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Khadija

@khajju

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey.
I likd ur ff..especially the title 😃 .
Great introduction...i likd heers and prem's character...bth wanted to start their carrier but thr parents wants them to get married.
Hmm i luvd how they wanted to see each other in real instead of pictures.
Best part was askin their partners name. 😃
U r really good at writing as u r doing first time.
Once i tried to write smethin on premeer...i just wrote it on paper but it didnt went well so i just tored it off.
Anywayzz continue soon...cant wait for their first meetingg.
And just suggest u to add the pg no. Wth the topic name..it wud be easier to find.
Add me to ur pm list.

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: vrushika
hey dear
vrushika here
loved the character sketch loved the first part
really nice concept
its a jouney from engagement to marriage right
just like my fav movie vivah
sry i knw its ur own idea
but really grt start
plz add me 2 ur pm list
plz plzplz
pretty plz
i wld b really happy if u do so
thanks

hahah thats funny because i thought the same thing when in wrote that lol and vivah is one of my fav movies as well i just loved the concept but i had to get inspiration from somewhere but im trying to make it different and they won't realize their love for eachother till after their married... but they will def care and support eachother and become good friends which is just gonna make thier relationship stronger...

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: deshdeewani
wowww!!!another ff on premeer.😃

ur concept is so nice and 1st chap is just wooww.

premeer parents want them to marry eachother.but the both r little confuse.

they did't see eachothers pic.r u planning to meet them with out their parents intro?

and ya how can i forgot?the title is sooo sweet.it reminds me some of premeer june,july 08 scenes.😍

best of luck fr ur ff.👍🏼

updatesoon.

thank you sooo much
i actually didn't think of that of having them meet without their parents intor now i'll think about it!!
i love the titile tooo it's actually one of my fav songs and i love that premeer scene.

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: khajju
hey.
I likd ur ff..especially the title 😃 .
Great introduction...i likd heers and prem's character...bth wanted to start their carrier but thr parents wants them to get married.
Hmm i luvd how they wanted to see each other in real instead of pictures.
Best part was askin their partners name. 😃
U r really good at writing as u r doing first time.
Once i tried to write smethin on premeer...i just wrote it on paper but it didnt went well so i just tored it off.
Anywayzz continue soon...cant wait for their first meetingg.
And just suggest u to add the pg no. Wth the topic name..it wud be easier to find.
Add me to ur pm list.

t

thank you soo much yes i'm trying to make it different thank you for liking the parts
and yes this is my first time writing and im only 19..i just did the same thing you did just write it on papaer than i typed it up on here
i will def tak your suggestion once i write more chapters thanks once again

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Butterflies!!
Chapter 2

prem woke up in the morning nervous. he was nervous as to what kind of girl his

his father has chose for him. he was thinking whether she would accept his

desire and passion to work on his own. thinking out loud

prem- I don't know how to do this, I've never talked to a girl before

outside of business and schoool preet walked in his his room

preet- prem bhai why are you so nervous it's very easy to talk to a girl

just be chill.

prem- easy for you to say your a talking machine

preet PB!!

prem- what it's true maya came in to his room

maya- preet you leave can;t you see how nervous he is it's a very

big day for him

prem- bhabhi im really nervous, what if i don't like her what if she
doesn't like me. im not the best person to spend and lifetime with im so boring

maya- prem bhai don't worry this happens to everyone. she is probably at her house thinking the same thing.

prem- i know bhabhi but still

maya- prem bhai just speak your heart out to her and be honest with her and watch how she will open up to you

prem- i think your right if preets an expert at doing it than it can't be that hard..he said laughing prem starts to get ready in his all white on

white suit.

at heers house she wake up with butterflies in her stomach. she was thinking

to herself how her life could change today there could be someone who could

have complete rigts on her she was afraid of her freedom. meher walks in

meher- come on sis you have to get ready

heer-meher im really nervous

meher - it's okay sis just remember if he tries anything funny wth you just let me know and you can always say no if you don't like him

heer- i guess she got ready in her red and white suit. she looked like an angel..

prem's family arrived at heer's house prem was getting really nervous. he

was greeted at the door by her dad and sis. she was cute prem thought but

she looked like she could beat him up if he messed with her sister.they went

in and sat in the living room and chatted balraj was talking to prem about him

starting a business here but his mind was running to heer and how she would

look. then balraj called heer in to the living room with tea. she came outside t

kitchen with her eyelids looking down.. prem spotted here she was sooo

beautiful he had never seen such a beautiful girl in his like so simple yet

pretty. he couldn't believe that his dad chose her.prem thought wait a sec

she's beautiful but will she look after my family will she accept me.

heer nervousely gave everyone tea and then it was prem's turn she looked up

at hima and gave him the tea there eyes met prem thought there is so much

innocence in her eyes she thought to herself what a handsome man god has

created but doesn't mean he is nice. he smiled she returned the smile. the

parents thought that they should leave and give them privacy to talk...

prem is stiiting there staring at her thinking god she is so beautiful she ca't be nic

heer thought god he's so handsome but he's rich and famous what if he drinks and parties with girls prem broke the silence

prem- im sorry i've never done this before your the first girl i've ever talked to i usually don't talk to girls so forgive me if i say something stupid heer was shocked he apoligized in the first meeting

prem- how about we start with simple stuff like our likes/ dislikes

heer- okay

prem- i'll ask first your fav color?

heer- red

prem- white that will make a good combo in our room heer smiled

heer- fav hobby

prem - swimming

heer- i don't know how to swim but i like to read..

prem- don't worry i will teach you it's easy smiling

prem- do you cook because im big foodie he said laughing

heer laughed yes i do my fav food is pizza

prem- mine too both - cheese and then both laughed both were getting comfortable with eachother

heer kind of getting serious do you like parties she asked looking down

prem said yes and saw her face fall he got what she was trying to get at i like parties but i don't drink her face lit up and he saw it,...

prem - yes i 've never touched a drink in my life.. you don't believe me do you??

heer- no i do

prem- did you just think because im rich and like parties that i drink too

heer- sorry prem laughed

prem- okay my turn do you have any dreams you want to achieve?

heer- got excited ..i want to become a real big lawyer..then she realized what she said and was like i i i mean prem smiled looking at her nerouvsness he understood that she wanted to work after marriage and he wasn't against it. he smiled did you think i would come between your dream prem said

heer schocked you mean

prem - yes i dont' mind you working as long as you can take care of my family as well i don' mind.

heer gave him a thankful smile i told you about my dreams now what aobut yours she asked

prem- well i want to be a big business man w/o my dads help i wnat to do it on my own he gave her a questional look

heer - thats great i respect you even more that you want to become something on your own.

prem- so you

heer - no i don't mind

prem- but i wouldn't be able to give much time in the beginning

heer - im sure we will find a way.. she just realized what she said i mean as friends

prem- so friends

heer friends they shook hands

prem- i can;t belive i just told you all of these thing i usually don't open up to people who are my own..maybe it's cuz you made me feel comfortable.

heer- maybe

prem nervously- so i was thinkg maybe we could meet again i mean like go out on a date...only if you want to and don't worry i will ask the parents.. he said with a hopeful smile

heer-sure

prem- so how about we go dwonstairs they went downstairs

lalit- so did you guys talk

prem- yes dad ...um dad i was wondering if we could meet again

lailit laughted sure

prem nervously turned to BR uncle is it okay if i took heer out to lunch

BR laughed of course beta prem and heer both smiled looking at eachtoher prem took blessing from the elsders as did heer

prem's family was geading out the door leaving prem in the back he came behing heer ear and whispered i'll pick you up tom 1 oclock sharp she turned around and he winked and said bye she said bye and blushed

junejas returned home and prem went straight to his room as did heer they both laid on their bed thinking about how there day went and smiled then they both remembered something and both ran to their pillows and pulled out the envelope with the picture they both looked at their picture and were glad to see eachtother. they both took their picture hugging it and said their names premeer and both fell asleep hugging the pillow and thinking about their lunch date tom...

kkk pls leave comments and tell me what you like and what you don't and i won't be updating for a couple of days and if you want me to pm pls add me as a friend...thank you

Edited by sreyap92 - 14 years ago

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

awesomeee oneee loved it , please add me in your pm list😃

wohh Prem and Heer meetinggg soo cutee waitinggg forrr moree

updateee it sooon

Edited by harshitideewani - 14 years ago

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

thank u for the update...it was sweet👏!!

waiting for their meeting!!!

update soon n yesh a long update full of premeer😳!!!

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: repunzell
thank u for the update...it was sweet👏!!

waiting for their meeting!!!

update soon n yesh a long update full of premeer😳!!!

I added more i hope i lived up to my promise add me as friend for pm

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: harshitideewani
awesomeee oneee loved it , please add me in your pm list😃
wohh Prem and Heer meetinggg soo cutee waitinggg forrr moree

updateee it sooon

i edited it and added thier meeting as well