PH FF - 'Chalte Chalte' Part 16 updtd 3/27 on pg40 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: IndianPari



Loved it!

Prem's needing mom to sing him to sleep is too too cute and sweet! I can just see Gayatri Mom singing her bachcha to sleep...how sweet!

Love Prem and Heer's nok jhoks...too cute!

Looking forward to more.
Love,
~Payal

Hey payal, thank u so much 4 lovin it...

I also think the Lori part so cute... as I wrote the whole part n then i went back to add the lori part...

I will continue soon so keep reading

Luv,
Dhriti

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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: blushpink13

i just luved it. its wonderful.now i am curious to know what will happen next. plz update soon. i'll be waiting.
luv iqra

thankz.. u wont have to wait too long as i promise i will update the next part soon... keep reading

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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: fijiana

just loved the cliffhangers in your ff.how sweet prem ko lori ke bina neend nahi ati....and what is the mystery of kripa and hussein.please update soon

thanx 4 likin ma FF... u will have to wait to know the systery behind both entries... but u will have fun i am sure... i will update soon.. it in two days..

Dhriti

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

mindblowoing yaar
really very good
👏 👏 👏
cont soon i will be waiting

love
Tanya

thankx 4 likin it... u wont have to wait too long i will continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

mindblowing
wonder what will happpen in next part
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Thanx 4 likin it... u will have to wait to know what will happen next as I maself dont know... keep readin as i will continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66


Hey everyone, Thanx once again for the beautiful comments. I appreciate each and every comment. Here is the next part as I promised I will bring more of Heer n Prem… so Enjoy… n dnt forget to leave a comment…

Recap – Prem invites Heer with her family for the Preet's welcome party. Heer parents gives her permission to go but someone says nobody will attend a party because……………………….

Part 6

"Nobody will attend a party because we all will have blast in the party" says Meher with excitement. They all hug at once.

After few days, Preet has been discharge from the hospital and come home. Everyone is happy to see him. They all share hug with him individually then Prem asks him to get ready for the party that is kept for him tonight. They all leave and get busy for tonight's party.

In the party, Heer arrives with her family. Meher is so excited to see such a huge party with India's top businessmen and rich families. They all feel happy to be part of the event.

Few minutes later, Heer's eyes fall on a handsome man wearing light turquoise shirt with an Armani jacket on top and nice jeans on bottom. He looks like a rock star. Heer couldn't take her eyes off of none other than Prem.

Preet walk up to Prem and says "arre wah Prembhai, aap aaj kya lag rahe ho.." Then he hugs him and whispered in his hears "kya yeh Heer ke jaadoo ka asar hai.." Prem eyes are wide open and he let go of Preet. Prem let him know that he will see him later and then who will spare him? Preet start dancing with girls. All start enjoying the party.

Heer comes to reality when Meher calls for her few times. She couldn't believe how handsome Prem is looking.

Prem is standing quite at the party while everyone around him is dancing. Preet notices Heer was feeling bored. So, Preet drags both of them, Heer and Prem, to the dance floor and places Heer's hand in Prem. Heer start feeling uncomfortable to the act of Preet and tries to refuse to dance but Preet doesn't listen and leaves. Prem asked her to dance with him but Heer pulls it away and walks away. Heer takes a drink from a waiter in anger without knowing what kind of drink is it. Prem follows her.

Prem – rukho Heer.. mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

Heer stopped and turns back.

Heer – kya hai… tumhare paas aur koi kaam nahi hai kya

Prem – hai na… lekin yeh kaam abhi jaroori hai

Heer – jaldi bolo, kya kaam hai

Heer is about to drink when Prems snatches her class away and hand it to Preet who was having a conversation with someone.

Heer (mad) – yeh kya batamazi hai… apne mahemano se aise pesh aate hai… tumhare mummi papa ne kuch sikhaya hai ki nahi

Prem gives her a disgusting look and tells her "tum jaisi chuikali se aur kis tarah pesh aao…"

Heer – tum jaise saandh se aur ummid bhi kya ja sakti hai…

Prem – tumne mujhe saandh kaha.. ab dekho mai kya karta hoon…

Heer starts pushing him in the chest and says "kya karoge tum, gadhdhe ke bachche"

Prem- aur tum kiski bachchi ho, kutte ki

Heer raised her hand to hit Prem in anger but stops in the midways seeing a Drunk man pushed her father, Balraj. Prem comes in a time and saves him. Everyone is watching the scene. Prem scold a Drunk man for his behavior and not respecting his guests. He also asked him to apologize to Balraaj.

Drunk man – m..muj..mujhe maaf kar di jiye..

Prem in anger – aise nahi… paav pakad ke maafi maago.. warna..

Balraj – nahi nahi.. koi baat nahi..

Prem throws a Drunk man out of the party and comes to Balraj.

Prem – aap thik to hai na uncle??

Balraj – haan.. mai thik hoon… Beta mujhe samaj mein nahi aata ki mai tumhara sukriyada kaise karoo

Prem – koi baat nahi uncle.. maafi to mujhe maagni chahiye.. mere party mein aapki insult hui…

Balraj – Koi baat nahin, Beta.. yeh sab to hota raheta hai..

Prem – phir bhi, mai us ladke ki taraf se maafi maagta hoon.. use maaf kar dijiye.. aur mujhe bhi…

Balraj – Mujhe sarminda mat karo.. mujhe tumse koi sikayat nahi hai…

Prem – thik hai uncle, aap party enjoy kijiye mai kuch der mein aata hoon..

Balraj – okay

Prem leaves. Heer comes to her father to be supportive. She is very impressed seeing how Prem respects elders. She was a looking for a chance to talk to Prem and finally she got one. She goes near Prem and asks him for few minutes. Prem agrees; start walking with her leaving the crowd behind.

Heer looks at Prem while talking, "Prem.." Prem answered very kindly, "Ji kahiye".

Heer drops the eyes contact and looks down to the floor.

Heer – kya tum us aadmi ko jaante the

Prem – tum kiski baat kar rahi ho, unki jinse mai maafi maag raha tha

Heer – haan

Prem – mein unhe jaanta nahi lekin pata nahi kyu jab bhi koi badon ki izzat nahi karta to mujhe kya ho jaata hai.. mai apne aap ko rok hi nahi pata… tum maano ya na maano lekin mere saamne koi kisi ki beizatti kare woh mai bardaast nahi kar sakta…

Prem couldn't believe what he just said to Heer and says sorry to her for boring her. She gave a smile to him.

Heer – thank you for respecting him. Tumhare liye to woh ek ajnabee the lekin mere liye mera abhimaan hai, mere papa..

Prem was shocked hearing Heer. He couldn't think of what to say next but he managed.

Prem – tum aur unki beti.. mujhe unse jaake puchna hoga ki tumhari mom ne tumhari pregnancy ke waqt kya kya khaya tha ki aur bhoot paida ki hai..

Heer pointing her finger at him, "tumhe to mai ab batati hoon, rukho…. Kaha jaaoge"

Heer starts screaming "bachao, bachao….". It seems like no one could hear her because of the loud music so she moves a bit toward the crowd and screams louder. "Mujhe bachaho, koi hai waha" heer shouts. Everyone runs to help her without knowing the truth. Heer told everyone the man whose standing in the corner facing backward has tried to harass her physically and he should be punished for it. Prem is unaware of this as he never thought she would spread false rumours. Everyone starts beating him up not knowing he was Prem's Juneja.
Flashback ---- Heer remembers her words in the forest. When she said "Jo bolna hai woh bolo, lekin agar baad mein tumhe sabse na pitwaya to mera naam bhi Heer nahi…" Heer smirks and also enjoying herself seeing Prem getting beat up by everyone. "maine apna wada pura kiya, Mr. bhootni ke bacche.. tumne mujhe bhootni kahaa tha na.. aur jaise bhoot ni kisika picha nahi chhod ti thik waise hi ab mai tumhe habhi nahi chhodugi… ab dekhti hoon tumhe mujhse kaun bachata hai." Heer says it in her mind.

With several struggle, Prem managed to turn his face to those people who were shocked to see Prem. They walked back leaving Prem and Heer alone. Prem was furious at Heer's false accusation. He walks upto her in anger.

Heer start taking her steps backward as Prem comes closer. She is very scared. Her heartbeats increase as she realizes how close Prem already came. She stopped as she bash into a piller in small house near Prem's house. The house is very quite and kind of dark as no one really leaves there. Now she could hear her heartbeats clearly. Prem draw closer to her and hold her hand tight. Heer was in pain because of his strong touch.

Heer (crying and scared) – m..mujhe… pl…plea..please chhod do…

Prem – kyun

Heer – you are hurting me, Prem

Prem- ohh really.. what about what you did

Heer looks down and ask him for forgiveness.

Heer – Prem please mujhe maaf kardo.. aur mujhe jaane do..

Prem – jaane doo… aise kaise jaane doon…

Heer gets more scared and start crying harder.

Heer – don't be harsh on me

Prem – ok jaao…

He moves just a bit away from her and throws her on the ground. Heer is very hurt.

Prem gets more angry, "mai tumhe aaj batata hoon ki jabarjasti kya hoti hai.. aur jab kisi ke saath sach mein waisa kuch hota hai to kaisa mehsoos hota hai…"

Heer feels guilty and embarrassed.

Heer – Mujhe apni galti ka ehshas ho gaya hai… mai sachche dil se maafi maagna chahti hoon… mujhe maaf kardo..

Prem feels bad for what he did but he thought it was necessary. He orders her to leave as soon as possible before he says anything he is not supposed to. Heer left leaving Prem alone.

Heer feels responsible for the whole scene and walk back to the party. Preet see her walking but lost in her own world so he comes up to her and ask her "hey Heer, tumne woh glass se drink to nahi pee thi na.."

Heer – Nahin lekin tumne aise kyu pucha..

Preet – kya tum jaanti thi ki glass mein kyat ha

Heer – cold drink

Preet – Nahin buddhu, woh sharab ka glass tha.. shayad isi liye to Prem bhai ne tumse woh glass chhin lee…

Heer – oh my god… aur maine samja ki woh… mere saath… batamiizi kar raha hai… Preet mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayee.. Please meri madad karo.. mujhe Prem se baat karni hai abhi isi waqt..

Preet – koi baat nahin Heer.. main unhe dhoondta hoon…

He starts looking for Prem so does Heer. Just then a girl come to Heer and screams at her, "HOW DARE YOU??.................

To Be Continue…
Hope u like it,
Dhriti


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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
awesome
plz continue soon..
can't wait for next part
will be waiting 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
oh its awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsum plsssssssss plsssssssss plsssssssss do continue soon its hard for me towait as it is soo gooooooooooood plsssssssss do continue soon for me bec i cant wait now 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
wow your endind are always a mystery,which makes the reader even more intersted in readind the naxt part,heer is starting to get on my nerves now,please give her some brains.will be eagerly waiting for the next update to know who was girl who screamed at heer.i think i know who,but then i could be wrong
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome
plz continue soon..
can't wait for next part
will be waiting 👏 👏

I will sure continue soon... may be within 2days....

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