FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 8

awwwwww!!! how swwweeeeetttt! 😳 a hurt prem? tht is so cute!
balaji and ekta should definitely hire you, i agree with everyone else! 😉
i think the third part was awesome and updtae soon!

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

o wow!!wat an update! it was amazing!sooo cute!!
prem and heer r soo cute!!

it was sooo cute how prem and heer got flustered because of preet! lol
preets soo funny!

i luv when ur like theyre both good at giving lectures! im like wow!so
true!

my FAVVV scene was when prem walked into heers room!!awesome!!
man u r an awesome writer!update soon!

Thanks so much. You calling me an awesome writer means a great deal to
me as I've only recently improved on my writing. I've always been better
at Maths and Sciences. Literature and Languages have never been my
thing despite me trying so hard and so this means a lot to me 😃. I'm
really glad you liked the part 😊. The next one will be up soon as
well!

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Heyyyyyyyy
Shafaqforums.com/smileys/smiley31.gif">..Firstly I m honoured that u
dedicated it to me and Nandoo😳Thats an awfully shweet
gesture..Lovedddddd the update!!👏Crisp, vivid, clear and beautifully
written👏As I said earlier to the simplicity of the story and your
narration really makes it very effective..I like how u r moving the plot
smoothly..It was really cute esp the part of them sharamying and Prem
sharamaying like a newly wed bride😆Preet ki teasing was cutee
too..And the lecturing bit u added...👏Niceeeeee...Loving it..And
thankoo u soo much for pming me and letting me know..means a
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Hey Zainab,

You're welcome but the truth is you guys deserved it after the way you
welcomed me into the forum. Thanks so much for appreciating the
various parts that you enjoyed 😊 and please if there is anything you
don't like do let me know. I'd love to be able to improve through your
comments 😃. The story will be pretty smooth with a couple of twists
and turns in between but those are necessary for a happy ending right?
So just keep reading...I have a lot in store for you guys!

that is soo good i completely loved it please continue

Originally posted by: Faima_PremHeer

that is soo good i completely loved it please
continue

Thanks a lot 😊. I'll definitely be continuing soon!

😊 😊 i think i should not say continue soon becaus u must be fed up with me sorry for that but its really going gr8 👏 👏 👏 and u r too fast too and that is more appriciated very nice u deserve a big round of applause 👏 here it is

amazing part as always
i really liked the way u write in detail and how u express the charachters feelings .
i liked the way preet teased heer and prem it was really cute,i can actually imagine prem blushing.Prem is defiantly the best son in law 4 balraj therefore i liked the way they interacted with each other.
heer and prem defiantly give good lectures cant wait 2 read more of them
hope pem and heer talk before their marriage and try 2 understand each other.
👏

hey ur ff is shoo sweet 👏 i really like it plz cont soon

Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

awwwwww!!! how swwweeeeetttt! 😳 a hurt prem?
tht is so cute!
balaji and ekta should definitely hire you, i agree with everyone else! 😉
i think the third part was awesome and updtae soon!

Hey

I didn't notice your comment at first so sorry for that. Glad you liked the
part and as for Balaji hiring me well lets wait and see 😆. I wouldn't
actually mind you know. Keep reading!!

Shafaq

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part as always
i really liked the way u write in detail and how u express the charachters
feelings .
i liked the way preet teased heer and prem it was really cute,i can actually
imagine prem blushing.Prem is defiantly the best son in law 4 balraj
therefore i liked the way they interacted with each other.
heer and prem defiantly give good lectures cant wait 2 read more of them
hope pem and heer talk before their marriage and try 2 understand each
other.
👏
👏

Thanks a lot! I enjoy writing in detail. Yeah Prem and Heer will definitely
get to know each other so don't worry at all. I'm really glad you liked it
and the parts you've mentioned are actually my personal favorites. I'll be
continuing very soon. Do keep reading 😊