FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 27

Originally posted by: pisces26

awesome speech less you are showing every shade of live that is great as there is no sorrow how will
they come close in happy moment every one is there but in sad no one

Originally posted by: kimmu

Ahh yayy you continued... 😃 Like always, an amazing part. Now get ready for my lamba comment.. hehe..

Yeah I finally continued 😆.....sorry for keeping you waiting 😳 though! I'm always ready for your lambe lambe comments.....they mean so much to me honestly and so thank you very much kimmu!

I liked how you showed the two different situations, i felt like i was watching a serial, thats how nicely you described everything! Ok first of all, i'd like to say sorry for doing my balle balle dance when Balraaj went into a coma. I was like yesshh, no problems for Premeer. But you totally made my happiness just last for a minute. Heer goes and makes a 'mannat' that she won't consummate till her fathers perfectly fine. Grr.. I feel bad for Prem.

Its okay that you danced when Balraaj went into coma except if you want Premeer together than as per the current story-line Balraaj will have to recover. But then if he recovers who knows if he'll even approve of them being together. Haaye its all so confusing 😕. I feel bad for Prem as well.....it wasn't his decision after-all! But then again we can't blame Heer either! What have I done 😆 ?

Ok so what if Balraaj died? Would her she still have to go on with her mannat. 🤔 If that is so, then Heer you have left me no other option but to with Balraaj dies, or that he gets fit and fine, but just loses his memory.. hehe.. That would be so BT style.. except that never happens for the good guys, things only go in favor for the bad guys. So i guess if that happens it would be ST style, Shafaq Telefilms.. hehe..

Hmm I never thought about Balraaj dying.....now I'm wondering as to what to do 😍....don't put more ideas into my head kimmu....you may regret it later 😉....if the fanfic doesn't turn out like you expected it too. But like I said it looks as if Heer will only consummate her marriage to Prem if her father recovers so your only option is to pray for Balraaj to recover. Now loosing his memory 🤔 huh? Nah that's too BT style and I'm unique! But I'm definitely liking this ST 👍🏼.....I could even open up my own production house at this rate hehe 😆. Have I ever told you how much I love you and your ideas kimmu?

Heer's reaction was I guess perfectly normal, thought I hated it. I mean if this happened to me on the day of my wedding, err I'd be crying like a lil baby. Except my dad has heart problems so i guess i wouldn't be as shocked as Heer. I like how Prem just watched Heer as she grieved on her luck, and didn't want to bother her. Have I ever mentioned how much I love Prem. 😍

Yeah we can't blame Heer but can't help feeling sorry for Prem either. Its all so confusing 😕 ugh....I didn't realize whilst writing though. Anyone would react the way she did especially if it came as such a surprise and that too on what was meant to be originally a very happy occasion 😔. Though you said your father has heart problems and you wouldn't be as shocked......God forbid you ever have to face such a situation but at that very moment even the most prepared of people would become emotional and loose hope if all they were receiving were negative vibes from doctors. On a lighter note.....yes you have mentioned your immense love for Prem on a number of occasions but I honestly don't mind.....I'm all praises for him😳 myself.

I wonder how he's going to react at Heer's mannat. If he finds out. But knowing him he'd be ready to help Heer. *sigh* If only there were more guys like Prem in this world. I hated how Heer was trying to get away from Prem, I felt so bad for Prem right there. The poor guy gave up in the end and just decided to take her with him, and then talk to her. I just hope everything gets better, and DJ gets punished. Like biiig time.

Can't wait for the next part, continue.. whenever.. 😳

Lets just hope she tells him about it in the first place! Knowing Heer and how she's been sneaking around in the show like a detective tsk tsk....you never know 😆. He's definitely the helpful type but will he really support her in this which could even be a long-term decision? If only there were guys like Prem in this world in the first place 😆.....where can you find such guys so easily? Do let me know. Remember Heer's very upset at the moment....she's not pushing him away purposfully....hopefully she'll be back to her old self very soon. You know I had forgotten about DJ and her good for nothing husband all this while. Can you believe it? No one's perfect after-all. Thanks for reminding me 😳.....now I can deal with the too like I was planning on 😉..*rubs hands evilly* hehe.

The next update will be up whenever....I'm not good at fulfilling my promises so there's no point making them....sorry! Jokes apart....it'll be soon for sure. No set date though!

Originally posted by: ranrags

ahh poor Heer..hope Balraj recovers soon..and really liked Prem-Heer part..

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome amazing update
hope he recover soon
do cont soon....

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

That was great!
Have to read what happens next!
?xXx?

Originally posted by: lian

Good Job Shafaq👏👏i m a new reader of ur FF&i liked it😃but now felling sad😔Just wish soon u ll make
Balraj fine&Heer&Prem could live a happy&Peaceful married life

Originally posted by: angel82

That was very nice part.....Great job pal...

The whole part seemed soo genuine...Especially Heer's reaction to her fahter's state and Prem' efforts of
comforting her....
DJ see what you have caused !!! arghhhh.....Hope Ballu recovers in 24 hrs and lallu gets to play with him
again...

Ballu dear pz come back to your senses soon and clear the misunderstandings...Apna Prem is such a
sweetheart and Heer's such an angel, her prayers wont go unanswered.....

Shafaq eagerly waiting for the nxt part....

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

omg a coma? i hope he's ok!

i feel so bad for heer. hopefully balraj will wake up and the misunderstanding will be cleared
amazing update! can't wait to read the next one

Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

ohhhhh............the poor families......😭

i reallllllly do hope tht balraj comes out of coma...
ohhhh, poor heer n poor prem! i dnt really understand why she's truning away frm him, but i suppose she's
too worried abt her father!
gr8 prt!
cont. soon!