FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice waitinggggg for next asap.
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ohhhhhhhhh ya tom is ur birthday na happy nirthday dear may god bless u with lots of happiness in world in advance and thx for the wonderful part i will be waiting for the next too
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amazing ...god ur soo good i cant wait for the next part!!!
oh and happy bday in advance:)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx all three of u. Next part kal nahiin bhej paaongi as I'll not have time, maybe. So please sorry. And thanx for those lovely wishes!
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That was a great chapter!
Well happy birthday for your birthday!
If your birthdays the 1st of August!
Its already the first of august ehre so happy birthday , and have the best day ever!
?xXx?
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this part is awsome just luved it. i was thinking that if u don't mind plz pm me for the next part thanks.

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hey...first of all....A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U....
and secondly...the chapter was very nice....waiting 4 the next part....
plz continue soon...ok...
enjoy ur day....and where is our treat??????
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great update continue soon and love the avatar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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A very god morning to all of u.
Thanx sweta I'm so glad u liked this part.
Thanx tanyaa and ur wait comes to an end as I'll soon post the next part. Thanx for the lovely B'day wishes dear.
Thanx to u too amanaranjan. I'm glad u appreceated my work. But I guess u r new to my ff. Right?
Thanx sunayna mujhe khushi hai kii u liked this part as well and thanx for those B'day wishes as I indeed had the best of the day.
Thanx iqra, I'm slad u loved this one.
Thanx zenia for those warm B'day wishes and that u liked this part. And rahi baat B'day treat kii toh woh toh I gave u in advance and this part too will be a treat dear. Baaki kuch aur chahiye toh anytnihng for u dear.
Thanx to u too kelz. Chalo kisi ko toh mera avtaar pasand aaya. Thanx a lot dear. I guess u too r new to my ff. And r u also a Shahid Kapoor fan kya?
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Posted: 17 years ago
Alright here's the next part--14. I hope u all like this one too.
Shanno chachi says to Prem-- Nahiin beta…………..abhi tum kamzor ho………….tumhe aaraam kii zaroorat hai…………abhi tummme itni taakat bhi nahiin hai kii iss chaarpai se uth sako……………aur tum baahar jaana chahte ho?.............Aur Heer aati hii hogi………….

But Prem is admant (and u guys know how stubborn he is…………..and when it comes to Heer tab toh……………..he becomes all the more ziddi…………….)and this time he gets up straight (with difficulty but not showing it)………………saying-- Nahiin chachi…………….Heer………….Heer ko meri zaroorat hai…………………..

And with that he leaves the house…………..leaving behind a protesting Shanno chachi and a worried Meher…………………

There in the Juneja mansion Preet has just had a heated argument with his dad and he leaves his room really furious…………….and loosing his cool………….after all he just didn't want to understand……………just not ready to listen…………….and upar se he called Prem an aasteen ka saamp…………….which really made Preet even more mad…………..that he chose to leave without sayin anything this time……………….because his anger was so high……………

He walks along the corridor where he meets Ashlesha who stops him…………….by coming in front of him saying-- Kyaa baat hai Preet?...........Tum abh tak soye nahiin…………Neend nahiin aa rahi hai kya?............Kya karoon mujhe bhi nahiin aa rahi……………..

Preet is too irritated and still controlling himself says with gritted teeth-- Neend abb tabhi aayegi jab Prem bhaiya ko iss ghar mein waapas nahiin le aata……………chain toh abb tabhi milega jab………….Prem bahiya se mil nahiin leta……………………..

Ashlesha doesn't hear him and continues her bak bak saying-- Toh chalo naa Preet iss bearish ka mazaa lete hue…………baatein kar…………ek doosre ko jaanne ki koshish karte hain……………

Preet says-- Please Ashlesha leave me alone………….main kuch der akela rehnaa chahte hoon…………….

When Ashlesha doesn't listen to him and continues bragging-- Oh come on Preet chalo naa………………

Preet who has had enough says shouting-- Mainne kaha naa Ashlesha mujhe akela chod do……….Tumhe samajh nahiin aata?!……………Leave me alone dammit!…………….Just go………….Go!

Ashlesha apologises an quickly leaves from there………………while Preet make his way to the main door of the house………………………

Just when an agitated Preet is about to leave the house his mom stops him asking-- Preet?.............Itni raat gaye……………itni bearish mein kahaan jaa raha hai?

Preet says-- Pata nahiin maa………………lekin itna toh tai hai………………kii main iss ghar mein tab tak kadam nahiin rakhoonga………………..jab tak Prem bhaiya ko dhoond nahiin leta…………….

With that he leaves out of the house and storme throught the main door and the leaves in his car…………………in search of his elder bro…………….who was…………..well everything for him………………….his strength and his biggest weakness…………….his friend………….his mentor……….his guide………….his brother………Prem…………………

There Prem's mom is left wondering .............Pata nahiin kiski nazar lag gayi hai mere ghar ko............Pata nahiin mera Prem kahaan hoga...............kis haal mein hoga...........kaisa hoga?..............Aur abb yeh Preet bhi.........Donon hii bhai ziddi hain.............unnpar jo gaye hain............bas donon theek rahein............aur jaldi ghar laut aaye.....meri toh yehi dua hai..................

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.

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