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Posted: 14 years ago
nothing better to be expected from kumud.. atleast it wasnt worse..
i wonder how rashi will pacify him...🤓
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Scene65 Rashi-Mikhael find Arjun

She runs to Mikhael and says "Arjun cannot be seen, please help bhaiya"

Mikhael least bothered and watching TV. Rashi switches off TV and literally grabs his hand in desperation.

Mikhael: What are you doing Rashi?

Rashi: Arjun is not there anywhere. Help me search him, i am scared. I saw everywhere garden, all rooms

Mikheal: He must be somewhere around only

Rashi: Please na, come with me. We will search (has tears filling her eyes)

Mikhael: OK, ok do not start crying now

Both start searching everywhere. Arjun is not to be seen anywhere.

Rashi: Where can he be?

Mikhael ask: Lets search in attic where we sometime hide while playing hide and seek. Get a torch

Rashi gets a torch and both run to attic. Mikhael climbs the attic and switches torch and calls out for Arjun but he is not to be seen.

Mikhael: He is not here

Rashi: You are sure bhaiya, see once more na

Mikhael: I have seen, he is not here. Lets go down

Rashi starts crying: What if something happens to him?

Mikhael: Stop crying Rashi. Where could he be? Did you check near water tank on top?

Rashi: No, its too steep for me to climb. I was scared.

Mikheal: That is the only place remaining now.

Rashi: If he is not there also?

Mikheal: Then, we will go and tell mom

Rashi: I told her. She did not listen (crying)

Mikhael: I will tell her, she will listen. Stop crying now.

Both run to top floor and Mikhael climbs the water tank steps and Rashi stands below as steps are very slant and have no railings to catch

Mikhael sees Arjun and gets angry.

Mikhael starts shouting at Arjun: You are here. Do you know how scared Rashi and I were, I mean Rashi was? We searched everywhere. Because of you i climbed that dirty attic. Are you listening?

Arjun still numb and not listening.

Mikhael gets angry and bends down and starts shaking him,

Mikhael: Are you listening? Whats wrong with this guy today? First you hurt my leg while jumping out of car. Then you disappear like moon on a moonless night. I am going and complaining to mom about your behavoiur today.

Arjun just stares but does to not respond to Mikhael

Rashi somehow climbs the steep stairs after listening to all this yelling from Mikhael

Rashi: Mikheal bhaiya, stop it. Arjun is upset

Mikhael: Upset my foot. Why is he upset? He was so happy in the car and threatening us to hurry up else he would drive off with the driver. Now he is upset? Come down now only. I am not going to come looking for you again.

Rashi: Bhaiya you go, we will come

Mikhael: No way, i will not go without taking you both along. Who knows later on i may have to search for both of you?

Rashi: We will come bhaiya, you go please

Mikhael: Fine, do whatever. I am not coming back and leaves

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Posted: 14 years ago
aah!! do i see an ounce of concern from ol' micky there?? 🤓 wud be nice.. poor rashi, she overcame her fear coz she wanted to help arjun n save him from micky's anger.. thnx prem..loving this!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hate kumud !!
bevKOOF aurat !1
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Posted: 14 years ago
she is such a horibble coldhearted women!!!
rashi=soo sweet
thnx 4 pm..cont soon.x
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Scene 66 Rashi consoling Arjun
Rashi kneels down and says "Arjun" and Arjun does not react.

Rashi sits and tells him "You are upset no"

No response from Arjun.

After 5 minutes Rashi holds his hand tightly and says "I love you and i will always be there with you"

Arjun looks at her and she says "All life".

Rashi pauses and adds "no matter what" and puts her arms around his shoulders.

Tears start clouding his eyes.Rashi held on to him tightly and allowed him to cry his heart content. GOD only knew how much time had passed but it was sunset when Arjun finally realized and got back to his senses. Neither had spoken a word about why he cried but Rashi understood what had made her silent serious brother drench in tears and Arjun knew she understood it.

Both keep sitting and staring at sky without speaking a single word.

Its 8pm dinner time and Arjun and Rashi not at dinner table.

Maids cannot find them both anywhere and tell Rudra.

Mikhael says he knows where they are and will get them. He goes to water tank and climbs the steps and sees both of them staring at sky.

Mikhael(angrily): What are you both doing sitting here for last 2-3 hours? Dad is calling for dinner.

Rashi: You know Mikhael there is a shooting star which comes once in 10 years and today we are waiting to see it

(Winks at Arjun to take cue)

Arjun: Yeah, we are waiting for the shooting star

Mikhael: Really, where, when is it coming(looking at sky trying to find it)

Rashi gets up and says: There in north direction see there

Mikhael really trying hard to find the star

Mikhael: Which one? Where

Rashi: That one

Mikhael: Where?

Rashi: Oh no it passed by and you missed it

Mikheal feeling sad that he missed an opportunity to see the star.

Rashi starts laughing: April fool bhaiya, April fool and claps her hand and jumps up and down. Arjun starts laughing

Mikhael wild now: You just wait and chases her and she hids behind Arjun

Mikhael: Arjun you better move away. Rashi, i am not leaving you today

Rashi getting scared: Sorry bhaiya, it was just a joke. Please do not hit me.

RPS comes by then and calls out: Mikhael, Arjun, Rashi where are you? Are you here?
Rashi runs from behind saying: Daddy i am here, daddy and slips and falls off the steps below

Mikhael and Arjun too late to catch her. RPS rushes to her and she is bleeding heavily in her head.

He rushes her to hospital. Mikhael and Arjun go with him.

She has 8 stitches on her forehead and hurt her leg and hand too.

They return home and Kumud gives a dressing down to Arjun that this happened because of him. RPS also angry at him for climbing so high late at night and that too with Rashi in tow. He wants to know what both were doing so high but Arjun does not respond.

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Posted: 14 years ago
ah no!! yeh kya hua...beginning was sweet.. finally rashi got arnd to meltin his stony silence..its sweet of micky to come search even though he said he wudnt.. tragic that rashi fell off.. kumud toh expected to be vampish, n deffo RPS wud also be enraged that they were sitting up there at nite.. ab kya hoga?? am sure when she comes to consciousness she will help arjun out..

gud one prem!! btw, did u read diff strokes?? it has no sense..but well, its a laugh..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Aksh, I read the spamming one and filmi version of gauri parda faash the one with brad pitt etc. Which is the diff stroke one?

And in my FF Mikhael is not bad fromstarting. His insecurities start growing as he becomes big and his father gives more importance to Arjun than him in business. As a child he is aloof and irritating but not jealous of Arjun. In childhood the commanding elder brother who wants all younger siblings to just listen to him and do as he wants. He is not really sure currently if he likes/dislikes Arjun. Thats why he went searching for Arjun because one he did not want to see Rashi crying second he did not want something to happen to Arjun.
If you observe in serial Mikhael is not jealous of Arjun because he is adopted and not blood relation, he is jealous because his father never praises him once in front of family but always keeps praising Arjun. Its RPS fault and Kumuds also for instgating this jealousy in Mikhael against Arjun through their behavoiur towards them.
Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
agreed!! thats what i love abt ur FF.. u have sketched it out perfectly!!

i put the filmi version of gauri pardafash as an FF called diff strokes.. added it to it later.. but i wrote a serious part in it.. p4.. i dint really like how they handled ahlu's acceptance of arjun.. so i retaked it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭 poor rashee!! get well soon! :)

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