PH FF - 'Chalte Chalte' Part 16 updtd 3/27 on pg40

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Hey guys, M Dhriti hea.. I am a new member of this forum but I would love to get involve more so I am writing my first Fan Fic. Chalte Chalte. The Characters will be the same but I will also bring new characters later and I will introduce them as I carry on.. I am really sorry in Advance for my mistakes and if it's boring.. Feel Free to Comment whether u like it or not so I will try to be more creative or however u want me to bring the light to this Fan Fic..I will try my level best to live up to your expectations.. ok. Thank You

Part 1

Manager - Knock, Knock..

Manager came inside the cabin when he didn't hear any answer. ..Prem Sir, he said after few minutes.

A handsome man who was half asleep pulled himself up and with an angry tone said "Dont you have any manners.. you should at least knock on the door before coming inside my cabin"

Manager (Nervous) - Mai.. Maine ander aane se pahele knock kiya tha, lekin koi answer nahin sunayi diya..isliye.. I AM SORRY Prem SIR..

Prem -I am sorry woh meri aankh lag gayee thi isliye shayad maine suna nahi hoga.. Kaho kya kaam tha,,

Manager - Woh aaj aapki bahut important meeting hai na to aap taiyar ho jaayiye.. woh clients aur board of members aa chuke hai.. aur yeh rahi project ki file.

Prem - Thank You, Just give me 5 minutes and I will meet you in a conference room.

"Suno" Prem said to stop manager from leaving the cabin.

Manager - Ji Sir,

Prem - woh mujhe ek personal secretary chahiye, koi hai tumhari nazar mein jo mere saath kaam karna chahe..

"Haan..hain na, main abhi jaake use yeh khush khabari sonata hoon", said Manager in excitement. He left the cabin as Prem said OK.

Prem was in a conference room with board of members and the clients.

A beautiful girl, wearing a nice light blue shirt and black pants, entered in Prem's Cabin.

"Haay Rabba, Pata nahi yeh cabin itna ganda hai to yeh Prem Juneja kaisa insane hoga" said heer to herself.

She thought being a personal secretary it's probably her job to clean it. While she cleaned Prem's whole cabin as it was all messy since Prem worked none stop for 3 days and 2 nights.

The clients and board of members were very impressed with Prem's work. Everyone approved on the project Prem wants work on and they all praised Prem front of his father and brothers. The meeting ended, everyone left to their respective work.

She was about to leave the cabin when Prem entered in his cabin and them both crashed in to each other'.

Prem catches her from falling on the floor and said "Are you ok, Miss?"

She (in anger) "Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe haath lagane ki? (Prem was looking 4 a chance to speak here but she didn't let him as she kept going on) Tum mujhe jaante nahi ho.. Mai apne Boss ki bahut acchi dost hoon.. aur unhe tumhari sikhayat karke is company se dhakke marke na nikalvaya to mera naam Heer Maan nahin..

Prem (with irritation) - Badi batamizz ladki ho tum..ek to tumhe bachaya aur tum mera ahesan maan ne ki wajah mujhe dhamki de rahi ho..

Heer - Ahesan, My foot..

Prem was about to step inside the cabin.

Heer stopped him asking "Tum Mr. Prem Juneja's ke cabin mein kyu jaa rahe ho? Woh yaha nahi hai uska matlab yeh nahi ki tum apni marji ke malik ho aur unke yaha na hone par unke cabin par apna kabza kar sakte ho".

Prem couldn't take it anymore so he stepped inside the cabin saying whatever to Heer. He was shocked after looking around his cabin.. He checked his table, drawers, file cabinets, etc.. and called for manager in anger.

Manager - Yes, Sir. What happened..

Prem - What the hell is this?? Who came in my cabin without my permission that too in my absence..

Manager was scared and he didn't utter a word

Prem - Come on, Answer me. Who the hell touched my belongings and files?

Heer was really scared from seeing Prem angry but decided to speak up as he was yelling at Manager for something that he didn't even do.

I.. I..am..SORRY sir. said heer in her scared tone.

Prem - So yeh sab tumne kiya hai.. what else can I expect from you??

Heer didn't say anything as she knew it will get worse if she say anything.

Prem - Tumhe kisine yeh nahi sikaya, not to touch anyone's personal things without permission from him/her. How could you do this?? Tumne meri sari cheezo ko ulat fulat kar diya... How dare you??

Heer (looking down the floor ) n scared "I am really sorry sire.. Woh aaj mera pehla din hai na aur aap ki sab cheeze bikhari padi hui thi islye maine socha ki sab organize kar deti hoon"

Prem - Pahela DIN, Pahele din tumne kya kiya..Apne boss ki Insult.. Wait a Minute.. Tum kuch der pahele kya keh rahi thi

Heer - Kab Sir

Prem - Ohh haaa tum aur meri dost..waise mujhe yeh batao ki humari dosti hui kab???

Heer - Nahi Sir

Prem - Kya nahin Sir, Tumne mujhe kaha tha na ki tum apne boss ko kehkar mujhe dhakke mar kar bahar nikalvaogi.. To ab mai tumhe dhakke mar kar yaha se nijalvaoo ya phir yaha se faik doon use pahele tum khud chali jaao..Get out from here" said Prem to Heer in anger.

Heer - Ji

Prem - Just Get out from here right now.. at this moment...

Heer left the cabin leaving Prem and the Manager behind and manager asked for forgiveness on behalf of Heer.

Late at night Prem left his office and started his car. While driving home, he saw Heer standing outside the Gate who was waiting for a ride (taxi or auto). Prem stepped out of his car and asked Heer what is she doing there that late..

Upset Heer replied, " Aap se matlab?"

Prem (with a smile) - tum ek ladki ho aur itni raat ko akeli yun bahar gumna achcha nahi lagta.. isliye

Heer - woh meri problem hai aapki nahi, isliye aap yaha se jaaiye aur mera waqt jaahir mat kijiye

Prem ( making a naughty face) - Achcha, agar tum chahti ho ki mai tumhara waqt barbad na karoo toh phir tumhe mere saath chalna hoga.

Hearing what Prem said Heer was shocked. She replied him, "tumhara dimaag to thik hai na??? tumne mujhe samaj kya rakha hai?? Tum bade log samajte kya ho?? Tum logo ki koi izzat hai ki nahi??"

Prem was trying to explain that he didn't mean anything like what she is thinking but she didn't let him so he covered her mouth with his hands, "Listen, think whatever you want to. If you want me to drop you home then you're most welcome to sit next to me or else you may go to HELL, U heard me GO TO HELL."

After hearing what Prem said Heer got so angry and told him, "Mujhe tumhare jaise cchuhe (mice) ki madad ki koi jaroorat nahi hai, mai apni help khud kar sakti hoon., aur aaj ke baad mein tumhara chehra bhi nahi dekhna chahti.. mere saamne kabhi mat aana warna mai tumhe mar daaloongi."

A naughty Prem couldn't take his steps back as he already did that once in his cabin so he screamed at her "tumhare jaisi billi (cat) ka chahra dekhna bhi kaun chahta hai.. tumhare jaisi ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi. Jo ek Billi ka roop le kar logo ko daraati hai aur unhe nochh dalti hai.. samji??"

Heer started running behind Prem to hit him for saying all that nonsense to her. They were about 2 feet apart from each other when in a rush Heer twisted her ankle and held Prem's hand for a support from falling but unfortunately she fell and was in pain.

Prem felt bad and offers to help her out when A voice came from behind "Heer................................"

TO BE CONTINUE....

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tanyaaaa26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh very nice billi and chuha how sweet
plssssss continue soon 👏
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plz update next part soon
i wnat to read b/c it's weekend yaar
plz update 👏
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aww that was so cute...please write the next part soon

prem and heer are so adorable, fighting which is different cuz everyone including me makes them the cute loving couple but u made them fight and not fall for each other in a second which is rlly unique and cute lolz

the scene where she says "the boss is my friend" i was like umm ur little friend is right in fornt of u

the billi and chuhe part was absolutely adorable...hmm so heer is planning on eating prem like a cat eats the mouse? lolz i dont think she would mind as wont he lol

hmmm i wonder who called her from behind...plz dont let it be manmeet or him anywhere in this fic i loathe him so much ugh

anywayz please please continue wit da next part soon

will be waitin for it

cheers

rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww 😳

thats so different from the show...i love ur ff..its funny and cute and adorable..just love the way premeer fight..that was shoooo damn cute 😳 😆

plz continue soon...will be waiting..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dhriti nice ff yaar.alag hai baaki sab premeer ff se kyunki you didn't make them fall for each other at first sight.i luved the chuuha billi thingy.too good.cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow....nice ff yaaaaaaar...didnt expect this gud one...lols..sry for tht....hehe...waise..i was like first shocked..prem so untidy and angry?!!!...but then loved the naughtiness and smile part a lot...and heer...thnk god...atleast she speaks in here...thts the best thing....i loved it....and please do updt soon...coz i cant wait longer yu know...its just too cute to read this one..as its lot diff from the original track.....cont asap.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh very nice billi and chuha how sweet
plssssss continue soon 👏

thanx... I will continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

plz update next part soon
i wnat to read b/c it's weekend yaar
plz update 👏

i will try ma best 2 update it by 2m 4 u....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aww that was so cute...please write the next part soon

prem and heer are so adorable, fighting which is different cuz everyone including me makes them the cute loving couple but u made them fight and not fall for each other in a second which is rlly unique and cute lolz

the scene where she says "the boss is my friend" i was like umm ur little friend is right in fornt of u

the billi and chuhe part was absolutely adorable...hmm so heer is planning on eating prem like a cat eats the mouse? lolz i dont think she would mind as wont he lol

hmmm i wonder who called her from behind...plz dont let it be manmeet or him anywhere in this fic i loathe him so much ugh

anywayz please please continue wit da next part soon

will be waitin for it

cheers

rinki

LOL... Thank u so much 4 da lovely comment... dnt worry i wasnt planning to bring Manmeet here either and even if i do... I will hate it... i aint going 2 mention him.... u will c da next update soon

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