The Secret Garden- part 16b on page 30 (6/9 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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omgg...ii cant waitt till tomorrowww....finishh ittt!!!!! ...lol

until then......**reserved**
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi!
superb........... plz update soon................
thx for the pm......still guessing what excuse meher will cook up ........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was such a cute part!
Love Meet together they are awesome
Preet is such a sweetheart!
Loved the ending
Update again real soon please!
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
cute update! luved preet's joke abt the money!😆
plz update soon....
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love Preet, he is so ishmart........go Preet....you rock
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
gr8 part yaar, want more of meet ...................... plz update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5
This story takes place after the Ash pretending to sleep with Prem but gayathri is positive in this!
Meher returned to her house after finally picking up Heer's medicines. She quickly hid the sari- she didn't want heer to see it after the conversation they had earlier. She made Heer's favorite food but modified it using the new diet plan the doctor had given her. Meher hummed as she cooked. Meanwhile gayathri was worried about her children. Prem had been confined to his office since heer had left. Harman and Maya had been visiting Maya's ill father. Preet had been angry at prem and had not returned home all night. Gayathri was heart broken and she was crying while touching the family photographs. Just then Preet returned home humming, gayathri was startled. Gayathri asked him why he was so happy. He couldn't tell her the truth so he told her they just landed a big contract. Gayathri was depressed again, "I thought you had some good news about heer and meher."
I am working on it, ma. Where is bhaiyya?" preet said glancing around the house.
"where else would he be? At the office. Aren't you coming from there?" gayathri said raising her eyebrows.
"woh, uh, I was at the new hotel. But I will go meet him right now." preet said as he darted up the stairs.
Preet changed and then drove to their office but on his way he saw Ashlesha grabbing a taxi. He quickly started following her taxi. He sees her stopping at a restaurant and follows her. Sure enough, he sees her meeting with her mother, daljeet. Preet is too far away to hear anything but decides something fishy is going on. He is leaving the restaurant when Ash spots him. She runs to him and shouts his name. preet turns around and glares at her. "Listen Preet, I am so sorry about what happened between me and prem. We were both drunk and didn't know what we were doing. After losing you, I have lost all sense of what is right and wrong. i heard that meher and heer left, if you ever need to talk I am here for you. " Preet looked at her disgusted and walked away without saying anything. He couldn't believe that she had the nerve to say an of that to him, after what she did.

Preet reached the office and saw prem staring out a window in his cabin. He went inside Prem's cabin and put his hand on Prem's shoulder. Prem turned around, "arrey, Preet, tum kab aye?" "Bas abhi, bhaiyya. I wanted to talk to you about what happened. Do you remember anything about that night? Are you sure you slept with Ash? Somehow I am not convinced you did it."

"preet, all I remember is that she helped me up to a room and I passed out on the bed with a bottle. The last thing I remember saying is Heer's name."

"Bhaiyya. I think Ash is lying. I think she may have set the whole thing up. She is a little deranged. I think I can get her to confess to what she did. You leave all this up to me, in the mean time- I know where bhabhi is- I think you should casually run into her." Preet said while winking at prem.

Prem was ecstatic! He hugged preet and ran to the place of Heer's interview.

Preet decided he knew how to get ash to confess, but he wasn't going to tell meher, he didn't think she would be on board with the plan.

Sorry for no meet scenes, but I promise that the next part will have some rendevous in the garden!😉

Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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love ur update and u....................
awesome......
as usaual preet ws way gud nd evn meher too
update soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hum tum ek garden main ghumte ho!!
aur Heer Di pakad le!!
he hehe...cant imagine the looks on all 3 ppl's faces!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the update. can't wait to know preet's plan. thanks for the pm.

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