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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry for the delay. Here's the next part--9. Hope u like this one too.🙂

Prem continues to walk away lost in his own thoughts😭Ouch and worries. His dad gets closer to him..........and just when he is about to call out to Prem who was walking at a faster pace, someone puts a hand on his shoulder....OuchOuch

He turns around to see who it is..........it was DJ chachi........She too was with him in the car with her husband as the three had gone to the office together...........Ouch

The para of Baaghbaan's title song begins to play in the background-----

O Kisne Dukh Ki Agni Daali

Banjar Ho Gaye Khet

O Hari Bhari Jeevan Baghiyaa Se

Udne Lagi Hai Ret

Kyaa Boyaa Thaa Aur Kyaa Kaataa

Soche Baghban Kyaa Boyaa
Thaa Aur Kyaa Kaataa Soche Baghban

Aa Aa Aa Baghban Rab Hai

Baghban Baghban Rab Hai
Baghban Baghban Rab Hai Baghban Baghban Rab Hai Rab Hai Baghban😭

She says to Lalit-- Bhrajii..yeh aap kya kar rahe hain??????chaliye yahan se????.thode dinn Prem ko dheela chod dijiye...........jab iss matlabi duniyaa mein..........dar dar ki thokrein mileingin...........toh aapka beta khud ba khud aapke paas laut aayega.........uss besharam ladki ko chodkar............ AngryConfused

Lalit looks at DJ,and then at Prem.........and realizing maybe she was right he gives one last look to him walking away..who is carrying his trials and troubles on his shoulders..........and gets into the car............There Heer has reached back home where Meher is waiting anxiously for her with Shanno chachi.Confused

She says to her angrily-- Kya didi? Itni der laga dii aapne.......naa aap aaye aura a Prem......sab theek toh hai didi (Meher sees that she was lost in her own thoughts so she says) Didi?.............aap kuch bolti kyun nahiin................Kya kaha Prem ne?🙂

Heer looks up at Meher and says hiding her dismay and Prem's probs from her little sis-- Kuch nahiin Meher........thoda rash tha wahan dukaan pe.....(she lies).....bas......isiliye der ho gayi.........aur Prem bas aate hi hongein.......

Meher is satisfied and she goes in to get clothe for her sis to change and to make tea for her. 🙂🙂

Heer had lied to Meher........But Shanno chachi?s eyes could judge tht something troubled her..........so she asks her-- Kya hua Heer bitiya.......tu kuch pareshaan lag rahi hai........Dekh tunne apni behen se toh jhoot kaha..........lekin aggar tu chahe toh mujhse apna dard baant sakti hai...........🙂Ouch

Heer who was tired of thinking out a way to help Prem.......who was sad.........and tired..........and weary............says it all to Shanno chachi and says finaaly-- Abb aap hii bataiye Chachi....main Prem kii madad kaise karoon?😭Ouch

Shanno chachi embraces Heer and says reassuring her-- Tuu chintaa mat kar........upper wala.......achche logon kaa hameshaa saath deta hai.........har kisi ko bure waqt kaa saamna karna patda hai......Aur tum donon toh bahot khuskismat ho ki.......ek doosre ke liye........ke doosre ke saath ho........bharosa rakho.........koi naa koi raasta nikal hii aayega. 🙂🙂

Heer seems to be reassured and Shanno chachi leaves from there........

Heer changes and goes to sit by the window thinking...........Itni derr ho gayi..Prem abhi tak nahiin aaye........ho sakta haikoi naukrii dhoond rahe hon........Main kya karoon...................(She thinks helplessly)........Kii tumhaari har dukh ko khud apna loon..........Tumhaare har dard ko apna bana loon........kya karooon kii tumhaari iss pareshaani ko durr kar sakoon.........OuchOuchOuchOuch😭😭😭😭😭

Just then she hears a knock at the door................ Confused

Kaisa laga.🙂

Jaldi batao. 🙂

Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
bahaut acha tha ab kal ke update mein mujhe premeer ke ache scnes dena plssssssssss i will be waiting dear
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u so much tanyaa.🙂🙂 I'm so glad u liked it. 🙂🙂
Lekin I'm sorry dearConfused I won't be able to send the next update today as I'm going to watch KK today.😜😜😀😀 I'll be leaving for the show in an hour StarStarso please forgive me 🙂🙂and since u too like Shahid I'm sur u will understand my level of excitement! Aur movie ke after effects will keep me occupied for the rest of the day.🥰🥰🥰🥰
But yes kal pukka I'l update the next part...............that too with PH scene. 🥰🥰🥰🥰Alright?
Sorry once again to all of u.🙂🙂
Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh no well ya i am too going to watch kk ohhhhhhhh just came bak from my skol ptm yeh shahid bhaiya i just love him no need to sorry go and hav fun but i will not leave u tom upate big with ph scnes ok
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very gud indeed. but when u post the next part plz write a longer part cuz whenever i read it i wanna read more.pm me whenever u post the next part.
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Really good chapter, i hope its Prem!
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P.s. . . . . . PLEASE reply soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Alright a very good morning to all of u.
Thanx bluishpink and tanyaa. Here's a long update the last for this weekend. I hope u all enjoy this one. Sweta where r u?
Just then Heer hears a knock at the door and startled she gets up to see who it was……………….

Heer opens the door. It was Prem. He looked at her and Heer could very well see that he was worried………..and also for the first time in all these days she had known him…………………..He appeared……………all broken and battered mentally…………………..tired and worn out……………

There seeing Heer……………..was quite a relief for Prem……………and instantly his lips curl up into a smile………………….and his worries seemed to have vanished into thin air……………….all his troubles seemed to have taken a backseat for that instant…………………(Yes such was the magic of love…………………….)

Heer moves away from the door as Prem enters and she says from behind-- Sab theek hai naa………….Prem?............

He turns around and keeping in place the same calm on his face he says lying-- Haan…………….(He fumbles)……………Sab…………….sab theek raha………………Kyun?

Heer says nothing and asks him-- Tum fresh ho jao………………yeh geeley kapde badal lo………..warna beemaar pad jaogey………………tab tak main khana lagaati hoon………………

And when he goes away she thinks to herself-- Tumhe jhoot bhi nahiin bolnaa ataa Prem……………And she goes to the kitchen to put food for him.

By the time Meher is also back. She asks Heer-- Didi………..Prem wapas aa gaye kya?

Heer replies-- Haan Meher abb tu jaldi se haath muh dho le……………main khana lagati hoon………….

And Heer herself goes to call Prem………………..

She sees him standing by the window……………kneeling against the wall…………his eyes closed…………..he has changed into a white Kurta pyjama………………..

Kehte hain naa ki jab insaan bahot pareshaan hota hai……………usse koi raasta nahiin soojhtaa…………….koi umeed nazar nahiin aati…………..aur dil mein…………..dard hii dard hota hai…………….tab…………tab usse apnon ke saath bitaaye pal yaad aate hain……………..unke saath baantey……………lamhe zehen mein phir tar aate hain…………….

Bas aaj Prem ke saath bhi yahi ho raha tha…………………………..

He remembers………………..the day when his dad had hugged him saying that he was proud to be his father…………….and that the world will not know Prem as Lalit Juneja's son…………..but him as Prem Juneja's father…………………..

Then he remembers how his dad had poured water on his head…………..declaring that from then on he was dead for him……………….this had hurt Prem the most…………………

And then he remembers……………walking out of his house…………….with the love of his life………….Heer and her sis Meher……………………….

Prem opens his eyes………………He has tears in them…………………………

and so Prem thought………….were these tears of repentance……………..no way he thought the next instant.

Then were they tears of pain…………….suffering……………helplessness……………frustration…………..tiredness………….

Today there was no rain to wash away these tears………………but yes there was someone…………….someone standing close to him…………….who wanted to take away all his sorrows…………….all his troubles……………all his pain……………all his sufferings…………all his worries……………and make them her own…………………that too happily and willingly…………………Heer………….it was Heer…………………….

Heer says softly—- Prem?...................

Prem realizes it was Heer so he quickly wipes off his tears and looks up at her with a smile-- Haan……………Kya hua Heer?

Heer says-- Khana taiyaar hai……………tum aa jao…………

Prem replies back saying-- Tum aur Meher kha lo……………mujhe bhook nahiin hai…………(and he looks to the other side outside the window)

Heer hesitates at first but then begins-- Prem tumnne kal se kuch nahiin khaya…………….Subah bhi tum bina naashta kiye chale gaye……………….Aur main jaanti hoon kii tumne subah se kuch khaya nahiin hai……………….Please Prem…………..iss tarah toh tum beemaar pad jaoge Prem…………………………Andar aake kuch kha lo…………….

Prem agrees saying-- Chalo……………….After u…………………(KK ka dialogue)

Heer says as the two walk inside-- Tumhaari pasand naapasand toh main nahiin jaanti Prem………………….kuch pasand naa aaye toh keh dena……………………

Prem only smiles back at her…………………………..

After dinner Prem goes to wash his hands to the sink. There he feels a little dizzy. He thinks maybe because he was tired with the day's exertion…………………..

And he goes to lie down where Heer had already laid his bedding on the floor……………..Soon his eyelids feel heavy and he falls asleep.

By the time Heer and Meher have finished up with the cleaning of the dishes and the kitchen……………….they both r dead tired…………………

Meher goes to sleep immdeately while Heer wanders around for some time making sure the doors of the house were locked, and finally goes to bed………………

She sees Prem fast asleep already…………….there is an unusual calm and serenity on his face…………………..

Heer finds it strange………………………But then she thinks maybe he was very tired just like Meher………………………..

And so Heer too retires to bed………………….soon falling asleep………………

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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And coming to KK................Tanyaa sach mein Shahid is at his Best yaar...............🙂He looked sooooooooooooooooo cute and handsome...............He totally rocked! Dil khush kar diya. And he has given this beautiful Birthday gift in advance u see?🥰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was great!😀
continue soon!!!!!😉
will be waiting for some more hot premeer scenes!!!!!!!!🥰
do it asap! okay😜
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh ya so u liked shahid bhaiya well he is ausual superb so cute ki kisi se bhi kismat konnection ho jaye lols bak to update it was great really good applause for u and ya not last but least so cont soon next week and i will be waiting👏🏻

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