok K:promise me that u won't go out of control into stupid bars
K extends his arm. S slowly keeps his arm on it.K smiles.
S:I won't get tired.i'l struggle 2 gain reeva
K:u'l gain reeva & do u think reeva wil b happy if u get her forcefully?
S:then what shud I do?
K:leave reeva 2 hav her own life.if u luv her sincerely u shud allow her 2 b happy.if her happiness is another man,let her b happy with him
S is upset.
K:now ur concentration shud b only on studies.u r a gud student & u've a gud future.don't spoil it
S smiles:I won't break ur expectations 4 me
K smiles.

Next day Shaurya sits near Reeva & R moves away. S:reeva,don't worry,I won't disturb u anymore.i promise
R sits near S.
S completely neglects R.R feels sad.
While S was going out of college,R calls him from behind:shaurya
S stands still.
R:I no that u r angry with me
S:nothing like that.4 that what did u do?
R:then why r u avoiding me completely?cant u b a nice friend?or atleast can u just see me as ur classmate instead of treating me like a stranger?afterall our college life is going 2 get over
S:I'm sorry if I've hurt u.i'l b a gud friend always
R smiles:thanku
S smiles & goes.

College's last day.Every1's eyes r full of tears.
Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
Awww Kavya sir gives the best advice 😃
He is so sensible and mature..gd thing
Shaurya listened to him coz at least he
can remain friends with Reeva 😳
What abt Anjali will she tell Shaurya the
truth now? 😕

Continue plz. 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#30
Part-14..Kavya & shaurya hug each other.
S:u were not only my sir,u were my best friend.i'l always miss my best friend
K:missing me?never.u'l not miss me.bcoz wenever u want my help u can cum 2 me.then how can u miss me?
S smiles.

Kavya is sad in the staff room.He is alone.He comes out.He was surprised 2 see anjali outside the door
K:anjali?
A:I was waiting 4 u
K:why?
A:2day is our last day.we may not see each other after this.so I want 2
K:no need of saying Gud-bye.i hate farewell.its really painful
A becomes sad:I'l really miss u
It touches K's heart.K smiles slightly with tears.

Farewell function.
Shaurya is talking on stage:2day is college's last day.Its really painful
S wipes his tears.
S:This college gave me a lot.It taught me teacher-student relationship,how 2 overcum failures in life,what luv is.sacrifice is real luv.Kavya sir,I'm really thankful 2 u 4 teaching all these valuable things of life
K wipes his tears.
S holds guitar:this is our precious moments.we'l not get this again.so lets enjoy
S sings:papa kehta hai{QMQM}
All dance.Reeva's leg slips & she was abt 2 fall down.S holds her.Both of them r luking into each other's eyes.
S remembers R scolding him 4 catching her last time wen she was abt 2 fall.
S leaves her. S:I'm sorry
R:why?u were only helping me
R smiles & goes.S luks at her going.R turns back & smiles.S smiles.R goes

All r going out of college with pain.S is going out with pain.Sumbody holds his hand.S looks at that person:Anjali?
A:r u planning 2 go alone?I'l b there with u
S:but our ways r different
A:but I want our way 2 b same.i want our house 2 b same
S:what?
A:I want 2 liv in ur house as ur wife
S is shocked.S thinks:so was Anjali avoiding Kavya sir 4 me?

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