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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
veryy well written 👏

itz always a treat to read ur ff!!!
this scene wz veryy cute... i jss luv it wen Prem jokes... hez quite naughtyy... n our seedhi saddhi heer... keepz sayin ji ji evrytime 😆 ...soo cute..

ur doin a fabulous job... cant w8 to read the nxt part... do continue soooooooooon
biii n take care 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
awesome too good very nice lovely part waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

👏 very nice
speechless cant say more
pls do continueeeeeee



Thank you so much! Do keep reading!


Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey Shafaq! I was a silent reader at this forum,
but I think I'm going to start being active here as well. And what better
way than to comment in your totally rocking FF. I just reading the whole
thing when you updated! Chalo. Atleast I didn't have to die waiting for
part 4! 😆 It's very beautifully written! Amazing! 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon!!!


Komz



Hey!

First of all I'm really glad you posted. Thank you for your lovely comments
as well. Lucky you....you didn't have to wait for Part 4. Do keep reading!


Originally posted by: moonlightgurl



awwwwwwww!!!!! 😳


tht is so intense, so cute, so touching, so everything! i love this prem
and this always saying 'ji' heer!!!!


update soon! plus, u r an amazin writer! 😉



Thanks so much. As a matter of fact that was
my favourite part. I thoroughly enjoy writing for you guys.


Originally posted by: tania_786

veryy well written 👏

itz always a treat to read ur ff!!!
this scene wz veryy cute... i jss luv it wen Prem jokes... hez quite
naughtyy... n our seedhi saddhi heer... keepz sayin ji ji evrytime 😆
...soo cute..

ur doin a fabulous job... cant w8 to read the nxt part... do continue
soooooooooon
biii n take care 🤗



Its all thanks to readers like you. Really glad you
liked the part. The next part will be up soon as well 😊.


Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice lovely part waiting for
next asap.



Thanks a lot! Do keep reading 😃.


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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
amazing part
i liked the way heer was keep on saying ji all the time it was really cute.
finally prem is glad with the annswer he got and he can finally talk with heer about their marriage
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
i liked the way heer was keep on saying ji all the time it was really cute.
finally prem is glad with the annswer he got and he can finally talk with heer
about their marriage
👏
👏
👏 👏 👏



Thanks a lot...I'm really glad you enjoyed reading the part. Do keep reading!
I'm trying my best not too drag things...but everything does have to take
place at a certain pace.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
Shafaqqqqqqqqqqqq🤗
It was a pleasure reading this part..
It was toooooooo gooodd👏..Way beyond what I was expecting...
It was soooooooooo well written👏..
The coffee scene and the ji ji bits toooooooo cutee...
I m loving the way u r taking the story and the Premeer relation...
You have me hooked girl..
Cant wait for the next part😳
Hope ur exams went well!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Faith-


Shafaqqqqqqqqqqqqforums.com/smileys/smiley31.gif">It was a pleasure reading this
part..It was toooooooo gooodd👏..Way beyond what I was
expecting...It was soooooooooo well written👏..The coffee scene and
the ji ji bits toooooooo cutee...I m loving the way u r taking the story and
the Premeer relation...You have me hooked girl..Cant wait for the next
part😳Hope ur exams went well!!



Thanks a lot Zainab. You guys are truly my inspiration....with readers like
you how can one even stop writing. Exams went well..OMG they are finally
over. Its too gd too be true. At least I'll be able to update this FF more
often. Your comments mean a lot too me and as for having you hooked
well that's what I intended on doing 😆. The "Ji" bit was something
totally random but it turned out to be quite something right? Take Care!
Do keep reading 😊!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: shafaq92



Thanks a lot Zainab. You guys are truly my inspiration....with readers like
you how can one even stop writing. Exams went well..OMG they are finally
over. Its too gd too be true. At least I'll be able to update this FF more
often. Your comments mean a lot too me and as for having you hooked
well that's what I intended on doing 😆. The "Ji" bit was something
totally random but it turned out to be quite something right? Take Care!
Do keep reading 😊!

Aww you are most welcome dear..
Actually I m always out of superlatives and proper tareef.. You deserve a lot more...
Oh yaa goodie exams over must be such a relief...
And anything for u.. comment tou no big deal...
Andddd haww u intended getting us hooked.. u SO did that..
Anddd yaa sometimes random things just fall in place👏
Will definitely continue reading.. even if u gib me dhaka out of ur ff.. I will continue reading *giggles*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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AWWWW MAN! I WAS LIKE SOOOO INTO IT! NOT AWARE OF MY SURROUNDINGS AND U JUST STOPPED!!HEHEHE...DDUE IT WAS LIKE TOTALY AWESOME!!

I LUVVED IT!!DUDE I HAVE FALLED IN LUV WITHT HIS FF!
UR AN AWESOME WRITER! IT WAS SO SUPERBLY AWESOME!THT I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW WONDERFUL THIS FF WAS!

AWWW I WANT A HUSBAND LIKE PREM!!THT IS SOOO CUTE!!
HEER HAVING DOUBTS IN HER MIND...HMMM...I WONDER WHY!?

CHOOO CHWEET HOW ALL HEER SAYS IS JI...HAHA!!! PREM'S SUCH A HOTTIE! I LUV HIM



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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Shafaq.... once again u out did urself.... this is beginning to be a excellent serial even tho we have to use our imagination but still... woooowwww Prem is sooo in control and looking out for Heer's happiness.... soooo sweet.... i love him 😳
i truly loved this part
"Tum fikr mat karo. Shaadi ke baad tumhe main banaane doonga. No
need to worry okay?" he said as if he had read her mind.
i actually believe Prem will soon be able to read Heer's mind in the show.... but you reached there b4.... nicely done....
ur very talented..... Prem tucked Heer's hair behind her ear 'sigh'..... what next....

this was sooo good... will be waiting for the next part....

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