FF Shayad Yahi Toh Pyar hai Chapter 24 up4/15pg46 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i m first 1 to com ment
yippe i m first first first
atleast sm whr i m first 2 comment
wow wow wow!!!

and yeah update was lovely
prem is very naughty..
and heer she is total like ...
wow just loved the update
althgh it was short
i enjoyed reading
thanks fr update
thanks fr the pm
thanks fr taking time and writing
update next part asap
waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...
loved heer in bikini...
do update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved the update... it was superb...
WOW loved prem and heer outing and date...their relationship is just so cute sweet..
Continue Super Soon!!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...
loved premeer scenes ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesumeee😃!!!!

loved it!!!

update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome updates shreya love it😃, Sorry for late comment
Part 3 loved the Prem and Heer 1st datee both were each others fav color woooh , Prem and Heer confessed evrythingg soo nicely and cleared each and everything soo fast and beacme frienda wooh Girlfriend 😉boyfriend and accepted to marryy and aslo Prem show Heer is house and also Heer met Preeth and also Prem showed his bedrom to Heer❤️ and asked her which side she like in the closet and and red curatin and pictureess sooo cuteee onee and aslo goingg for swimming tomm
Part 4 wohh Heer is shy☺️ to wear bikni infront of Prem and also afraid of water but Happy that she can spend time with him wooh Prem and Heer really attacted by both of theie physic and figure lovelyy and Heer feels uncomforable and 😡Prem recognises it and Protect from strangers eyes, 🤗 so cutee and nice of Prem they spend quality time togetherr
wowww shreya greatt updateee interstinggg pleasee updatee soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks sooo much for all of you that comment i just wish that more people would comment and give me there opinions ans whether they like it or not or if im im on the right track becasue i see there r lots of view but not as many comment pls it would really help me and if u have any idea i would take them in consideration thanks
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Originally posted by: sreyap92

thanks sooo much for all of you that comment i just wish that more people would comment and give me there opinions ans whether they like it or not or if im im on the right track becasue i see there r lots of view but not as many comment pls it would really help me and if u have any idea i would take them in consideration thanks


actually i m very bad at imagining things
that's y i love everybody's thngs their imagination
kash god had given me little
i wld hv also written thngs
so really sry fr that
bt in case if i get fr sure i'll let u knw
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Chapter 5

Hope and Support
heer is sittin gin her rook thinking of prem but getting bored suddenly she remeber that prem has 2 important meeting today so she decided to go to prem house and see how he is doing with his presentation. she goes down and gets her dads permissin and she heads over to prem house and rings the dorr bell maya opens the door
maya - aree heer how are you
heer- im dong fine bhabhi
maya come in
heer- mom dad how are you doing
parents - were doing good beta what brings you here everything all right
heer-i just came to meet you guys and see how you are doing preet walks in
preet - liar liar liar bhabhi why are you lying we all know the real reason your are here you are here to see your ranjha heer blushed bright red
herr- preeet
preet - what bhabhi i know my pb is such tha you can't help but stya away from him i know he's my brother
maya- aactually its good your here prem had 2 big meetings today and i know he's nervous
it would be nice for him to get you support go on heer hes in his room
heer when t upstairs she saw prem door was half open she peaked in and saw him sittting at his desk with ruffled hair loose cothing shirt untucked and files all over he looked sooo cute she knocke on the door and prem said come in without looking
heer- prem prem jumped off his seat and tried to pick up his files and fix his hairand clothes heer sotped him and made him sit on his chair to to let him know that she doesn't care about the room
heer- are you nervoous prem- heer ive never been this nervous in my life and im really scared heer ran her hands through his ruffled hair to rellax him and said don't worry prem everything will fine just beleive in yourself and you will do great youve worked so hard for this she said putting a hand on his shoulder prem placed his hand on top hers thanks heer he said taking her hand and brining it in his lap playing with here fingers thanks heer for giving me hope and reminding me that i ve worked hard for this contrac kissing her hand
heer- thanks for what it's my duty plus ur my best friend no go and take a showrer while i fix your files
prem- ill just be back twnety minutes later prem walk out with just a towel wrapped heer was lbown away and cuodln't help but stare at his chisled body prem forgot heer was in the room and then suddenly remembered oh heer im sorry ill be back he came back wiwith a pair of pants on woh i im wsorry heer it's my habit i guess im going to have to change it in a few weeks
heer yoou dont have to change it in a few weeks claimin that he be aloud to change in the room and he wouldn't have to go leave prem smiled oh really heer i didn't know your were so naughtey
heer- prem pls don't come near me and put on a shirt pls she said with a puppy face fine he said he put his suit on and dried his har heer helped him comb his hair and put gel in it
hherr- shall we
prem stoped her and held her hand umm heer do mind coming with me i i just
heer stopped him of ocurse i would love to come they both went down stairs prem told his dad tthat heer would be joing them
pree- wow bhabhi supporting bhai already made for eachother both blushed
and they headed out they reache the office prem was ready for his first emeeting heer was standing outside the room pacing back and fourth and then finally prem came out with a defeated look on his face and watery eyes he came out and fell on the bench with tears falling out of his eye lalit and harman saw him and were aboutto go running twoards him to give him support but they stopped as soon as they saw heer right next to him
heer- prem she said
prem- i didn't ge tit heer i did awful
heer- don't worry prem you still have another meetin gshe said just prepare yourself be storng and have confidence on yourslelf don't give up prem i wond't let you she said placing her palms on his cheks and wiping his tears away come with me prem she said and grabbed his hand and dragged him to a mandir they both prayed for the next meeting prem clmed down he fell at peace with god and heer with him
it was time for the next meeting heer gave him confidence don't wrorry prem your wiil do great just think of me and that what prem did he went in and came back and hour later with his million dollar smiled on his face he ran to heer and circled her in his arm sweeping her off the floor and hugging her tight thanks heer thanyou so muchi got it heer and it was all cuz of you and your confidence on me thank yo!!!!!!! he said he didn't care about what was going around he was just soo happy and so was heer he said tahnks heer putting her back down
heer- no prem this was all your hard worki just gave you allit confidence and hopr
prem- yes you did than you
heer- sirf thank you se nahi chalega you have to give me a treat
prem- yes mam what do you have in mind
heer-- um how about a movie
prem- sure
prem saw his dad bhai dad i got it lalit yes prem we notced prem blushed woh dad is okayif i take heer to a movie lalit yes beta you deserve it you both enjoy they both went to prem car and prem called a driver
heer- driver?
pre,- yes i want to sit with you
they got in the car
prem- woh heer im sorry about that in the the offfice woh i was just so happy and excited that i didn't realize
heer- its okay prem im just glad i was the first girl you saw and not some other girl
premsmiled i wouldn't just hug any girl that i saved for you heeer smiled
prem- so what movie do you want to see
her- idon't kow what good
prem- how about murder 2 i heard it was gooid
heer- woh prem im scared of scary moives
prem laughed dn't worry heer im with you and just remeber its just a movei
heer- okay prem if you say so
the go tto the theater and got their tickets the movie started an dheer was squeexing prems hand at the scary part then there were soome really scary part where she just jumped an dhug prem and put her face in prem chest prem was surprised by her move heer was disturebed by the handle between the seats so she lifted it up and cuddle in to prem prem was happy
prem - heer ididn't kow that you would be this scared we can leave if you want
heer- no prem its okay im fine like this just hold on to me
prem- don't worry heer i won't ever let go
so how was it i know not many cute scenes buti wanted to show theri relation ship gettin gstrong pls leave comment pls i lov eto read them and know what you guy s think

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