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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

yippe yippe i commented first

yeah yeah

te update ws superb

so cute

bth are bcmng naughty day by day

hmm...

but yeah it was cute

very sweet actually

heer gave prem a boost of energy and he gt the contract

and yeah premeer are meant fr each other\

so i must say very nice part

thaniks fr the pm

thanks fr the wonderful update

update next asap

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

cute update...

loved heers care for prem...

waiting for the next update...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Loved the part!!

Wow i so love the way u have potrayed premeer relationship...

It is very nice to see how they are becoming each other strength...

As always Premeer Rocks!!!

Continue soon!!!!

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Khadija

@khajju

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

hey...sorry for not comenting on earlier chapters.
Ramadan has started so i m bit bzy...hope u understand...but dnt worry i m reading ur every chapter...i m nit missin anything.
And abt the updates...i just luvd it..date talks...hahah...now they are bf gf...thts great...and how prem wants to do everythin tht bfngf does but in limits.
Swimming lessons was great...i just luvd when heer hugged him gettin scared...aww when prem slided his hand on her waist telling them tht only he has right on her...i just luvd tht moment..posessive boy...but i luv it.
Luvd how u explained their relationship...heer is soo supportive...bth are being strength for each other.
Lovely updates.
And add me to ur pm list.

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

loved the update...thank u for the PM😊!!!

heer was soo supportive n caring...prem really need it👏!!!

update soon!!!

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

wohhh awesomee and lovely updatee👏

Heer came to Prem's house to support him and help him so cute 😃

wohh Prem in onlyy towel 😉,oohhh soo hott, and Heer

Prem lost the first one and was sad,😭 but Heer supported and gave him all the confidencee👍🏼 and inspired him to go for the next meeting with smile and Prem camee witth smiles in face and 🤗

Heer andd aa its time for Heer' treat andd Movieee andd theree Heer is scared dug her head on ❤️Prem' chesttt wohhh

awesomreee yaarr Keep uyp the great job and pleasee update soon next part waitinggg

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

thank you guys soo much for all the lovely comment and i just want comments because it helps me see wherther people are liking it or not because i don't want to be writing it if people aren't reading it or liking it so thanks for those of you who commented it means alot to me esp to vrushika and repunzel and harshiti deewani who always commenta and with such detail thanks guys!!!😉

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sreyap92
thank you guys soo much for all the lovely comment and i just want comments because it helps me see wherther people are liking it or not because i don't want to be writing it if people aren't reading it or liking it so thanks for those of you who commented it means alot to me esp to vrushika and repunzel and harshiti deewani who always commenta and with such detail thanks guys!!!😉

no problem yaar😊!!! v love to comment coz v love ur FF and want to give u encouragement so that u continue soon😉!!

so update soon!

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: repunzell
no problem yaar😊!!! v love to comment coz v love ur FF and want to give u encouragement so that u continue soon😉!!

so update soon!

will update tom prob at around 5 us time pacific lol

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

chapter 6
romantic date

prem came to drop off heer at her douse heer was getting ready to lave when she pat his hand to thank him prem flinched

heer- prem what happened??

prem- nothing heer its nothing

heer- let me see she rolled up his sleeves and saw huge makrs from her nails during the movie
prem your arm its bleeding heer was shokcked come on prem come inside ill clean it

prem- no heer its really nothing just a few scratches

heer- grabed his arm lets go prem pls she said grabbing him they got up to heers room and heer got the first aid kit and had prem sit she rolled up his sleeves when she realized that she couldn't see the full marks she got nervous ummm prem ...could you take off your shirt or i won't be able to clean the wounds properly she said shyly

prem - yea sure heer he started unbuttoning his shirt and took it off heer was blown away yet again she started cleaning it right away as she was finding it difficult to concentrate she told him that that it was gonna sting and she started to blow on his arm prem loved the feeling of heer breath on his arm she cleaned it added medicine and wrapped it up

heer- done um preem i'm really sorry i didn't mean to she said getting tears in her eyes im sorry i hurt you

prem- no heer its okay why are you crying i didn't even feel it

heer- are you sure

prem- yes heer

prem - can i ask you domething

heer- yes

premm - um heer could i take you out on a real date like a romantic one?? i mean only if you want to no pressure

heer- i would love to!

prem- okay then tomorrow

heer- yes except ill meet you there this time

prem okay olive garden okay with you??

heer- love olive garden

prem comes and his mom ask him why does he have blood on his shirt prem said mom its nothing just a scartch

lalit - a scratch you went tothe movies how did you get a scratch there

prem- woh dad

preet - dad understantd pb went to the movies with bhabhi and im sure he took her to a scary movie and the result right in fron of you

eveyrone laughed

prem- preeet

preet- kya preet im right aren't i

prem- looked down yes oh and dad im going out tomorrow so if theres any work i would like to get it done today

lalit- yes prem but where are you going

prem- oh just taking heer out on a proper date he said smiling

lalit- oh good idea beta im sure she would like that

Tomorrow------

prem arrived at olive garden stading wearing a suit with a boquet of red roses heer arrived 5 minutes later

heer- sorry to keep you waiting

prem- its okay i just got here not too long ago

heer- for me looking at the roses

prem- no for the girl behind you heer elbowed him

heer- shall we they walked in holding hands and sat in a corner of a nook so they were sitting next to eacohter on a couch bench thingy they ordered a while waitng they had there conversations

heer- so hows your hand

prem- its good can't even feel it

heer-thats good

prem- heer you look beautiful

heer- thanks prem your not bad yourself

out of nowhere there was media everywhere wanting to see who was with prem juneja for dinner but they were blocked

prem -heer i don't think we should hide this becasue if we try then there going to make up stuff and going to try to find out anyways and why hide somehting thats fixed

heer- prem im nervous everybody gonna stare at me and tear me up from head to toe and in the the newspater

prem- dont worry heer just don't read or listen all tha tmatters is me and you and what our families know

heer- okay but only for a little bit

prem- dont worry heer im not here on a date with the press im here out with you and i want to make sure that its special

prem signed them in to come in and they all wanted to know the women sitting next to the prem junesja

reporter- sir whose this girl sitting next to you are you married how did you meet

prem- guys guys calm down i would like to introduce my girlfriedn heeer maan were are goingf to get engaged and and get married in a couple of weeks i think that all you guys need to know

reporter-- she is beautiful sir

preem looked at heer i know!!

and they exited the restraunt

prem- sorry about that heer

heer- its okay prem i know thats the package that comes with being with you i don't mind just like you said as long as were good and our families know then its all good

prem- right but i will try to keep you out of it i know you don't like it but i did want to introduce you to the world just once so they won't stir up other stoires

heer- i understand prem

they started to eat dinner and then they started to feed eacother to try thier dishes as they were sitting cuddeld with eacother they got done with dinner and headed out

prem- were not done yet

heer- where we going

prem- just come with me just alittle walk they headed towards a little river

heer- prem what is this

prem- i want to take you on a ride are you okay with it

heer- yea of course

prem- lets goo

they both go into the heart shaped river it was for couples and the place was owned by the junesja they got in and sat next to eachother

heer- its sooo beautiufl

prem- soo true it is prem moved heers hair to one side and slid a necklace around her neck

heer- prem what are you ...what is this prem it was a necklace with pand h engraved in it

heer- prem i cant accept this you didn' have to

prem pls heer i wanted t give this to its staright from my heart pls heer keep it

heer- fine prem its beautiful

prem you like it

heer- of couse its lovely no ones ever given me something like this before

prem- i will from now on all of these things i will do for you because i want to i ve never had a girl in my life and i knew once i find a girl i will giver her my all

heer - prem your soo sweet thank you heer shivered

prem- cold?

heer- yea a little prem took off his jacket and put it around her an while later she still shiverd still cold?? she smiled

prem - oh bhai can you pass that blanket 'he said to the driver and he did that nks prem wrapped it around heer better prem shivered now

heer- prem aren't you cold here we can share the blanket

prem no heer its not big enough to cover both of us its okay heer im fine

heer- prem if we scoot closer together and cuddle it will be big enough heer cuddled hugging prem and put the blanket over both of then heer- now its better and they both drifted off in to sleep on the boat in that position

what will happen when they wake up? will heer misunderstand prem? what will they tell their parents!!

pls comment and tell me what you like i won't be able to update till monday sorry but pls let me know aht you think thanks love SREYA

Edited by sreyap92 - 14 years ago

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