FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 29

thts such a coolio part, shafaq!!!! hats off, for doing it early, lol!!!! awwww........seriosuly heer shouldnt be doing this....i dnt care abt the mannat and all, but she's closing up on prem - who's her love, husband etc!!! :S poor prem!!!!!! luved how preet was ready to take care of his PB, though!!! ohhhh meher and harman!!!! how cuttteeee!!!! update soon; hope ballu gets well!!!!

Another amazing part👏&yes lil surprised to see the part 13 sooooo fast👍🏼

Originally posted by: kimmu

Ahh yayyy you continued when i was online... And I saw it before you pmed me. And I'm firstt.. *balle balle*

Well well well isn't someone a bit too excited 😆.....I'm really glad to see this vibrant enthusiasm kimmu! Honestly speaking its really encouraging.

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Ok first of all if Rinki found out I was giving out a long comment and not writing my FF, she'd wring me..
Hehe... lets just hope she doesn't find out.. *looks around to see if Rinki's there*
Second of all, stop dedicating parts to mee! I start blushinggg... ☺️

Now lets just hope Rinki doesn't find out.....but what are you doing running away from your responsibilities 😲 young lady? Once you start a FF......from right then you begin to have a responsibility towards your readers. But I'll give my responsibility bhashan 😛 some other day. Now I'm not planning on stopping dedications too you so you'll just have to make do with all the blushing 😳 hehe 😆.

I feel so bad for Prem. Poor guy's so stressed. I loved how you described him trying to open the door, but not being able to. He's so tensed/worried about Heer, and Heer's ignoring him, he must feel so hurt and rejected. She shouldn't have ignored him like that, it was so mean of her. Ahh I feel like giving a jhappi to Prem... It really hurt me to see him like that. Well technically read about him like that.. hehe.. But I could imagine it all so i guess you could say see too... Ahh I'm confusing myself.

I can understand but Heer's in a very difficult position 😔 as well. Now what's this about jhappis but I too would love to give one too our darling 😳 Prem. Oh and yes you are confusing yourself 😆 dear but no worries hota hai kabhi kabhi.

After reading all the sadness, I was so happy to see you put in that DJ-Balwant scene! Balwant didn't listen to DJ. This is like DJ's first defeat... I'll forgive Balwant for all the nasty things he's done if he tells his bro the truth, oh wait... AND kicks DJ out of his life. I'll throw a party then... 😃

Yep for once Balwant didn't listen to his evil wife....isn't just this a cause for celebration? But you're right....you never know what lies in the future 😉 and for how long this new and improved 🤣 Balwant shall remain. And if he does then we definitely gotta party 🥳 what say?

I'm so proud of Prem, he's doing everything to get Balraaj better. I dunno why, but out of no where this thought came to me. What if DJ shows Heer that pic and blames Balraaj's coma on Prem? *Aaaaah nooo think positive, don't give shafaq any new ideas*

Isn't he just the perfect son-in-law....haaye 😳 😍.....you know kimz once you put something into my head its very difficult to get it out. So yes it shall be better for you to refrain from giving me any such ideas....otherwise you never know with me 😆....I can do anything and everything *laughs evilly* hehe!

Yayy! Your putting Harman-Meher track in here. ☺️ And me is looooving it! Harman's a sweet heart too, I'm glad your bringing out his character too, aah these Juneja bro's are going to make me go craazy! Ahh Balwant and Vishaka had to interrupt the moment. And awww... Meher misses talking to Harman. How sweeet! That was my fave scene of today's update. 😃

Yeah I had been thinking of doing so for quite some time now...but it was at the same time quite a spontaneous decision taken much before the track was introduced into the actual show. Aren't I clever? Usually people would have wanted to see Preet-Meher together but I've always preferred the jodi of Preet-Ash. So I thought why not give this a shot as well and who knew it would turn out this great! I'm really glad 😃 you liked it btw.

Oh no no noooo... I think Heer should just tell Prem. I mean Prem's an understanding guy, right? Heer's a crazy girl, making stupid mannats. I mean she could've made mannat like i won't eat anything until Balraaj gets better. Or one of those BT ones, I won't take my hand off this diya until Balraaj gets better. But then again, this is ST so everything has to be unique here. *sigh* i just hope everything gets better.. 😳
Continue soon.. 😃 Seeing how quickly you put this update, i'm sure you'll continue soon.. 😳

What would be the fun in things 😈 if she told him everything clearly. Now after Wednesday's Premeer scene we all should know how much of an understanding guy Prem is. You can't get more understanding then that 😆. Now do enlighten me by answering how she would survive 🤔 if she went on a bhook hartaal? But yes that is so BT....and this like you put it is ST and we thrive to provide uniqueness through each and every part here 😉 at Shafaq Telefilms.

I know this isn't soon enough already but once I've replied to everyone's lovely comments, I'll put up the next part inshallah.

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Ahh i almost forgot to tell you about the part where Gayatri says that it'll be hard to handle Lalu.. That was hilarious.. 🤣

Ah good you didn't forget then. Truthfully I hadn't intended on making it sound humorous at all but it just tends to happen 🤣 where Lallu is concerned 😆 but when I look at it now it does sound absolutely hilarious.

Thanks so much 😊 for your feedback!

Originally posted by: angel82

Shafaq,

That was a wonderful part...Harman and Meher , now thats interesting....😊

Balwant went against DJ 😕

Heer trying to avoid Prem, can understand she's really worried abt her father's state and also

abt the mannat...Poor Prem, He's the one struggling...Heer should tell him abt the mannat if possible

that'll help things out for both of them....If She doesnt talk to Prem now, it really worries me how she's

gonna react when she comes to know He's the reason for Father's state....

Your doing just great...all the situations and everyone's reactions seem very genuine...
you have written it very well...
plz do continue soon

Thanks 😊 dear.....Harman and Meher track is interesting 😉 isn't it?

Yep Balwant went against DJ...but for how long ❓ even I cannot promise hehe 😆.

Yeah they are both in a very difficult position 😔.........woah I hadn't thought of that but it worries me as well on how she'll react.

I'm really glad 😃 you liked it. It means a lot 😳. I can't promise but I'll continue soon.

awesome pls continue .....balraaj better get well soon so we can hav more PH scenes!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

harman and meher scenes were really good
i liked the way balwant stood up 2 daljeet it atleast showed that he still cares about his brother

Thank you! I'm glad you like them 😃.....yeah no matter how selfish one becomes during times like this even the worst people 🤢......can't help but feel bad for their loved ones.

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

amazing nice
harman meher scene cute
do cont soon.....
thanks for pm

Thanks a lot 😊....and you're welcome dear. I'll try my best to continue soon! Can't promise anything though.

Originally posted by: ranrags

Poor Prem-Heer..hope Balraj comes out of coma soon..

Yeah their in a very difficult position indeed 😭. But will Balraaj's recovery help to bring them together 😉 or rather separate the two?

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

wow amazing yaar wonferful written no words to express just can say mindblowind and ya not last but the least will be waiting for next part

Thanks so much 😳....you're too kind 🤗. I don't really deserve this much praise. Now I'll have to update asap just for you!

Originally posted by: salma_786786

have to catch up Shafaq... sooo sorry... Part 13 already... its late now here... will read all three parts tomorrow...

Hey 😊....welcome back. Its so great too see you 🤗 back again. No worries at all....take your time hun but don't forget to read it!

I loved it, I feel sorry for Prem for some reason!

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sorry for the late reply!

First of all, I am SO mad at myself you have no idea!!!!!!!!!!😡

First of all im sorry Shafaq i wasn't here to read all your updates especially when you soo kindly dedicated many to me and others.... luv ya 🤗

Argh that Daljeet... i want to kill her here... but in the serial im kinna missing her... i have no idea why... i can't believe she is willing to disgrace her daughter like that... sooo disgusting... i knew it Prem didn't kiss Heer's neck... something smelled fishy to me... i applaud you on the way you created the suspense... i had me reaching the wall on whether im right or not 😆😆😆...

When that guy showed Balraaj the picture i thought ohhhh goddd why can't Premeer get married anywhere but THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for getting Premeer hooked 😆😆 no-one can split these two up now... its unfortunate about Balraaj but (Allah forgive me) im kinna glad he is out of the picture for a while... coz i don't think i can handle Heer misunderstanding Prem....

Mannat!!!! i can not believe Heer made that... why is she blaming herself/Prem and their relationship????

Shafaq hun i just love your FF... its sooo simple and the plot itself is sooo interesting... your keeping to the main characters and not adding new characters every 5 minutes like the show... PLUS your starting the Harman and Meher track... yayyyyy will be amazing to get some info on them...
i was sooooo shocked when i saw that scene with Harman and Meher in the library because i was rooting for Preet and Meher but i realised H and M aren't soo bad together... soooo this is why im excited about how your gonna come about with this new relationship....

can't wait for next part...
Great updatesss 😆😆 hun...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

hey very very vvvvvvvv gud....fantastically written.... its terrible to wait for next part...plz update sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn....plz plz......

wid love
PARTH😊

Thanks Parth Bhai and welcome to the FF 😊....I'm so sorry 😳 to have kept you waiting. I'll update very soon inshallah.

Originally posted by: pisces26

amazing part
harman and meher scenes were really good
how you are make story with so many character you are simply the best

Thanks a lot 😊....I'm really glad 😃 you liked the Harman-Meher scenes. I won't say its easy but inorder to make it as realistic as possible I try my best to include each and every character.

Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

thts such a coolio part, shafaq!!!! hats off, for doing it early, lol!!!!
awwww........seriosuly heer shouldnt be doing this....i dnt care abt the mannat and all, but she's closing up on prem - who's her love, husband etc!!! :S poor prem!!!!!! luved how preet was ready to take care of his PB, though!!!
ohhhh meher and harman!!!! how cuttteeee!!!!
update soon; hope ballu gets well!!!!

Thanks 🤗 for liking it dear! I know its difficult to understand but Heer herself is in a very complicated situation 😭 due to which all she cares for at the moment is her dad. I understand her behavior with Prem isn't justified but in her eyes there isn't any good reason for her father's sudden illness either.

Preet's such a darling 😳 isn't he?

Introducing Meher and Harman's love story was a very on the spot decision you could say but I'm pleased on receiving so much positive feedback.

I'll update soon but are you sure 🤔 Balraj's recovery will change things for Premeer? What if he begins to create misunderstandings ❓ between the two instead? It could be possible you know. Now I'm not revealing any future plans 😆....just pondering really.

Originally posted by: lian

Another amazing part👏&yes lil surprised to see the part 13 sooooo fast👍🏼

I feel very bad for prem,Heer's ignorence must b killing him how alone he ll b right now😔also understand Heer's feelings hope Balraj came out frm coma&every thing get sort outed with in part 15😳
It looks like all the Maan girl's r planning top bcom Juneja's Daughter-in-law😆😆

Thanks a lot 😊.....I'm sure you were surprised. I admit I'm a very lazy updater when it comes to this fanfic 😆.

Prem is indeed very hurt 😭 at the moment but so is Heer. Both for very different reasons yet justified reasons.

Aren't you a long-term planner....who wants everything to be okay within Part 15? Phir kya karoon gi main? I gotta torture you guys for longer 😈 no? Nah I'm joking.....I wanna see Premeer together just as much you guys.

Now when they already have prospective brides available then why look outside 🤣 haina? I'm thinking practically 😆.

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

awesome pls continue .....balraaj better get well soon so we can hav more PH scenes!!!!!!!

Thanks 😊....I'll be continuing soon....that too with a lot of Premeer scenes 😉 hehe.

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

I loved it, I feel sorry for Prem for some reason!
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sorry for the late reply!

I'm glad to hear 😳 😃....thanks! Feeling sorry for Prem is understandable and its okay....what matters is that you replied.