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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely Updates!!!!!
Loved both prem heer characters...
Do pm whenever u update...
Continue soon!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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where r u?? where is the update???

update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes im updating later today but i have college until 4 so it will be after 4 so iwill update one chapter today and one chapter tomorrow for being late as a treat sorry!!
Edited by sreyap92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreyap92

yes im updating later today but i have college until 4 so it will be after 4 so iwill update one chapter today and one chapter tomorrow for being late as a treat sorry!!


today right whn but?
any ways to chap nice treat loving it..
plz update soon...
and no sry fr being late
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Chpate 3

Lunch Date
prem parks his car outsides heer's house. he steps out of his car wearing a red shirt and black pants looking amazingly hot!! he was soo exctied for lunch today that he didn't even eat breakfast
he knocked on the door and greeted balraj
Prem hi uncle and took his blessings
BR- hi prem beta how are you doing??
Prem - im doing good uncle... looking here and there impatiently waiting for heer
balraj noticed prem and he laughed and said don't worry beta she's just getting ready she'll be down in a few minutes prem blushed and looked down.
next minuted heer came walking down the stairs wearing a white suit with red border she looked like an angel prem was blown away by her simple look he though to himself how can someone look so beautful..
prem- shall we??
heer- yes. by dad see you later
prem- by uncle
prem went to his car and opened the door for heer in the passenger seat and got in prem got in the driver seat they didn't say anything but stole galances at eachtother when the other one isn't looking
prem broke the silence.. so is there anywhere you wan to go in particular
heer- i don't care whereever you want to go
prem- okay prem stoppted the car outside pizza hut heer was shocked
prem - if you don't like i can take you to a five star restraunt i just thought you would like pizza since its your fav.. i mean our faorite.
heer no im actually shocked i thought you would take me to som high fly restraunt just cuz but im happy you chose pizza
prem- you still think i like to show my money prem said a little sad
heer - no prem im sorry don't get upset i just guessed and im happy that i was wrong
prem- okay prem went in and ordered a cheese pizza for both of them and ordered two pepsi as it was both of thier favoites.
prem- heer i don't know what it is but i just feel like i can say, do and ask, anything and you wont' get mad heer understood that he wanted to ask something
prem- heer can i ask you something he said hesitantly
heer yes
prem- what do you like about me as in physical appearance?/
heer- umm i like your eyes there full of passion and there pure you can say alot through your eyes.. you have a million dollar smile that light up any room and your hair it very nice heer said smiling... can i ask you the same??
prem- you have very expressive eyes, your long stagiht hair it's really beautiful you have a perfect figure...and a really nice waist it's perfect he said hesitatnly
heer smiled so you think im beautiful???
prem- not sure if he should say it right away but he did yes you are your soo smilple yet so beautiful prem said smiling heer blushed
prem- so do you think im handsome
heer blushed and just shook her head
prem- can i ask you anohter question?? heer shook her head
prem- sooo do you like me?? i i nervously i guess what i want to ask is well do you accept this realation ship?? are you going to tell your daed yes to me??
heer nervously - what do you think?? ar eyou going to say yes to your parents??
prem just bursted out YES!! i mean yea becausei feel im lucky to have found a wife and in a good friend that i can share anything with
heer- i feel the same i feel the same
prem- so is that a yes??
heer blushed yes! prem relaxed
prem- so i guess that makes you my girlfriend!!1 since were not engaged he said slyly
heer-oh my god im prem junejas girlfriend heer said in sarcastic tone
prem- it's not like that i think im heer maan boyfriend heer blushed.. prem i believe that there is a women behind every sucessfull man and i want that women to be you he said happily
heer just blushed and felt blessed to have a life partner like prem
prem - i never had a girlfriend so heer if i ever do something or say anything that your not comfortable with just let me know i never want you to feel uncomfortable..
heer- yes prem and i trust that you won't cross the limit
prem- yes that i know but making you my first girlfriend i want to do things that all boyfirends do for there girlfriends he said shly but i will never cross my limit..and i dont' even think im romantic i need to brush up thoses skills butw whatever i will do it will be straigh from my heart.
heer smiled at how caring prem was he wanted to experienece the little things that comes with being bf and gf but without crossing the barriers.
prem- heer can i tak you to my house before i drop you off i want to show you my i mean our house.
heer- of course-- they got up from there seats and started walking towards the car prem carefully slid his hand in hers but he feared and looked at her face making sure he didn't do anything wrong and she responded with a smile and squezzed his hand tight and tucked her free hand with his upper arm he was happy she responded
they got to prems house holding hand and broke the news to prems family that thye both agree to this marriage everyone was sooo happy and congratulated them
prem- i wanted to show heer our house may i continue he showed her the kitchen where she would cook for him living room garden and then preets room they knocked on his door and then went in
preet -come in come in heer bhabhi heer was shocked and blushed looking down
prem- preet!!
prett- what pb she is going to be your wife so i have to get in to this habit whynot start now he said lifiting his collor
prem - so heer this is preets room and last but not least he said walking toward his room
heer this is our room she walked in and was happy as how neat and tidy it was with a big round bed in the middle of the room... the whole room was white everything from the carpet to walls to the bed with prem's pictures everywhere
prem - like it?? i know its a bit boring but this is the way i like it!
heer- no prem its lovely i love how neat and tidy it is i like neat
prem- yes this is how i like it but now i need to change some things
heer- asked like what?
prem -what side do you like pick left or right just say what comes to your mind??
heer- left
prem- okay i nedd to clean out the left side of my closet for you and you get the left side of the bed.. also i need to go get red curtains and and red pillows for the bed
heer- why red??
prem - because its your fav
heer- prem you don't have to change all this for mee
prme- i know but i want to this room has so symbolize us not just me and i want you to feel like its your room as well heer was just sooo happy and thankful for prem
heer- thanks prem that is so sweet of you !!
prem- no prob.. oh heer can you help me take off these pictures of the this half of the wall
heer- yes but why??
prem- because i want to put you picutres up on this half
heer- oh my god prem pls we don't have to do this prem- heer pls im doing it from my heart
heer- okay
prem- well i guess thats it the rest we can do together after the marriage..i should prob get you home its getting late uncle might start getting worried
heer- i don't htink he will since he knows im with you she said smiling but yea i should get going
prem- okay lets go but befor that i wanted to ask you if you wanted to go to the beach tom and maybe go for a swim??
heer- i would love to but i don't know how to swim she said sadly not trying to break his heart
prem thought for a bit then said it's okay i can teach you he said happily i mean only if you want to i mean i know you might not feel comfortable but heeer stopped him in betwwen no prem that sounds like fun i would love to go and of course you can teach me
prem - okay then tom it is they drove to heers huse and prem parked his car outside her house and heer opened the car door and was getting out and was bout to turn to leave but prem called out to her
prem- heer she turned around i didn't miss the white dress you wore and you looked beautiful today heer was happy that he noticed that she wore his favorite color heer said i didn't miss the red shirt you wore today either and i can say tha tyou looked very handosme today she said and blushed prem smiled and waved bye to her and said i guess we will meet tom and winked and drove off...
hope you guys like it i would love to get your guys feedback sorry i live in the us and on the west coast so my time is behind most people so sorry i wrote it after i got back from college sorry if it was late for some people but i promise a nice update tomorrow with heers swim lessons sorry it was short i had tooo much hw!!
Edited by sreyap92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
it was amazinggg👏!!! ur story is goin on a ryte track...loved the way prem is caring each n everythin abt heer😊!!!

was soo happy to see tht prem was not overboared coz of money n he was to be lyke GF N BF😳!!1

update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NICE UPDATE!
PREM AND HEER ARE NOW GF AND BF!
REALLY NICE
CONT SOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
awsum awsum awsum awsum
these are the wordz after rreading ur ff
prem is so mischi
and wow prem eer bf gf??
great yaar
loved the update
thanks fr the pm
thanks fr the wonderful pdate
waiting fr next part
update asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...😊
too good ...
please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter 4
swim lessons


prem came to heers house to pick her up. heer in nervous with two things is that one she nervous of wearing a bikini in front of him and two is that she is afraid of the water but she deidn't tell him because she wanted to spend time with him .

they both reach the beach and come out both wearing beachy clothes with their swim suits underneath

prem- how about we start with some beach volley ball

heer- sure i would love to
they start volley it back and fourth befor there are joined by a another couple and then its heer and prem against another couple heer and prem end up winning

prem - so how about we head to the water its getting hot

heer - ummm prem I
she froze when she saw prem taking his shirt off and saw his body he was chisled like a scuplture with nice arms and a six pack but not too big just the right size

pprem- heer you were about to say something

heer- shook her head neversouly ummm prem im scared of the water

prem- laughed why didn't you tell me earlier, but don't worry you will be fine im with you na i wont let anything happen to you i promise... do you trust me??

heeer- of course its just a little scary she deciede to get in to her swim sut taking off of her shirt and pants she nervously looked down

prem was mezmerized he just stared at her shamlessly he has never seen such a beautiful girl staing at her womenly figure she was a full grown woumen and curvy in just the right places... he saw her uncomfortable he said heer its okay you didn't have to wear this you couldve just wore your shirt

heeer- prem its okay i have you with me im fine and plus your my boyfirend you can protect me


prem - yes don't worry heer he said sliding his hand into hers and interwined thier fingers
now just follow me and walk in slowly

heer was waliking step by step together with prem the deeper they got the more scared heer got and she felt a fish and held onto prem with her face it his chest

prem- laughed and then said heer don't worry open your eyes im with you... she blushed after she realized that she was holding on to him with alll her might but she couldnt deny the fact that his chest felt so nice

prem- now heer for me to teach you how to swim im going to have to hold you and i don't want you to be scared or feel uncomfortable i just want to make sure that your okay with it or we can just enjoy sitting by the shore

heer- no prem im okay with it i want to learn how to swim and i trust you!!

prem-okay heer no lay on your stomch and start moing your legs up and down he said holding on to her heer did waht he told her to do
and she learned how to swim a little bit but prem knoew that this was going to take a while for heer to learn

heer- thanks prem for be patient with me i know im not good at this

prem- its okay heer i know that it takes practice so its okay and i had fun teaching you

they went and sat by the shore there were some men staring at heer and prems blood boiled heer saw them and felt uncomfortable with them staring at her but before she could feel any more she felt prem arm on her waist pulling her closer to prem heer was shockedc but felt good to have prem by her side. prem did that as authority and to say that she is with him and only he has the rights to tlookj at her. heer wanted to get out of the water but didn't want the guys to see her in a wet bikini she befor she could even say anything to prem prem got out fo the water and got a towel to dry himself after he was done he took another towel and went to the water where heer was and took the towel and wrapped it around heer as she came out of the water heer was sooo touched by what prem did

heer- thanks prem

prem- no problem i just don't like it when people stare at you with a dirty look..i know i don't have the right to stope people from looking at u cuz your soo beautiful but with a drity look no way especially with me around

heer was touched - prem it doesn't make a diffenece to me when other peoples eyes are on me i just care whether your eyes are on me i don't care what others think as long as im beautiful to you

prem- heer your my girlfriend and my best friend what more could i ask for and your going to be my wife after that only i have a right on you and only you have right on me

heer smiled at how understading and caring prem was with a little possessiveness

prem -i be right back i have to go get some thing actually wait come with i dont want to leave you here they held hand and walked to thier car and took out a picnic basket

heer was surprised that prem brought a picnic basket but she was happy they sat by the beach and had a picnic and then went for a little ice cream

prem- heer i think i can confidently say that you have the best figure and your waist is just perfect you looked so nice in that red bikini...i hope i didn't say anything wrong

heer- no prem yhou didn't because now you can only say that to me and i love to hear compliment from you not any one else because your my best freind

prem- heer our engagement is in a few days you nervous

heer- why would i be nervous im marrying my best friend heer said confidently...prem me too can't wait for it...


sorry it was short pls leave comment there encouraging and i would love to know what you like and don't like

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