New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 19

Hey Jaz..BEAUTIFUL update!!You've explained every little bit very beautifully..really liked Heer's morning little routine of spending some time in her son's bedroom watching him..liked how she is with Preet..and liked how Meher-Ash pulled her legs while she was going out with Preet..Preet sure knows how to light her mood up..and it's good that Heer told him about her little meeting with Mr.Juneja..but she should've told him that the address belongs to Prem..isn't it?the reason being Preet would feel bad once he comes to know of it??u've portrayed Prem's anger very well..how he was feeling when he saw Heer with Mr.Singh..really nice..looking forward to the next update!!

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hey, just read ur FF.. awsome.. its a new concept.. and this update was so sweet with preet and heer. uh-oh wats prem up to???? wat else does he have in store for heer.... do update wen u get the chance..and take care

Hey Jaz di! 🤗

W - O - W! What an amazing update. It wasn't too "action packed" or too boring, just right! I really love Aarav, like if you can't adjust me into the role of Mrs.Preet Singh, I can live with being Aarav's Mrs.☺️

Aww the joking around between Preet and Heer is amazing, and I just love and I mean love how Preet always manages to squeeze in compliments everywhere he goes, no matter what they are talking about! *cho chweet*

Oh wow, loved how Preet and Heer "checked" each other out, like seizing up the compition. 🤣Ughh can you actually believe I was giggling like the mindless fool I am during Ash's and Meher's teasings, like the "reasonable hour" one by Meher. *giggles* To cute...and oh Preet? I blush. ☺️Pick me.....please? *bats eyelashes* Ohh di what was the biodata you require? What info do you need? =]

I love the understanding between the two ( Preet and Heer ) He knows that she needs her space and she knows that she has to be be fair to him in a sense of speaking. *sigh* Preet is so understanding! Did you say you modeled him after someone? Yaar, that guy must have been one in a million!😛

Ohhh is Prem the sneaky hot guy or is it just me? ☺️ That was such a dam hot description of Prem, like "mine and oly mine" ☺️ *sigh* I am such a sucker! But aww poor Preet in unknowingly sending his finacee to Prem....wonder if he will catch them?😉Mega interesting ending!! Can not wait to see the fireworks that fly between the two now!

--shabz
aka--
--mrs.preet singh
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hey jaz di thanks for the PM..wow...an excellent part..so prem is jealous of preet..haha shame...it was his own fault that he didnt hang on to heer then!...

ummmmm... reserved... i need to think about my reaction to this!!!!!!!

awesum update
tooo good
prem made a deal with preet yay
can't wait...

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!👏

Hey Jaz!Hope u r having gr8 time,i agree this time it was quiet early i couldnt blive it 1st bt thn i realise its true,i wasnt dreaming😆😆(Jokes a part)it was really good&i cant wait long 4 the next part it ll b PremHeer meeting,the mother son scene was really cute,i have 2admit u wrote it beautifully,it was danm sweet&cute just like Aarav😳i dnt knw Y Preet had 2b soooo good,i just respect this charecter alot,i wonder how any1 can b so good,supportive,kind,helpful??I amazed by Preet,i dnt want2break his heart i cant break prem's heart either wht 2 do?I felt Heer also had started loving him.Though Prem dnt dserve Heer,i still want 2 c thm 2gather,wht 2 do?It was so difficult,really loved the way tht 2sister teased Heer,Meher is spoiling Ashlesha too,bt i found it cute😳again Preet took my heart in restaurent his dialouges where awsome!!Credit goes to jaz!👏i was suspecting like this Prem's brain ll work soon,after reading last part i felt Prem loved Heer truely bt dnt want2 admit&think its a sexual attraction&he want a proper ending of thier reletionship?Its really disgusting of him bt still i cant hate him.ll wait2read the nxt part as well.Takecare

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