PH FF - 'Chalte Chalte' Part 16 updtd 3/27 on pg40 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part, i can't wait till the next one!
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome continue soon....
can't wait for next part

u dont have to wait long as i am updating in few hours
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

thanx... i will continue soon.. may be in few hours... so keep reading
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: fijiana

hey great update .make sure you update soon and this lamba wala likhna,thanx by the way

I cant promise to write long one but i will sure update it soon... so keep reading and i hope u will like the next part...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

oh very nice very good i really liked it pls do cont soon

i will be waiting👏🏻

dont wait too long as i will update soon... so make sure you read it... and i hope u will love the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushpink13

wow dhirti its awsome i luved it. let me know when u update the next part.

luv iqra

hey, thanx.. I will sure let u know wen i update... inface in few hours... so keep reading and writing lovely comments... lol
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Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Great part, i can't wait till the next one!

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u dnt need 2 wait 4 long as i am updatein next part in few hours...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the comments.. here is the next update… I hope you all enjoy it…

Recap – Prem and Heer select a model for their Project. They both will be working together on the Hospital Project.

Part 8

Kripa is stunned to see them and has a shocked expression on her face.

Kripa comes to them and waves at both of them but no one notices. Hearing Kripa yelling, "Prem… Prem…" both come back to their senses.

Heer feels awkwardness but she manages to say, "I am really sorry, Prem.. Sir".

Prem – kis liye

Heer hesitates – kal ke liye… maine aap ko galat samja…

Prem ask her to continue as he didn't know what exactly she was talking about.

Heer continues, "mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere haath mein sharabh thi aur isi wajah se aapne woh glass mujhse chhin lit hi"

Prem – ohhh

Heer – mujhe laga ki aap meri beizatti karna chahte hai isliye maine woh galat iljam bhi aap par lagaya… mai sacch mein bahut sarminda hoon…

Prem – it's ok

Heer – aap mujhse gussa to nahin hai na..

Prem – nahin to.. woh sab to chalta rehta hai.. tumhe apni galti ka ahesaas hai wahi kafi hai.. tum fikar mat karo.. its perfectly fine

Heer nodded her head. She thanked him for everything. She starts moving her legs to leave but Prem stopped her, "Heer tumse kuch baat karni thi"

Heer turned around – haan Sir

Prem – tumne woh model designed kyu kiya…I mean

Heer cuts him off. "woh kya hai na mujhe bachcho se bahut pyar hai aur architecture ne jo model banaya tha woh mere hisab se bachcho ke liye thik thak tha achcha nahi…isliye maine socha ki mai khud kuch sochti hoon… aur maine woh model bana li… waise aap ne kyu poocha?? " she ended in one breath.

Prem – bas aise hi.. bahut accha designed kiya tha.. Congratulation… and thanks

Heer – you too Sir… mai to dekhti hi reh gayee ki tum jaisa sasundar itna achcha model bhi bana sakta hai… kamal kar diya aapne

Prem – kya kaha tumne… sasundar…

Heer – I am sorry Sir..

Prem – thik hai koi baat nahin… tum ja sakti ho..

Heer – thik hai… lekin sir

Prem – ab kya hai??

Heer - kya hum dost nahin ban sakte hai?

Prem – tum.. aur meri dost… ho hi nahi sakta..

Heer – kyu… waise bhi hum dono bilkul ek jaise hai…hum dono ke khayalat kitne milte hai… hum ek dusre ko kitna tolerate karte hai.. please

Prem smiled at her and nodded his head. She left with a smile on her face leaving Prem and Kripa behind.

Kripa smiled at Prem "arre wah, kya baat hai.. tumne use itni jaldi maaf kardiya…"

Prem – kyu? Nahin karna chahiye

Kripa – maine aisa kab kaha… woh to mai jis Prem ko jaanti hoon woh kabhi aise aur itni jaldi kisi ko maaf nahin karta… bas

Kripa teases Prem "waise Aap ke rang dhang aaj kal bahut badle badle lag rahe hai.. kya ho raha hai Prem"

Prem looks at her with half smiled on his face, "Kripa……….. tum bhi na"

Kripa – thik hai thik hai… mai khud pata kar loogi… waise I wanna go home

Kripa orders him to take her home since it's very late. They come home; eat dinner and goes to their own room for rest.

At maan house, Heer enters in her room after having dinner with her family and closes the door. Her room was filled with few teddy bears and posters on the wall. She takes out a picture from her drawer and start talking. It was Prem's picture that she took in the party.

Heer – aise kya goor rahe ho?? Kya pahele ladki nahin dekhi…

Heer keeps looking at the picture. Heer thinks to herself "kya Prem sach mein Kripa se pyar karta hai?? Mujhe aisa kyu laga ki woh sirf…… mai bhi na… pata nahin kya kya sochti rehti hoon.."

Just then she receives a message from Hussein on her cell that Prem gave her to contact her on work purpose, "Mujhe tumse milna hai, abhi isi waqt.. ghar pe aa raha hoon isliye khidki khuli rakhna"

Heer – yeh ladka bilkul pagal hai.. kabhi bhi kahin bhi pahoch jata hai..

Heer opens the window and lay down in her bed. She fall a sleep while waiting. Hussein slowly enters in the room with bare feet and a big packet in his hand. Seeing Heer sleeping, he opens up a packet and takes out a beautifully decorated cake. He decided to wake her up. He gently wakes her up at exact twelve o'clock and lit the candle as it was dark as the lights were off. Heer gradually opens her eyes and notices decorated table right next to him so she moves towards him. She spots a cake, on which it says Happy Birthday Heer. Then she blows the candle and cuts the cake. She feed Hussein a small piece who was singing softy the Birthday song.

Heer is overwhelmed seeing Hussein's love for her.

Heer – mai tumhe kaise thanks kahoon… mere paas sabd hi nahin hai

Hussein hugs her and says "arre pagli, doston ko thanks kahene ki koi jaroorat nahin hoti.. waise mere paas tumhare liye ek surprise hai."

Heer – jadli batao.. I can't wait

Hussein takes her with him downstairs. Everyone wishes her with hugs and kisses. Heer was so happy to see the love so tears start flowing from her eyes and rolling down her cheeks. Hussein wipes her tears. Heer asked Hussein for a promise.

Heer – Hussein, aaj mai tumse kuch maagna chahti hoon.. kya tum mujhe doge

Hussein – haan kyun nahin… anything for you chipkali..

Everyone laughs but Heer manages to say "kya aaj tum mujhse wada karoge ki tum hamesha mera saath doge.. humari yeh dosti kabhi nahi todoge"

Hussein gets emotional, "mai yeh wada karta hoon ki humari dosti hamesha sabse upar rahegi.. hum yeh dosti kabhi bhi aur kisi bhi halat mein barkarar rakhege"

All shares a great time together.

It's 9 o'clock in the morning. At Juneja's hotel, the staff members are being informed that there is a party tonight. Everybody are invited and welcomed.

Prem – yeh party humare naye project ki khushi mein rakhi gayee hai isliye aap sabko aana hoga aur ha ek important announcement bhi hogi. So see at the party.

All get back to their work.

In the evening, Heer is looking for her staff members outside the enterance when she sees Preet coming. Preet enters at a party with Heer. Preet is looking handsome in a black suit with light pink shirt on bottom and Heer look very beautiful in a simple but beautiful salwar kameez. They both have fun at the party. Preet ask Heer if she will marry him in joke. Heer says yes without realizing what has he asked for. But then she realizes her mistake and run after him to beat him up for teasing her. She stopped as she spots Prem and Kripa entering the party together. Few people ask Prem and Kripa to have a dance and they move to the dance floor. Heer eyes were constantly on Prem who are dancing.

Heer smile at Prem who once quick look at Heer. She thinks in her mind "Prem ko dekhte hi yeh mujhe kya ho jaata hai?? Uski choti choti shararate mujhe cute si kyu lagti hai? Kya woh bhi mere baarein kuch bhi sochta hai?? uske dil mein kya chal raha hai woh mujhe kaise pata chalega??" She comes back to her sense when Kripa joins her.

Kripa compliments Heer, "you look stunning,Heer". Heer smile at her and thanks her. Kripa asked Prem, how Heer looks today?. Prem gives her a compliment, "yeh you look nice." Kripa teases him that he complimented Heer but not her so Prem gets embarrassed and praise her too, "oh sweetheart, tum to ho hi achchi toh phir tariff karne ki jaroorat kya hai" Kripa laughs hearing his words. Preet, Heer, Prem and Kripa all enjoy the company.

Preet – Heer kya tum Prem bhai se shaadi karke unki house wife banana pasand karogi?

Prem is thrilled hearing what Preet said.

Heer (embarrassed) – tum pagal ho gaye ho Preet… shaadi aur woh bhi is Bandar se..

Kripa and Preet starts laughing.

Prem with a disgusting look on his face "mujhe bhi tum jaise chudel se shaadi karne mein koi dilchasbi nahi hai..samji??"

"Arre tum shaadi tab karoge na jab mai haa kahoogi" says Heer in angry tone.

Prem – arre tumhare saath jo bhi shaadi karega na woh hamesha deewar pe apna shir fodta hi milaga… aur mein pachtana nahi chahta… samji chuipkali

Preet gets an idea to stop the fight between them and bring them closer. So he asked them to dance. But Prem refuses saying that he doesn't know how to dance. Heer decides to takes this opportunity to make fun of Prem.

Heer – ab tumhe pata chalega ki apni beizatti kya hoti hai..

Heer announces that Prem will be performing a special dance on a song Mauja hi Mauja for all. Prem is stunned at her announcement as she challenges him to dance. They both are starring at each other in anger. Prem accept the challenge.

Prem is standing in the center of the entire crowd and Preet asks him to dance. Prem soon starts dancing on the music but falls few times but then finally dances. Everyone claps for him. Heer was shocked seeing his performance. She couldn't believe what her eyes seen and also couldn't take her eyes off of Prem. She just stares at him and stand still. Then Preet and Kripa joins him as well as others on the dance floor. They all are dancing and having blast.

Heer thinks to herself "oh my god… kya yeh prem hi tha yeh phir main koi sapna dekh rahi hoon.." She pinches her hand and learns that he was really dancing. She again get lost in her thought "haila… yeh to sach mein dance kar raha tha aur who bhi itna accha.. he is a very good dancer..wow.." Prem move toward Heer that brings her to reality.

Prem comes to Heer to ask if he lived up to her expectations. Prem gives her a naughty smile and states "agar tum kisi ko nicha dikhana chahti ho to itna yaad rakhna ki saamne walen ko kabhi bhi kamjor mat samajna…"

Kripa calls for him so he leaves leaving Heer behind surprised.

Kripa asked him to make the important announcement that he was supposed to.

He starts the announcement with thanking everyone for their hard work and attending the party.

Suddenly a voice comes from behind " yeh hai Meri honewali Bhabhi"…..

To be continue

Plz leave the comments

Thank you,

Dhriti

Edited by Sweetxsuga - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you so much for the love and support guys... i really appriciate it...I feel like i am also a part of this family... i feel gr8.... thanx once again....

Edited by Sweetxsuga - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its very nice really good uffffffffffffffff i have'nt words to express so its just superb do cont soon lols i will be surely waiting pls do cont soon

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