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SILPA8 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
very nic part yaar....lets hope prem understands her and their relation and accepts his child...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
*u said i i was free to scream, and hey, who am i to deny the wonderful author's request?πŸ˜‰*
i have to say this was worth the wait; it really was. πŸ‘πŸ‘
jaz di! prem doesn't SOUND negative, does he? i mean, i got the impression that he was sad at heer leaving him. is he? i want to know. πŸ€”
and heer's letter was . . . um πŸ€” dnt knw how to describe it. well, it was kinda unexpected but it was awesome. and so sweet. so prem knew cuz of the letter tht heer lurved him. hmmm....didn't expect tht. i thot she left him without any clue whtsoever.
ohhh, u mentioned in ur reply tht aarav's gonna be realllyyyy cute. how cute? i want to knw. πŸ€”πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
ohhhh.....balraj and teji have met prem be4? this too was unexpected!!! did they lyke him be4 he got heer preganant? and yeah, do they knw, tht they had tht relationship? i m assuming tht they didn't knw since prem mentioned in his ...err....train of thoughts tht they thot tht heer lived with her friends. alright. i want ti knw th answer to my questions. πŸ€”
muawawhwhahwa!!!! i luurrvvveddd prem shouting at the receptionist!!!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜† tht seriously was fantabulous!!!!!
waiting anxiously for the next part!!!!!! πŸ˜‰
and yeah; this is for ur fantastic part!!! πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93

first of all great partπŸ‘i thought this was the part where heer and prem would finally get to meet but aap humme itni jaldi iska sukh nahi denge.

but still jitna update kiya that was good.so could feel for heer and her wishes,for a simple life with the man she loves and totally could understand her pain upon realising that she can get that simple happy life but not with the man she lovesπŸ₯Ί
but reading this update i think prem also feels for heer the way heer felt for prem but i think he is going to play hard to get and will probably take his revenge on heer for deserting him.so looking forward to the love-hate realationship this ff brings about.
waise i so want to hit you with a belan but woh toh maaf hai lekin agar you dont update soon about heer and prem meeting then belan se bach nahi paogijust joking.
but the belan and jooti is defo for the girl in the video,so iritating
take care and enjoy the break.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
aww..jaz its amazinng....very gud....its fab...i m speachless....very gud....plz plz...update soon na...ur ff is making me crazy.....plz update soon....

wod love
PARTH😊

Posted: 17 years ago
#95
Jaz di!!!!!

Thanks for the PM as usual.....getting ot the part.....as always it was flawless...how many times do i gotto tell u??? lmao..... that letter....was SO WELL WRITTEN...wow im speachless!!!! someone hit me!!! lmao.....im hooked.....very intruging part......update whenever!

shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
omg!! when l ur next update be??? ur killing me here???!!plzzz updte soon! can't wait fro premeer's meeting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
Hey im new reader, & this FF is awsomme!😳
Lol & the video link was hilarious 'sak of meata' lolπŸ˜† thanks
The FF was rlly intresting to read..all these secrets & stuff unfolding in every part..πŸ‘ i love how different it is..im desperate to see how premeer react to each other!...plzzzzzzzz update sooon.will be waiting😳 please pm me wen u do, thanks
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Edited by ruexangel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: sweetprincezz

continue soon! cant wait to what happens next when prem and heer finally see each other...the suspense is killing me...update soon..and ure awesome writer


sorry for the delay πŸ˜•...but i had my reasons...next update will be in a little bit...and thanks so much for commenting 😳😳

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.


thanks πŸ˜ƒ...next part up soon 😳

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

awesome update .i totally love it.cant wait for the heer prem confrontation.pls continue soon.oh and the letter was really well written


i know i blew it with the PH meeting...sorry for the delay but next part up soon..and thanks for liking the letter...i wasnt sure if it made much sense πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: hil4eva

heyyy..thanks fotr the PM! don't keep us hanging! plz update soon!ur killing me here...


you're welcome and sorry for leaving you hanging 😳


will do 😊

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

That was a great update!

I loved it!
and the end was very scary!!!!
looking forward to the next update!
?xXx?
Sunayna


thanks yaar...why was the end scary...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...as long as you enjoyed it...i dont mind...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...next update up soon 😳😳

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: DMGaunthika

Part 4 is amazing. Loved it. Hope u will update soon. Eagerly waiting for pt 5.

Karthika


glad that you liked it...😳😳...next part up soon 😊

Originally posted by: angel82

simply awesome....loved part 4.....eagerly waiting for part 5 where they actually meet and talk....plzzzzzzzzz do update soon


happy to hear that you enjoyed part 4...the PH meeting is up next πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome
can't wait for next update


thanks...next part up soon 😊

Originally posted by: Indian Pari

First of all, πŸ€— hi yaar...meri payu...kaise ho πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...missed you yaar 😭

Secondly, SO sorry for not properly replying to the last update! chalo hota hai...but like i said...totally missed you... πŸ˜ƒ

Anyway, will reply to BOTH, now... doh doh replies now...woo hoo...thanks πŸ€—

For last month's update:

I'm touched by Preet's support of Heer...If he hadn't been there for her, where would she have gone, what would she have done? Its great that she had him to turn to like that. shh...ek raaz ki baath sunoge πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...preet is based on someone in my life...he is my best friend...the dumbest thing i ever did was dump him

I'm pleasantly surprised at how supportive Heer's parents are being in the given situation. Though I can imagine they probably weren't thrilled to find out about their daughter's pregnancy, I love the way they've been supportive of her decisions about it....her life in general, and the Prem factor... what parent would be thrilled...but whats done is done...you can choose to be there for you child in the time of need or turn your back...😊😊...the Maan's chose to be there πŸ‘πŸ‘

I love how Heer really is taking control of her life...making it a point to face Prem, go talk to him...I love that she's strong enough to face him and not run. I love her courage, and her independence. i wanted all the characters to be different here...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...im tired of seeing heer get walked all over by everyone on the show...pehle DJ aur phir lallu 😑😑....my heer takes no BS from anyone!! πŸ˜›

I wish, though its inevitable, that Preet didn't have to face heartbreak...he is a GREAT guy and deserves some one who will love and appreciate him whole-heartedly. what i have planned for preet...😈....just wait and watch...thoda time lagega...but you will see...phir batana...tu dost hai ya dushman πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

I hope to get to know Aarav better... you will fall in love with Aarav...you wont be able to help it...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

For Todays:

Finally, a first encounter with The Mr. Prem Juneja. WOW....what a character sketch, Jaz. Let me just go ahead and say, I know you said something about his character being somewhat negative, but, in reading this update, thats not the 1st impression I got at all. Its clear that Heer means a lot to him. heer does mean a lot to prem...but he had his reason for being the way he is/was...that will come out...but not for a while...and read the next update πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...phir batana...prem kaisi lagi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Love the initial image you created - so like a confused, lonely, drowning-in-his-own-self-pity (somewhat, anyway), Prem....Sitting their, reclined back, appearing unkempt, reminiscing about his Heer as he downs scotch trying to numb or ignore the pain in his heart. I loved it. I love him, already. Even with the way he "ever-so-carefully" removed the contents of the envelope - handling her letter gently so as not to mess it up....that in itself shows how much she, and the letter mean to him. haila...in love with prem after the intro only...😳😳😳...dont blame you girl...meri bhi yehi haal hai πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...but as i said...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

And what a letter it was. Loved it Jaz, I was speechless after reading it. I love Heer's straight-forwardness, I love how frank she was. I love how she wasn't afraid to admit that though she was in love with him, she knew that she had to find a way to move on because he couldn't give her what she ultimately wanted, and she didn't want to pressure him in any way. my heer is strong willed, stands up for what she wants and what she believes in...usse pura haq hai aapni zindagi jeena ka...and that is what she is doing...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...unfortunately prem couldnt be part of that...but kya kare πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Your main leads, as always, are BRILLIANT. I love them both, and am going to LOVE seeing their lives unfold. let me say once again...aage aage dekho hota hai kya...the twist and turns will leave u speechless πŸ˜‰

I love how four years later, that letter still effects him, still stirs something within him. I love no matter how much he tries to distract himself, he wakes up every morning hating his life because she's not in it. I love the fact that though he refused to admit it to himself, He Loves Her and Wants to Give Her Everything She's Ever Dreamt Of. when i come to prem all i see form you is "LOVE LOVE LOVE" πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...kya baath hai...are you angling for prem too...like the rest of us πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†,...but he is a doll isnt he 😍

Of course he Had to go see her - of course he couldn't stop himself even if he tried. He knows that perhaps he went wrong 4 years back...perhaps he lost out on the best thing that ever happened to him, and perhaps now, he can never have it back....but still, he had to go see for himself...had to try - give it a shot. Does he want her back in his life or is he simply curious as to whether she found the complete happiness he could never give her? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...i feel like im reading a book preview/review from a magazine...love it...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...your comments are the best jaani...just LOVE IT 😳😳

Loved how you dove into his thoughts, his account on his encounter with Teji Maan. Maa-ji isnt one to be messed with either...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...she is like a lioness guarding her babies...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

I love that when Heer finally showed up to see him, she was firm, in only giving him one, first and last opportunity to meet with her. see a pattern πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...the bold and the beautiful comes to mind πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Loved the angry Prem as he tried to drink away his pain in the hotel room....and LOVED, that his heart began to race at the thought of HER, at the thought of coming face to face with Her again, after so many years....

My only fear is that Prem, in his somewhat drunk state, will do something to hurt Heer....it will be UTI of course, and unintentionally, but he will hurt her....and then kick himself for it later. ok pls clarify UTI...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...my medical background only translates that as "Urinary Tract Infection" 🀣...dont think prem has that...but we can send him to the doctor to check...what say...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...lol...just see what prem does...phir baatana πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Need I say I love it? haila...you are making me blush ☺️

Can't wait til the next bit.... next part up soon...😳
Love, luv ya too ❀️
~P



Originally posted by: salma_786786

'You're like a sack of meat' wow that is just ermmmm woww... any person that calls a girl that has no respect for women lollz.... Another one of your funny videos... this one reminded me of the goli marr one... hilarious.... oh i forgot... Jazzu πŸ€— sammu...πŸ€—πŸ€—...kaise ho yaar...dont see much of you anymore..IF pe nahin aate kya 😭😭...yeah...that sack of meat was stupid but super hilarious...wait till you see what i have this time πŸ˜‰

Finalllllllyyyyy you updated... thought you must of forgotten about this one... but i understand my UWD has a very busy life..... haila...phirse you will say the same think in your next comment...but i have reasons too 😭😭

Sexy Mr. Prem Juneja has finally entered the FF... and what an entry it was... "scotch of the rocks".... impostor helpp someone call the police this aint Prem... Prem + Scotch = no formula.... scientific experiment gone terribly wrong 🀣... the scotch, live in relationship and sleeping together parts had my eyebrows raised... 😳 You do know how to create a interesting concept hun... πŸ‘ lol...i know...yeh prem humara prem nahin hai....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...but different is interesting...and jaanu...its scotch ON the rocks...not OF...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...nice yaar...really nice πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

re-runs of FRIENDS 🀣 now who wouldn't want to do that... even i love sitting down with coffee and watch many episodes of friends... in fact i can hear my brother watching it now 🀣
friends is a classic! i still watch it mon-fri 11pm-12am...when i can...it always makes me laugh πŸ˜‰

What a letter.... woow the letter that Heer left behind for Prem had my heart aching.. so heartfelt and emotional words... i don't know what else to say about the letter except Heer must of really loved him... each time she wrote our relationship was this, our relation was that it must of been a punch in the gut for Prem... can't believe he didn't run after her after seeing the letter... What is he afraid of??? im so happy to hear that the letter worked out right...when i wrote it...i wasnt sure how that was going to work out...but im glad that it did πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...and of course heer love him...he is prem jhuneja...jaisa bhi ho...aacha insaan hai...i think πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...why prem did what he did will come out...but not for a while πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Naaaaaaaaaaahhhhhin.... ahem sorryyyy i mean Noooooooooo I can't believe you did this... Jazzy WHYYYYY... why the torture...why did you have to end it there.... now i definitely CAN NOT WAIT till your next update... umm...dont kill me..i know its been ages since i last update...but im here now...hope that counts πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Excellent update hun... loved every part of it.... thanks jaani...next part up soon 😳



Originally posted by: ranrags

Hey Jaz..that was neat..I mean to say really good..wow..the letter?as I've said earlier I really like ur FFs flashback theme..I don't know wether I put it the right way..but really it was nice..the way he remembers her..and all..now looking forward to the next part..to know of their conversation.


hey yaar...whats up...nice to see you here too πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...thanks...i wasnt sure about the letter...but im glad that it fit...i know what you are trying to say...dont worry...i know what you mean yaar πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...dosti ki hai...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›...nibhana toh padega πŸ˜†...next part up soon...tell me how you like that prem πŸ˜›

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 268143

wow u finally updated 😊 I jst finishd readin it n i loved da way u wrote da letter it was so heartfelt πŸ‘ cnt w8 4 da nxt part ..... thy will meet thn ryt? plz update sooooon ....... will b w8n 😳


sorry for delay...the last time and this time πŸ˜•πŸ˜•..glad you enjoyed the letter...and they will meet in the nxt part...it will be up soon 😳

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!πŸ‘


thanks...will do 😳

Originally posted by: kn-princess

omg dat was awesome as usual! i cant wait 4 part 5 wen they meet! cont soon PLZ!


thanks yaar...part 5 will be posted in just a bit...hope you like it πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: pawani

after so much wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jks

it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't wait 4 the next part jaz di!!!!!!!!!!
Pawani<3


i know i know...deher hogaji 😭😭...but next part will be up soon πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

oyhhhhhhhhhhhh its very nice and good yaar now i cant wait do contt soon plssss


yaar...whats up with you..thanks for reading...next part up soon πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: silparavindar

very nic part yaar....lets hope prem understands her and their relation and accepts his child...


thanks for liking it...thanks for reading...prem and heer first meeting up next πŸ˜ƒ

JAZ

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