PH FF - 'Chalte Chalte' Part 16 updtd 3/27 on pg40 - Page 8

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

oh its awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsum plsssssssss plsssssssss plsssssssss do continue soon its hard for me towait as it is soo gooooooooooood plsssssssss do continue soon for me bec i cant wait now 👏

Originally posted by: fijiana

wow your endind are always a mystery,which makes the reader even more intersted in readind the naxt part,heer is starting to get on my nerves now,please give her some brains.will be eagerly waiting for the next update to know who was girl who screamed at heer.i think i know who,but then i could be wrong

Originally posted by: fijiana

update update

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Great part!!!!!!!!!!

Continue soon please!

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Hey guys, I am baq w/ another part… Thank u again for the lovely comments…. I hope you all liked the last part… here is the next part hope u all enjoy it… and plz make sure u leave the comments..

Recap – Heer accuse prem. She helplessly asks forgiveness to Prem. Prem let her go and someone screams at her.

Girl – tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Prem par aisa gatiya iljam lagane ki..

Heer couldn't say how guilty she was feeling so she just looked down without saying a word.

Girl kept going on, "come on, speak up.. aise kya niche goor rahi ho… niche hire moti jade hai kya". She heard someone laughing on her talk so she turned her face to the person who was laughing at her. Seeing Preet laughing, she starts running towards him. Preet starts moving his feet too thinking she won't leave him now. She kept running behind him to get him but unfortunately she bumps into Lalit Juneja so she stopped and stands still looking down. Lalit moved to her, she raised his hand to slap her but instead hugs her and that surprises everyone. They all are relived seeing Lalit being nice to her…her… Girl smile at him and take blessing from him. Then, she meets Gayatri and others as well.

Girl – Papa, Prem kaha hai…

Lalit – woh yahin kahin hoga..

Preet interefere in the middle, "Maine Prem bhai ko har jagah dhoondh liya.. lekin woh kahin par nahi hai."

"Isliye kyunki main to yaha hoon" a voice comes from behind. A girl and Prem share a big tight hug like they never seen each other for years. Seeing them together, Heer had tears in her eyes but had no idea, why?

Prem – tum bilkol nahin badli.. waisi ki waisi hi ho,… MOTI(chubby)

A girl hits him lightly on his shoulder and says "tum bhi kaha badle ho, fatoos"

Prem – tumne mujhe fatoos kaha.. thairo mai tumhe abhi batata hoon ki

A girl cuts him off "Arre tum kya bataoge.. fatoos"

Prem lifts her up and pretends like she is so heavy and drops her on the ground. A girl acts as she was really hurt and asked him to help her. But both, Prem and Preet, extend their hand to help her.

After getting up with the help she kissed Prem on his cheek.

Seeing the kiss, Lalit whispers to Gayatri "Dekha tumne, mai isi liye is ladki ko Prem se door rakhta hoon. Pata nahi mera bhola bhala Prem, kab kaha fisal jaayen."

"Arre aap bhi na, aap ko dikhai nahin de raha ki woh dono ek dusre se kitna pyar karte hai." Gayatri answered him very pleasantly. She seemed happy seeing her in Prem's life.

She thanked Prem and Preet for the help and starts enjoying the party. A few minutes later, Heer comes across them.

Heer (with hesitation and her eyes on the ground) – m..mai..mai… tumse…

Girl – bakari ki tarah mai mai kya kar rahi ho… bolo na jo bolna hai..

Preet comes from behind and puts his hand on Heer.

Preet- arre Heer, tum inse milo.. yeh hai Kripa. Kripa sharma. Hum logo ki bahut achchi dost

Heer greets her but she gives her a dirty look in return. Heer feels humiliated so she leaves from there. Preet calls out for her but she doesn't listen.

All guests leave the party one after another.

At Maan house, Meher asks Heer for the reason to humiliate Prem Juneja, the one who invited them for the party. Heer doesn't say anything and keeps crying. Meher left the room as she knew Heer isn't going to answer her. Everyone goes to bed. Heer keeps thinking about what happened in the party laying down in her bed. She is feeling miserable as she didn't even get chance to say sorry to Prem. But then being a positive she thinks she will do that tomorrow morning in the office. She fall a sleep.

In the morning, Prem is in his cabin. Heer knocks and enters as he responds her.

Prem was still kind of mad at her. So he just looked at her.

Heer – Good Morning, Sir..

Prem starts looking at the window. He checks something out but Heer is confused to his act. With naughtiness her said, "arre wah.. kya baat hai.."

Heer with confusion – kya hua sir..

Prem – aap ko pata hai ki suraj aaj kis taraf se nikla hai..

Heer – haan.. jis taraf se roj nikalta hai… kyu

Prem smiles in his head on her innocent answer.

Prem – aaj tum mujhe Sir bula rahi ho.. aur andar aane se pahele knock bhi kiya.. itne saare manners ek raat mein sikh gayee… bahut achchi baat hai…

Heer – ji…

Prem - kuch nahi, jaane do… tum batao tum yaha kaise.. kuch kaam tha kya

Heer – ji haan, actually mujheee…..

"Sir, woh sab aapka intzaar kar rahe hai" Manager cuts her off.

Prem – mai abhi aaya…

Prem asked Heer to come with him as it's a very big day for him.

The hospital model is getting finalized. An architecture show them few best samples according to him. Lalit asked Prem's views on the sample.

Prem – yeh model to achcha hai lekin kuch khaas nahin… mujhe kuch aisa chahiye jo Heaven jaisa lage…

Architecture – arre Sir, mere hisaab se to yeh bahut hi achcha hai..

Prem – pata nahi kyun… mujhe itna achcha nahin laga hai..

Prem tells everyone to give their opinion. Everyone thought, it's a great work except Heer. Neither Prem nor Heer liked the model. Prem Asked Lalit to give him few days to think how he wants this project to flow.

Both, Heer and Prem, designed their own model separately in few days. They fix a meeting to discuss their ideas with others. Both share their plan to all the board of members separately.

It's like a dream come true for the kids. An attractive building surrounded by garden filled up with beautiful flowers and an eye catching fountain in front. The automated doors to enter are painted in light gold colors with pretty simple designs on them. The walls are painted in light blue color with their favorite colorful cartoon characters on it. The canteen designed with different types of paintings on the wall of fruits, cakes and ice creams. The ward rooms filled with comport beds and television for entertainment. The toys room packed with a lot of different types of toys. There is also a small room outside the hospital where few animals and birds will be kept such as parrot, dog, cat, etc. A swimming pool and park will be included for fun.

Prem's and Heer's model was similar. Each and everyone appreciate their hard work putted on behind selecting a model as all loved it.

Preet - Yeh bachcho ke liye perfect concept hai.

Lalit - Nobody probably ever thought about children sociology but you guys kept that in mind so heads off to you guys. Kam se kam unhe zindagi ki har khusi yaha mil paayegi.

Architecture - You guys did a fabulous work on designing the model.

All congratulate them for their work effort and the best project. The meeting ends here and all get back to their respective work except the family members of Juneja and Heer. Lalit stops Heer from leaving the conference room.

Lalit – Heer, thank you… tumne is project mein bahut mehnat ki hai.. mai tumhara yeh ahesan kaise utaar paaooga….

Heer – aare Sir, isme sukriyada karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.. yeh to mera kaam hai aur waise bhi yeh project bhi aap sab bachcho ki madad karne ke liye hi kar rahe hai na… to phir ahesan kaisa…

Preet finds a chance here to bring them closer so he tells his Bauji, "kya aap ko nahin lagta ki Heer and Prem bhai ki soch ek hi hai.. aur dono ek saath project achchi tarah se complete kar sakte hai…

Both, Heer and Prem, looked at each other in shock.

Lalit – haan tumne bilkul sahin kaha…mai bhi yahin soch yaha tha, isliye main eek faisla kiya hai… agar dono ko manzoor ho to... tum dono is project mein saath kaam karoge.

Prem was about to refuse but Heer agrees thinking this is a golden opportunity to talk to Prem obviously she wasn't ready to miss it. Prem left with no choice so he also agrees. Preet congratulates them. Lalit leaves followed by Preet then Heer and Prem.

In the hallways, Kripa sees Prem and Heer going towards Prem's Cabin. She follows them.

Heer bends down on her knees front of Prem and asks for forgiveness for misunderstanding him in the party. She also says she is very guilty for the false accuses. Prem puts his hands on her arms and tell her to get up. Their eyes meet and they are deeply lost in their own world. Kripa is stunned seeing them and has shocking expression on her face……………………………..

To Be Continue

Enjoy it,

Dhriti