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Hello people...thank you for your comments...here I am back with the next part of my story...enjoy reading.


Premeer SS

Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai


Part 3



Heer stood froze as she saw Prem stood exactly opposite to her tucking his hands inside his pocket...Heer blankly stared at him..."Why did he call her through Meher"? thought she.



"Wo...main...main jaanta hu ki tum kya soch rahi ho. Yehi na ke Maine tumhe yaha kyun bulaya hai...wo bhi Meher ke zariye..."


(Umm... actually...i..I know what are you thinking. Why did I call you that too through Meher...right???)



Heer noded confused...she didn't know what to say.



Prem continued watching her mute, "Wo darasal jo kuch bhi hua uske liye main maafi maangna chahta hu...I am really sorry".



(Actually I want to make an apology for whatever has happened...I am really sorry)



Heer(confused) : Kis liye?



(For what?)



Prem : Jo kuch bhi kitchen mein hua us baat k liye. Mera vishwas karo mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum chor nahi...I mean ke tum Heer ho.



(For whatever has happened in the kitchen. Trust me I didn't know that you were not a theif...I mean you are Heer)



Heer quickly interrupted him in between his talkings and said in a tone full of guilt. "Mujhe bhi maaf kar dijiye. Maine bhi bohut kuch keh diya aapko bina ye jaane ke aap kaun hain".



(I am sorry too...I had also said many things to you without realizing who you are).



Heer looked down in her guilt. Hhe was waiting for him...her Prem but when finally they met, they met in the most ridiculous way one could ever think of. She was embarrassed to the hell.



Prem understood her state of mind as same was his condition. So to end this feeling of awkwardness and embarrassment he tried to cheer her up.



Prem(smiled broadly) : Koi baat nhi...dono ki galti thi. Ab to sab clear ho gaya hai na...to...



(No prblm...both were at faults...but now everything is clear...so...)



He paused to note Heer's reaction. Seeing the soft smile playing on her lips he heaved a sigh of relief and proceeded..."To kyun na hum dosti karle?".



(So why don't we become friends?)



Heer(surprised but composed) : Thik hai...(Ok).



Prem(forwarded his hand) : Hi..main Prem Juneja...aapse milke achcha laga...kya aap mujhse dosti karengi?



(I am Prem Juneja...it was nice meeting you...will you be my friend?)



Heer(shook hands with him) : Main Heer Maan...mujhe bhi aapse milke bohut achcha laga...aur haan...main apse zaroor dosti karungi.



(I am Heer Maan...it was nice meeting you too...and yes...I will be your friend).



Both smiled at each other. They were about to say a few things thereafter but Meher's voice broke their little conversation.



"Didi...Prem ji...aap dono ki baate khatam huyi? Sab aapko dhund rahe hain", Meher whispers from behind the door of the terrace.



(Didi...Prem ji...have you both finished your talking? Everyone was asking for you)



Both turned and sense Meher was behind the door. Heer called her..."Meher aa ja".



(Meher.. come).



Meher came and gave her broad smile to her sister and her would be brother-in-law.



Heer : Tune unko kya bataya?



(What did you tell them)



Meher : Yehi ke aap dono so chuke ho. To isliye ab aap sach mein kamre mein jaiye aur so jayiye warna sabko ye pata chal jayega...(pointing to them)



(That you both have already fallen asleep. So now plzz go to your rooms and sleep... otherwise everyone will get to know this)



Prem smiled and wished both the sisters a good night..."Good night Meher and thank you"



Meher : You are welcome...and good night.



Prem : Good night Heer.



Heer : Good night.



Both went to their respective rooms and sleep with a smile on their face.



Next Morning



As Lalit had already decided that the Juneja's are going to settle in India so he had already contacted his manager in Ludhiana to make arrangements. Tomorrow they will go and see their hotel and also meet the staff.



There was also a very special reason for them for going to Ludhiana. Balraj and Lalit have decided that they should stay together in their House in Ludhiana which both the friends had constructed together. Now as they were going to get their children's marriage they were eager to live like a big happy family before Heer would become the Juneja daughter-in-law.



Everyone were busy packing their bags. As Ashlesha was also there so she was also helping them. Suddenly they heard the voice of Preet yelling his Kul Di's name. Kulraj immediately ran downstairs only to see her dad chasing his little brother.



Preet : Kul di..bachao...ye Eid ka Chand pagal ho gaye hai...khud to Chand hai hi..mujhe bhi bana denge.



(Kul di...save me...this eid ka Chand has gone mad...he himself is a moon and very soon make me also)



Lalit : Ruk ja...khotte de puttar...kaha bhaag raha hai.



(Stop you jerk...where are you running?)



Kulraj burst out into laughter...this was their everyday drama.



Kulraj : Bauji chhoriye na...kya hua?



(Dad leave it...what happened)



Lalit(breathing heavily) : Are dekh na isko...kya keh raha hai.



(See what is he saying)



Kulraj : Kya?...(What)



Lalit : Keh raha hai ke Prem ko aaj office bhej do. Pagal ho gaya hai ye...jaanta nhi kya ke hum sab aj Ludhiana jaa rahe hain aur waha Prem aur Heer ko ek saath ghar mein pravesh karna hai.



(He is saying that I should send Prem to office today. Doesn't he know that we all are going to Ludhiana today and there Prem and Heer should enter the house together.



Kulraj(glared) Preeet...



Preet whispered something into Kulraj's ear and she squealed in joy excitedly.



Kulraj : Bauji Preet bikul sahi keh raha Hain.



(Dad Preet is saying the right thing)



Lalit : Kulraj tu bhi.



(Kulraj you also).



Kulraj : Pehle baat to suniye.



(First listen carefully)



Kulraj continued..."Preet ne abhi abhi suna k Heer Ambala wale shiv mandir Jane wali Hai...aur waha se apnd ek saheli k Ghar Jo Ludhiana mein humare Ghar se thodi der pehle aata Hai...aur waha se aate aate use sham ho jayegi...ab hum Prem ko office bhejenge to wapas aate waqt hum usko bolenge k Heer ko apne saath leke aaye kyuki obviously tab andhera ho jayega aur hum Heer ko aleka to nhi chhod sakte na.



(Just now Preet has heard that Heer is going to the shiv mandir in Ambala...then from there she will go to her friend's house which is a few hrs before our house in Ludhiana and that she will return in the evening...now we'll tell Prem to go to office...and when he will be returning from office we'll tell him to pick Heer up as it'll be dark and we can't leave her alone right?)



Lalit thought for sometimes and then a smiled apprared on his face..."Pehli baar iss ullu ne kuch dhang ki baat Sochi Hai"...Lalit said.



(First time this son of an owl has thought something useful)



This plan was declared to everyone except our Premeer.



In the Evening



As per the plan Prem was called by Lalit and was asked to pick Heer up from her friend's house...here Teji also called Heer and told her that they were sending someone to pick her up.



Heer was waiting in her friend's house... suddenly door bell rang and a servant opened it.



Prem : Umm...jee Heer Maan yaha pe Hai??...main unko lene aaya hun.



(Umm Is Heer Maan here???...I have come to pick her up).



Servant nodded and ran inside the house after telling Prem to sit in the hall.



Within 2 minutes Heer was there along with her friend Geet...she was surprised to see Prem there.



"Hey hi"...a voice came from his back...he turned and saw Heer along with another girl..."she must be her friend"..he thought.



Prem stood from the sofa...Geet extended her hand to introduce herself.



Geet : Hi main Geet hun...Heer ki saheli.



(Hi I am Geet.. Heer's friend)



Prem(shook hands) : Main Prem hun.



(I am Prem)



Geet(excited) : Ohh waoo...to tum Prem ho... tumhare bare mein bohut suna hai.



(You are Prem...I have heard a lot about you).



Prem(feeling awkward) : Umm thank you..maafi chahta hu ki aapse baat nhi ho payegi abhi... actually andhera ho Gaya Hai..aur Ghar mein sab intezar kar rahe Hain...to ab humein chalna hoga.



(Umm thank you...but I am sorry... can't talk to you right now... actually it's getting dark...and everyone must be waiting for us...so we should leave).



Geet : Ohh haa zaroor.



Geet hugged Heer and whispered in her ear..."Pasand achchi Hai"



(Nice choice).



Heer blushed hearing it...she took a quick glance of Prem smiled at him...in return he also gave a small smile...they bid bye to Geet and headed towards the car.



In their way to the car Heer asked Prem..."Waise aap ko takleef Karne ki koi zaroorat nhi thi".



(BTW you shouldn't have bothered yourself).



Prem : Heer Kya ek baat keh sakta hu main aapse?



(Heer can I tell you something?)



Heer : Ji boliye?



(Yes tell)



Prem : Hum dost Hai na?



(We r friends right?)



Heer nodded her head positively.



Prem continued..."To tum mujhe aap kyun bol rahi ho?...dosto ko tum bolna chahiye na?"



(Then why r u calling me aap??...we should call our friends as tum right?)



Heer smiled and said..."Haan...to batao tumne kyun takleef ki?"



(Yes...so tell...why did you bother yourself?)



By the time Prem answered Heer's question they reached near the car...Prem opened the door and Heer sat on the passenger seat...Prem then got into the driver's seat and started the engine.



Heer looked at him with a look like you didn't answer my question...Prem smiled and said..."Bauji ka phone aaya Tha k tum apni saheli k Ghar pe ho...aur itni raat ho gyi thi k tumhe kisi aur k bharose chhodna sahi nhi laga...aur..." Prem paused for a minute.



(Actually dad called me and said that you had gone to your friend's house and as it was already dark so it didn't seem right to rely on somebody else... and...)



Heer : Aur???



(And??)



Prem : Main aana chahta Tha.



(I wanted to come).



Heer skipped a beat of her heart...did he just say that he wanted to come...come for her??...ohh god...what is happening???...why my heart is dancing hearing this...why is his presence give me so much happiness...before she could get any of the answers Prem coughed and Heer instantly turned towards him.



Prem : Wo seatbelt.



Heer mentally cursed herself for getting lost into him and quickly tried to fastened her seatbelt...but to her misfortune the belt got stuck...she tried her best bust couldn't do it...so Prem thought to help her...he leaned towards her and held her hands...a chill ran down the spine of both...their faces were so close to each other that they could feel each other's hot breath on their faces...Prem tried his best to concentrate on his work but this close proximity with Heer was affecting him too much.



Heer on the other hand felt nervous seeing Prem so close to her...she can smell her manly cologne...the sweaty cologne was making her crazy...but she also tried her best to control herself and not to lose herself to him.



After what seemed like eternity Prem finally became successful in tying her seatbelt and immediately got back to his seat...both gave a small nervous and awkward smile to each other and headed towards their home.



The rest of the journey went in silence with Prem and Heer stealing glances of each other time and again and blushing thinking of the recent close proximity of them.



Done with this part guys...plzzz do read and tell howz it???...next part will soon be posted...till then bye and take care.

Edited by Sunzz.Harshiti - 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

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Nice update enjoyed reading
Continue soon eagerly waiting
U r an amazing writer

Originally posted by: Sunzz.Harshiti

<font size="2">Hello
people...thank you for your comments...here I am back with the next part of my
story...enjoy reading.</font>



<font color="#ff0000" size="3">Premeer SS</font>



<font color="#1d2129"></font>

<font color="#3366ff" size="3">Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai</font>



<font size="2">Part
3</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
stood froze as she saw Prem stood exactly opposite to her tucking his hands
inside his pocket...Heer blankly stared at him..."Why did he call her
through Meher"...thought she.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">"Wo...main...main
jaanta hu ki tum Kya soch rahi ho...yehi na k Maine tumhe yaha kyun bulaya
Hai...wo bhi Meher k zariye..."</font>


<font size="2">(Umm...
actually...i..I know what are you thinking...why did I call you that too
through Meher...right???)</font>




<font size="2">Heer
noded confused...she didn't know what to say.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
continued watching her mute... "Wo darasal Jo kuch bhi hua uske liye main
maafi maangna chahta hu...I am really sorry".</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Actually
I want to make an apology for whatever has happened...I am really sorry)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer(confused)
: Kis liye?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(For
what?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Jo kuch bhi kitchen mein hua us baat k liye...Mera vishwas karo mujhe nhi
pata Tha k tum chor nhi...I mean k tum Heer ho.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(For
whatever has happened in the kitchen...trust me I didn't know that you were not
a theif...I mean you are Heer)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
quickly interrupted him in between his talkings and said in a tone full of
guilt... "Mujhe bhi maaf kar dijiye...Maine bhi bohut kuch keh Diya aapko
Bina ye jaane k aap kaun Hain".</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(I
am sorry too...I had also said many things to you without realizing who you
are).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
looked down in her guilt...she was waiting for him...her Prem...but when
finally they met...they met in the most ridiculous way one could ever think
of...she was embarrassed to the hell.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
understood her state of mind as same was his condition...so to end this feeling
of awkwardness nd embarrassment he tried to cheer her up.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem(smiled
broadly) : Koi baat nhi...dono ki galti thi...ab to sab clear ho Gaya Hai
na...to...</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(No
prblm...both were at faults...but now everything is clear...so...)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">He
paused to note Heer's reaction...seeing the soft smile playing on her lips he
heaved a sigh of relief and proceeded..."To kyun na hum dosti
karle?".</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(So
why don't we become friends?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer(surprised
but composed) : Thik Hai...(Ok).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem(forwarded
his hand) : Hi..main Prem Juneja...aapse milke achcha laga...Kya aap mujhse
dosti karengi?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(I
am Prem Juneja...it was nice meeting you...will you be my friend?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer(shook
hands with him) : Main Heer Maan...mujhe bhi aapse milke bohut achcha
laga...aur haa...main apse zaroor dosti karungi.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(I
am Heer Maan...it was nice meeting you too...and yes...I will be your
friend).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Both
smiled at each other...they were about to say a few things thereafter but
Meher's voice broke their little conversation.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">"Didi...Prem
ji...aap dono ki baate khatam huyi??...sab aapko dhund rahe Hain"...Meher
whispers from behind the door of the terrace.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Didi...Prem
ji...have you both finished your talking?... everyone was asking for you)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Both
turned and sense Meher was behind the door...Heer called her..."Meher aa
ja".</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Meher..
come).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Meher
came and gave her broad smile to her sister and her would be brother-in-law.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
: Tune unko Kya bataya?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(What
did you tell them)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Meher
: Yehi ke aap dono so chuke ho...to isliye ab aap sach mein kamre mein jaiye
aur so jayiye warna sabko ye pata chal jayega...(pointing to them)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(That
you both have already fallen asleep...so now plzz go to your rooms and sleep...
otherwise everyone will get to know this)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
smiled and wished both the sisters a good night..."Good night Meher and
thank you"</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Meher
: You are welcome...and good night.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Good night Heer.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
: Good night.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Both
went to their respective rooms and sleep with a smile on their face.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Next
Morning</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">As
Lalit had already decided that the Juneja's are going to settle in India so he
had already contacted his manager in Ludhiana to make arrangements... tomorrow
they will go and see their hotel and also meet the staff.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">There
was also a very special reason for them for going to Ludhiana...Balraj and
Lalit have decided that they should stay together in their House in Ludhiana
which both the friends had constructed together...now as they were going to
get their children's marriage they were eager to live like a big happy family
before Heer would become the Juneja daughter-in-law.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Everyone
were busy packing their bags...as Ashlesha was also there so she was also
helping them... suddenly they heard the voice of Preet yelling his Kul Di's
name...Kulraj immediately ran downstairs only to see her dad chasing his
little brother.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Preet
: Kul di..bachao...ye Eid ka Chand pagal ho Gaye Hai...khud to Chand Hai
hi..mujhe bhi bana denge.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Kul
di...save me...this eid ka Chand has gone mad...he himself is a moon and very
soon make me also)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Lalit
: Ruk ja...khotte de puttar...kaha bhaag raha Hai.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Stop
you jerk...where are you running?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj
burst out into laughter...this was their everyday drama.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj
: Bauji chhoriye na...Kya hua?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Dad
leave it...what happened)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Lalit(breathing
heavily) : Are dekh na isko...Kya keh raha Hai.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(See
what is he saying)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj
: Kya?...(What)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Lalit
: Keh raha Hai k Prem ko aaj office bhej do...pagal ho Gaya Hai ye...jaanta nhi
Kya k hum sab aj Ludhiana jaa rahe Hain...aur waha Prem aur Heer ko ek saath
Ghar mein pravesh karna Hai.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(He
is saying that I should send Prem to office today... doesn't he know that we
all are going to Ludhiana today and there Prem and Heer should enter the house
together.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj(glared)
Preeet...</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Preet
whispered something into Kulraj's ear and she squealed in joy excitedly.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj
: Bauji Preet bikul sahi keh raha Hain.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Dad
Preet is saying the right thing)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Lalit
: Kulraj tu bhi.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Kulraj
you also).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj
: Pehle baat to suniye.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(First
listen carefully)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Kulraj
continued..."Preet ne abhi abhi suna k Heer Ambala wale shiv mandir Jane
wali Hai...aur waha se apnd ek saheli k Ghar Jo Ludhiana mein humare Ghar se
thodi der pehle aata Hai...aur waha se aate aate use sham ho jayegi...ab hum
Prem ko office bhejenge to wapas aate waqt hum usko bolenge k Heer ko apne
saath leke aaye kyuki obviously tab andhera ho jayega aur hum Heer ko aleka to
nhi chhod sakte na.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Just
now Preet has heard that Heer is going to the shiv mandir in Ambala...then from
there she will go to her friend's house which is a few hrs before our house in
Ludhiana and that she will return in the evening...now we'll tell Prem to go to
office...and when he will be returning from office we'll tell him to pick Heer
up as it'll be dark and we can't leave her alone right?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Lalit
thought for sometimes and then a smiled apprared on his face..."Pehli
baar iss ullu ne kuch dhang ki baat Sochi Hai"...Lalit said.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(First
time this son of an owl has thought something useful)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">This
plan was declared to everyone except our Premeer.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">In
the Evening</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">As
per the plan Prem was called by Lalit and was asked to pick Heer up from her
friend's house...here Teji also called Heer and told her that they were sending
someone to pick her up.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
was waiting in her friend's house... suddenly door bell rang and a servant
opened it.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Umm...jee Heer Maan yaha pe Hai??...main unko lene aaya hun.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Umm
Is Heer Maan here???...I have come to pick her up).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Servant
nodded and ran inside the house after telling Prem to sit in the hall.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Within
2 minutes Heer was there along with her friend Geet...she was surprised to see
Prem there.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">"Hey
hi"...a voice came from his back...he turned and saw Heer along with
another girl..."she must be her friend"..he thought.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
stood from the sofa...Geet extended her hand to introduce herself.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Geet
: Hi main Geet hun...Heer ki saheli.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Hi
I am Geet.. Heer's friend)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem(shook
hands) : Main Prem hun.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(I
am Prem)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Geet(excited)
: Ohh waoo...to tum Prem ho... tumhare bare mein bohut suna hai.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(You
are Prem...I have heard a lot about you).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem(feeling
awkward) : Umm thank you..maafi chahta hu ki aapse baat nhi ho payegi abhi...
actually andhera ho Gaya Hai..aur Ghar mein sab intezar kar rahe Hain...to ab
humein chalna hoga.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Umm
thank you...but I am sorry... can't talk to you right now... actually it's
getting dark...and everyone must be waiting for us...so we should leave).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Geet
: Ohh haa zaroor.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Geet
hugged Heer and whispered in her ear..."Pasand achchi Hai"</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Nice
choice).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
blushed hearing it...she took a quick glance of Prem smiled at him...in return
he also gave a small smile...they bid bye to Geet and headed towards the car.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">In
their way to the car Heer asked Prem..."Waise aap ko takleef Karne ki koi
zaroorat nhi thi".</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(BTW
you shouldn't have bothered yourself).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Heer Kya ek baat keh sakta hu main aapse?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Heer
can I tell you something?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
: Ji boliye?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Yes
tell)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Hum dost Hai na?</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(We
r friends right?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
nodded her head positively.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
continued..."To tum mujhe aap kyun bol rahi ho?...dosto ko tum bolna
chahiye na?"</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Then
why r u calling me aap??...we should call our friends as tum right?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
smiled and said..."Haan...to batao tumne kyun takleef ki?"</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Yes...so
tell...why did you bother yourself?)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">By
the time Prem answered Heer's question they reached near the car...Prem opened
the door and Heer sat on the passenger seat...Prem then got into the driver's
seat and started the engine.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
looked at him with a look like you didn't answer my question...Prem smiled and
said..."Bauji ka phone aaya Tha k tum apni saheli k Ghar pe ho...aur itni
raat ho gyi thi k tumhe kisi aur k bharose chhodna sahi nhi
laga...aur..." Prem paused for a minute.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(Actually
dad called me and said that you had gone to your friend's house and as it was
already dark so it didn't seem right to rely on somebody else... and...)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
: Aur???</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(And??)</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Main aana chahta Tha.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">(I
wanted to come).</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
skipped a beat of her heart...did he just say that he wanted to come...come
for her??...ohh god...what is happening???...why my heart is dancing hearing
this...why is his presence give me so much happiness...before she could get any
of the answers Prem coughed and Heer instantly turned towards him.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Prem
: Wo seatbelt.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
mentally cursed herself for getting lost into him and quickly tried to fastened
her seatbelt...but to her misfortune the belt got stuck...she tried her best
bust couldn't do it...so Prem thought to help her...he leaned towards her and
held her hands...a chill ran down the spine of both...their faces were so
close to each other that they could feel each other's hot breath on their
faces...Prem tried his best to concentrate on his work but this close proximity
with Heer was affecting him too much.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Heer
on the other hand felt nervous seeing Prem so close to her...she can smell her
manly cologne...the sweaty cologne was making her crazy...but she also tried
her best to control herself and not to lose herself to him.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">After
what seemed like eternity Prem finally became successful in tying her seatbelt
and immediately got back to his seat...both gave a small nervous and awkward
smile to each other and headed towards their home.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">The
rest of the journey went in silence with Prem and Heer stealing glances of each
other time and again and blushing thinking of the recent close proximity of
them.</font>


<font size="2">



</font>


<font size="2">Done
with this part guys...plzzz do read and tell howz it???...next part will soon
be posted...till then bye and take care.</font>


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Thank you trisha for liking it😊😊 stay tuned for further updates.
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Originally posted by: ananyaguptha

Nice update enjoyed reading
Continue soon eagerly waiting
U r an amazing writer







Thank you ananya for liking it😊😊 actually i don't know whether i am a good writer or not😛😛 but thank you for your appreciation. Stay tuned fr further chapters.
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Hello guyz...well frankly speaking after the recent news i have no strength to contiue this story any more...the news just breaks our hearts💔 but of course we can't do anythig...But again asitisaPremeer story no matter what they'll always be in our hearts❤️. So i have decided to continue. Anyways thanks for your response on the previous part...let's begin the next part of this story...enjoy reading.

Premeer SS

Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai

Part 4

Next Day Morning

The maan's and the Juneja's were sitting in the dinning table having heir breakfast...Her, meher and Kulraj were serving them...all were eating with small chitchatiing...suddenly Lalit coughed and gained everyone's attention...

Lalit : main aap sab se kuch kehna chahta hun...khas kar ke Prem aur Heer tum dono se.

(I want to talk to you all about something ...specially to Prem and Heer).

Everyone was eagerly waiting to tart Lalit but Balraj spoke instead of Lalit.

Balraj : Abhi nahi..sab nashta karlo...uske baad study mein aana sab...wohi baat karenge.

(Not now...first finish your breakfast..then we'll talk in the study room).

After breakfast when everyone was heading to the study, Lalit nd Balraj stopped them from entering the study except Premeer..sow there were only 4 ppl in the room...lalit, Baraj , Prem and Heer.

Prem and Heer stood there silently while Lalit and Balraj stared at them for good 10 minutes.

Balraj : Heer...Prem tum dono bohut achchi tarha se jante ho k hum yahan kyun hain...ya phir yun kahun Prem k tum aur tumhari family yahan India kyun aaye hain.

(Heer..Prem you both know why we are here...or should I say why you and your family have arrived here).

Both nodded their heads as positive.

Lalit : To phir beta mujhe lagta hai k ab humein aur der nahi karni chahiye...hum tum dono ki sagai kar dena chahte hain.

(That's why we don't want to delay further...we want to do your engagement).

Premeer were shocked at this sudden announcement...they did know that they would be marrying each other..but not so soon...yes it's an engagement...but still it is the most important decision of their life...they didn't expect this to be happened suddenly.

Seeing their shocked faces both the fathers understood their dilemma.

Lalit : Hum jante hain k ye sab bohu achanak hua hai...aur hum ye bhinjante hain k tum humare faisle ka maan zaroor rakhoge...phir bhi hum tumse janna chte hain beta...kya tum dono is rishte k liye tayyar ho?

(we very well know that all this has happened all of a sudden...and also that you both will keep our words...bjut still we want to know your decision...are you both ready for this relationship?)

Balraj : Batao na beta...Heer puttar tu bata...tujhe koi aitraaz to nahi hain?

(Tell us beta...Heer you tell...you don't have any objection right?)

Heer looked at her father and saw the eagerness to know her answer which he was sure would be a positive one...ot's not that she didn't want to marry...or Prem is not good for her...it's just that this is a very big decision and she didn't know whether she was doing right or wrong...but when her father had chosen someone for her...he must have been the best...that much faith she had on her father.

Then there was Lalit uncle and Gayatri aunty who were no less than parents to her...Prem's siblings have already accepted her as their sister-in-law...she took a quick glance at Prem and saw his eyes were fixed on her as if waiting to know her answer which he was hoping to be an yes.

Heer lowered her eyes and said in a soft tone... "Main is rishtey k liye tayyar hun papaji.

(I am ready for this relationship).

Balraj was so happy that he immediately hugged Heer and blessed her...his eyes were beamed with joy.

Lalit looked at Prem and asked, Prem?

Prem held his father's hands and said, "Apne faisla kiya hai bauji...to phir main na kaise keh sakta hun...mujhe bhi manzoor hai.

(You had decided something dad...then how can I deny that...I don't have any problem too).

Lalit hugged Prem tightly followed by lalit and Balraj's hug.

While this much was happening inside the room...outside the room the two families were shown pacing here and there...all of them knew the reason of their private meeting...thought they somewhere knew Premeer's decision but still they were eagerly waiting for their meeting to finish.

As soon as the door opened, all looked at Lalit and Balraj who were smiling ear to ear...everyone gussed the reason and smiled wholeheartedly...Gayatri and Teji blessed their children while their siblings squealed in joy.

Preet(to Heer) : Thank God! Ab main finally aapko Heer bhabhi bula sakta hun...aapko pata hai kitni baar mere mu pea ate aate reh gya hai.

(Thank God!...finally I can call you Heer bhabhi...do you know how many times it has been slipped from my mouth.

Harman smacked him on his arm lightly and said "Tu nahi...hum teeno...tu, main aur Veera.

(Not only you but the three of us...you, me and Veera).

"Yes an enthusiastic Veera replied and hugged Heer.

"Tum log to bhabhi bulaoge...par mera kya...mujhe to Heer hi bulana hai na! said a gloomy Kulraj making a puppy face.

(You all will say bhabhi but what about me...i have to call her Heer only).

Everyone laughed at this and our Heer just blushed at her new found relations with her in-laws.

"Aur humein jiju bulane ka mauka milega...yeyyy chirped an over enthusiastic Meher nd a dramatic Ashlesha.

(And we'll get the opportunity to call jiju...yeyyy).

Hearing this our Prem also started blushing leaving the other feeling awww at this super shy couple.

"Ok ok...ab plzz sab chup ho jao...Gayatri...Teji parjai ji...Ballu aur maine socha hai ke hum kal hi in dono ki sagai kar denge...aur ek hafte baad shadi... Lalit expressed his desires to his family members.

(Ok ok...now stop all of you...Gayatri...Teji parjai ji...Ballu and I have decided that we'll do their engagement tomorrow and marriage after one week).

Gayatri(little worried) : Lekin kal kaise...mera matlab sari tayyariyan kaise hogi?

(But how will it happen tomorrow...I mean the arrangements)

Balraj cut her off and said..Chinta mat kijiye parjai ji...humne sab soch rakha hai...aap bas apne bahu ki swagat ki tayyari kijiye...baki hum par chhod dijiye.

(Don't worry parjai ji...we've already decided everything...you just concentrate on welcoming your daughter-in-law...leave the rest on us.)

Teji : Bhai agar aap ne soch hi liya hai to mujhe koi problem nahi...ab Gayatri behen aapki razamandi chahiye.

(If you have decided everything then I don't have any problem...now Gayatri your confirmation is needed.)

Gayatri looked at Premeer who were just standing there and watching their family members' happy and contended faces and went to them...she then placed Heer's hand on Prem's hand and blessed them...Main to kab s iss din ka intezar kr rahi thi...aur aj jab ye sapna pura ho raha hai to mujhe koi pareshani kaise ho sakti hai...kal hi hogi inki sagai she said in a happy and determined tone.

(I was waiting for this so long...and when the day has finally arrived...when my dream is near to be fulfilled then why do I have any problem...I have no problem with this...their engagement will happen tomorrow only.)

Teji (smiled through tears) : Chalo chalo bachcho...sab kaam pe lg jao...bohut tayyariyan karni hai.

(Let's go children...go to your work...so much have to do).

It has benn decided that Balraj and Lalit would invite the guests and Balwant(Heer's chacha) along with Preet and Harman would arrange the decorators, the caterers and the sweet vendors while the ladies would see the clothes and jwellery...Kulraj and Ashlesha have been asked to make Heer ready for the engagement.

Ashlesha : But Kul di...humne sagai ki shopping tak nahi ki...Heer didi apni hi sagai mein purane kapde pehenengi kya?

(But Kul di we haven't done shopping yet...will Heer didi wear old dresses on her own engagement?)

Kulraj : Arey haan..(To gayatri) maa...Ashlesha thik kah rahi hai...humne shopping to ki hi nahi.

(Exactly...Ashlesha is right...we haven't done shopping).

Gayatri : Koi baat nahi...aaj lunch ke baad hum shopping karne chalet hai...jisko jo kharidna hai kharid lena.

(Ok...then we'll go for shopping after lunch...you can buy whatever you wish.)

Meher and Ashlesha : Ohh thank you chichi..you r the best.

All had lunch excitedly and then the ladies went to get ready for going to shopping...Prem was about to go to his room along with his bauji to discuss some business matter but Gayatri stooped him.

Gayatri : Are aap dono kahan jaa rahe hain?

(Where are you both going?)

Lalit : Wo business ka kuch kaam hai...hum bas wohi discuss karne jaa rahe the Prem ke room mein.

(There's some problem in business...we are just going to Prem's room to discuss the matter).

Gayatri : Aapko jana hai to jaiye...but Prem tu humare saath jayega...are bhai teri sagai hai to tujhe bhi to shopping ki zaroorat hai.

(You can go if you wish but Prem...you are going with us...it's your engagement and you need some shopping too.

Prem replied protesting his mother... "Lekin maa...main wahan jake kya karunga...aap log hi karo na shopping.

(But ma...what shall I do there...you guyz carry on with your shopping).

Gayatri slapped her own head at her son's innocence "Maine keh diya na ke tu jayega bas to final...aur waise bhi har ladki chahti hai ke uska hone wala pati shadi ke har function mein uske saath rahe...aur uske liye kapde chune...to Heer bhi to yehi chaahti hogi na.

(I had told you na that you are coming...so that's final...and btw every girl wants her to be husband with her in every wedding finction...and select the dresses for her...Heer too would have wanted this).

Prem replied blushingly "Ji ma...main bas tayyar hoke aata hun.

(Yes ma...I'll go and get ready).

Later that afternoon when all of them got ready at almost 4, they had decided that they will go in two different cars as all of them won't fit in one.

Gayatri pushed Heer towards Prem and instructed Prem that they will go together as there was no space in the other car...Prem thought of going with his mother and sisters as it will be really awkward to sit alone with Heer...but Gayatri was Gayatri...she literally pushed the two of them and deliberately told Prem the longest route so that they could spend some more time alone while going to the mall.

Prem nodded and went to the passenger's side and opened the door for Heer...Heet quietly sat on her seat and mumbled a thank you...Prem then quickly entered the driver's seat and both headed to the mall.

The journey started in utter silence...both stole glances at each other but couldn't say anything...at last the boring silence was broken by Prem...he cleared his throat and nervously asked Heer...Kyat um isse khush ho?

(Are you happy with it?)

Heer looked at him in utter confusion... "What does he trying to say? she thought.

Prem understood and cleared her confusion... "I mean ye shadi...tum khush ho na?

(This wedding...you are happy...aren't you?)

Heer lowered her eyelashes and nodded yes with slight hint of red on her cheeks...Prem smiled and fel relieved.

"Aur tum? Heer asked wanting o be sure of his decision.

(And You?)

Prem immediately replied.. "Off course...I am very happy...but immediatey cursed himself under his breath for being so excited in front of her... "What will she think of me..how desperate I am he thought.

"Ummm...mera..mera wo matlab nahi tha Prem stammered embarrassingly.

Heer saw his stammering and contolled her laughter...she thought of playing along and tease him.

Heer(trying to be shocked and made a crying face) : Kya...iska matlab tum khush nahi ho?

(What!!!...that means you aren't happy?

Prem panicked seeing her sad face... "Nahi nahi...mera wo matlab nahi tha...main to bas...wo main...

He again stammered giving explanation to her and she, not being able to control herself, burst into laughter... "Ohh Prem I was just teasing you...you don't have to explain...hahaha...look at your face.

Prem felt relieved seeing her laughing wholeheartedly and said being embarrassed "Thanks...mmain to bas yehi kehna chahta tha ke main khush hun.

(Thanks...I was just trying to say that I am happy).

Finally the awkwardness between the two was broken and they started talking at least as friends...but there's more to go...from friends to lovers to soul mates till their last breath.

Premeer reached the mall almost half-an hour late than their family...when they reached there, their sisters started teasing them of taking the advantage of the situation and spending alone time with Heer...and our Premeer blushed profusely...at last Gayatri had to interefere between them to stop the teasing session.

Gayatri : Achacha achha bohut ho gaya...ab chalo.

(Ok Ok enough...now let's go).

All the ladies started their shopping and our bechara Prem stared at them and sighed...he just excused himself to attend a call...when he returned his eyes caught the most beautiful sight...there his Heer was standing in a maroon lehenga choli... she was looking breathtakingly beautiful...he, for the first time in his life, saw a girl with a different emotion other than the brotherly love towards his sisters.

Heer tried a maroon lehenga which she saw Prem was admiring secretly some times ago.



Flashback-



After they enter the ladies section Gayatri asked Prem to select a dress for Heer.



Gayatri : Prem Meri bahu k liye koi achchi si dress chun.



(Prem select a beautiful dress for my daughter-in-law)



Prem : Main kya kahun ma...jaisa Heer chahe.



(What i will say ma...anything what Heer likes)



Gayatri : But beta...



She was cut off by Heer who undestood his shyness.. "koi baat nhi chachi ji".I



(Not a problm aunty).



Flashback Ends.



She wanted him to gave it to her...but she knew he was not like the other guys who just run around girls...it would be difficult for him...so she herself told that she liked it and wanted to try it.



The other ladies also shopped for themselves...now they were in the men's section...Meher, Veera and Ashlesha wanted some snacks so they headed to the food court...so now only Gayatri, Kulraj and Premeer were there.



Gayatri : Heer beta...Chal ab Prem k liye koi achchi si sherwani chun taki Mera beta bilkul shehzada lage.



(Heer... c'mon...select a perfect sherwani for my son so that he will look like a prince).



Kulraj(smiled) : Maa...aapka beta to pehle se hi shehzada hai.



(Ma your son is already a prince).



All laugh at this...later Heer chose a maroon sherwani with some work on it which Prem was silently hoping to be chosen, matching to her own dress.



Prem liked it very much...after that all gathered around the food court to have some tea or coffee...after the food session they enter the jewelry shop to buy the engagement rings.




Gayatri told Premeer that they will shop differently so that the rings would be s surprise for both.



Soon their shopping was over...it was already 7 p.m. and they decided to return to home as tomorrow is a big day and all need a proper meal and rest tonight.



Done with this part guys...plz do read and tell howz it...plzz feel free to criticize and also give suggestions...next part will be posted soon...till then bye and take care.




Love,

#Sunayana

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I haven't read the entire update as yet(due to time constraints, my finals are coming up) but I've really liked the concept and the scenerios so far.
Also, I wanted to appreciate and thank you for continuing the story.

Thank you so much.
Love
Shwetasri
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#59

Originally posted by: -Shwet-

I haven't read the entire update as yet(due to time constraints, my finals are coming up) but I've really liked the concept and the scenerios so far.

Also, I wanted to appreciate and thank you for continuing the story.

Thank you so much.
Love
Shwetasri



Shweta, First of all thank you for appreciating my hard work. And Don't worry exms are important so concentrate on that...you can read and comment later...no problem.

All the best for your exams👍🏼

P.S. - I will be waiting for your comments😊😊


Love you Too,

Sunayana




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<font size="3">Hello guyz...well frankly speaking after the recent news i have no strength to contiue this story any more...the news just breaks our hearts💔but of course we can't do anythig...But again asitisaPremeer story no matter what they'll always be in our hearts❤️. So i have decided to continue.Anyways thanks for your response on the previous part...let's begin
the next part of this story...enjoy reading.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Premeer SS</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Part 4</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Next Day Morning</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">The maan's and the Juneja's were sitting in the dinning
table having heir breakfast...Her, meher and Kulraj were serving them...all were
eating with small chitchatiing...suddenly Lalit coughed and gained everyone's
attention...</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Lalit : main aap sab se kuch kehna chahta hun...khas kar ke
Prem aur Heer tum dono se.</font>


<font size="3">(I want to talk to you all about something ...specially to
Prem and Heer).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Everyone was eagerly waiting to tart Lalit but Balraj spoke
instead of Lalit.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Balraj : Abhi nahi..sab nashta karlo...uske baad study mein
aana sab...wohi baat karenge.</font>


<font size="3">(Not now...first finish your breakfast..then we'll talk in the
study room).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">After breakfast when everyone was heading to the study,
Lalit nd Balraj stopped them from entering the study except Premeer..sow there were only 4 ppl in the
room...lalit, Baraj , Prem and Heer.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem and Heer stood there silently while Lalit and Balraj
stared at them for good 10 minutes.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Balraj : Heer...Prem tum dono bohut achchi tarha se jante ho k
hum yahan kyun hain...ya phir yun kahun Prem k tum aur tumhari family yahan India
kyun aaye hain.</font>


<font size="3">(Heer..Prem you both know why we are here...or should I say
why you and your family have arrived here).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Both nodded their heads as positive.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Lalit : To phir beta mujhe lagta hai k ab humein aur der
nahi karni chahiye...hum tum dono ki sagai kar dena chahte hain.</font>


<font size="3">(That's why we don't want to delay further...we want to do
your engagement).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Premeer were shocked at this sudden announcement...they did
know that they would be marrying each other..but not so soon...yes it's an
engagement...but still it is the most important decision of their life...they
didn't expect this to be happened suddenly.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Seeing their shocked faces both the fathers understood their
dilemma.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Lalit : Hum jante hain k ye sab bohu achanak hua hai...aur
hum ye bhinjante hain k tum humare faisle ka maan zaroor rakhoge...phir bhi hum
tumse janna chte hain beta...kya tum dono is rishte k liye tayyar ho?</font>


<font size="3">(we very well know that all this has happened all of a
sudden...and also that you both will keep our words...bjut still we want to know
your decision...are you both ready for this relationship?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Balraj : Batao na beta...Heer puttar tu bata...tujhe koi
aitraaz to nahi hain?</font>


<font size="3">(Tell us beta...Heer you tell...you don't have any objection
right?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer looked at her father and saw the eagerness to know her
answer which he was sure would be a positive one...ot's not that she didn't want
to marry...or Prem is not good for her...it's just that this is a very big
decision and she didn't know whether she was doing right or wrong...but when her
father had chosen someone for her...he must have been the best...that much faith
she had on her father.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Then there was Lalit uncle and Gayatri aunty who were no
less than parents to her...Prem's siblings have already accepted her as their
sister-in-law...she took a quick glance at Prem and saw his eyes were fixed on
her as if waiting to know her answer which he was hoping to be an yes.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer lowered her eyes and said in a soft tone... "Main is
rishtey k liye tayyar hun papaji.</font>


<font size="3">(I am ready for this relationship).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Balraj was so happy that he immediately hugged Heer and
blessed her...his eyes were beamed with joy.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Lalit looked at Prem and asked, Prem?</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem held his father's hands and said, "Apne faisla kiya hai bauji...to phir main na
kaise keh sakta hun...mujhe bhi manzoor hai.</font>


<font size="3">(You had decided something dad...then how can I deny that...I
don't have any problem too).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Lalit hugged Prem tightly followed by lalit and Balraj's
hug.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">While this much was happening inside the room...outside the
room the two families were shown pacing
here and there...all of them knew the reason of their private
meeting...thought they somewhere knew Premeer's decision but still they were
eagerly waiting for their meeting to finish.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">As soon as the door opened, all looked at Lalit and Balraj
who were smiling ear to ear...everyone gussed the reason and smiled
wholeheartedly...Gayatri and Teji blessed their children while their siblings
squealed in joy.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Preet(to Heer) : Thank God! Ab main finally aapko Heer
bhabhi bula sakta hun...aapko pata hai kitni baar mere mu pea ate aate reh gya
hai.</font>


<font size="3">(Thank God!...finally I can call you Heer bhabhi...do you know
how many times it has been slipped from my mouth.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Harman smacked him on his arm lightly and said "Tu nahi...hum
teeno...tu, main aur Veera.</font>


<font size="3">(Not only you but the three of us...you, me and Veera).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">"Yes an enthusiastic Veera replied and hugged Heer.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">"Tum log to bhabhi bulaoge...par mera kya...mujhe to Heer hi
bulana hai na! said a gloomy Kulraj making a puppy face.</font>


<font size="3">(You all will say bhabhi but what about me...i have to call
her Heer only).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Everyone laughed at this and our Heer just blushed at her
new found relations with her in-laws.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">"Aur humein jiju bulane ka mauka milega...yeyyy chirped an
over enthusiastic Meher nd a dramatic Ashlesha.</font>


<font size="3">(And we'll get the opportunity to call jiju...yeyyy).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Hearing this our Prem also started blushing leaving the
other feeling awww at this super shy couple.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">"Ok ok...ab plzz sab chup ho jao...Gayatri...Teji parjai ji...Ballu
aur maine socha hai ke hum kal hi in dono ki sagai kar denge...aur ek hafte baad
shadi... Lalit expressed his desires to his family members.</font>


<font size="3">(Ok ok...now stop all of you...Gayatri...Teji parjai ji...Ballu and
I have decided that we'll do their engagement tomorrow and marriage after one
week).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri(little worried) : Lekin kal kaise...mera matlab sari
tayyariyan kaise hogi?</font>


<font size="3">(But how will it happen tomorrow...I mean the arrangements)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Balraj cut her off and said..Chinta mat kijiye parjai ji...humne
sab soch rakha hai...aap bas apne bahu ki swagat ki tayyari kijiye...baki hum par
chhod dijiye.</font>


<font size="3">(Don't worry parjai ji...we've already decided everything...you
just concentrate on welcoming your daughter-in-law...leave the rest on us.)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Teji : Bhai agar aap ne soch hi liya hai to mujhe koi
problem nahi...ab Gayatri behen aapki razamandi chahiye.</font>


<font size="3">(If you have decided everything then I don't have any
problem...now Gayatri your confirmation is needed.)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri looked at Premeer who were just standing there and
watching their family members' happy and contended faces and went to them...she then placed Heer's
hand on Prem's hand and blessed them...Main to kab s iss din ka intezar kr rahi
thi...aur aj jab ye sapna pura ho raha hai to mujhe koi pareshani kaise ho sakti
hai...kal hi hogi inki sagai she said in a happy and determined tone.</font>


<font size="3">(I was waiting for this so long...and when the day has finally
arrived...when my dream is near to be fulfilled then why do I have any problem...I
have no problem with this...their engagement will happen tomorrow only.)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Teji (smiled through tears) : Chalo chalo bachcho...sab kaam
pe lg jao...bohut tayyariyan karni hai.</font>


<font size="3">(Let's go children...go to your work...so much have to do).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">It has benn decided that Balraj and Lalit would invite the
guests and Balwant(Heer's chacha) along with Preet and Harman would arrange the
decorators, the caterers and the sweet vendors while the ladies would see the
clothes and jwellery...Kulraj and Ashlesha have been asked to make Heer ready
for the engagement.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Ashlesha : But Kul di...humne sagai ki shopping tak nahi
ki...Heer didi apni hi sagai mein purane kapde pehenengi kya?</font>


<font size="3">(But Kul di we haven't done shopping yet...will Heer didi wear
old dresses on her own engagement?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Kulraj : Arey haan..(To gayatri) maa...Ashlesha thik kah rahi
hai...humne shopping to ki hi nahi.</font>


<font size="3">(Exactly...Ashlesha is right...we haven't done shopping).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri : Koi baat nahi...aaj lunch ke baad hum shopping karne
chalet hai...jisko jo kharidna hai kharid lena.</font>


<font size="3">(Ok...then we'll go for shopping after lunch...you can buy whatever
you wish.)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Meher and Ashlesha : Ohh thank you chichi..you r the best.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">All had lunch excitedly and then the ladies went to get
ready for going to shopping...Prem was about to go to his room along with his
bauji to discuss some business matter but Gayatri stooped him.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri : Are aap dono kahan jaa rahe hain?</font>


<font size="3">(Where are you both going?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Lalit : Wo business ka kuch kaam hai...hum bas wohi discuss
karne jaa rahe the Prem ke room mein.</font>


<font size="3">(There's some problem in business...we are just going to
Prem's room to discuss the matter).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri : Aapko jana hai to jaiye...but Prem tu humare saath
jayega...are bhai teri sagai hai to tujhe bhi to shopping ki zaroorat hai.</font>


<font size="3">(You can go if you wish but Prem...you are going with us...it's
your engagement and you need some shopping too.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem replied protesting his mother... "Lekin maa...main wahan
jake kya karunga...aap log hi karo na shopping.</font>


<font size="3">(But ma...what shall I do there...you guyz carry on with your
shopping).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri slapped her own head at her son's innocence "Maine
keh diya na ke tu jayega bas to final...aur waise bhi har ladki chahti hai ke
uska hone wala pati shadi ke har function mein uske saath rahe...aur uske liye
kapde chune...to Heer bhi to yehi chaahti hogi na.</font>


<font size="3">(I had told you na that you are coming...so that's final...and
btw every girl wants her to be husband with her in every wedding finction...and
select the dresses for her...Heer too would have wanted this).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem replied blushingly "Ji ma...main bas tayyar hoke aata
hun.</font>


<font size="3">(Yes ma...I'll go and get ready).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Later that afternoon when all of them got ready at almost 4,
they had decided that they will go in two different cars as all of them won't
fit in one.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri pushed Heer towards Prem and instructed Prem that
they will go together as there was no space in the other car...Prem thought of
going with his mother and sisters as it will be really awkward to sit alone
with Heer...but Gayatri was Gayatri...she literally pushed the two of them and
deliberately told Prem the longest route so that they could spend some more
time alone while going to the mall.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem nodded and went to the passenger's side and opened the
door for Heer...Heet quietly sat on her seat and mumbled a thank you...Prem then
quickly entered the driver's seat and both headed to the mall.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">The journey started in utter silence...both stole glances at
each other but couldn't say anything...at last the boring silence was broken by
Prem...he cleared his throat and nervously asked
Heer...Kyat um isse khush ho?</font>


<font size="3">(Are you happy with it?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer looked at him in utter confusion... "What does he trying
to say? she thought.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem understood and cleared her confusion... "I mean ye
shadi...tum khush ho na?</font>


<font size="3">(This wedding...you are happy...aren't you?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer lowered her eyelashes and nodded yes with slight hint
of red on her cheeks...Prem smiled and fel relieved.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">"Aur tum? Heer asked wanting o be sure of his decision.</font>


<font size="3">(And You?)</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem immediately replied.. "Off course...I am very happy...but
immediatey cursed himself under his breath for being so excited in front of
her... "What will she think of me..how desperate I am he thought.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">"Ummm...mera..mera wo matlab nahi tha Prem stammered
embarrassingly.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer saw his
stammering and contolled her laughter...she thought of playing along and tease
him.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer(trying to be shocked and made a crying face) : Kya...iska
matlab tum khush nahi ho?</font>


<font size="3">(What!!!...that means you aren't happy?</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem panicked seeing her sad face... "Nahi nahi...mera wo matlab
nahi tha...main to bas...wo main...</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">He again stammered giving explanation to her and she, not
being able to control herself, burst into laughter... "Ohh Prem I was just
teasing you...you don't have to explain...hahaha...look at your face.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Prem felt relieved seeing her laughing wholeheartedly and
said being embarrassed "Thanks...mmain to bas yehi kehna chahta tha ke main khush
hun.</font>


<font size="3">(Thanks...I was just trying to say that I am happy).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Finally the awkwardness between the two was broken and they
started talking at least as friends...but there's more to go...from friends to
lovers to soul mates till their last breath.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Premeer reached the mall almost half-an hour late than their
family...when they reached there, their sisters started teasing them of taking
the advantage of the situation and spending alone time with Heer...and our
Premeer blushed profusely...at last Gayatri had to interefere between them to
stop the teasing session.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Gayatri : Achacha achha bohut ho gaya...ab chalo.</font>


<font size="3">(Ok Ok enough...now let's go).</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">All the ladies started their shopping and our bechara Prem
stared at them and sighed...he just excused himself to attend a call...when he
returned his eyes caught the most beautiful sight...there his Heer was standing
in a maroon lehenga choli... she was looking breathtakingly beautiful...he, for the first
time in his life, saw a girl with a different emotion other than the brotherly
love towards his sisters.</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Heer
tried a maroon lehenga which she saw Prem was admiring secretly some times ago.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Flashback-</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">After
they enter the ladies section Gayatri asked Prem to select a dress for Heer.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Gayatri
: Prem Meri bahu k liye koi achchi si dress chun.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">(Prem
select a beautiful dress for my daughter-in-law)</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Prem
: Main kya kahun ma...jaisa Heer chahe.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">(What
i will say ma...anything what Heer likes)</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Gayatri
: But beta...</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">She
was cut off by Heer who undestood his shyness.. "koi baat nhi chachi
ji".I</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">(Not
a problm aunty).</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Flashback
Ends.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">She
wanted him to gave it to her...but she knew he was not like the other guys who
just run around girls...it would be difficult for him...so she herself told
that she liked it and wanted to try it.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">The
other ladies also shopped for themselves...now they were in the men's
section...Meher, Veera and Ashlesha wanted some snacks so they headed to the
food court...so now only Gayatri, Kulraj and Premeer were there.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Gayatri
: Heer beta...Chal ab Prem k liye koi achchi si sherwani chun taki Mera beta
bilkul shehzada lage.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">(Heer...
c'mon...select a perfect sherwani for my son so that he will look like a
prince).</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Kulraj(smiled)
: Maa...aapka beta to pehle se hi shehzada hai.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">(Ma
your son is already a prince).</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">All
laugh at this...later Heer chose a maroon sherwani with some work on it which
Prem was silently hoping to be chosen, matching to her own dress.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Prem
liked it very much...after that all gathered around the food court to have
some tea or coffee...after the food session they enter the jewelry shop to buy
the engagement rings.</font>



<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Gayatri
told Premeer that they will shop differently so that the rings would be s
surprise for both.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Soon
their shopping was over...it was already 7 p.m. and they decided to return to
home as tomorrow is a big day and all need a proper meal and rest tonight.</font>


<font size="3">



</font>


<font size="3">Done
with this part guys...plz do read and tell howz it...plzz feel free to criticize
and also give suggestions...next part will be posted soon...till then bye and
take care.</font>




<font size="3">Love,</font>

<font size="3">#Sunayana</font>


Nice update enjoyed reading
Waiting for the marriage
Premeer scene was written well
Eagerly waiting
Continue soon
Can we get weekly updates
Pls pls pls pls pls

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