FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 7

Originally posted by: nandini90

oww...thnx a lot jaaanu....soo
sweeet.....again....am out of words...u r taking the story soo well
yaaar....loved it......simply loved it....i mean...of course we need scenes
like this in btw....or else it'll be totally like...only gud is
happeniing......wow....loved premeer.....so prem wants to find wats in
heer's mind...of course..i can feel her...she was like...shocked at tht
moment.....and prem.....aww...he cares soo much.....and i loved her
apology.....soo cute...can just visualise a apologotic heer's
face...."sorry".....cute.....hehe.....again.....gud job done in the best
way...loved it totally yaaar...am speechless...such gud writers r here in
IF...and wats ekta doing??....she shud hire some.......am sure...her prod
house wil be in full profit for sure....hehe...

luv nans

You're always welcome but I should be the one thanking you 😳. That's
what I aim to do - I want my readers to be able to visualize the scenes.
The story will be pretty smooth but like you said it can't continuously be
just good and so in the right proportions they will face some minor
problems as well. As for Ekta....yes she should hire some new writers
from here....everyone is just so gd. The show would be amazing then as
we could have all our predictions actually come true. Anyhow thanks so
much. I'm really glad you liked the part so much 😊 . Do keep
reading!

wow shafaq i m jst speechless!!!

👏

u've decribed each an every scene soooooooooooooooooo beautifully... i can litterally picture ur ff in my mind!!

Like alwyz u have dun an outstanding job...

i seriously admire ur style of writing!!!

n thankz sooooooooooo much for updating sooo fast... really appreciate it 😊

thx for updatting such wonderfully and nicely and so fast u r superb
and i will be waitin eagerly for the next for sure
👏 thx a lot

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Hey

Thanks a lot. If I'm not wrong then this is the first time you've commented.
Keep reading and commenting! Really glad you liked it.

yea im new to ur ff...and i luvved it!!keep updating!!great job!

o wow!!wat an update! it was amazing!sooo cute!! prem and heer r soo cute!!

it was sooo cute how prem and heer got flustered because of preet! lol preets soo funny!

i luv when ur like theyre both good at giving lectures! im like wow!so true!

my FAVVV scene was when prem walked into heers room!!awesome!! man u r an awesome writer!update soon!

Originally posted by: tania_786

wow shafaq i m jst speechless!!!

👏
👏

u've decribed each an every scene soooooooooooooooooo beautifully... i
can litterally picture ur ff in my mind!!

Like alwyz u have dun an outstanding job...

i seriously admire ur style of writing!!!

n thankz sooooooooooo much for updating sooo fast... really appreciate
it 😊

Hey you're welcome and thank you so much 😳.
I want you guys to be able to imagine everything and I'm glad that you
actually can.

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

thx for updatting such wonderfully and nicely and so
fast u r superb
and i will be waitin eagerly for the next for sure
👏 thx a lot

Thanks a lot! You're always welcome 😊. I really like
writing for you guys.

Originally posted by: salma_786786

Shafaq thank you for PMin
me.....and another great update.... it nice and simple jus how a serial is
suppose to be i fink.... i really enjoyed reading this.... Preet still a joker
and Premeer awwww bless them both.... i jus love how you portray their
simplicity.... they already had a small lecture argument.... i guess that
happens if ur nervous and scared....it was very cute to read....

"Hogaya lecture pura? Ab main boloon? he told her there..... this part
reminded me of the episode where Prem called her lectures rubbish...

i really enjoyed reading this.... will wait for ur next
update....[/B/

Hey you're welcome. Yeah that part was actually inspired from that
episode and that whole scene was inspired from when Prem's finds an
unconscious Heer in one of the Hotel rooms. I'm really glad you liked it. I
may even post the next part later today 😊.