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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: kksoap

Nikhad In the Forum or also kis desh family thanks for the PM 😆 such a cute story about meet simple and lovely like the you started the journey and also sisters or premeer track 😉 👏 good luck and update soon ❤️ ...!!

I have updated the chapter one earlier too along with the prologue dear, do check that too if you haven't and just now updated the second part...Thank you sooo much <3

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sherma

@sherma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Amazing work. So loved meet scene. N so Happy Herman fell fr maya. Loved d sister bonding too n preet was at its best teasing harman. Do continue soon

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Okay first of all...let me ask...Mehu? What kind of a name is that? 🤣

Punjabis usually will change to something like Mehru, or Preetu or Preetay...at least that's what I do...but okay...I guess I'll have to get used to Mehu 😆

Oh...so so relieved at Maya's entry and Herman falling for her right away. That mean the path between Preet and Meher is still clear. 👍🏼

Maya is good in this story...that is a nice change. Also, Maya's entry makes me wonder if Ash will also enter the story later on.

Preet disliked palak...but it was cute how he changed his opinion of the dish as soon as he learned Meher had cooked it. 😆

Wow! Meher suddenly being frank with Preet...enough to hit him with a cushion and run after him. 😲

And opps! They had a little slip and catch moment 😳

Nice progression in the story.

Thanks for the update Nikhad...Looking forward to more... 🤗

Edited by Fatima_Q - 9 years ago

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kiran

@kksoap

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

(i complete my first chapter now 😆) and thanks for the Pm

Great going like the name Mehu in the second one 😆 and the good part is Maya in good way attractions between Meet and preet always think deeply 😲 about poses changes are good 👍🏼 keep rocking ❤️ Nikhad...

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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sherma
Amazing work. So loved meet scene. N so Happy Herman fell fr maya. Loved d sister bonding too n preet was at its best teasing harman. Do continue soon

Thanksss aaa bunch dear...I was sick so could not reply earlier...

Aww I will update soon <3

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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
Okay first of all...let me ask...Mehu? What kind of a name is that? 🤣
Punjabis usually will change to something like Mehru, or Preetu or Preetay...at least that's what I do...but okay...I guess I'll have to get used to Mehu 😆

Oh...so so relieved at Maya's entry and Herman falling for her right away. That mean the path between Preet and Meher is still clear. 👍🏼

Maya is good in this story...that is a nice change. Also, Maya's entry makes me wonder if Ash will also enter the story later on.

Preet disliked palak...but it was cute how he changed his opinion of the dish as soon as he learned Meher had cooked it. 😆

Wow! Meher suddenly being frank with Preet...enough to hit him with a cushion and run after him. 😲

And opps! They had a little slip and catch moment 😳

Nice progression in the story.

Thanks for the update Nikhad...Looking forward to more... 🤗

Awww thankuuu my love :*

Haha, actually I call people like that so I put it as Mehu..I am glad you liked the progession and did you notice the last scene? Meher started to think about Preet that how nice he is hehe...

I will updaaate sooon :*

Edited by Nikhad003 - 9 years ago

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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: kksoap
(i complete my first chapter now 😆) and thanks for the Pm
Great going like the name Mehu in the second one 😆 and the good part is Maya in good way attractions between Meet and preet always think deeply 😲 about poses changes are good 👍🏼 keep rocking ❤️ Nikhad...

Thank you sooo muchhh...Meant a looot...^_^

Aww I am glad you are liking my story...I will update soon...

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bhagyashree2011

@bhagyashree2011

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Hi Nikhad

Don't worry yaar I am loving your story its just that I had read it in a hurry and I had thought of commenting it later but I did hit the like button but now I see that it was not there may be some prob.

Anyways it was a wonderful update I am loving the flow of ur story. All the kids coming and staying together is really fun. And the growing bond between meher and veera is also very sweet. Maya is also good in your story and I see a third love story in the track.

I am sure you are gonna give us many preet and Meher moments ahead and I am really waiting for that.

Waiting for the next update

Take care and pm me when u r ready with the update.

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Chit15

@Chit15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Hi Nikhad

Nice update

It was nice to see Meher and Preet talking frankly with each other and playfully hitting each other as superb.👍🏼

Slipping and holding scene was sweet😃

Harman Maya already falling for each other and all other characters picturization is also good

Lets see whats stores in next update

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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011
Hi Nikhad
Don't worry yaar I am loving your story its just that I had read it in a hurry and I had thought of commenting it later but I did hit the like button but now I see that it was not there may be some prob.

Anyways it was a wonderful update I am loving the flow of ur story. All the kids coming and staying together is really fun. And the growing bond between meher and veera is also very sweet. Maya is also good in your story and I see a third love story in the track.

I am sure you are gonna give us many preet and Meher moments ahead and I am really waiting for that.

Waiting for the next update

Take care and pm me when u r ready with the update.

Awww love you! I am so glad you are loving my story...Many incidents are coming right through...

Will update tonight <3

Be with the story :* :*