SS - True Love ~ (20/12) COMPLETED!! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
awesome work
please soon next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fabulouuuuuuuus parts 👍🏼
just loved it ...............
waiting fr d next 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome parts......... ...........nw bz of rishab heer is like this😭 .............rishab😡......happy that misunderstandin is cleared ...................another prblm ash😔.............thnx for pm...............update sooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
The updates were great !
I knew that Heer can never do this !
Hate that rishab !
Loved the Premeer reunion !
But i didnt got pm this time 1!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...never expected rishab in between i thot she must have done it to make hikm a bikg man one day...so th0orolughly enjoyed the update...please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Magnificent shots…..⭐️⭐️⭐️

mystery behind Heer's denial to Prem's love revealed….

For a girl parents & siblings are precious & always gives priority to them.

Rishab - cunning man taken that advantage & that lead to separation of loving souls….

brilliant work to create the story very intresting where unexpected person played the villain role.

Nihal - loving brother, Meher & Preet worthy friends in the times of need, helplessness of Balraj.

True love never holds anger & Prem's mind urged for his Heer's life, his caring for her well being…😳

Interaction b/w Heer & Prem portrayed nicely & Prem's attitude towards Ash….

Now waiting for Heer back to normal life with Prem's help & True Love to bloom b/w the loving pair 😉.

Fabulous shots….👏👏 Waiting for the continuation of Good Work ….😊 ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
loved it
felt so bad 4 heer
Heer loved prem but all tht because of tht RR
Prem taking care of his heer
and ash is back
Prem taking care of his heer, hope she gets well soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks friends for your comments
I'll try to update today.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Last Part

Prem looked at angry Ash 'Ash, please wait outside. I'll come in few minutes.' Ash is about to open her mouth again in anger but Prem's pleading face made her to go out. Prem picked up his mobile and called Meher. In few seconds, Meher came to Prem's room. Meher saw Ash standing with anger outside Prem's room. She quickly understood the situation.

Prem 'Heer, you be with Meher. I'll go and get ice cream for you.' Heer happily lifted her head 'ice cream.' Prem shook his head. Prem is about to move out of the bed, Heer stopped him. Heer looked around fearfully to confirm that Ash is not in the room. 'ha go.' Prem kissed her forehead and went away. Meher sat next to Heer. Heer 'that girl scared me. you too be careful.' Meher shook her head.

Prem came out of the room and saw Ash angrily pacing up and down. Prem 'Ash' Ash angrily 'Prem, what is this?' Prem 'Ash, please listen to me for few minutes.' Ash 'what are you going to say Prem? I saw everything with my own eyes.' Prem walked to another room Ash followed her. Prem stopped and turned to face her. 'she is my Heer.' Ash is shocked 'Prem, are you gone mad? This girl ignored your love. she insulted your love in front of your college friends. for her.' Prem interrupted 'Ash, she didn't do that from her heart.' He told what happened in Heer's life. Ash had tears in her eyes when Prem finished his story.

Ash looked at her ring finger for a while. Prem is turned to other side. Ash removed their engagement ring. 'Prem.' Prem turned to her. Ash took his hand and placed the ring in his hand 'I'm not your match Prem.' Prem silently looked at her sad face. she removed his ring 'I'm not sad Prem. I'm happy.' Prem is little surprised by her decision. 'Ash, I'm so' Ash interrupted 'don't feel Sorry Prem. you didn't do anything wrong.' Ash walked sideways 'Prem, you never forgot her. You loved her so much even after she insulted you. I was little upset when our marriage stopped because of the fire accident in the mandap.' She turned towards Prem 'But I understood the meaning of that accident. You are not meant to be mine. if you come to know about Heer's side of story after marriage then you won't be able to live happily with me. That is why God stopped our marriage. You both are made for each other.'

Prem looked up and got shocked to see Balwant standing with anger 'Prem, I never thought you.' Ash ran to him and placed hand on his mouth 'Dad, please. He didn't do anything wrong.' Balwant 'Ash, he ' Ash 'dad, I know everything.' Balwant looked at his daughter sadly. Ash 'dad, we should not break two loving souls.' Balwant didn't understand anything. Ash 'I'll tell you dad.' She took Balwant away from there. before stepping out of the house 'Prem, happy married life with your Heer.' Prem with tears shook his head 'thanks.'

Prem wiped his tears and looked at the ring in his hand. He quickly drove to a mandir and dropped it in offering box. On the way back he bought Heer's ice cream and went home.

Heer is sitting on the window waiting for Prem like a kid. Heer shouted 'Prem Prem' Meher confusingly looked at Heer. Heer pointing down shouted 'Prem.' Meher walked to the window and saw Prem getting out of the car. Prem looked up hearing Heer's voice and waved to her. Heer happily waved to him. She is about to jump down Meher stopped her. 'Prem will come in this way.' Heer happily shook her head and walked to the door.

Prem opened the door. Heer hugged him and kissed him on his cheek. Meher left the room silently. Prem took Heer to the bed 'sit Heer.' she sat anxiously waited Prem to open the ice cream like a kid. Prem sat next to her. Prem started feeding her the ice cream.

Balraj walked in 'Prem' Prem 'ha papa.' Balraj 'Prem, I met the doctor.' Prem interestingly looked at him for happy news. Balraj 'they are feeling that taking her to some familiar place which you both spent may help her to get back her memory.' Prem 'we'll take her there.' Balraj 'but Prem.' he paused 'Ash' Prem 'I spoke to her just now. She understood everything. She even broke our engagement.' Balraj breathed a relief. Prem 'I'll do the arrangements to return back to India.'

Next one week Prem did all the arrangements to handle his business from India. Ash promised to help him. Happily Prem with Heer, Balraj, Preet and Meher returned to India.

Nihal saw his sister in the airport with her love. Nihal hugged Heer and cried. Heer wiped his tears 'don't cry. Don't waste crystals. Prem said.' Nihal smiled and looked at Prem 'thanks Prem.' Prem hugged Nihal 'I should ask sorry to you. Without knowing the struggle you are going through' tears came out of his eyes 'I just left you all.' Balrja pat Prem's shoulder 'Prem, everything will be alright soon.'

Prem looked at Balraj 'papa, I want to marry Heer.' Nihal 'but Prem.' Prem interrupted 'I know she is not in the condition for marriage. even then I don't want this world to talk wrong about her.' Balraj shook his head. Preet called Harman and told him to come to mandir with all the necessary items for the marriage.

They all went to mandir. Preet's parents, Meher parents, Harman and Maya are waiting there with all the arrangements. Meher and Maya changed Heer into her bridal dress. Soon Marriage is performed with all the rituals. They took pictures and video so that Heer can see their wedding she regains her memory.

After Premeer marriage, Nihal 'Prem' understanding his confusion, Prem 'you always wanted your married sister to stay in your house. Heer too wanted it. I don't have any objection in that. I never got parents and siblings love. Through Heer I got papa and Bhaiya.' Nihal hugged him with tears.

One month passed, Prem took Heer to all the places they spent together. In some places, Heer showed some different responses. Heer is tired and sitting on the bed watching TV. Prem went to washroom to change. Usually Prem put cartoon and keep the remote aside so that she won't randomly change the channels that may trigger her anger without knowing that she is the one who changed the channel. Today, he unconsciously left the remote on the bed next to Heer. Heer is watching TOM & JERRY and laughing.

Suddenly she hit her hand on the remote which resulted in changing the channel. As Heer watched the screen started screaming and moving backwards covering her face with her palm. She screamed 'Prem Premmmmm.' Prem who is stepping out of the washroom rushed to Heer. He saw two men fighting in the TV. He switched off the TV and hugged Heer. But Heer fainted.

As it is common for Heer to faint when she see something fearful in the TV, Prem made her lay down properly on the bed. Hearing Heer's scream Balraj and Nihal came to their room. Prem 'she changed the channel and got scared.' They are relieved. Prem sat next to her stroking her hair.

Heer opened her eyes. She looked around and got shocked. She sat on the bed. She fearfully looked at the balcony door when it opened. She moved to the other edge of the bed. She is relieved and confused when she saw Prem answering in the phone 'I'll call you later.'

Heer jumped out of the bed and ran into Prem's hands. Prem is little shocked when Heer hugged him tightly. She felt wetness in his shirt. Heer murmured 'Prem, you are here. Forgive me Prem. Please Prem.' Prem gently pushed hear away. Heer closing her eyes cried. He cupped his face 'Heer' he wiped her tears with his thumb. Heer sobbed 'Prem forgive.' Prem kissed her forehead 'I know you didn't change the channel.' Heer confusingly opened her eyes and stared at Prem. 'Prem, come we'll leave from here.' Prem is confused. 'Heer' he pushed aside a strand of hair falling on to her face. 'where do you want to go?' Heer fearfully looked around 'Prem, woh Rishab.' Prem understood that she got her memory back.' Prem slipped his one hand around her waist and pulled her closer. He hugged her. He placed his hand on her head and made her head rest on his chest. 'Heer, we are in our house.' Heer lifted her head 'but this house.' Prem 'we shifted our house. and ' he turned her towards the mirrior 'can you see any changes in you.' he hugged her from back. He watched her face resting his chin on her shoulder.

Heer looked at her image in the mirror. She noticed sindoor in her maang. she fearfully touched it. she looked at her finger to confirm that its sindoor. Next she saw the mangalsutra hanging in her neck. she took it 'Prem.' Prem kissed her cheek and turned her to face him. He kissed her forehead 'you are Mrs. Prem Juneja.' Heer smiled but soon confusion spread in her face 'b but I didn't' remember anything.' Prem 'You are in unconscious when I married you.' Heer 'did Meher told you about me.' Prem hugged her gently and stroked her head 'Heer, You lost your conscious in Risahb's toruture. Preet and Meher found me and told everything to me.' Heer lifted her head suddenly from his chest. 'Prem, Papa and Bhaiya.' Prem pressed his forehead on hers caressing her cheek 'they are fine. they are in the downstairs.'

Heer looked at him for a second and rushed out of the room. She looked around and found the stairs and ran down the stairs like a kid. Balraj and Nihal who are discussing about some business matter got up in shock seeing Heer coming down the stairs. Nihal ran to her thinking is trying to run out of the house. Nihal grabbed her in his hand 'Heer'. His eyes fell on Prem who is coming down with a smile. Nihal looked at Heer who is breathing heavily 'bhaiya.' Nihal is happy to here this from her mouth after 2 long years. He kissed her cheeks and forehead happily and hugged her. She cried in his chest.

Balraj freeze in his spot looked at Prem. 'Papa, our Heer gained conscious.' Balraj 'God heard our prayers.' Prem shook his head. Heer ran into his hands. He kissed Heer and hugged her. Nihal 'thanks Prem.' Prem interrupted 'Bhiaya, its all because our love.' they hugged.

Prem mobile rang. He answered 'Congrats.' Then he switched off the line 'Papa, Meher delivered girl.' Heer 'when did they got married?' Prem 'married when you called them before falling into unconscious state.' Balraj and Nihal understood why Prem mention Heer's past state as unconscious. Heer 'I just called them y'day.' She walked to Prem. Prem shook his head negatively 'it happened two years back.' Heer 'I'm in unconscious state for two years?' Prem shook his head. to confirm this she looked at her brother and father. They also returned the same answer.

Heer is shocked 'Prem.' Prem interrupted 'I tell you everything later. Now we are going to give surprise to Preet and Meher.'

In the night, after returning from the hospital Prem is lying in the bed reading a magazine. Heer took out her night suit and about to walk to washroom. Prem 'Heer, where are you going?' Heer confusingly 'change into my night dress.' Prem 'come here.' heer walked to him and stood beside him. he pulled her down to sit next to him. Heer 'Premmm.' Prem pulled her on to him 'I'll do it.' Heer shyly 'Premmm.' Prem 'why are you feeling shy?' Heer looked at him. Prem 'I was doing it every night.' Heer looked at him confusingly. he nuzzled his lips on her cheek 'you never want to change into night suit. So I changed after you drifted into sleep.' He whispered into his ears 'do you know I have already seen you fully. So you don't have to feel shy.' she buried her face into his chest with a shy smile. he tickled her waist. She giggled.

Suddenly 'Prem, how can i protest when I was in unconscious state.' Prem realized his mistake. 'woh Heer.' Heer 'Prem you are hiding something.' Prem tried to change the subject 'Heer, I'll' Heer strictly 'tell me the truth.' She is about to move away Prem pulled her back on to him 'Heer' he told her everything. Heer with tears 'I was a mad then.' Prem shook his head 'no Heer. you didn't do anything. you just sat hugging the teddy calling it as our Chahat.' He wiped her tears. Heer sobbed 'Prem, I destroyed your happy life.' Prem closed her mouth 'no Heer, I was lucky to get you back. otherwise I would have died by now knowing the truth.' He hugged her 'I love you Heer. I love you.' he kissed her cheek. Heer kissed his cheek 'I love you too.' Both hugged tightly.

After a brief silence Heer lifted her head 'Prem, I want to talk to Ash.' Prem took his mobile 'but why?' Heer 'give me.' Prem strictly 'first tell me why?' Heer 'you have to go back to Ash. I don't want to snatch someone's love.' Prem 'I love you Heer.' Heer sat on the bed releasing herself out of his hug 'I insulted you I that time she is the one who helped you.' she pulled the mobile out of his hand and about to dial the number. Prem pulled it back 'Heer,' Heer pulled that back. Prem pulled the mobile and slapped Heer 'you are my love Heer. I didn't marry you in sympathy.' Heer with tears 'but she loved you too.' Prem 'I agree but i was thinking only about you.' Heer 'you came back to me only because I was in that condition. Otherwise you won't have returned to me. surely we won't have met again in this world.' Prem 'God had a plan for us because of that we met again.' He pulled her into his hug 'Heer, love you. I love only you.' Heer protested and tried to move out of his hand.

Prem hugged her tight and started kissing her. He didn't leave her even though she struggled to push him away. As he deepened the kiss on her she lost herself in his touch and melted in his love. the room filled with their loving kisses and moaning. They became one.

Prem feeling completeness fell flat on the bed pulling her over him. 'Heer, I love you. you are my life. you are my breath. Love you Heer.' he kissed her forehead. Heer 'I know Prem but.' Prem closed her mouth with his palm 'Heer, you are my love, my wife. You are everything for me. please Heer believe me.' Heer kissed his chest. 'I'm sorry Prem. I hurt you.' Prem 'Heer, forget the past. I want to live happily with you.' he pulled her up to look into her face 'and our kid.'

Both were awake. Heer is putting rounds with her index finger on his bare chest. Prem giggled 'Heer, are you trying to put tattoo on my chest.' Heer lifted her head 'Prem, I want to talk to Ash.' Prem took his mobile and dialed Ash number. He put the mobile in speaker.

Ash surprised 'Prem' she paused 'its mid night there.' Prem 'my Heer didn't allow me to sleep. She wants to talk to you.' Ash is confused 'to me.' Prem 'ha. You talk to her.' He looked at Heer. Heer slowly 'Ash, I'm Heer.' Ash 'Heer' she is confused whether Heer is normal or not. Heer 'Ash, sorry. I took your love.' Ash understood that Heer became normal. She quickly 'no Heer, don't ask sorry to me. I was the one who about to take your love from you.' Heer is silent. Ash 'Heer, I tell you one thing which is known only between me and Prem.' Heer got tensed. Ash 'I'm the one who loved Prem. he never loved me. he just accept my love that's all. But never returned it. I asked my father to fix him as my life partner with the hope to change him. but later I understood that it is not at all possible. You are in his breath. Then how will he be able to live without you? lucky that you came to him before we married otherwise our life will be miserable. So don't feel sorry. He is yours always. I don't want to steal even a second of your love life.' Heer is in tears. Prem kissed Heer cheek to comfort her. Ash disconnected the line 'happy married life Heer. bye.' Heer 'bye.'

Heer looked at Prem. Prem took the mobile out of her hand 'happy now?' Heer with tears shook head. Heer 'you proposed me as I wanted. You married me. But I couldn't enjoy anything.' Prem hugged her with a smile 'don't worry I'll give you surprises and happy moments every day.' Prem kissed her forehead 'I can do anything for you. Heer.' she hugged him tightly.

True love brought them together.

~~ END ~~
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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice shot loved the ending

Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago

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