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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ranrags

Hey Jaz..BEAUTIFUL update!!You've explained every little bit very beautifully..really liked Heer's morning little routine of spending some time in her son's bedroom watching him..liked how she is with Preet..and liked how Meher-Ash pulled her legs while she was going out with Preet..Preet sure knows how to light her mood up..and it's good that Heer told him about her little meeting with Mr.Juneja..but she should've told him that the address belongs to Prem..isn't it?the reason being Preet would feel bad once he comes to know of it??u've portrayed Prem's anger very well..how he was feeling when he saw Heer with Mr.Singh..really nice..looking forward to the next update!!


hey yaar...now this is more like it...a nice long comment...LOVE IT ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...yeah...i particularly like heer's morning routine too...its special, uninterrupted time she has with her boy...every mother deserves that ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...jaani...you are one step ahead of me...dhere dhere...saab saamne aajayega...have a little faith in our Heer...dehr se sahi...but she will do the right thing...Preet deserves honesty from Heer...at the very least ๐Ÿ˜‰...next update soon yaar...lets see if you can be first again ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey! hi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

You updated! i sure did ๐Ÿ˜Š
I loved the update! thanks...glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Preets so kind, always supporting Heer in whatever decisions she makes...but Prem is still my fave out of the two.
Im soooo glad Prem's jealous of Preet! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...no matter how prefect Preet is...i have a feeling that Prem's dewaanis will never switch teams...loyal Prem Jhuneja fans...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Wonder whats gonna happen in the next update!
Can't wait till the next parts up! next part up soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
xXx
Sunayna
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Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey, just read ur FF.. awsome.. its a new concept.. and this update was so sweet with preet and heer. uh-oh wats prem up to???? wat else does he have in store for heer.... do update wen u get the chance..and take care

~nikki


i thought you were new...welcome to my ff ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...glad that you liked my work...you will have to wait and read to see what Prem is up to ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›..next update coming soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: shabo24

Hey Jaz di! ๐Ÿค— hello shabbo!!!!

W - O - W! What an amazing update. It wasn't too "action packed" or too boring, just right! I really love Aarav, like if you can't adjust me into the role of Mrs.Preet Singh, I can live with being Aarav's Mrs.โ˜บ๏ธ so are you saying that my other updates are too action packed or boring...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...dil toot gaya ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...im only teasing ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...haila...Mrs. Aarav bhi...now you have to pick one...i cant do both ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

Aww the joking around between Preet and Heer is amazing, and I just love and I mean love how Preet always manages to squeeze in compliments everywhere he goes, no matter what they are talking about! *cho chweet* i know...how cute is he!!! i want someone like him in my life......i had to go and to the "smart" thing of dumping the one i had ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Oh wow, loved how Preet and Heer "checked" each other out, like seizing up the compition. ๐ŸคฃUghh can you actually believe I was giggling like the mindless fool I am during Ash's and Meher's teasings, like the "reasonable hour" one by Meher. *giggles* To cute...and oh Preet? I blush. โ˜บ๏ธPick me.....please? *bats eyelashes* Ohh di what was the biodata you require? What info do you need? =] i like the sister sister bond in this story...i have always wanted sisters...since i dont have any...i make do with fictional ones ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...as for biodata...you know the usual...measurements, dob, pob, name, height, weight...blah blah blah ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

I love the understanding between the two ( Preet and Heer ) He knows that she needs her space and she knows that she has to be be fair to him in a sense of speaking. *sigh* Preet is so understanding! Did you say you modeled him after someone? Yaar, that guy must have been one in a million!๐Ÿ˜› yeah...Preet was modeled after my ex...he was perfect but i just didnt have the same feelings...he was just like Preet and it was wrong for me to be in a relationship that was one sided...he deserved to be loved...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...then when i realized my mistake...it was too late...so i planned his wedding...how's that for a story ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Ohhh is Prem the sneaky hot guy or is it just me? โ˜บ๏ธ That was such a dam hot description of Prem, like "mine and oly mine" โ˜บ๏ธ *sigh* I am such a sucker! But aww poor Preet in unknowingly sending his finacee to Prem....wonder if he will catch them?๐Ÿ˜‰Mega interesting ending!! Can not wait to see the fireworks that fly between the two now! i know...that possessive thing...totally had me drooling too ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...i love it when a dude gets all hot and bothered at the thought/sight of "his" girl with another dude...jealousy can be hot...if its just the right amount ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

--shabz
aka--
--mrs.preet singh oh ho, i see you have picked one!!! ๐Ÿ˜›
โ˜บ๏ธ



JAZ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey jaz di thanks for the PM..wow...an excellent part..so prem is jealous of preet..haha shame...it was his own fault that he didnt hang on to heer then!...

aww..preet is so cute and caring..woldnt mind someone like him for me..lolz...
aww...what is this prem upto now!
cant wait for the next part...continue soon pls!
oh by the way as for ZKH..i hve read it abt 3 times now!...lolz!


no worries on the PM...glad to do it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...i agree with you...its Prem's fault...but then not really...you will have to see how i justify his old image...then you can decide...if its valid or not ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...wow..3 times...holy cow!!! what are your fav parts...id love to know...its one of my fav ff's...because it has everything in it...and it was my first ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...next part up soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: zaara006

ummmmm... reserved... i need to think about my reaction to this!!!!!!!

ok... i thought it was a very good part, but i'm feeling even more sorry for Preet!!!! ๐Ÿ˜• The poor guy, he doesn't know what he is getting himself and his fiance... emphasis on the fiance..... into!!!!!!! I must say, Prem has such a bad boy image in this, i am starting to like Preet even more!!!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ I really hope you do something about this and if Heer is going to end up with Prem, please find someone nice for Preet, or else it will be really sad!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Can't wait for the next update already!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


you had me scared for a second...i thought it was so bad that you didnt know how to say the update sucked ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•....thanks for liking it...and yeah...Preet is in a pickle isnt he ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...woo hoo...i have one official reader on the Preet team...woo hoo...i for one and all for Preet as well ๐Ÿ‘...you will have to just read on to see how i fix this situation...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...good or bad...you will get to decide ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...next part up soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesum update
tooo good
prem made a deal with preet yay
can't wait...


thanks yaar...next part up soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘


thanks...will do ๐Ÿ˜Š

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lian

Hey Jaz!Hope u r having gr8 time,i agree this time it was quiet early i couldnt blive it 1st bt thn i realise its true,i wasnt dreaming๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†(Jokes a part)it was really good&i cant wait long 4 the next part it ll b PremHeer meeting,the mother son scene was really cute,i have 2admit u wrote it beautifully,it was danm sweet&cute just like Aarav๐Ÿ˜ณi dnt knw Y Preet had 2b soooo good,i just respect this charecter alot,i wonder how any1 can b so good,supportive,kind,helpful??I amazed by Preet,i dnt want2break his heart i cant break prem's heart either wht 2 do?I felt Heer also had started loving him.Though Prem dnt dserve Heer,i still want 2 c thm 2gather,wht 2 do?It was so difficult,really loved the way tht 2sister teased Heer,Meher is spoiling Ashlesha too,bt i found it cute๐Ÿ˜ณagain Preet took my heart in restaurent his dialouges where awsome!!Credit goes to jaz!๐Ÿ‘i was suspecting like this Prem's brain ll work soon,after reading last part i felt Prem loved Heer truely bt dnt want2 admit&think its a sexual attraction&he want a proper ending of thier reletionship?Its really disgusting of him bt still i cant hate him.ll wait2read the nxt part as well.Takecare


you must be going crazy...again...im updating before the one month mark ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...if its too much for you...i can slow down...just let me know ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...i have no problem doing that ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...i know that Preets character is hard to digest...but trust me...there are people out there in the world like him...they are rare for sure...and never let go if you get one...but they are there...whats really sad is when one of those guys...gets stuck with a girl...who doesnt deserve him ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...yeah...Prem will be a little conniving when it comes to getting Heer back...but for what purpose...you have to wait and watch ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...so if you hate prem...can i say you are a Preet supporter??? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey

read da whole thing luved it its diffrnt but it is sooooooooooo gud
hope u update soon tc bye 4 nw


thanks...welcome to my ff...next update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by: destinny

nice part. wat will prem do next?? eagerly waiting to find out. do update soon and thanx for the PM. hope to get another PM soon.


Prem has a few tricks pulled up his sleeve...just you wait and see ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...next part up soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: Ghia

awesome update ๐Ÿ‘ cute scenes of heer and preet. cant wait to find what is prem planning on doing with heer all alone in his house. continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š


thanks for liking the update...watch what Prem does...๐Ÿ˜‰

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sadizzle

oh no yaar..preet is such an amazing fiance!! ๐Ÿ˜

๐Ÿ˜ฒhow are you going to get prem and heer together?
its not looking to good for prem right now! ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ so you are a Premeer supporter...come on ...dont you just LOVE Preet ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
i love prem and preet! - so hard to choose..omg how do you plan on getting things "fixed" i loved how you put fixed in quotes ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...because for what i have planned...things will be far from "fixed" ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Prem is looking like an out right bad guy..๐Ÿ’”..and ....i have no idea of what will get heer to like him again..and if she leaves preet..after 4 years...๐Ÿ˜•..she will look so bad... yeah...either way...things cant end good...unless...................................................๐Ÿ˜‰
i have no idea of how this situation will be resolved..i can't see preet's heart getting broken..and seeing prem like this is sad too!! aare yaar...dont worry too much about it...ive got big plans for this story...you just have to enjoy each part on its own ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
omg
all i can request is lets have a good outcome..plz?
but im afraid someone's heart is bound to break..and im guessing it gonna be preet's๐Ÿฅบ
because right now..prem's heart is broken with out heer..but if he wins her over..then preet's gonna get hurt! ๐Ÿคฃ the whole comment you talk about the future outcome...nothing about the actual update...are you really that worried...no tension yaar...i got this...no worries ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
such a high tense ff..i like it!
Your doing an amazing job on this!
Keep up the great work
Much Love
-Sadi* thanks yaar...next update will be up soon ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

BTW i think this is the longest comment i have left for any ff i have read..๐Ÿ˜†..but thats because i love it the most! ๐Ÿ˜Š thanks to you for commenting...but does this now mean i can expect long comments now on...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...and if i see a short comment it will mean you didnt like my update ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...do i know how to emotionally blackmail or what ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
thanx again!



Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

I was very happy to see your PM.. this update was really amazing.. heer seems to be very relaxed with preet... and prem he's damn angry about it,, good good.. waiting for the next part and the next PM..


๐Ÿ˜†...im glad that you look forward to my PM's...you will be getting another PM from me soon ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...next part will be up soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: Thapanee

hey great update was waiting for it...preet is so sweet..he loves heer so much...

wow prem saw them at the restaurant and he is really jealous i like it...really want to know wht will prem do next
waiting for next update


thanks for liking the update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...next update will be up soon...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: sonu0511

hey strtd readin yr ff...its too good...


thanks...next update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

JAZ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bd67816

wow, amazing update. loved the cute scenes of preet and heer.
keep going.
waiting for the next update.
thanks for the pm and take care.


aww...glad that you liked the update...next update soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: only.asking

Jaz, I sneaked into the forum and got to read this story...It's really superbly written... The conversations are all so real ... The only person who is too b&w is Prem... But how can I not love prem? ๐Ÿ˜†... Great great story and can't wait to find out what happens next... Please please put me on a PM list if you have one.


๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...why are you sneaking around the forum...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but hey...you do what you gotta do...๐Ÿ˜›...so are you a die hard Premeer fan for this ff...or do you think you will Preet a chance ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...aage aage dekho hota hai kya...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

wonderful update.... i'm just fallin for preet.๐Ÿ˜‰

i'm jus waitin to know what prem wud do next???? i mean get a grip man... wonder wat is in store for heer now???

i love the way u explain everythin..... jus beautiful...


that is the evil plan...for everyone to love Preet and hate Prem...๐Ÿ˜‰....just wait and see what Prem does...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...then next update will be up soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

JAZ
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Posted: 16 years ago
to jaz
just to say thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Aaaww Jaz, I am soooo sorry, I broke my promise!! Yep you are spot on, I have been too engrossed in thoughts of Edward Cullen- but really-can you blame me?? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Okay, anyway back to the updates, I will give you my comments now!! I hope you like lamba, lamba comments cuz this is going to be pretty long, BRACE YOURSELF, lol!! ๐Ÿ˜† yaar...for EC all is forgiven and forgotten ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...and no...i dont blame you...i have read Breaking Dawn twice already...cover to cover...im planning a third round but had held off in fear of lookin too weird ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...and yes...bring it on...im ready ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

PART 7- I liked the cute Preet-Heer scene at the start and how much respect she has for him. It was really warming to know that these two are so natural and honest with each other, something that was probably missing in her relationship with Prem. It's sad how their relationship focussed more on the physical side of things than the emotional side; otherwise they probably would still have been together today! Preet is just'*sigh*'I love the fact that after he says 'I Love You' to Heer, he doesn't feel the need to push her into saying she loves him too and is simply satisfied with her simple 'Goodnight'-it was too sweet!! And that flashback of him complimenting her beauty was just amazing- I wish all guys on this earth were like Preet in your FF! One thing that I really loved with this part was when Heer goes to check on sleeping Aarav- It's so amazing how that short, simple scene of her straightening him up in the bed and kissing him on the forehead shows what a great mother she is and reflects how much she wants to shield him from the troubles of her life. Wow, the three sister's scene was absolutely hilarious, it's so cute that they are all so close and feel that they can share everything with each other!! Meher is such a joker- 'big bed'๐Ÿคฃ 'Male anatomy' ๐Ÿ˜†- Where do you come up with this stuff Jaz- your writing is so rib tickling- it's too good!! It's so nice that her family members (along with Preet) were her pillars of support during the birth of Aarav, after all if your own ones aren't going to support you, then who are??

dead on...honesty had no space in her relationship with Prem...he was the millionaire playboy...need i say more ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰...honey...you and me both...we need more Preets' and Edward Cullens...i mean...is it too much to ask to have a nice guy in our lives ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...its just not fair...we arent being too picky...we will take either or...but both would be awesome ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...my mind is a crazy thing...not good for anything really...but i tend to come up with wacky lines and stuff...that bed thing was funny...when i first thought of it...i was rolling ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...you are right...if your family isnt there to help you when you need it the most...then whats the point in calling them your family...hai naa ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

PART 8- What can I say- loved every bit of it!! The start was just perfect- It's so sweet that Aarav is like the sun for Heer, lighting up her life, so in the mornings all she has to do is take one look at her son and it cheers her up. It's so amazing that Heer and Preet have so much fun working together, usually couples hate working alongside one another, LOL!! Anyway, the smelling scene was so cute!! I was grinning from ear to ear reading it, why does Preet have to be soooooo sweet??!!!!! Gosh he really knows how to get the temperatures rising doesn't he?? Whispering in Heer's ears and making her blush *fans*!! ๐Ÿ˜† I think it was really big and sincere of Heer to tell the truth about Prem to Preet, and obviously Preet being the angel that he is didn't even react badly to it!! Seriously, how can anyone be so perfect?!! Oh Jaz why are you torturing us loyal Prem-Heer fans by making us love Preet!! *pulls hair* Aaaahhhhhh!! LOL!! He willingly ate wasabi just to bring a smile on her face!!! This guy oozes charm in buckets!! OMG-PREM JUNEJA!!!!! Didn't we all know he was never, in a million years, going to back down and give up his Heer!! I guess it's quite a common thing to desperately want something you once had and now you know you can't have. I can't believe he was witnessing Preet and Heer's flirting and romancing!! Oh my goodness, I can just imagine his face- the tensed jawline, the narrowed eyes, hands balled into fists- aaahhh, he would be looking so HOT!! An angry Prem is always a HOT Prem!! I love how he grimaces over the fact that the blush that was once for him now spreads across Heer's face for another man. Oh Jaz- I loved the last paragraph- 'raw sexual tension' LOL!! Hmmm...Can't wait to read THAT in detail!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

what can you say....apparently...a lot...which i LOVE ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...yeah...im sure most couples would pull their hair out working with their significant other...but not Preet and Heer...but then again...they arent your regular couple...*evil laugh* ๐Ÿ˜ˆ...one of the main purposes of this ff..was to test the loyalty of all premeer fans...just wait and watch what the Prem Jhuneja does to our Heer...then you can decide...๐Ÿ˜‰...ha ha...i agree with you...angry prem is hot prem...remember...when he got mad at Ullu for disrespecting Heer...man if looks could kill...Ullu would be 6ft under ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...i love Harshad...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...tauba...no raw sexual tension yet...but...aage aage dekhte hai...hota hai kya ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Did you enjoy reading that Jaz?? Don't throw any jootay ok?? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† loved reading it...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘...im expecting lamba comments from now on...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Love Zahra xx luv ya too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



JAZ
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Posted: 16 years ago


I read it. I love it. I promise, you'll get a proper response next weekend. In the meantime, my heart is breaking for Preet already...why do you have to make him so nice?!??!! He doesn't deserve to have his heart broken! :(

K, I'll be back next weekend.
Love,
~P


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys...all my lovely readers...whats up...๐Ÿ˜ƒ...here is another installment of Heer's Secret...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...lets see what you all think of this part...thanks to everyone for their comments on the last part...and like i said...if im updating too soon for you guys...just let me know..ill go back to updating once every few months ๐Ÿ˜‰...

special shout out to zaibun....the chocolates!!! *woot woot* ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...im in heaven!!!!

just a note...dont know when ill be able to update again...lots of projects, midterms, papers and presentations are coming up...so ill be a bit busy with school and everything ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...but i will try my best ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Love you all...enjoy...

Part 9

Part 9

When Heer woke the next morning, she didn't have the slightest clue how the night passed. She was awake for the most part of it; tossing and turning in restlessness. She hadn't slept one wink. She had checked in on Aarav repeatedly, checked in on her sisters, watched TV; pretty much did all there was to do. As she looked out her window, she saw that the sun was just rising over the horizon. Heer dreaded her meeting with Prem today. She thought that their meeting at the Radisson was the last she would hear of him, but apparently that was not so.

A thought occurred to Heer; she quickly jumped out of bed and dialed a number from her cell phone. "Hello, good morning Preetโ€ฆ Yes I'm fine and I know it's early but I need to talk to youโ€ฆ What? No, no everyone is fineโ€ฆ I just need to talk to you, it's importantโ€ฆ Yes, that's fine. So I'll see you in an hour at the shopโ€ฆ Goodโ€ฆ Ok then, bye."

As she ended the call she knew she did the right thing by calling Preet. Before anything else happened with Prem and this assignment, Heer had to tell Preet who Prem Jhuneja really was. Preet had been a rock, a constant in her life; she had to tell him the truth...she owed him that much.

After a quick shower, Heer was confused on what to wear; she didn't want to wear anything too revealing or 'sexy' - she had to keep Prem at bay. After minutes of contemplation she finally settled on a pair of beige slacks and a black sleeveless top, which had a gold belt that clinched at the waist. She quickly changed and stepped into her black heels. Heer added simple gold-hoop earrings and a gold bracelet. She was soon in her car, headed to meet Preet.

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Heer walked into the store and knew that Preet was already there. The smell of coffee was running through the air, mixed in with the smell of carrot raisin muffins. Without even looking Heer knew that Preet had stopped by Mimi's Caf before coming to the shop to pick up breakfast.

"Hello?" she called to let Preet know that she was there. She soon saw him round a corner, a smile on his face and a cup of coffee in his hand.

"Morning beautiful," he said, and kissed her on the cheek. He handed her the cup of coffee and said, "I thought we could have breakfast before you went off to work today. Come."

Preet took Heer by the hand a led her to the back area of the shop. She saw that he had set up one of the antique tables with the coffee and muffins, and the whipped butter that Heer loved. It was a nice, simple setting made romantic by the solitary red rose that sat on a vase in the middle of the table. Seeing the muffins caused Heer's stomach to remind her she hadn't eaten breakfast. She sat down and took a sip of the coffee that Preet had handed her; two creams and two sugars, just the way she liked it.

"Mmmm...thank you." She said.

"Anything for you babe. So are you excited about today? I'm sure you will find tons of stuff for the store." Preet saw the look on Heer's face and it concerned him. "You know what, forget it. Forget the assignment. You wanted to talk about something. What happened? Is everything alright?" he asked, his voice dripping with concern.

"Actually, it is related to the assignment. It has to do with the man who is giving us his stuff."

"Oh...ok. What about him? How do you know him, by the way? And how does he know your family? I was surprised when he mentioned over the phone that he knew the Maan's. In all the years I have known you guys, I haven't heard of any connection to Prem Jhuneja. Is he a family friend?"

"Was," Heer said in a soft voice.

"What?"

"Was, he was a family friend...acquaintance," she corrected.

"How does your family know Prem Jhuneja?" Preet asked.

"He is...well...I don't know how to tell youโ€ฆ" Heer was on the verge of tears, she didn't know what was going to happen.

"Hey," Preet put a hand on top on Heer's thigh and gave it a squeeze. "You can tell me anything...anything...you know that."

"He's...he's..." Heer was still chocking on her tears that were stinging her eyes. She stopped and took a deep breath and continued, "He is Aarav's father."

Preet's eyes went wide in shock. He stood up and stood quite for a while. Heer stood up along with him and stood by his side silently, letting him take in the information.

"Let me get this straight..." he finally said, "...Aarav's father is Prem Jhuneja, THE Prem Jhuneja? The man who is the number one architect in the world at the moment, the man who built the multi-billion dollar island get away in Dubai? Aarav's good-for-nothing, non-existent father isโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆPrem Jhuneja?"

"Yes." Was all Heer could say.

"So that night when you went to see Aarav's dad, it was Prem Jhuneja?"

"I'm so sorry. I know I should have told you about it then, but...I thought we were done. I didn't have any reason to think he would come after me again."

"That's why he wants you, and only you to appraise the stuff." Heer remained silent, but Preet kept on, "You said that you didn't talk about Aarav, but you talked about 'other' things. What other things did you talk about, what did he say?"

"He said he wanted to resume the relationship we once had." Preet balled his hands into fists, knowing full well what Prem Jhuneja had in mind for himself and Heer. "I told him about us, I told him I am engaged to you."

"What are you going to do? About the assignment I mean."

"What do you want me to do?"

"This deal would really establish our business and give us tons of revenue," he said.

Heer looked a bit crest fallen; she felt that he was putting the business over her at the moment. He stepped closer and took her hands in his own.

"But you have to know that I would never make you do something that you didn't want to do. It all depends on you. If you cannot do it, then that is fine. No worries. All that matters to me is that you are ok."

After a pause Heer said, "I'll do it."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes. I have to show him that I have moved on, and that I am happy. He has to know that he cannot get everything he wants."

"If you're sure, then I'm here for you...all the way. Just remember, if at any point you feel like you want out, all you have to do is tell me."

Heer looked at him and gently nodded her head. Preet enveloped Heer into a hug, and she had to admit, it made her feel a hundred times better. The stayed like that for a while longer. When they finally broke apart Preet and Heer ate breakfast. He began joking around, and messing around with her. Preet could always make her forget about things she didn't want to think about, and today was no exception. His jokes and love had made her forget about Prem...for the moment.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

It was 9:15 on Heer's watch, as she glanced at it for the hundredth time. Prem had said to be here no later then 9 o' clock, on the dot. Heer wanted to be late just for the hell of it, but she decided against it. This meeting was not about their past or even about them as individuals. This meeting was between one of the founders of a business establishment and a potential client; nothing more...nothing less.

Heer had arrived with a few minutes to spare. She pulled into the grand drive way of a grand house; it was truly magnificent. The care taker had let her in, and led her to the sitting room. While waiting for Prem to join her, Heer had managed to find her way to the backyard and garden. The garden was beautiful and lush, with roses, tulips, orchids, a gazebo and many other trinkets. In the back stool a beautiful, large tree. As Heer made her way to the tree, she was a tree house up in between the leaves and branches.

When Prem and Heer had been together, she had wanted to know about his childhood so badly. She wanted to know about his parents, his home, his friends...everything. It was something that was never talked about, and if by chance it was mentioned, very little was said, if anything at all. Heer stood under the shade of the tree admiring the structure that was once a little boy's play house.

"I used to play up there everyday as a child."

Heer spun around, one hand over her heart trying to control its frantic beating. She didn't get a sense of his presence until Prem had spoken, and when he did it nearly caused her to jump out of her skin in fear.

"Y...you scared me!" she protested.

"Did I? I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to," Prem said with trying to suppress a grin.

Heer was fighting the urge to give him a snappy response, and boy, was she fighting hard.

"Alright Mr. Jhuneja, lets get down to business. There are some family heirlooms you wanted me to appraise?"

"Wow, 'Mr. Jhuneja'. What is that all about Heer?" he questioned.

"We are here for business purposes and nothing else. I would greatly appreciate it if we stuck to professional terms."

"Well, if that is how you want it...Ms. Maan."

"Yes, thank you."

"Right this way, I don't want to keep you waiting."

Prem led Heer back into the house and towards the back. Soon they stood inside a room that Heer was very unimpressed by. She looked around and then looked Prem right in the eyes.

"What is the meaning of this Mr. Jhuneja?" she asked, her temper beginning to rise.

"I know what you are thinking, but don't jump to conclusions."

"As far as I know, you called our business to tell us you had some 'family heirlooms' that you wanted apprised. Heirlooms, which you said were worth money. The things in this room will barely be enough to buy a sandwich and cup of coffee at a decent caf." Heer said.

Without saying another word, Prem led Heer to the back of the room, to a small door in the corner. Opening the room they both walked in and Heer's eyes went wide in shock. She looked around stunned, and didn't know what to say.

Prem was the first to speak, "Oh how I hated this house, these things." After another pause he said, "So what do you think, is this junk worth anything?"

"This...this...this room is worth hundreds of thousands of dollars, if not millions."

"Good, so now appraise it, and take it, I don't want it."

"All of it, just like that?"

"Just like that. Take it...all"

"Why are you doing this? Why are you literally giving up these pieces of art to us?"

"I have no use for them, so I want to get rid of them, I don't want them in this house. I want you to work side by side with me and get this junk out of here."

"What do you mean side by side? Appraising these items takes only one person, me. Why do you have to be here?" she asked, confused.

"That is part of the deal, take it or leave it. You taking it means that you agree to working side by side with me for the next month, eight hours a day," he said with an air of arrogance.

"In that case, I think I'll....leave it." Heer turned around to walk out when he called her back.

"I'd re-think the offer if I were you. This deal could bring lots and lots of money to your business."

"Our business is stable and we are doing great. What makes you think we need 'lots and lots of money'?"

"Well, a little birdie told me that Mr. Singh has been house hunting, you know, for when you finally decide to walk down the aisle with him." Prem walked over to where Heer was standing, "Rumor has it that the house he has his eyes set on will leave quite the dent in his wallet. You don't want to use your business as collateral, now do you?"

A chill ran through Heer as she heard Prem's voice. It was cold, calculating and heart piercing.

"What?" Heer asked in surprise.

"Oh, seems like your fianc hasn't told you the new information. Well don't worry, the house he has in mind is really a great buy," he added.

"Hโ€ฆhow do you know?"

"Let's just say I did some 'research' after out meeting the other night. It seems that Mr. Singh has chosen a Victorian style house that has 4 bedrooms and 3.5 baths, along with a pool and guest house. It is painted a soft peach color, with white windows and has white picket fencing around the boundary. The backyard is nice and big, fully done up with trees and flowers, a hammock and swing seat on the porch. Oh I forgot to mention, it is a double story house. All that is missing is a family and a dog running around. " Prem had a gleam of pride and just a hint of evil in his eyes.

Heer looked on at Prem, unable to believe that he was capable of such malice. The coldness and hardness in his eyes were frightening. The house he had just described was Heer's dream home. She had told Preet about it years ago when they were still in high school. How could Preet still remember such a trivial thing?

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cant wait to read comments ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

JAZ

Posted: 16 years ago
MINE! =]

*unreserved*

Yahh really qucik update!! Aha trick question?!?! Update whenever you have time didi! ๐Ÿ˜ƒAnd good luck with all the coming assignments/reports/etc.

omgg the whole time with Preet setting up and talking about business, I just felt so BAD for him beacuse I knew Heer would tell him the truth. But honestly, you lived up to Preet's character! That's exactly how he would have taken the news and I loved how he wasne't amd at her or anything, he just knew that he had to step back and let her do her "thing"

๐ŸคฃLoved how Heer was making sure she didn't pick out anything "sexy"๐Ÿคฃ๐ŸคฃKyun Heer? Asa kya daar hai?๐Ÿ˜†

aha the whole Prem-Heer interaction had me in splits. Amazingly written, loved how there was just SO MUCH sarcasam!! It really suited the characters! Ohh Prem just want's to get rid of it all? Wonder why?? Bad memories?? I have a feeling he has had areally tortured childhood?

o - m - g. DIDI! My heart and stomach literally clenched during that part, how Preet remembered Heer's dream house. Omg I hate to say this, but as much as I love Prem-Heer over Preet-Heer, as individuals, I love Preet more But I also love the hotness Prem brings with him. *sigh*

Can't wait ot read more!!

--shabz

dob:july13th
height: 5'4
brown eyes, darkbrown hair down to back, side bangs, 2 earrings in one ear, three in the other, reading glasses..

aur kuch?๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago

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