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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

CHAPTER 5

TITLE:HATE LOVE STORIES😉

the door opens....

prem turns n is shocked to see a guy

NAME:MAYANK SHARMA

AGE:30 YRS

he is owner of a tv channel (world television)

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prem:hi.i m prem .prem juneja

mayank:hi.i m mayank.......

they shake hands

mayank:aao na.betho...have a seat.they bth take their seats

mayank:mjhe thaani ne apk bare mai bht kch btaya hai.......

prem:smiles(hmm)thaani ?kahan hai?

mayank:arre ha mai thaani ko bula k lata ho

thaani is standing on the stairs

thaani:kisi ko mjhe bulane ki zaroorat nhe......

thaani

name:thaani

age:28 yrs

shez a doctor by profession n a very sweet n nice girl

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thaani:premm??

prem stands up after seeing her...he kept luking at her 4 some while

thaani:prem.mjhe yaqeen nhe arha hai k toh

she comes down n hugs prem

thaani:premmmmm premmm premmmmmmm

prem:pta hai mene tujhe kitna miss kya moto...

n luks at him

thaani:moto yeht tujhe kay hua?

prem:kya?

thaani:arre toh itna patla kes ehogya......

prem smiles

mayank comes to thaan i nsays:apni best frnd ki yaad mai koi bhi patla hojaye..ku saale sahab?

thaani:laughs

prem:saale sahab?

thaani:are han yehe toh mera surprise hai.......meet mr.mayank sharma.mere husband.....n holds mayanks hand tightly

n sees in his eyes

thaani:mera mr.right...........a perfct husband a perfect partner for any girl......

n they give a smile to each other

prem is shocked to hear this

prem:husband?

thaani:ha..mene pechle mahine he shaadi ki .aur apne honeymoon k liye yaha aye.tak hum ghoom bhi sakey aur apni families se mil bhi sakey jo humri shaadi mai nhe aske......

prem:tumne mjeh pehle ku nhe btaya??

thaani:i m sry prem..tym heneh mila yeh sab itne jaldi mai hogya k kisi ko kch btane ka tym he nhe tha........

Mayank:chlo ab in sab bato se pehle khana kha lo.......bht bhook lag rh ehai ...........

thaani:han .pt hai prem hum kab se tumra w8 kr rhe hai....aur tumne kitne dair krde ane mai..

prem:mjhe bhi isi baat ka dukh hai k maine kitne dair kr di ane mai:-(

mayank:ab dukh ko choro.aur thaani um khana lgao..mai freshup ho k ata ho ....

thaani:hmm.prem tum betho mai bas abhi aye

mayank leaves

n thaani waz abt to leave k prem holds her wrist

prem:tumne mjhe btana zaroori bhi nhe smjha

thaani:mene kha na i m sorry.i knw k tum kitna bura feel kr rhe hogey.pr kya krte

prem:tumhe sorry kehene ki ka zaroorat ...........galti toh mere hai tumhe kch barh k maaan lya.sab se oncha darja apni zindagi mai tumhe dya..........bar bar thokar khane k bad bhi tum se pyaar kya.........

thaani:prem.kya bol rhe ho.....prem mera hath choro.prem u r hurting me........

prem leaves her hand n leave the house at the moment

mayank comes down

mayank:yeh prem kaha gya?comes to thaani

thaani :woh use koi zaroori kam agya tha toh jana para

mayank:ha bhai.itne bari zemadari hai us p.pora hotel snbhalta hai.....aam th hota eh hoga

thaani:hmm.mai kahana lga dete ho ..........

mayank:hmm..i m feeling dam hungry.....jaldi laana

thaani:abhi laye|(she leaves)

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heer is dancing with her frndz in a club

she sees her frnd nupur

heer:guyz yeh nupzy he hai na?

sunaina:yup.pr yehis k sath kon hai?

heer:her new boy frnd.???not again.....they all shouts

nupur cums to heer n gang:hi guyz...........kitne tym baad mil rhe ho.....

heer:nupzy yeh lakra kon hai?

nupzy:aur kon my new bf........

heer:OMG ...jitne mere paas dresses nhe hai utne tere bfzz hai......

nupzy:kaha sweety?hez my 5 one...baqi toh frndz hote hai na

heer:u r impossible.........

nupzy:acha hai na.now i m goin..hez waiting 4 me.byez.luv yaa guyz

heer n gang:bye

they again strt dancing

heer:wait guyz mia orange juice ley k ate ho

gang:cum sooon...

prem is sitting on a table n drinking

heer takes her ornge juice nsees prem sitting all alone

heer:yeh mr.rudo.yahan?is club mai?

she goes to him......

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KEEP WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

I WOULD UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNN

KEEP READING

HATE LOVE STORIES

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

awsum.....so prem n heer luv story now...do update soon...dn't take time as u hv taken to update dis part....

awsum update...wa8in for nxt update asap...

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haajoo

@haajoo

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

awesum paart yaa haya nd thanx 4r updating it alott

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haya

@laviza97

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

@sharukh.haju k kehne pr itna late kiya..............haju ko danto sab......

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haya

@laviza97

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO ALL...........

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haya

@laviza97

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

CHAPTER

TITLE:HATE LOVE STORIES

HEER goes to prem

heer:hey..mr.rudo..tum yaha..................

prem:hi..

heer:mr.rudo..mene tum se kuch pocha k tum yaha..tum jese angry young man sirf office mai he miltey hai mostly

prem:yeh jaga tumhre hai?

heer:nops

prem:toh tum mjhe ku tang kr rhe ho?

heer:mr.rudo mai toh sirf tumhe dekhne aye the..wese tumhe koi problem hai she points toward brain

prem gives her an anrgy luk

heeR:no..i mean k lagta hai jese tum ho......i mean k itne fun loving jaga pr bhi itne sad

prem:dekho...

heer:ek sec..kahi pyaar kho toh nahi dya jo aise rehte ho pyaar mai dhoka...😆

prem:pyaar paya hota toh khoya hota na

heer gets confused

heer:kya matlab?

prem:jis se mene pyaar kiya usne mjh se kabhi pyaar kiya he nahi..aur aaj

heeR:wait wait..mai story complete krte ho

heer:tum ne aaj tak usko btaya he nahi..aur woh tum se naraaz hai ab ryt?

prem:wrong...aaj woh ksii aur ki hai..usk l iye mai sirf ek acha dost ho sirf ek acha dost........

heer:tuh usko bta toh do.........................

prem:usko bta k us ki pori zindagi barbad nahi krne ki himmat mjh mai......mai akele tha aur akele he theek ho.i dont deserve happiness

heer:toh tumhe kya lagat hai jo insaan jitna khush hota ahi woh akela nahi hota

prme:obviously

heer:aisa nahi hota..for example..ab mai ho.meree dad mh se bht pyaar krte hai but woh apne kaam mai bht bsy rhet hai aur mjhe utna tym nhe dey patey...aur mere mom hai he nahi......

heer;bachpan se akelepan mai he rhe ho...........lekan phr us akelepan mai he mene apni zindagi bna li........aur apni zindagi ko smjhaya k yeh akelapan he mere khushi hai.......tum bhi is tarah apne dil ko smjha k dekho..phr dekhna tum kabhi sad neh hogey..bet lga lo beshak

prem:he smiles...😃...aisa kch nhe hota.....

heer:arey.dekho is pore world mai sab akele ate ahi aur akele jate hai..

aur un logo ami 2 tarah k log hote hai jo akelepan ko zindagi ka naam dete hai aur khush rhte hai aur kch akelepan ko apni zindagi maan kr udaas rhet ahi

prem:in mai faraq kya hoa phr

heer:thora sa faraq hai..jo tum shayad smjh na pao....

prme:😃

heer n prem shakes hand

heer:thats lyk a gud boy mr.rudo..oh i mena tumhra naam kya tha ..mai bhool gye

prme:prem..prem juneja

heer: n i m heer.heer maan

they bt hhave their drinks

heer :mai aye .......

prme:ohk

heer leaves

suddenly heer ki awaz ate hai

heer announces in the club

heer:hey all guyz n gurls.may i have ur attention plz.....yaha aaj ek aisa insaan hai humare sath jo i thnk apni lyf mai pehle dafa smile kya hoga.woh hai mr.prem juneja.a great bussiness man....i want k woh yaha a kr humare stah dance kre

heer:cumon prem

every1 strts shoutin:prem ..premm

heer:goes to prem:aao na....dar gye kya

prem:prem kisi se nahi darta

heer:hmm😃kool phr chlo dance floor pr

prme:sure

then peeche song lagta hai i hate love stories ka title track heer n prem dances like imran khan on that song ...........

after dancing.........

heer n prem r now moving on teh road

heeR:kitna amza aya na.........tum dance bht funny krte ho.bht kool ho..mjhe nahi pta tha k ek mr.rudo itna kool dude bhi ban skta hai😆

prem:ab mjhe mr.rudo toh nahi kho ge na

heer:nahi...tum toh jh se bhi kool lag rhe the

prme:😛.....wese aap bhi bht acha dance krte ho

heer:AAP......ab hum frndz hai na n frndz ami aap n all nahi hota

prme:ohk....tum

heer:datz f9...

prem:car agye..cum,on..

heeR:bye

prem:bye

they bth sits in their car

pr heer ki car heer se strt he nahi hoti

she shouts

heer:prem......mere car kharab hogye hai..mjhe lift do gey?

prme:yeha sure.ajao

heer.:thnx.n comes out of her car n goes in prem's car

heer:thnx.pta neh is car ko kya hogya..........stupid(in an nagry tone)

prem:chley

heer:obviously..chlo

dey bth r going k suddenly bht barish shru hojate hai..

heer:ruko ruko

prme stops the car

prme:kya hua heer?

heer:barish mai khele

prme:barish mai..heer bht raat hogey hai n yun

heer:uff. she gets out of teh car n starts dancing in the rain

prem also gets out of his car..he keeps watchign heer

heer:aao na

prem:mai yehe theek ho....

heer:she goes to prem n prem ka haath pakar k lati hai

prem:heer

heer n prem have a cple dance i nteh rain

then heer keeps dancing on he rown

n she slips

prem cathces her

n they have an eye lock session..........

pree:sorry......

heeR:😊

prem:chale.............

hee:Rha

n they bth gets in teh car n leaves

prem is driving

prem:tumhra ghar kaha hai?

heer:andheri mai

prem:andheri .woh toh yaaha se bht dor hai..aur itne barish mai .tum mere ghar chlo.kch dair baad jab barish kam hoge tab tumhe tumhre ghar chor do ga

heer:yeah ohk.no probz

prem:ohk den.......

woh prem k ghar phonch jate hai

thaani ka ghar prem k ghar k bilkul samne se guzar rhe hoti hai

thaani is sitting all alone in teh car

mayank bahir se coffee ley rk ata hai

mayank comes:herez ur coffee

thaani:thnx

mayank sees prem n heer together .prme k ghar k andar enter kr rhe hote hai

mayank:thaani prem married hai?

thaani:nahi tih...

mayank:toh itne raat ko .itne taiz barish mai......prem k sath larki kon hai

thaani dekhte hai n is shocked to see heer n prem together

n prem n heer laughing together n they both enters the house

thaani:pta nahi yeh larki kon hai.....woh bhi prem k sath.......

mayak:prem ko dekh kr aisa toh neh lagta k woh kisi larki ko apne ghar ley aye..

thanai:woh aisa hai bhi nahi......mai dekh k ate ho

mayank:ruko thaani.ab woh 15 saal wala prme nahi hai.

29 yrs ka prem hai n he knws wats wrng n ryt.let him enjoy his life

thaani:pr

mayank:pr war. ko choro aur emre coffee pakro n they bth leaves

thaani thinks:prem ne mjhe is sab k bar mai baat bhi nahi ki..akhir prem aisa toh nahi tha...kya hogya hai isko.......mai kal he is se baat kro ge

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PRECAP:

thaani sees heer in the market

thaani :yeh toh wahi lark ihai jo kal raat prem k sath the.isis se pochte ho

n she starts moving towards heer

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WANT TO KNOW K WOH HEER SE KYA KEHTE HAI..........

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haya

@laviza97

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

i m gonna write a frendship spcl epi next week......

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

omg thts a total shock for me i was xpecting samrat to b in thani's life but its mayank😲 i cant blieve it but it doesnt matter as its a premheer story loving it cant wait for next update😃