MEET NEW FF *U n ME aur KISMAT* pg.36 Updated!! - Page 3

wicked huh!!....loved it 2 d core.....u toh dint send me d link....bt i had to read it!!....dint i??.....i hv an exam tom n i hv lyk 3 chaps left n im here readin ur fic!!!!........wel i cudnt stop myself fm readin it!!!!!........awesome....wel dun......n dnt 4get im always der 2 help u if u need ne!!!!!.....best if luck n continue sooooon!!!!

Originally posted by: Rhea_401

wicked huh!!....loved it 2 d core.....u toh dint send me d link....bt i had to read it!!....dint i??.....i hv an exam tom n i hv lyk 3 chaps left n im here readin ur fic!!!!........wel i cudnt stop myself fm readin it!!!!!........awesome....wel dun......n dnt 4get im always der 2 help u if u need ne!!!!!.....best if luck n continue sooooon!!!!

owhmigoshhh rhea sowhhh sorry forgot to send it.... hope u don't mind n thankkk us owhh muchiieee for liking it.... hihihihix... 😳 😉

terrific ff.....i know u only wrote one part but loved it to the core....

it was so cute! it made me think of a recent episode of brothers and sisters! I loved it except I don't think preet should have popped the qustion right now. He is only doing it because he thinks she will die! and that isn't fair! haha maybe i am saying all of this because the same thing happened in episode of brothers and sisters. anyways awesome job!!! keep it up!

Originally posted by: tadashi

it was so cute! it made me think of a recent episode of brothers and sisters! I loved it except I don't think preet should have popped the qustion right now. He is only doing it because he thinks she will die! and that isn't fair! haha maybe i am saying all of this because the same thing happened in episode of brothers and sisters. anyways awesome job!!! keep it up!<br>

omigoshhh u tooo watching the series?!! i justtt loveeee the scene where robert proposed to kitty again... that was just awesome... i jz couldn't stop myself from using some of the dialogues and scenes as well from that epi....hihihihixx.. it wass touchinggg naa...!! 😆

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but short...:(
update next part sooooonnnnnnn

Chap 2....

It was only a few hours left before the operation… So Preet decides to go for a walk with meher in the hospital garden to spends some time alone with her before the operation… After sometime, they went to sit at the bench, Meher placed her head on preet's chest and he hugged her tightly.. At that very moment, he just wishes that this moment could just stays forever… After awhile, he releases meher from his hug and went down to his knees… He took Meher's hand and popped up with unexpected question…


Hosp. Garden scen…

Meher looked at him confusingly....

MEHER: Preet what r u doing..?(asking him nervously)

PREET: I adore you…!

Meher try to interrupt but preet stops her, tell her to "Shhhhh"… keeping one of his fingers on her lips….and continue saying…

PREET: Not do I have any regrets… I love you more now….ever and forever..
Will you……. (pause for sec, trying to control his laughter).... make babies with me
in the future..?! (smiling widely)

MEHER: (She muttered)...I…I, are u serious… ?! (utterly shocked)

Meher was blushing, her faces was turning red, she keeps hitting Preet on his shoulder, she didn't expect her husband could still cracked jokes with his witty rhetorical questions even at this very moment…. They couldn't stop laughing since then and start jokes around even more... Meher was smiling and crying at the same time, but deep inside, she's feeling very scarred for loosing preet in her life… Preet goes on to says...


PREET : (in whispering tone) Toh...What say?! U n Me... together..!
Time abhi baaki hai…If u want…I mean like now...
Waise bhi romance in the hospital….Haa thoda ajeeb hai
lekin….Hum manage karlenge… Hey naa...?
(He said teasingly, winks at her,he brings his face forward ,
trying to kiss her wife but meher pushed him back)


MEHER : Preeet…!!! ( She hitting him even harder , start to blushing even more, she sighs n
smile widely to him

Meher feels so embrassed yet she loves the way Preet keep teasing her, making her blushing… She has just realized how much she misses those moments with Preet…

Preet was ecstatic, he was very glad for making meher smiles and for keeping her happy… He can't see meher's tears nor her pains... They both keep smiling, both had tears of joy… He moved closer, he gives her a tight hug and kissed her on lips…

After a few hours later, Meher was being taken into the Operation Theatre on a stretcher while Preet held her hand in his palms... He whispered, " you're gonna be fine and besides i can't make babies alone...",Meher smiles, his tears choking his voice and slowly he let go of her hand while she was being taken inside…..

As soon as he reached the hospital lobby, he collapsed and broke down on the floor, tears falling from his eyes, he was very scarred and unable to speak a word only his eyes spoke… He can't bare the thought of loosing Meher again.. He already lost her once… He begins to recollect all the moments he had spent with Meher, each and every scenes start to flashed… Starting from their first meeting, 'Jab We Met scene'



p/s: sorry for all the errors…! I need to put it up right away or never..plus it's better late than never..… My Boss has given mee sowh much works n I've got cllg assignments as well, so due to my hectic schedules this is the least I can give u guys by writing the ending part+ some of flashback scenes…Comingg soon..!LOL… I wish I could write moree but I was quite in hurry …. But i'll try to post the next part asap....hihihihx..nway plzz once again bare with all my typo errors etc...Thank u sowhh much to everyone who has commented, waiting my updates patiently and also for appreciating my story... A bigggg Huggieee to all of UU..!!!🤗 xxoxxo


Owh btw.... Rhea.....!! dear when r u planning to updates ur tow fab FF..?! dil ne jise n Hum dil de chuke sanam....Intezaar... intezaar hooo intezaar..... 😉

Originally posted by: alviraz

omigoshhh u tooo watching the series?!! i justtt loveeee the scene where robert proposed to kitty again... that was just awesome... i jz couldn't stop myself from using some of the dialogues and scenes as well from that epi....hihihihixx.. it wass touchinggg naa...!! 😆

Omg! that is one of my favorite shows! I watch that and desperate housewives!😆 where do you live?

Originally posted by: tadashi

Omg! that is one of my favorite shows! I watch that and desperate housewives!😆where do you live?

Anyways, I agree the proposal scene was so cute! I love robert- he is a hot old guy!

warghhhhhhh Cooolicioussss... wicked huh,,,,! even m also loveeess watching brothers and sisters... somehow i feel like i can actually relates my family, my siblings with each of the characters... I mean in terms of the bonding, relationships, individual characteristics etc.... .... 😛 n yesss Robert and the youngest one...justin... two hotties in one show...no wonder we loveess to watch it sowh muchh.... 😳