FF Shayad Yahi Toh Pyar hai Chapter 24 up4/15pg46

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Introduction to
😍Shayad yahi toh pyar hai☺️


This is a story of Prem and Heer and how they have an arranged marriage through their parents. This is a journey of how their engagement to marriage and beyond. Their journey starts of as freinds to how they support and care for each other and develop a liking to how they start falling passionatley in love with each other


This is pretty much a positive story that centered around prem and heer no real negative characters just a few to bring in some spice to the story so it doesn't get boring.This is my first time writing a ff. i read so many that i just felt like i should write one is well. im really terrible at writing but just giving it a try😉

Character Sketch

Lalit- A great father of three boys.positive. retired as a very successful business man.
Gayatri- Mother also very caring loves her sons and very tradtional. housewife. positive
Harman- 26yrs eldest of the three sons a very successful business man following his dads footsteps married to maya has a three yr old boy
Prem- 22 yrs a handsome cute tradtional boy. just starting his career in bussiness. very caring and shy around others but open to his own. believes in love. does not believe in arranged marriages, but give it a try for his parents. but deep down he always felt that their is a girl out there made for him
preet- 19yr very naughty full of life and is the life of the house loves his brothers dearly.

Heer- 21yr a very girl just starting her career as a lawyer. wants to be independent. a very nice and caring girl. waiting for her prince, but at the same time is afraid of leaving her dad and her house she is the apple of her dads eye. can never refuse her dad
meher-18yr very cute not afraid to voice her opinion very loud and loves to eat
sanjana-was prems best friend from canada. claims that she had a relationship with prem in canada. grey shades only here to add spice

p.s. i know it's not that great but im trying..
and i will start it if i get enough comments and see that if people really want a new ff pls leave comments they will be appreciated


Chapter 1- beginning pg 1
chapter 2 butterflies pg 4
chapter 3 lunch date pg 7
chpater 4 swim lesson pg 8
chpater 5 hope and support pg 9
chpater 6 romantic date pag 11
chapter 7 pg 12
chapter 8 engement and more pg 13
chapter 9 little amounts of sucess pg 14
chapter 10 family trip pg 16
chapter 11 adventurespg 17
chapter 12 pg 19
chapter 13 pg 21
chapter 14 pg 23
chapter 15 pg 25
chapter16 pg 26
chapter 17 31
chapter 18 pg 32
chapter 19 34
chapter 20 pg 37
chapter 21 pg 39
chapter 22 pg 40
chapte 23 pg 42
chapter 24 pg 46
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kiran_28 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey! sounds interesting.
Can u add me in ur PM's list.
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loved the character sketch
waiting for the shots...
pls add me to pm..
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awesomeee intro waitinggg for more
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chapter 1
Beginning


Prem's family just arrived in india from U.S. Lalit decided he wanted prem to start his new

business back in his homeland as he just graduated.but lalit had another task he wanted to

finish..Marriage. he wanted prem to get married and he wanted to find a traditional girl for him.

lalit walks in to prem's room with gayatri. prem sitting on his laptop.

lalit" hey prem what are you doing"

Prem " nothing dad just preparing a presentation"

Lalit " prem i actually wanted to talk to you about something"

prem- yes dad.

Lalit- i wanted to know what you think about getting married.

prem- what!! don't you think its to early mom what do you say?? im just starting my

career im not even settled yet.

gayatri- prem i think its the perfect age for you to get married and the girl will come into your

life as a support for you through the thick and thin.. plus your dad got married the same

age.

Lalit- actually the thing is i got a proposal for you from my good friend balraj, for his daughter.

prem unsure- but dad what will i be able to provide her nothing

.Gayatri - I don't agree with you she'll come to your life only expecting a place to live and your

love. what else does a girl need.

Lalit- just meet her once
.

Prem stood there and

though i always though that there was a girl made for me and she would just walk into my life, but

she never showed up. so he decided that he would meet her. he thought theres no harm in

meeting her, who knows maybe she could be the one im waiting for. lalit gave him and envelope

with her picture in it and told him to open it when he is ready. gayatri and lalit turn to leave

prem- dad

lalit- yes

prem- dad what her name-

lalit laughed oh her name is HEER.


here in ambala heer just finished her law school a few months ago and is coming home after

getting her first case. she was sooo excited she came home

heer- dad dad!! i got my first case dad

balraj- oh honey im so proud of you that doubles the news. heer i wanted to talk to you

about something important.

heer -yes dad let me just go tell meher she goes upstairs meher meher i got my first case!!!

meher- didi im soo happy for you... when is it?

heer- its first hearing is in two weeks. oh hold on a second before i get carried away dad

want to talk to me about something. she goes back down heer - dad you wanted to talk to me

balraj- yes heer i was thinking now that your 21 finished with your studies i was just thinking

that it's time for you to get married

heer- what!!! dad what about my career??

balraj -don't worry heer it's my friends son i will talk to them about that so you can continue..i

know you want to be independent.

heer- but how will i leave our house and you and meher.. she said in a sad voice.

balraj - i know and it's not like your marrying him today i just want you to meet him

heer thinking i always waited for my prince just like every other girl but he never came. she told

her dad that she would meet him and give it a try especially since she never refuses her

dad.balraj left her an envelope with his picture in it he turned to leave

Heer- dad what's his name?

balraj -PREM


prem and heer both thinking in their room debating on whether they should open the envelope...

but they both decided to not open it and just meet in person for the first time. so they both put the

envelope underneath their pillows and dozed off to sleep thinking of how thier lives could change

tomorrow,,,,




so how was it sorry I tried to do something different pls leave comments they really give me the kick i need to write more and more and they will be appreciated

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Originally posted by: priyahmt

loved the character sketch

waiting for the shots...
pls add me to pm..



thank you i would love to add you to the pm list but im not sure how to do it ... but thanks for liking the sketch
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeee intro waitinggg for more


thank you sooo mcuh😊
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

hey! sounds interesting.
Can u add me in ur PM's list.




thank you soo much i would but i don't know how to do the pm thingy
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It was such a cute update :)

i like the overawl character sketch n the way u plot the story...its a different type of story!

Please update soon!
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luved the 1st part n the concept..!!
gr8 job! cnt wa8 for nxt!
do add me in ur pm list!!!

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