FF - Unconditional Love (Part 20 - Page 67) - Page 31

hey shafaq...its soooooooo nice.....plz show sum premeer scenes yaar....i dont want them to be alone....i mean if they ll be alone...like heer wid teji n prem wid her bauji then how ll they be able to talk to each odr...plz unite them soon....and plz end the sad momments sonnnnnnnnnnn...do lemme noe again when u update....


wid love
PARTH😊

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

amazing superb
do cont soon....
loved it 👏👏👏

Thanks 😊....I'll have to continue soon after so much praise 😆.

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

I'm glad 😃 you liked it.

Hello Shafaq..thanks for the PM..all the scenes were really good..specially the Heer-Prem scene..even though they didn't speak to eachother they both understood what the other was going through..and Prem is giving her all the space and time that she needs..truly it was nice..pls continue..

Hello, shafaq! Sorry me is late... I was sleeping... tehehee...

Yea school is starting for most of us, it started for me on monday, and I already have my first project. 😲 Aww your moving? Well my wishes are with you, and I hope you can get settled down quickly.
No Premeer scenes! Thats okay, if you can make it up with the upcoming parts then i;m perfectly fine. Just don't g on kdmhmd's road, where we barely get to see Premeer.. Thank god for these FF's, or else i would've forgotten how Premeer looked together... 🤣

I would've made you a banner, but I'm kind of in this phase were I can't think of 'how' to make siggies. Aah i really sucks, cuz whenever i open a blank image, my brain is more blank then that image... There's lots of good siggy makes here, someone will def. make you one..

Yesss! I was spared this time... No blushing.. woot woot!! Oh and talking about shabz, she beat me here too!! Nooooooooooooooooooooooo... Curse my ability of not staying awake. Now I think I should get on with my comment. 🤓

Oh god, even that teeny weeny Premeer scene was enough for me. You have no clue how much I love there eye-interaction. I can't help but repeat myself, i loove Prem! I love love loveee Prem. He is the most understanding guy ever. I feel so bad for him, he's going through so much. But today I felt bad for Heer too, she's going through a lot too. She doesn't want to hurt Prem, but she has too. I feel for the couple, I really hope things get better. Oh and btw, Prem on his laptop at 5:30 AM... kind of reminded me of myself in the summer... 🤣 Oh the good days...

Hmm.. Gayatri pouncing at the phone like a lion... 🤣 I'm sorry I couldn't help but laugh at that.... *Clears throat* Loved how you showed that Prem could'n't find his voice at first, he's become so dull. i could feel the emotions he was having, that helplessness he was feeling. He wanted to keep his wife happy, but she was sad. This time i couldn't help but wonder what Prem's reaction would be when he would find out that because of him, that picture, Balraaj went into a coma. It would kill him inside.

My initial reaction to Kiran taking Kul and the kids in the room. 'What am i doing in this fic??!! 😲'.. 🤣🤣🤣 Then I realized Kiran's a guy... kind of hard to digest since I've been living for 14 years now, as a girl. and this guy, takes up my name... 🤣🤣

I loved how Harman took Meher to the garden. When Teji said she wanted to take Meher to Balwants house with her, i was like noooo! Whats going to happen to Harman. Why can't Teji go alone? 😆 But anyways, knowing Harman [not much 😆] he would visit Meher daily, right? 😃

Preet-Ash part was just hilarious. Preet avoiding Ash, yesssh! Thats what Ash deserved, for being a part of that disgusting plan of DJ's. I really hope she falls in love with Preet, and then Preet puts her down baaad! She really deserves it for practically breaking a marriage. She should know how it feels to be ignored by the one you love. Well if that doesn't happen, then I hope she just spills her guts to Preet.. hehe.. and Preet being laxman fixes everything...

Oh yeaa! Balwant getting out of DJ's muthi! Fly Balwant, Fly the like a birdd!! Your finally freee!! Really hope DJ doesn't start doing evil things again, and sh finally starts getting defeated.. Me been waiting to see her kicked out and put to jail for a while... 😃

Oh and theres a new edition to my lambe comments. The prediction section... Its starting over here though. So I'll let Shafaq cut the red ribbon to the newly added addition...This is what I think will happen, I can garuntee I will most likely be off.. 🤣🤣

I think, Balraaj will be fine in about a few days. And when he wakes up, he'll take Heer home with him and talk about the 'dokha' that happened to them. Heer won't want to believe it, but goes a long with her father cuz of now she loves her father more than Prem. Prem breaks down, and finally puts his brain to work and wonders about the photo Ballu was talking about. He eventually gets to DJ, the awesome detective Prem is, and thinks of a plan to unravel DJ's real identity. And then DJ gets kicked out and Premeer live happily ever after. 😃😃

Anyways, continue soon. I really wanna know what you have in mind. 😃

Loved the update!

it was very nice. I am new to this forum and I love ur FF. I read all 14 parts. Eagerly waiting for part15. Hope u will update soon.

Originally posted by: shabo24

OK to start of....in reply to your reply to my comments....oppsie....me was confused.....I think I may have skipped that part or skimmed read it, cuz sometimes when you past, something weird happens, like the story/part you have written is split down the middle so I can only read the left side. Dunno how many more people it happens too....but those parts, I don't get ot read in detial....so I just get the gist of it....!😳

Aww doesn't matter....it happens with everyone. As for the part being split allowing you to read only a certain side.....I've come across this problem as well but I've always been able to scroll sideways. Can you not even do that? That's weird 😕......if it continues to happen with the upcoming parts then do let me know and I'll PM you the part separately. Perhaps that'll make a difference hopefully.

Awwwww, you dedicated it to me! That's very sweet of you! It's cuz of the lamba comment naa? 😆Well, keep in mind, that comment was the length of 13 comments....since I missed 13 parts! Will still try to keep my comments long!!!😃

Yep I dedicated it to you 😃.....and yes it was partly because of the lamba comment 😆. I can understand it was covering 13 parts altogether. What matters is that you take the time out to comment. Be it long or short. I honestly don't mind 😳 dear.

The lil Prem and Heer interacting was so pure in the begining! WOW! I was like....jodi ho toh asi! Prem just understood her so well and what she was going through. Speaking of that, poor girl. On the happiest day of her life she sees her father go through a major heart attack!

It really was very unfortunate 😔. Coming to Prem....he's a very understanding kinda guy. I'm really glad you liked the scene btw.

Loving the Prem-Gayatri converstaion. They honestly and truly care for thier well being. 👏Hats of to samdei jee! 👏Ohhhh, getting impatient are they....! Can't wait to see how that realtionship progresses!

I'm pleased I was able to portray the mother-son relationship the way I had wanted to.
🤣THAT PREET ASH SCENE.....was SOOOO FUNNY! OMG....I could completly see that happening!!!!😃🤣🤣Loving that!!

Now I just couldn't help it.....I had to include 😉 it.

Stupid DJ at the end...I honestly am prayign for her husband....he has no idea what he is playing with! I am sooo HOOKED! Intruging!!! Update soon! (No freedom this time)😉

At the moment he doesn't 😕 but lets see what the future holds. I'll update soon seeing as I have no freedom this time 😆 and I want you to be hooked 😈.

Ohhh, university eh? I started grade 10 this week....so I know what you mean about the same routune etc etc. Good luck!!!

No no not university 😆 at least not yet. I'm only 16! I'll be starting what's known as sixth form college here where I'll be doing my A Levels then I'll go to University. This lasts 2 years (Year 12 and 13) in total and some schools have it but unfortunately mine didn't. Hence the move. But I don't know why I'm complaining.....7 of my friends 🥳 are going to the exact same college. Thanks for your best wishes 🤗 though and you enjoy Grade 10!

Shabz

Thanks a lot 😊 Shabo!