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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Nice update👏
Can't imagine the looks on Arjun's face
looking forward on his next step to save RPS

Nicely Written Prem🤗
Waiting for next Scene😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u gotta hand it to gauri, Arjun ko hi Arohi ke case me phasa diya!!! but bechare Romit ne uska kya bigada tha.. if she wanted she shud have gotten even with micky mouse for drugging her at the ball!! anywayz, arjun romit ko bacha lega..but khud ko kaise bachayega??!!? n RPS the DON, he will deffo find out from his underworld sources what happend!?! n Billu Makarand?!? kahan hai woh?

k, i realized i just asked so many questions, but u have ur brilliant writing skills to blame..i am so drawn into this story, i am moving along with it.. 😳 waiting for next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: aksh4IF

u gotta hand it to gauri, Arjun ko hi Arohi ke case me phasa diya!!! but bechare Romit ne uska kya bigada tha.. if she wanted she shud have gotten even with micky mouse for drugging her at the ball!! anywayz, arjun romit ko bacha lega..but khud ko kaise bachayega??!!? n RPS the DON, he will deffo find out from his underworld sources what happend!?! n Billu Makarand?!? kahan hai woh?


k, i realized i just asked so many questions, but u have ur brilliant writing skills to blame..i am so drawn into this story, i am moving along with it.. 😳 waiting for next part..

Thanks for liking my story. If i was the director of KMH2 my story would have proceeded like this.
Romit has been trapped because he is innocent and can be tricked easily.
Michael may be dumb but not innocent hence a bit difficult to trap him by Gauri. Hence she trapped Romit.
And this incident will be turning point in Arjun Singhania's life. And romit is liked by everyone in singhania family and hence their hurt will be much more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Great part dear....poor romait ..........feel sorry for him....now waiting for next one, pls continue soon, Thanks...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Scene19

RPS walks towards Arjun and says "believe me Arjun, i did not do this". He looks at Rashi and tells Arjun to take care of her and house in his absence. Dadi really angry at RPS and says Rudra "i told you i will never forgive you if you hurt Arohi". RPS says "when have you ever trusted me biji". Michael and Jignesh say they will go to police station with lawyer and leave. Rajveer tells Arohi "you also better come with me i am not leaving you in this criminal and murderers house" and stares at Arjun and Kumud. They both leave.

Rashi keeps speaking saying "i told you all of us will die one day because of this house and its background. I told you lets leave this house but you never listened, you never listened to me Arjun". Rashi completely upset over this and runs to her room. Arjun, Dadi and Kumud run behind her. Rashi locks the door going to her room and starts screaming lying on the floor thinking of what happened. All try to tell her to open but she goes on screaming. Arjun breaks open the door and rushes and holds her and tells her to keep quiet and control herself. Rashi goes blank and starts staring him expressionless. Dadi calls doctor immediately. Arjun and Kumud try consoling her but to no avail. The doctor comes and takes her in ambulance by sedating her. Arjun goes along with her. Doctor in hospital comes and tells them that she has completely lost her senses because of some great shock and her situation is very fragile. He says that he had told RPS to ensure that she always remains happy. But looks like his words were not heeded. They see Rashi from outside. Dadi and Makrand stay in hospital. Arjun return's home.

RPS in police station meets Kartar and says "i did not try to kill Arohi. I know Arjun loves her lot. Why i will hurt her and even Arjun was injured in this incident. Will i try and kill my own son or risk his life. And please leave Romit, he is a kid. Do not destroy his life by involving him in police chargesheet." Rajveer says "we have evidence this time and this time i do not think your favourite (Arjun) son can also save you"

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scene20

Arjun comes back to house and Kumud, Jignesh and Michael are there in the main hall. Kumud gets angry at him and blames him for all that happened.

She says "Neither would RPS get you home, neither you marry Arohi and get her home, Neither would she be attacked and enemity with Alhuwaliah's increase, Neither police suspect RPS and take him and Romit to jail, neither would have Rashi gone into depression again".
Raj who is hearing this from top comes running and says "Chotte dadu, why you are shouting at my dad, did he steal chocolate or break anything costly". Arjun looks at him with tears in his eyes. Kumud says "How dare you illegitimate(Najayaz) kid speak to me like that, you better get out before i slap you and throw you out of this house?" Jignesh says "RPS must really throw both the illegitemate children out and they have made this house an orphanage" and looks at Arjun. Arjun says "Please do not speak like that in front of a kid". Kumud leaves in a huff and so do Michael and Jignesh.

Arjun goes up the stairs and closes the door and breaks down.

Raj comes running behind him and starts banging door saying "Dad open the door, dad open the door".

Arjun opens the door and wants to hide his tears so turns his back to Raj and stands.

Raj comes and asks "Dad what is illegitimate(Najayaz").

Arjun cannot hide his feeling anymore and turns and he bends down and hugs Raj and starts crying uncontrollably.

Raj says "Dad do not cry, you are crying because chote dadu(Kumud) scolded you right". "If next time chote dadu scolds you i will put frog in her shoes, but you stop crying now, seeing you cry I also feel like crying, Smile now".

Arjun controls his emotions and wipes his tears and smiles.

Raj again asks "Dad what is illegitimate (Najayaz"). Arjun hesitates and thinks and says children of GOD are called "Najayaz".

Raj says "But how can i be Gods child, i am your son"

Arjun says "Some people like you and me are very lucky, we have two sets of parents GOD and our mom and dad"

Raj says "Chote Dadu was giving me a compliment saying i am child of GOD, i have two set of parents, God and Mom and Dad, i am so lucky, i will give her a extra kiss as good night today, i will just come, " and starts running and stops. He goes to Arjun and say bend down and kisses him on both his cheeks and runs. Arjun tries to stop him from going to kumud but he does not listen and Arjun thinks of his innocence and lets him go.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
hey prem...thnx 4 da pm nd postin 2 scenes dey were gr8....felt so sorry 4 rashi....da scene between arjun nd raj was sweet....cnt w8 4 ur nxt updates...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
I actually feel sorry for RPS, BUT more Romit!!!! Poor baby! He's so nice! I can't wait till gauri gets caught! And arohi she left arjun, nooooo!!!!!! Great up date can't wait till the rest, keep it up!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
hey thank u so much for quick updates....part 20 was so touching , well done....feel so sad for arjun, chute dadu is so mean....never like her , arohi tum kyun chali gye arjun needs u......
i'm so addicted with ur ff... ab tu aatay jaatay check karti rihti hun.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Scene21

Raj runs to pool where Kumud, Jignesh and Michael are discussing something and says " chote dadu bend down". Arjun watching all this from the balcony. Kumud in no mood trying to brush him aside but he insists. Kumud bends down and Raj kisses her on both cheeks and says "Thanku you chote dadu". Kumud surprised. Jignesh says "What new drama is this kid doing, what did your dad teach you and send here. I am sure he was spewing venom against us". Raj innocently continues "Because of Chote Dadu i came to know that i am "Najayaz-illegitemate". Dad told me "Najayaz means children off God and such children are lucky because they have two sets of parents GOD and mom and dad" and says Goodnight and runs from there. Jignesh says "this must be Arjun's new ploy to please us, using his illegitimate son". Kumud and Michael smirk. Arjun feels bad.

Arjun thinks about Arohi- i should have stopped her but how when she thinks my own father has tried to kill her. She is safe in her own house atleast he can see her from far and be happy rather than losing her. He remembers yesterday night what RPS told him and Rashi in hospital. Suddenly his happy life had all vanished. He thinks of Rashi telling him so many times to leave this house and become a good person.His heart does not want to believe his dad could do this but his mind knows how ruthless his dad is. But then he thinks why his dad will use Romit phone to give supari and inspector said it was a female who gave that order. He feels something is fishy and wants to find out who is behind all this. In night Raj keeps switching channels on TV and Astha channel will be coming in which panditji says that in holy books its written " Whoever sees injustice done by his family, father, mother, brother, sister, wife and children or by friends and colleagues and does not correct it or speak against it also becomes equally responsible in that crime".

Alhuwaliah's discussing the surprise result of RPS having ordered the killing of Arohi. Rajveer fuming and saying that he will ensure they all be in jail for the rest of their life. Kartar saying cannot believe RPS could fall down so much in enemity. Gauri sees this as an opportunity to instigate and goes to their room and says to Rajveer that she feels Arjun was also involved in all this supari planning and hence reached the forest place where goons were chasing Arohi. Then he acted as if he saved Arohi and Rajveer. This must be RPS and Arjun plan for revenge of previous attacks on Singhania's which later changed into saving drama because of something. Rajveer gets more angry and says Gauri that he will ensure Arjun also get into the FIR though he acted as if he saved Arohi and him. Gauri feels happy as enemity will increase with Arjun and Singhania's and Arohi will not go back to Arjun and she can seduce Arjun and get him. She tells Rajveer "Now we must seriously think of applying for divorce for Arohi. We have got good reason also". Rajveer happy and says "How lucky i am, i have a great wife who thinks of my entire family"

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