New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 12

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AmanaR thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
im speechless. the long wait for the update was sooooooooooooooo worth it. i loved heer and prem convo. prems bluntness is tttttttooooooooo good. i cant wait to see how the story goes
pls continie soon
amana
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey jaz...u updated at last...thank god!!! no thank YOU...lols...well i m already a big fan of r writing..i waz dying to read d convo b/w premeer...well prem seems sum tough guys here...but heer is also to much...she said she is engaged..wow....this ll surely cause sum probs now...i think prem ll give preet sum probs....lols...well waiting for d next part...plzplzplz...update sooonnnnnn
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Posted: 16 years ago

jaz its artistically crafted words all the way....

i jus love the way you are takin this....... its one ff that's hard to resist.... waitin for more.......

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Jaz,How r u???Well we know each other but im new to ur FF i didnt read ur 1st FF but i really want to,at first i read the part 5&then i have 2 read the other 4parts i must say u r a great writer👏👏👏i just loved Preet's chharecter 👍🏼He is really very sweet i ll feel bad if Heer dont get marry but i ll b really sad if Prem dont get His Love though Prem's charecter is really disgusted(i feel so &i hate this Prem only for saying to heer,tht R u sleeping with him🤢😡He is ......😡sorry but still PremHeer have to b united.Im just waiting to read whn Prem ll got to knw about his son,Aarav just waiting for tht 1 moment&hope it comes soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

hello...this is JAZ KI BHOOT 😉😉😉...jaz is in hiding...wont tell you where...but maybe timbuktu 😆😆😆...woh kya hai naa...she realizes that she is updating after more than one month...😲😲😲...but she has her reasons...as her bhoot, i am here to plead her case...so here it is.............................😉

first off...it was ramadan...din bohot lamba tha, upar se school bhi thi...bohot busy hogayi thi 😳...and then...sadly...her chacha passed away so as you can understand she had to be there for her family...but now she has more time and will try to update at least once every two weeks...no more waiting for one month...that is jaz ka vaada...😃...of course she missed you all...🤗

aab bolo...maaf kiya jaz ko...if you do then she will return...or else...you will have to make do with her bhoot...aka...me


Jaz,u dont have to hide urself from us,Come out dear but along with ur bhoot,u come back but not alone,Bring ur bhoot with u,Bcos ur bhoo is as sweet as u😳

The meaning of the words finally sunk in and Heer was angered but managed to remain calm, ?I?m sorry but I gave up being your bed-warmer years ago, I refuse to accept the title once again. I cannot see you; I have no desire in seeing you.? She paused for a few seconds before she said, ?I am engaged to be married. I?m engaged to my friend and business partner, Preet Singh.?

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hey guys...looking forward to comments...what do you think prem will say 😉😉


JAZ


Hmmmmmmmmm i think,now Prem will be really very angry&hurt&i ll b the cause of hurting himself by tht glass with which he was playing😆😆i think he ll broke it with the force of his hand,Wht says😉???Let see if my predection is right/wrong but for tht have to wait till the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey jaz....dis is d first time im reading ur ff,....dey r great..absolutely fantastic..(reminds me of some M&Bs).....
neway..i'll be ur reader from now on...u can be sure of dat...
update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG! first of all.. thanks soooo much for updating! u were killing me...

2nd of all..wow wow wow! my my! u have some gr8 imagination!!!
This update was fantastic!!! I lovedddd this update! It was deeply intense!! Their dialouges were just over the top amazing!!! The way they btoh conversed with each othr!! But yet still soooo much love and passio and desire for each other!
These r the kind of books i luvvv reading!! This FF is my fav!!!
This time plzzz do update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
u could write your own novel! No joke!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i juz read ur ff in one go and i must say tht it is amazing 👏
i simply love it pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hhhmmm..okay..so this might sound a little crazy..but i jsut had to read ur FF again..prm and heer's dialouges are so powerful..this time iobserevd the part wehre prem just wanted t have "AN Experince" with her to quench all his desire..so he is not aware of teh fact that "arrongant,full of rpide" prem juneja has fallen in love wid heer!!! I love how heer sasy in the end "I stopped being ur bed warmer years ago.." also love whenprem says she is still touchy... i have to comment you on ur ff..it is absolutely fab!! How do you get all these ideas?? Is this a reflectin of someone's life that u know about.....?

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