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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey alll.i m writing a story on premeer ...........it wud be afunny kinda stry
TITLE:HATE LOVE STORIES😉
HEER MAAN-
Name:HEER MAAN
AGE:24
DATE OF BIRTH:16-07-1986
A Funloving,chubby n a very sweet but very moody kinda girl!!
PREM JUNEJA-
NAME:PREM JUNEJA
AGE:29
DATE OF BIRTH:16-07-1981
A very successful bussiness man...but an angry young man kinda personality...
story line:
This is a story of prem and heer......heer iz a daughter of RISHABH MAAN n SULEKHA MAAN.........heerz mother died in an accident.......n Rishabh MAAN iz a single parent.....he loves his daughter alot n can do anything 4 her happiness.......
and prem iz the son of LALIT JUNEJA n GAYTRI JUNEJa....but unforunately..they had a divorce.n gaytri get marries with sum other peson...........prem lived with his father (Lalit)BUT lalit waz an army officer so he used to go out of town oftenly..........n prem waz single child.......he used to live alone......u can say he loves alonliness now............
now prem iz a succesful bussiness man.he owns a five star hotel.......
one day he mets heer n then..............................
then the love story begins?????
REALLY
OMG
THEY LOVE HATRED?????
OR
THEY HATE LOVE??????
BUT HOW?
JUS KEEP READING....
HATE LOVE STORIES .

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
Me Da First 1 To Comment...!
Gr8 Concept....👏
I Really Liked Da Character Sketch....😊
Btw Plz Add Me 2 Ur PM List....!
N Yeshhhhhh....
Do Update Soon....😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
#3
Nice concept... add me to your PM!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
nice concept..
add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5

Chapter 1

Heer:
age:10 yrs
Heer sleeping on her bed n suddenly alarm bajta hai itz 12.00pm........
heer shouts n then throws the alarm clock on the floor...........
and sits on her bed n shouts:ramu kakaa.........neeelllluuuuuuuuuu taaaaaiiiiii...............
NEELU TAI n RAMU KAKA cums in her rooom..........
heer throws all the pillows on the floor
heer:while throwing a pillow:aaj tak kisi ki himaat nhe hue heer maan k room mai alarm lgane kiiii.........
neelu tai:maim sahab woh
heer:kya woh .......aapme mere room mai alarm kese lgaya n throws her pillow towards the door
rishabh catches the pillow
RISHABH:oho.lagta hai aaj humre beti ko kch zyada he gussa chara hua hai
heer gets up n runs towards her DAD
HEER:u knw dad aaj first tym mjhe alarm se uthna para......apko pta hai na mjhe alarm se uthna kitna bura lgta hai........mene kitne dafa mana kiay hai neelu tai ko k mere room mai alarm na lgaye pr no 1 cares abt me..i tell u DAD....
RISHABH:BAS BASS........ki nhe ......hum dante gai usko kis ne lgaya humri pyaari se barbie doll k room mai alarm........mera bcha
aur phr godi mai ley k bed pr jata hai........n ask neelu tai n ramu kaak to leave
heer:DAD ap ko mera koi khayaaal nhe hai.mai apse baat bhi neh kroge
rishabh:ohoo mera bcha mjh se naraaz hai ..chlo phr mai bhi nhe btao ga k mene apni lil princess k liye kya surprise plan kiya hai....
heer:kesa plan?mere bday k liye
rishabh:hm.aaj mere princess ka bdyah ia aur mene apni princess k liye bht bari se prty arrange ki hai.woh bhi mumbai k best hotel mai.
heer:realy?love u so cmh dad......u r the best dad in the world.........
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prem
age:15
anuragwhile sitting in terrace thinking abt his mom n him.......sudddenly his maid cums
maid:sir apka breakfast ready hai.mai yaha ley aao?
prem:nhe.mjhe abhi bhook nhe hai.........
suddenly his best frend thaani enters
thaani:
prem k dad ki frend ki beti.n prem ki best frend.........
thaani:aise kese bhook nhe hai..........
prem:arre thani tum....yaha?
thaani:han.......aisa kabhi hua hai k tera bday ho aur mai na aao tujhe wish krne........
prem:aa naa beth.aur aap jaye jab bhook hoge mai khd apko bula lo ga
maid:ohk sir
she leaves
thaani:kya hau tujhe .aise mon kyun latkaya hua hai....maa bauji ki yaad arhe hai?
prem:nahi.....mjhe ku ane lage un ki yaad.......
thaani:acha aur yehe baat tu mjhe dekh k bol
prem:kya thaani toh bhi.mera bday wish krne aye hai na .wish kr aur jaa
thaani:chle jao ge ,chle jao ge.........pr tujhe aise chor k nhe.......aaj tera bday hai aur toh hai k aise betha hai.........
prem:toh kya kro.......thaani.......tujhe pta hai mjhe mera bday bilkul pasand nhe hai
thaani:asia hota hai kya prem.........
prem:yeh baat tu mjhe har saal kehte hai...........pr kch nhe hota ...sirf aisa he hota hai.......
thaani:aur yeh baat mai ahr saal tumjhe aise he nhe kehte.........
dekh prem aise kese chle ga.
thaani:jo hua so hua..is mai tere kya galti??
prem:lekan saza toh mere hai naa thani..........maa bauji kop toh mera bday yaad tak nhe hai......toh aise bday ka kya faidaa
thaani:prem.dekh toh idhar aa .toh apna bday apne liye toh mna skta hai...
prem:wohi toh mna rha ho aur mnata aye ho aur mnata rhoga.apne bday apne sath ...........
thaani:toh apna bday mere sath bhi toh mna skta hai naa.........aaj toh mere sath apna bday mnanae jayega..........us mai toh koi prob nhe hai....kyunk us mai na tere liye koi saza hai aur na tere glti.......
prem:pr thaani toh nhe smjhey ge kabhi is baat k
thani:toh theek hai na .mai nhe smjho ge toh toh bht smjhdar hai to tu he mere baat smjh ja.aur ab mjhe koi behas nhe krne.toh mere sath jaye ga matlab jayega...............
prem:pr hum jayege kaha?
thaani:aaj mere dad ki kisi hotel mai koi bht bari meeting hai.. toh woh waha meeting attend krege aur hum hotel mai njoy krege..........mai call kr k baqi frndz ko bhi bula lete ho.theek hai?
prem:nahi thaani...................mai kisi aur frnd k sath nhe jana cahta...u knw na
thaani:acha baba theek hai.toh ready rhna shaam ko 7 baje.........done
prem:done.........
thaani:chal ab mai chlte ho.....maa mera wait kr hre hoge.
prem:theek hai toh jaa..............
thaani:bye......
prem:bye
thaani leaves..........
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PRECAP:prem by mistake thrws wate on heers face........and heer slaps him.
keep reading
HATE LOVE STORIES
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum nice
i haunt read it yeah just bucking u up and i know it will b awesum
abhi time nahin hai
will read definitely on sat
as m busyyyy
with my brozz wedding yaa
will read it on saturdayyyyyyyyyyyyyy
byeeeeeee
apologies 4 dat
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
amazing tooooooo good but 1 thing anu tani ki love story mein prem heer ki entry???
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8
Hey...!
Liked da intro...!
btw i think heer's intro is some wat likes suhana's intro....😆
bt hw cares....it was nice...!
n chahat's pic was soooooo cute....
liked prem 2...!
w8ing 4 da next part...!
cant w8 4 premeer's meeting....😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
@hajz.tumhre bhai ki weding abhi tak khatam nhe ho.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Awesome loved it!!
Can't wait to find out how Premeer will fall in love!
Thanks for the pm!
Update soon!

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