Rented Love new Prem Heer FF(Chapter 11 on page 25)(22/6/18) - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mijanur

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Posted: 7 years ago
So sorry Read the update few days back but forget to comment
Awesome fab update as always
Daljeet and Aparajit scene was intresing
loved Premeer and Meet double date enjoyed reading it.
Premeer are so simple yet so cute love the u have written their scene.
Meet scene are very nice too
wonder why Aparajit want to meet the girls his grandsons are dating.
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Preet already calling Heer Bhabi in his thoughts. 😆
Gave a quick skim through to the update Shuridh...too busy right now. I'll try and read it properly later and then leave you a proper comment. 😛
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

So sorry Read the update few days back but forget to comment
Awesome fab update as always
Daljeet and Aparajit scene was intresing
loved Premeer and Meet double date enjoyed reading it.
Premeer are so simple yet so cute love the u have written their scene.
Meet scene are very nice too
wonder why Aparajit want to meet the girls his grandsons are dating.
Waiting for next part

Prem Heer are ambassadors of cuteness.
Aparajit Juneja is a control freak. His wanted to test his grand daughter in law.
Thanks for your comment sister and I will update in a week.
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

CH 9 PAGE 21

Awesome update. Read it two days ago but couldn't type comment due to lack of time on hand.

The double date was nicely handled by you Shuridh.

I think you didn't over do anything as this is between bosses and employees - there is certain hesitancy between the couple. That was well done based on culture they were from I think.

Heer Prem as always cute.

Meher in her element haha pointed out the tardiness of the client - which I think was a "made up client' isn't it for the sake of having double date. Preet's idea to test the water - where the girls stand - if they like the boys or not. And he got the answer. So did Prem.

DJ vs her FIL was very interesting. That scene was superb I thought. Aparajit is a strong character I see. He's an injured lion - angry yet hurt and making a careful move towards grandsons.

Ya I'm as surprised as DJ that he wanted to meet the girls the grandsons are dating. He really wants to hurry up the marriage huh.

Well lets see if his wish would be granted or not. I think you're gona give his wish hai na Shuridh hehe.

Lets see.

Thank you for all the fantastic updates - very happy to see you're motivated and are consistent with updates to please the fans who do follow your creative work.

Thanks for your comment sister.
Yes it was their first date and they were still relatively unknown to each other.
May be they will be closer in next date.
Meher was always a bright girl, however the client was not made up. However the client was small one normally Prem and Preet gave others in office to meet with such kind of clients.
Preet gave time of 5:15pm to client but he told the girls the client would come in 4:30.
Aparajit is indeed a strong character but he is also a control freak, he wanted to test his future grand daughter in law.
Yes none of my story will have a sad ending, I don't like tragic story at all.
Thanks for your compliment sister.

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q

Preet already calling Heer Bhabi in his thoughts. 😆

Gave a quick skim through to the update Shuridh...too busy right now. I'll try and read it properly later and then leave you a proper comment. 😛

Preet will have a good relationship with his bhabi. He will be Heer's second brother.
Ok, I will wait for your comment Fatima.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shuridh looking forward to next part ⭐️
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Shuridh looking forward to next part ⭐️

Next Chapter will be interesting I promise.
Posted: 7 years ago
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