FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
ya it was great, i can't wait for the next part, and by the way my name is iqra blushpink13 is my id..plzzzzzzzzzzz coninue sooon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

I just started reading ur fanfic.It's very nice n quite realistic.Cont soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
Thankx pm rocks. Next update toh next weekend post karoongi dear kyunki kal se toh Prem hai naa.😊
Thanx a lot tanyaa. Shahid is too good u r right.😃And haan not last but least.😊
Thanx a ton iqra. I'm glad u liked the update.😊
Thanx Shareen. Welcome to my FF dear. Thanx for the complement.
And yes I only hope I continue to entertain u all!😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
maine abhi hi tumhara ff padna start kiya..............and its awsome...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a ton Zenia and a very warm welcome to u dear.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Thanx sweetprincess. I'm glad u liked my efforts.

Sweta yaar aaj kal where r u?

To be honest last week ke shuru ke teen din were so torturous……………..I felt sooooooooooo bad for Prem. Its so tough to see the person u loved the most dead. Isliye I did not even prepare the update for my FF.

But Thursday ke episode ke baad, I'm so relieved. And I'm really looking forward to Monday's episode.

Here's the next part-- 10 where u all will have to use ur imagination to enjoy it. Hope u love this one.

There's a huge and beautifully decorated room. The palce is beautifully decorated in white and lit up by candles. (U r requested to use ur imaginations please)

Someone is standing dressed in a red salwar kameez. She turns around, its Heer.

She sees the emty looking room around, in complete awe of its beautiful dcor, but something was lacking, she felt. Soon realizing that no, it was not something, but somone's presence which was lacking.

She turns around calling out Prem?...........Prem?..............

Once,twice, four times, but still no one replies. Just then someone puts a hand on her shoulder. Startled Heer turns around to see who it was. Jo tha, usse dekh kar Heer was totally relieved and elated, yes u all guessed it right it was Prem!

He is dressed in a black suit and well he is looking as handsome as always. He smiles and says-- Heer, (Heer smiles back as Prem continues) tum meri zindagi ho (he says embracing her face with both his hands and continues)Main tumhe khud se bhi zyaada chahta hoon…………………………Mera sab kuch peeche choot gaya, abb koi hai toh tum hi ho………………..

And he brings his hand forward and as Heer accepts it, the two dance to the song…………..any guesses, well, my current most fav song, Tum hi ho from the movie Kismet Konnection--

Bakhuda tumhi ho,

Har jagah tumhi ho,

Haan main dekhoon,

Jahan jab………………..uss jagah……………….

Tumhi ho…………….

Yeh jahan,

Tumhi ho,

Vo jahan,

Tumhi ho

Iss zammen se falak ke darmiyaan……………..

Tumhi ho,

Tumhi ho, beshubha, tumhi ho

Tumhi ho mujhmein haan,tumhi ho!

Kaise baateye tumhe,

Aur kiss tarah yeh,

Kitna tumhe hum chahte hain,

Saaya bhi tera dikhe toh,

Paas jaake ussmein simat hum jaate hain,

Raasta tumhi ho,

Rehnumma tumhi ho,

Jisski khwaaish hai hum ko,

Vo panaah tum hi ho,

Tumhi ho, beshubha, tumhi ho

Tumhi ho mujhmein haan, tumhi ho!(I'm sure all those who have listened the song isse padhte hue gunguna rahe hoge.)

As the song comes to an end Prem still holding Heer's hands, who in turn is all smiles says softly-- Main bhi tumhe bahot chahti hoon Prem……………….Mere liye bhi meri zindagi ka maksad, khushi, pyaar, saath, aur sab kuch, tumhi ho……………….

Prem puts his other hand on Heer's forehead and bringing it down closes her eyes and the next instant, all candles burn out.

Heer can no longer feel Prem's hand in hers and when she opens her eyes she finds darkness all around.

She starts shouting in desperation-- Prem! Prem!

Heer is breathless and is all sweating. She wipes off the sweat off her face and soon realizes that it was just a dream…………………….or did it mean something else!

Kaisa laga

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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
ummmmmmmmmmmmm bahaut achalga and this song iscurrently one of my fav too anyways very good hope o see the next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
That was great, really really good!
Please continue soon, looking forward to the next part!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
that was really gud...i am looking forward for the next part...
bohat acha laga.cont soon.
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
great part.esp love the song.this scene you created reminded me of the scene when prem and heer dance for the first time during heers engagement.please update soon

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