FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice gr8 do cont soon dear
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Posted: 17 years ago
reaaly awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee dialogues
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏👏a very nice part
please do continue
waiting for the next part......................................................
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice update .hope ur feeling better
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanx a lot pooji dear………yeh colour which u have used for the message is my fav so thanx dear for this too…….and yes I'm glad u found it amazing and emotional………..jab main yeh part likh rahi thi……..tabhi pata hai…………I wanted a song to depict Prem's fears and this para of the song Khuda jaaney was just so apt………Did u listen to it while reading this part?

Thanx for the complement ranrags……….I'm glad u too felt the emotions of the sequence………Prem's feelings………..and his fears……….chalo iska matlab I got things right………Once again thanx a lot and I'll update asap.

Thanx tanyaa………..How's ur skool going o dear…………and I'm so happy u found this part great and I'll update the next part asap………..

First of all………..welcome to the FF anoushka……..I guess u r new…………so a very warm welcome to u dear and I'm glad u r enjoying my work and I only hope I continue to entertain u guys like this…………and u keep sending in ur valuable and lovely comments like this…………Thanx once again.

Thanx roshmita and a very warm welcome to my world of Prem and Heer……..the eternal lovers…………I'm glad u liked this part too dear and I'll update the next part asap………thanx once again and do keep sending in ur valuale comments as ur opinion does count for me…………

Thanx amanranjan………..and haan yaar I'm much better now………..its almost a week and the stitches will be removed after ten days when the doc will have a look to see if the wound has healed or not…………baaki thanx so much dear for all this concern and ofcourse good wishes of urs………Thank u so much once again.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello all of u...............a very good morning.............
Here's the next part-- 26. I hope u like this one too.

There DJ chachi comes face to face with Gaytri and she asks her-- Kya hua bharjayijii?..............Aap kuch pareshaan lag rahi hain?................Main pichley do dinon se dekh rahi hoon……………….Kya baat hai?

Gaytri who was taken aback at first replies an instant later saying-- Kuch nahiin DJ………..bas yun hii…………….(and she thinks to herself)………..Main jaanti hoon DJ mere khushbaash ghar aur parivaar ko teri hii buri nazar lagi hai……..yeh sab tera hii kiya dhara hai………….bas……..ek baar mujhe mauka mill jaaye aur main iss sab ke peechey tera maksad jaa loon……………phir teri sachaai unke saamne bhi le aaongii……………..

DJ is then shown thinking to herself-- Koshish kar leejiye bharjaayijee………….Saamney laana toh durr………jo khel main abb tak khelti aa rahi hoon………………aur jo shadyantr abb main aake bet eke khilaaf rach rahi hoon………………usse naa oh aap samajh paayi aur naa kabhi samajh paayegi……………Aur jab tak samjhegi………….tab tak yeh DJ ka laaya hua toofaan aapka sab kuch le jaa chukka hoga…………….

And she turns around and walking some distance awaya she says softly and in a low tone promising herself saying-- Aapkey uss bete Prem ne bhari mehfil mein……..apne prem kaa dankaa bajaaya tha naa?................Abb yeh DJ usske saath saath…………..usski mashooka ko…………uss Heer kii bachchi ko bhi apni ungliyon ke ishaare par nachaayegii……………….Aur aisa nahiin hua toh mera naam bhi DJ nahiin…………………

Just then Gaytri's phone rings listening to which DJ who was going away stops to listen………but Gaytri notices DJ staring at her from the other end of the room…………..so she goes out to talk to Preet in her own room………………..pretending to talk to her friend.

But DJchachi is too smart to be fooled…………and she smiles knowingly when her mobile rings and she picks it up saying-- Haan bolo kya pata chal?

Alright sorry guys u don't get to hear…..oh sorry read and know what the man n the other side says kyunkii agar yeh pata chal gaya toh phir toh aagey kii story bhi pata chal jaayegi……………….

DJ replies back-- Bahot achchey…………abb isi tarah uss Preet ke peecha karte raho………….aur pata lagao kii yeh donon Prem panchi kahaan apna ghonslaa banaaye hue hain………….Samajh gaye?

With that she keeps the phone down and says in her usual devilish manner and with that evil smile on her face-- Abb tum dekhte jao Prem Juneja………….yeh DJ tumse tumhaari Heer ko hameshaa ke lie tumse kaise cheenti hai………..aur phir apni jhallan ko kaise tumhaare palley baadhti hai………………

There Preet enters the room with Meher………..and the two smile looking at each other…………….when they see PH hug each other so lovingly………………..and Preet in his usual aughty manner coughs loudlu and intentionally…………………………which alerts Prem and Heer……………..instantly…………..

And they both get too embarrassed to say anything and just blush…………….idhar udhar jhaankney lagtey hain……………..while Preet and Meher continue to smile knowingly at the two………………who however wre trying their levels best to pretnd as though nothing had happened at all………………………..

And suddenly all four of them laugh together……………..they burst out laughing……….and Prem hits Preet with fun…………for intervening like that………………..while Meher looks at her sis laughing at her and hugging her……………….making her realize how happy she was for her and Prem………………..

Yes they all laughed and smiled………..and blushed too……………..unaware of the storm DJ chachi was planning once again to bring into their lives…………….determined to separate both Prem and Heer……………….hell bent to teach Prem a lesson of a lifetime………….........all sure to be successful this time……………..at any cost!

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.

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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice
excellent love prem heer hug awww
so cute👏👏

so i guess i know ur fav color now
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nic abd good dear do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice update !!! i hope soomeone saves PH from Djs buri nazar
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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