SS :Pathjad Saawan -last part pg17, imp note pg23.

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cooljaya11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

omg kavya

no words for this ss

but thnks for happy ending

no no no words for it

ur every word touch my soul in deep

how can u write so soft ????

omggg i read it twice

u r amazing kavya amazing

but please update salam namsate i m dying to know

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

the last para was fantastic when arohi fought with tht person n arjun saw hahahah i magine scene and thot arjun enjoyed tht of course he want it for long time ...

nice nice

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KaranKittu4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

I'm crying Kavya what have you wrote just so BEAUTIFUL! Woww I'm just numb and speechless! This is a masterpeice. There love is so deep out of this world and you described it so perfectly the confession hayee the moment if realization every single scene i just loveddd! My favourite scene was when she named all the girls and he said no it was U! Ohhh my heart stopped along with Arohis just her putting the peices of the puzzle together was beautiful! The Suhaag Raat was verry Romantic and loved this new naughty comfortable edge to Arjun. There eternal love just speechless. Super cute funny end!
I LOVED this FF! My first one I hv fully read. Thank-you for giving this to us u truly made my Valentine!

Love,
Meera

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Read again - what a lovely SS kavya -

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Actually I am SPEECHLESS at the response.

will reply to all soon 😳 meanwhile thank you so so much everyone for all the lovely words. It was pleasure writing it because I knew the awesome readers that you are, it will be appreciated.

this motivates me to think of more stories and to write more. THANK YOU ALL once again from the bottom of my heart. Love you 🤗

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rick

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

i m also speechless kavya..at d easy way of urs 2 show a complctd lovestory in such a lovely n beautfl manner..awee i lv dis ss so much..👏⭐️⭐️

d last part ws so damn cute .it was gud 2 c aro back in action😆

plz keep writng os n ss's lyk dis alng wid ur ffs

u dont no al dese amazng ff/ss/os.. writtn by al of u wondrfl writers work lyk stressbustr 2 me..

thanx again ..brilliant...i cant say much...

lots of lv..

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Ofcourse Delhi is hers and she is MINE!!

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Sreeja Nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

aww such a wonderfull OS kavya.You are totally a masterpiece.👏👍🏼.Totally loved every bit of it😃 Do write more.We are waiting for more of ur works..And do pm me from the next time😊