A story: Dusk and Dawn(p12,13,14 updt)

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Hints:

@Varshu - The diary will also open up for the character of Mr Anand, Arjun and Arohi.

And as promised, the style of writing of the diary will be on poems wised 😊

Hope you guys will enjoy it and still feel the depth of the matter.

As for Sarvesh, many guys are like him in real. They actually feel to show how good they are to win the girls and if there are no longer patient on their behaviour, either they explose or they just break up.

I wanted to show on his character that at times first impression can not be the last one. He has good quality about being professional and charming but his vices here equals the male dominated violent character which is almost what Yudishnee has been living in. Also, the fact that Yudishnee is used to see male agressive and Nandita is used to see male as gentlemen differentiate their opinions, when Nandita can see she is making a mistake, Yudishnee is not. It is when we say that father's image reflects on the person the girl will fall too. Here sadly it goes in agression.

I hope I have justified the torn life of Yudishnee, the strange behaviour of Mr Anand, the escapist Aarav and now coming to see the real Arohi,Anand and Arjun😳

Please keep it rolling with your comments.

Take care

Nisha

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Aarav is her hot and dashing elder brother. Aarav has never known her mother and he grew up hating her. He could never understand what kind of woman would that be that can leave her children and husband without an explanation. Aarav is two years older than Yudishnee and is also much loved by their dad. It seemed that how much their father is bitter to Yudishnee equals to the love he has for his son.I get it Nisha. Dishnee was with her mother for the first 8 years and came to her dad. That means Aarav is a stepbrother as he has never met her mother. This means either her dad got married again or not is still not clear. And why he loves the son more than the daughter.

Awesome start. You have got us hooked. Update soon as we want to what is there in the diary and whether it will help in running away from this secretive wedding

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Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Nopes Aarav is her son, older brother of Yudishnee and when yudishnee was born, he was only 2 by then she left the house with Yudishnee in custody, a 2 year old son will not remember his mother and especially wen the dad filtered hatredness of the mom to him

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

And I am hooked too Pumam,lol🤣

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

i really dn't want yudishnee to marry sarvesh!

i wish she listen to her best frnd!

arohi's diary? must be her nd arjun's story!

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Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chapter 3: ''End of teenage days''

Nandita decided to beat the pain of Yudishnee off. She was sure she wanted to hear it but the bitter memories are blinding her. Afterall, she is an aquarius like her, she knows when ''no'' means ''yes''.

''I am going to read it out loud, if you do not want to listen, I am going to read it myself, by the way, you have to prepare the meal for dinner if I am going to read it'' she said in a light and convincing tone.

Yudishnee knew that she can not win an argument with Nandita, at times it is irritating but then at times it is needed.

''Macaroni in Singaporean style,'' Yudishnee added in the same light tone.

''Yes, and starter is your mom's diary,'' Nandita rep;ied.

''OOOkkkay. Go on.'' Yudishnee added in a beautiful but defeated way.

''Wow, Yuds, check this out, it is gold plated and it is said that she expressed herself in poems,'' said Nandita in admiration to the creative skill of the lady that she highlighted because it reflected the same way in Yudishnee.

''Hmmm, you should not derive anything from it,'' was the reply of Yudishnee.

Chapter 1 : End of teenage days

Teenage came to an end,

Ignorant was I then,

About a friendship that would take a new direction,

Everyone was happy but I was in confusion.

Was it really love or infatuation?

As I have so many ambition.

How would I then accept the wedding proposal from him?

It seems brim.

I felt I need to experience life

With thrive.

Arjun was his name

True it was my heart frame.

Yet life was yet to uncover

Dreams were yet to discover.

He has to become someone

I have to be that one.

How can I then bind him in relationship?

When his dreams were on another ship,

Sailing to New York, his dream city

While for me, it is hooked in this county.

Flying as a birdie,

Perhaps I was crazy

Perhaps his love agreed to my maturity

Both of us were happy

No rush from parents

Blessed we were with consents

He sailed to photography

I flied to psychology

Loved to explore human mind,

Whilst he loved to explore wildlife

I was of a kind.

Arohi 10.10.1976

''Wow,sis, your mom was expressive,'' Nandita said as she was amazed that Mrs.Arohi defined accurately her state of mind.

''Arjun.'' Sighed Yudishnee.

''What happened,di?'' asked Nandita.

''di, I remembered one Arjun uncle coming at our place when I was staying with mom.'' She said.

''OMG,di, here Arjun seems to be her college mate.'' Nandita was equally puzzled.

''Let's read next page,Nandita,'' Yudishnee suggested while she grated cheese on the prepared macaroni.

Edited by Du_Nish - 14 years ago

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Amna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

i'm enjoying it nishu...nice story...it's a typical Nish style of writing.. 😆 - keep writing..u've such a good grip of life experienes and emotions of various stages of life. 👏

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Vibha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

nice start
continue soon
would like to read more

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

@amna thanks 😊 hehehe yeah this time decided to have the style of my poems on😊

True that I have grown up with a wide variety of experiences around me 😊

Lol I was thinking to have some funny side of the story later😊😊

surprise surprise to Nandita too🤣

@priya and vibha - thanks dear, will try to whenever i have a little time :) i am completely in my story so i will make sure to write it ASAP

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

isn't arjun anand?

confusing confusing yet i loved it!!!!😊

wen u can xpress urself lk that
people admires u
and u love ur life
no matter how harsh it is!!!!😉

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