Heer's confession!!! (update4 added) - Page 2

Rakshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I soooooooooooooooo miss ur FF now yaaar😭😭

The part is gud. Its not exactly a romantic one. But a very emotional and touching one.... BT heroines wont understand until they see their lovers in hospital beds😆😆

Write soooooooooooon.... btw I luved how u write the intro with Lalit trying to steal all rasmalais😆😆

Rakshuuuu...you can make this into a ff yaar! Very nice start ufff...you have a tough job of making us all like heer 😆 These BT heroines ...u still have hopes with all ur experience with BT shows 😉 😆

And what is this even after watching Prem hurt she still didnt open her mouth and confess...make her confess fast rakshu...and make her run behind Prem yaar..my all times dream! 😆

lol typical balaji soap u have written !!!

good job!! 👏 👏 👏

OMG rakshu ..wow yaar great parts yaar 👏..and last part hindi wala ..don't worry koi mistake nahi hai ...main hoon hindi master 😆...bahut aachi hindi likhti ho tum 👏...really tumne rakshu kamal kar diya 😳 .. and yee heer ... pyar hai toh kehti bhi nahi ...kitne nakre kar rahi hai ..nahi main nahi main khush hoon 😆 chal ab jaldi se next part likh kar ijhaar karwa de 😉and next update kab likhegi ??

Please meri ek baat manegi ?? ...Tu ek FF start kar na 😳..i request u yaar ...😃...mujhe umeed hai tu manna nahi karegi 😳

Manpreet

O my Raks ... i just loved ur story line and that way Prem and Heer interacted ... Wow, Heer forgot everything and rushed to the hospital to find out about the wellbeing of the man she loves sooo dearly but cant confess, for whom she had waited all ehr life, but can belong to him anymore..... woh kisi ko kho dainay ka dard, aur woh Prem kay dialogs to heer when she was in the hospital, WOW.

Raks, u r a very romantic person yar and this writeup of urs really touched me. I enjoyed myself thoroughly ... keep writing, more and more. 👏

that was awsome, i am waiting for more. plz send it quick
luv iqra