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I can understand the frustration against Heer that's running in the section for the past couple of days...Trust me, even I am tired of listening to her not so intelligent dialogs...I think the writers are only focusing on Prem and Dirthchachi's dialogs...Rest everybody, including Heer, get the recycled stuff...Not faiiiir...š..Moreover, given the past record of the BT heroines, we are bound to be skeptical about this one as well...But so far so good, there isn't much to complain against her...If she was talking that way to Prem, understand her point of view too dearies...And please this section so far has been a wonderful place with no divisions, hair pullings and cat fightings...Lets keep it that way...rightooo...š³
Heres something for all those who are frustrated with Heer's keeping quite about her love...š³...At this point Heer confessing her love would be a little outlandish...So this is how I would like it to happen...
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There are just 4 days remaining before the weddings...Lalit is getting hyper about the same and making people run around and get things done and what not...He delegated everything to everybody else just so that he can sneak into the kitchen and gorge on those rasmalais that were kept in the fridge...Gaya3 also is at home to keep a watch on him, much to his dislike...Heer stopped working and hence she and Meher are at home too and she insists that Meher take rest in the outhouse itself, while she can go and help...
In the meanwhile the phone starts ringing....
Lalit: Gaya3 kaha ho bhai...zara woh phone utha lena...
G: Haa kyo nahi, aap bohot busy jo hai..
and comes and picks up the phone......and says....
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat....
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Preeem, mera Prem, (goes into a shocked state)
Heer who was just entering that room with a glass of juice that Lalit has requested her of, drops the glass and runs to Gaya3...Lalit too runs to the phone in a complete shocked state and listens to the rest of the message...
Heer starts shaking Lalit violently asking him what was it and why did Gaya3 take Prem's name...she doesn't even remember about her inhibitions , reservations and limitations...All she could think of was about Prem...Lalit finally, with a great difficulty,blurts out that Prem met with an accident and took a major blow on his head and need to be operated upon....All three of them rush to the hospital...Basically Gaya3 catches hold of Heer's hand and drags her along...
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Hospital:
Gaya3 and Lalit rush into the corridor where the doctors recognize them and lead them to the operation theater, where Prem was going through the surgery...
Heer becomes numb with the shock and drags herself behind them...She remembers the previous night's show down between her and Prem and how she deliberately hurt him again, just so that he will stop torturing himself with his love on one side and parents on the other...She remembers how he said 'I love you' and how she became so weak at her knees and how she had to collect the non-existent strength to combat the urge to reciprocate...She remembers all the things that she said to him to drive him away and feels even more terrible...She just wants one moment with Prem, just one moment, and she knew she can make everything alright....Suddenly she starts running to the OT...
Gaya3 understands the pain and distress that Heer must be going through...Lalit is in his own world and least concerned about anything else...Gaya3 walks down to Heer and walks her to the seats laid outside the OT and makes her sit next to her...Heer beggingly asks Gaya3 to save Prem somehow and make sure that he is alright...Gaya3 tells her assuringly that nothing can happen to Prem and he will recover in no time...
In the meanwhile, the nurses keep running in and out of the OT where Prem is being attended to, increasing their tension...
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The OT door opens and the doctors walk out slowly...They announce that the operation was a success and that they can see Prem from outside through glass doors, as he needs to take complete rest for one full day and then after that he needs to be in the hospital for another 2 weeks...
They leave a sigh of relief and walk towards the ICU where Prem was taking rest...Gayatri again takes Heer by her hand and makes her see Prem and pats her back in an assuring manner...Heer is by now beyond worrying about what others would think of her presence there or why she was soo concerned...All she wanted was a glimpse of healthy Prem and an assurance that he is going to be alright...
Lalit wants Heer to go home as everything is alright and also they need to inform the rest of the family about the incident...Heer leaves reluctantly with Gaya3 looking on helplessly...
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Juneja Residence:
Preet: Arrre ye ma kaha gayi??Aur Prem bhayaa..unko kya hua..aisa kabhi nahi hua pehle ki woh mere phone ignore kiya ho...
Harman: Preet, tum bhi na...you get too hyper about things...I think you have gone on Dad/bauji...
Preet: Helllooo, pleeeease...I am exactly like mom and Prem bhayya...You are the one who takes after your poojya pitaji...always thinking about self...
Harman: Preeeeeeet...Ok let me try bhayya's number myself...
tries and gets to the answering machine...
In the meanwhile Heer walks in, in a dazed state...She searches for dirt chachi...but finds Herman and Preet there and walks to them and slowly delivers the message....
Preet becomes unstoppable and Herman too not able to console himself, let alone Preet...Hearing all the commotion the Mr&Mrs.dirt chachi too get to know about the accident...
Dirthchachi: hai rabba ab ye kaunsi museebat aagaya..ab ye shaadiya kaisi hogi...*rolls eyesš¤¢*
She pretends to have fallen unconscious, as she was too tired and didn't want to run to the hospital at that point....
The rest of the people rush to the hospital...
Heer goes to her outhouse to find some solace in the presence of her sister Meher...
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Hospital:
Prem slowly opens his eyes and find Gayatri sitting next to his bed and looking on anxiously at him...She beams with happiness the moment she sees Prem regaining his consciousness...She holds his face delicately and kisses him on his forehead and rushes out to call for a doctor...
Prem recollects how he got there..how he was driving aimlessly thinking about his and Heer's showdown and how she was trying to push him away with her false pretenses of love for MM etc...He knew how much she was hurting and he knew he was the reason for all this pain being caused...For once,he wishes he could just make his dad understand where his heart is placed...
Gayatri walks in with the doctor and the doctor is very happy with Prem's fast recovery...He does his regular check up and leaves...Prem keeps looking at Gayatri and tells her in a feeble voice that he was so lucky that he was her son...He tells her that she shouldn't be worried for him, as with her on his side, nothing would happen to him...Gayatri starts sobbing uncontrollably and realizes for all the trust that Prem places on her, she hardly did anything to deserve that...She promises to herself that is she cannot directly bring Prem and Heer together, at least she will create an opportunity for them to be able to think more clearly...
Prem wants to ask his mom about Heer and if she was there to visit him...He somehow knew she was there...He knew she just cannot stay away...
Gayatri knew Prem was looking for Heer...She says that she needs to go home to freshen up and will see if someone else can come in her place to be with him in her absence...Prem wishes Heer was able to come, but he knew how far fetched it was..Gayatri calls home and speaks to Dirtchachi, asks her to send Ash to the hospital...
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Juneja Residence:
Dirtchachi brain washes Ash and sends her to the hospital...
Ash: uffff, ab main waha jake kya karoo...Woh Prem toh mujhse baat tak nahi karta hai, baat toh chodo, meri taraf dekhta tak nahi hai...kay boring aadmi hai..meri shaadi Preet ke saath kyo nahi...Ab ye musibat ko kaise taaloo......
She catches Heer walking past and suddenly gets a brillaint idea of sending her in her place to the hospital...
Ash: Oyee Heer, hospital se phone aaya hai, you need to go there...kuch kaam bhi karo yaar..hamesha aaraam kar kar ke done behan aur moti ho jaoge..huhhh
Heer was so thankful to hear that and didn't mind Ash's taunting one bit....Heer leaves for the hospital at once....š³
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Hospital:
Prem is just lying on the bed and Gayatri went to check with the doctors about his progress...
Suddenly he finds Heer walking into the room and he thinks that he was dreaming all that..But she really walks upto him and stands there staring at him with a lot of concern in her eyes...Prem realizes that it was indeed his Heer in real and not a dream...He smiles at her and assures her that he is fine and gestures her to be seated...She doesn't move and goes on staring at him with tears flowing uncontrollably...Gayatri sees this from outside the room and quitely leaves without disturbing them....
Prem gives his hand to Heer...She ignores it....She just keeps standing there without a word...
Prem: Heer, kab tak kadi rahogi....aao yaha baitho..mere pass..
Heer: Aap, aap ab kaise hai...
Prem: smiles gently..Oh good, I was wondering if you were the same Heer who keeps screaming at me...
Suddenly he gets emotional..Heer do you know who was with me during the times when I was unconscious???it was you..yes I was out of this unscathed, only because of your presence by my side...Thank You...
Heer is still crying uncontrollably...
Prem: Heer agar tum wahi pe kada rehna chahti ho toh theek hai, main hee aajaongaa waha tere paas.....and tries to get up from the bed...
Heer rushes to the bed and stops him from making any attempts to move from there...Prem catches hold of her hand and brings it closer to his heart and looks deep into her eyes and with another hand wipes her tears...
Heer tries to take away her hand but Prem doesn't allow it and when she tries to force herself out, he cries with pain*ouchhh*...Heer gets concerned and asks him where it was paining and if she should call for the doctor...He says yes its paining a lot, but no doctor can help and only she can help...Heer becomes angry and pulls away from him...
Heer: aap kyo mere peeche padhe hai???Kya chahte hai aap??Kyo aap mujhe chain se jeene nahi de rahe hai...
Prem: tu nahi jaanti Heer ki main kya chahta hu??kitni baar batao dammit...
Heer: Bas, ab bas bhi kee jiye...bohot ho gaya...Main MM ke saat khush hu aur mujhe meri haal pe chodiye...kyo cheenna chaahte hai meri bachi kuchi khushiya...
Prem: Main teri khushiya cheen raha hu, main??tumhe pata nahi hai woh MM kya hai...hazaar baar bol chuka hu mujhe teri khushiya sabse aimiyat rakhte hai...
Heer: maine bola bas keejiye...khushiya laana chahte hai meri zindagi me...aapko pata bhi hai meri khushi kya hai...kabhi poocha bhi hai aap mujhse ki meri khushi kya hai???bas keejiye ye sab...mujhe meri haal pe chodiye...main Manmeet ke saath theek hu...Aur aap be fikar apne zindagi me aage badiye..shadi kee jiye aur khush rahiye...
Prem: tumhe achi tarah se pata hai ki meri zindagi me tere bina khushi nahi hai...ab zindagi me ek hee khwaish hai..bas teri khushiya laake teri zindagi ko sawar du...
Heer: aap??Aap sawarenge meri zindagi ko??aap laayenge meri khushi...kya jaante hai aap mere baare me??
Prem: jab bhi main teri taraf dekhta hu tere aankho me nami hoti hai aur chehre pe udaasi...woh dard jo tere chehre pe ghar basa liya hai, woh mujhe bechain kar deta hai...Mujhe sirf us dard ko door karna hai teri zindagi se...mere yakeen mano Heer, isse zyada ab ye zindagi se aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe...
Heer gets moved...with tears rolling she says, chodiye in sab baato ko...meri zindagi ki khushi ab kisi ke bas me nahi hai...
Prem: tum mujhe batao na...
Heer: looking straight into his eyes...kya aap nahi jaante hai???
Prem: main teri muh se sunna chahta hu Heer...
Heer: main nahi bata sakti...aap bas meri peecha chodiye...
Prem: kyo nahi bata sakti ho...agar tum nahi bataogi toh main kaise jaan sakta hu...
Heer: lekin aapko pehle se pata hai, aap ko achi tarah se pata hai meri khushi kaha hai..aap sab jaante hai...jaante hai phir bhi bebas hai....main jaanti hu...aur aap bhi jaante hai...khair chodiye...
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Will update the last part in a bit...You have to forgive me for any mistakes in my hindi and also the last part was written in a hurry, so am not sure if there were any mistakes and bloopers...I will come back and review it, and make any necessary corrections...
Heres something for all those who are frustrated with Heer's keeping quite about her love...š³...At this point Heer confessing her love would be a little outlandish...So this is how I would like it to happen...
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There are just 4 days remaining before the weddings...Lalit is getting hyper about the same and making people run around and get things done and what not...He delegated everything to everybody else just so that he can sneak into the kitchen and gorge on those rasmalais that were kept in the fridge...Gaya3 also is at home to keep a watch on him, much to his dislike...Heer stopped working and hence she and Meher are at home too and she insists that Meher take rest in the outhouse itself, while she can go and help...
In the meanwhile the phone starts ringing....
Lalit: Gaya3 kaha ho bhai...zara woh phone utha lena...
G: Haa kyo nahi, aap bohot busy jo hai..
and comes and picks up the phone......and says....
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat....
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Preeem, mera Prem, (goes into a shocked state)
Heer who was just entering that room with a glass of juice that Lalit has requested her of, drops the glass and runs to Gaya3...Lalit too runs to the phone in a complete shocked state and listens to the rest of the message...
Heer starts shaking Lalit violently asking him what was it and why did Gaya3 take Prem's name...she doesn't even remember about her inhibitions , reservations and limitations...All she could think of was about Prem...Lalit finally, with a great difficulty,blurts out that Prem met with an accident and took a major blow on his head and need to be operated upon....All three of them rush to the hospital...Basically Gaya3 catches hold of Heer's hand and drags her along...
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Hospital:
Gaya3 and Lalit rush into the corridor where the doctors recognize them and lead them to the operation theater, where Prem was going through the surgery...
Heer becomes numb with the shock and drags herself behind them...She remembers the previous night's show down between her and Prem and how she deliberately hurt him again, just so that he will stop torturing himself with his love on one side and parents on the other...She remembers how he said 'I love you' and how she became so weak at her knees and how she had to collect the non-existent strength to combat the urge to reciprocate...She remembers all the things that she said to him to drive him away and feels even more terrible...She just wants one moment with Prem, just one moment, and she knew she can make everything alright....Suddenly she starts running to the OT...
Gaya3 understands the pain and distress that Heer must be going through...Lalit is in his own world and least concerned about anything else...Gaya3 walks down to Heer and walks her to the seats laid outside the OT and makes her sit next to her...Heer beggingly asks Gaya3 to save Prem somehow and make sure that he is alright...Gaya3 tells her assuringly that nothing can happen to Prem and he will recover in no time...
In the meanwhile, the nurses keep running in and out of the OT where Prem is being attended to, increasing their tension...
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The OT door opens and the doctors walk out slowly...They announce that the operation was a success and that they can see Prem from outside through glass doors, as he needs to take complete rest for one full day and then after that he needs to be in the hospital for another 2 weeks...
They leave a sigh of relief and walk towards the ICU where Prem was taking rest...Gayatri again takes Heer by her hand and makes her see Prem and pats her back in an assuring manner...Heer is by now beyond worrying about what others would think of her presence there or why she was soo concerned...All she wanted was a glimpse of healthy Prem and an assurance that he is going to be alright...
Lalit wants Heer to go home as everything is alright and also they need to inform the rest of the family about the incident...Heer leaves reluctantly with Gaya3 looking on helplessly...
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Juneja Residence:
Preet: Arrre ye ma kaha gayi??Aur Prem bhayaa..unko kya hua..aisa kabhi nahi hua pehle ki woh mere phone ignore kiya ho...
Harman: Preet, tum bhi na...you get too hyper about things...I think you have gone on Dad/bauji...
Preet: Helllooo, pleeeease...I am exactly like mom and Prem bhayya...You are the one who takes after your poojya pitaji...always thinking about self...
Harman: Preeeeeeet...Ok let me try bhayya's number myself...
tries and gets to the answering machine...
In the meanwhile Heer walks in, in a dazed state...She searches for dirt chachi...but finds Herman and Preet there and walks to them and slowly delivers the message....
Preet becomes unstoppable and Herman too not able to console himself, let alone Preet...Hearing all the commotion the Mr&Mrs.dirt chachi too get to know about the accident...
Dirthchachi: hai rabba ab ye kaunsi museebat aagaya..ab ye shaadiya kaisi hogi...*rolls eyesš¤¢*
She pretends to have fallen unconscious, as she was too tired and didn't want to run to the hospital at that point....
The rest of the people rush to the hospital...
Heer goes to her outhouse to find some solace in the presence of her sister Meher...
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Hospital:
Prem slowly opens his eyes and find Gayatri sitting next to his bed and looking on anxiously at him...She beams with happiness the moment she sees Prem regaining his consciousness...She holds his face delicately and kisses him on his forehead and rushes out to call for a doctor...
Prem recollects how he got there..how he was driving aimlessly thinking about his and Heer's showdown and how she was trying to push him away with her false pretenses of love for MM etc...He knew how much she was hurting and he knew he was the reason for all this pain being caused...For once,he wishes he could just make his dad understand where his heart is placed...
Gayatri walks in with the doctor and the doctor is very happy with Prem's fast recovery...He does his regular check up and leaves...Prem keeps looking at Gayatri and tells her in a feeble voice that he was so lucky that he was her son...He tells her that she shouldn't be worried for him, as with her on his side, nothing would happen to him...Gayatri starts sobbing uncontrollably and realizes for all the trust that Prem places on her, she hardly did anything to deserve that...She promises to herself that is she cannot directly bring Prem and Heer together, at least she will create an opportunity for them to be able to think more clearly...
Prem wants to ask his mom about Heer and if she was there to visit him...He somehow knew she was there...He knew she just cannot stay away...
Gayatri knew Prem was looking for Heer...She says that she needs to go home to freshen up and will see if someone else can come in her place to be with him in her absence...Prem wishes Heer was able to come, but he knew how far fetched it was..Gayatri calls home and speaks to Dirtchachi, asks her to send Ash to the hospital...
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Juneja Residence:
Dirtchachi brain washes Ash and sends her to the hospital...
Ash: uffff, ab main waha jake kya karoo...Woh Prem toh mujhse baat tak nahi karta hai, baat toh chodo, meri taraf dekhta tak nahi hai...kay boring aadmi hai..meri shaadi Preet ke saath kyo nahi...Ab ye musibat ko kaise taaloo......
She catches Heer walking past and suddenly gets a brillaint idea of sending her in her place to the hospital...
Ash: Oyee Heer, hospital se phone aaya hai, you need to go there...kuch kaam bhi karo yaar..hamesha aaraam kar kar ke done behan aur moti ho jaoge..huhhh
Heer was so thankful to hear that and didn't mind Ash's taunting one bit....Heer leaves for the hospital at once....š³
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Hospital:
Prem is just lying on the bed and Gayatri went to check with the doctors about his progress...
Suddenly he finds Heer walking into the room and he thinks that he was dreaming all that..But she really walks upto him and stands there staring at him with a lot of concern in her eyes...Prem realizes that it was indeed his Heer in real and not a dream...He smiles at her and assures her that he is fine and gestures her to be seated...She doesn't move and goes on staring at him with tears flowing uncontrollably...Gayatri sees this from outside the room and quitely leaves without disturbing them....
Prem gives his hand to Heer...She ignores it....She just keeps standing there without a word...
Prem: Heer, kab tak kadi rahogi....aao yaha baitho..mere pass..
Heer: Aap, aap ab kaise hai...
Prem: smiles gently..Oh good, I was wondering if you were the same Heer who keeps screaming at me...
Suddenly he gets emotional..Heer do you know who was with me during the times when I was unconscious???it was you..yes I was out of this unscathed, only because of your presence by my side...Thank You...
Heer is still crying uncontrollably...
Prem: Heer agar tum wahi pe kada rehna chahti ho toh theek hai, main hee aajaongaa waha tere paas.....and tries to get up from the bed...
Heer rushes to the bed and stops him from making any attempts to move from there...Prem catches hold of her hand and brings it closer to his heart and looks deep into her eyes and with another hand wipes her tears...
Heer tries to take away her hand but Prem doesn't allow it and when she tries to force herself out, he cries with pain*ouchhh*...Heer gets concerned and asks him where it was paining and if she should call for the doctor...He says yes its paining a lot, but no doctor can help and only she can help...Heer becomes angry and pulls away from him...
Heer: aap kyo mere peeche padhe hai???Kya chahte hai aap??Kyo aap mujhe chain se jeene nahi de rahe hai...
Prem: tu nahi jaanti Heer ki main kya chahta hu??kitni baar batao dammit...
Heer: Bas, ab bas bhi kee jiye...bohot ho gaya...Main MM ke saat khush hu aur mujhe meri haal pe chodiye...kyo cheenna chaahte hai meri bachi kuchi khushiya...
Prem: Main teri khushiya cheen raha hu, main??tumhe pata nahi hai woh MM kya hai...hazaar baar bol chuka hu mujhe teri khushiya sabse aimiyat rakhte hai...
Heer: maine bola bas keejiye...khushiya laana chahte hai meri zindagi me...aapko pata bhi hai meri khushi kya hai...kabhi poocha bhi hai aap mujhse ki meri khushi kya hai???bas keejiye ye sab...mujhe meri haal pe chodiye...main Manmeet ke saath theek hu...Aur aap be fikar apne zindagi me aage badiye..shadi kee jiye aur khush rahiye...
Prem: tumhe achi tarah se pata hai ki meri zindagi me tere bina khushi nahi hai...ab zindagi me ek hee khwaish hai..bas teri khushiya laake teri zindagi ko sawar du...
Heer: aap??Aap sawarenge meri zindagi ko??aap laayenge meri khushi...kya jaante hai aap mere baare me??
Prem: jab bhi main teri taraf dekhta hu tere aankho me nami hoti hai aur chehre pe udaasi...woh dard jo tere chehre pe ghar basa liya hai, woh mujhe bechain kar deta hai...Mujhe sirf us dard ko door karna hai teri zindagi se...mere yakeen mano Heer, isse zyada ab ye zindagi se aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe...
Heer gets moved...with tears rolling she says, chodiye in sab baato ko...meri zindagi ki khushi ab kisi ke bas me nahi hai...
Prem: tum mujhe batao na...
Heer: looking straight into his eyes...kya aap nahi jaante hai???
Prem: main teri muh se sunna chahta hu Heer...
Heer: main nahi bata sakti...aap bas meri peecha chodiye...
Prem: kyo nahi bata sakti ho...agar tum nahi bataogi toh main kaise jaan sakta hu...
Heer: lekin aapko pehle se pata hai, aap ko achi tarah se pata hai meri khushi kaha hai..aap sab jaante hai...jaante hai phir bhi bebas hai....main jaanti hu...aur aap bhi jaante hai...khair chodiye...
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Will update the last part in a bit...You have to forgive me for any mistakes in my hindi and also the last part was written in a hurry, so am not sure if there were any mistakes and bloopers...I will come back and review it, and make any necessary corrections...
Arjun
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