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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow nyc prt........but pahleez dnt create ne misunderstandings b/w dem...............i wish Preet informs Meher abt his plans...........do updt sooooon........luv ya......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 6
Great so far
So Prem has had a chance to talk to Heer
Like this Gayathri
Yay for Meet
Update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Meet Rocks, can't wait to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 part...can't wait to read more!
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 7
Meher cooked for heer di and then showered and hurried to get dressed. She decided to wear a blue sari -since blue was preet's favorite color. She peeked into Heer's room before leaving. She saw that heer di was sleeping with a photo of her and jiju. Meher sighed- she hoped this mess was over soon.

Meher arrived at the new hotel at 8:45. She had no idea where preet's cabin- she was actally a little embarrassed- how could she not know where her husband worked? Anyway, she walked up to the front desk and saw a sweet lady sitting there. Meher approached the lady and said, "Hi, I am looking for Preet Juneja's cabin." Mrs. mehta looked up at the pretty girl and told her, "i will take you-it is on the 21st floor. Waise bhi,I was going to have someone take his morning chai. what is your name beta?"

Meher was about to tell her and then she stopped because she wasn't sure if Preet wanted people knowing she was here plus what if this lady told Prem or bauji? "my name is amrita."

Mrs. Mehta had been hoping the girl was meher.

Mrs. Mehta led Meher to Preet's cabin and just as she was about to open the door. Meher said, "aunty I will take his chai to him you don't worry."

Mrs. Mehta handed her the chai and smiled. Meher walked in Preet's cabin and saw that preet was standing near the window with his back to the door. Meher snuck up behind him and held out the chai . He didn't turn he simply took the chai and set it down.

Meher knew preet wouldn't notice, so she stood on the tips of her toes and put her arm around his neck and kissed his cheek. preet was startled and he immediately turned around. He smiled when saw it was meher. He told the person on the phone, " I will call you back." He pulled meher in for a kiss. meher pulled away and said, "Koi dekh lega- you have a glass wall and doors!" "Quit worrying so much!" preet said while he was pouting.

little did they know that mrs. Mehta was watching. She gasped! What was Preet doing with this Amrita? Was this the girl that he was with the other night. Is that why he didn't introduce her? Oh no she thought, she couldn't talk to preet about it- what if he lied again? She had to tell Prem. He would make Preet understand without turning it into a huge ordeal.

Inside Preet's cabin, Meher was trying to get Preet off of her. "Come on Preet, be serious! Now what can I help you with?"

"Meher, We are pratically newlyweds- we are supposed to be having fun!"

"Preet! We have been married for almost 11 months! We are not newlyweds."

"meher, we just started our life as husband and wife! Why are you being so difficult!?"

"Preet, seriously- what was your genius plan to help heerdi and prem jiju?"

Meanwhile Mrs. Mehta had called Prem and told him everything- except she couldn't remember the name of the girl, all she remembered was that it started with an "A"

Prem was in disbelief. Preet could never do anything like that! Even earlier when He and heer had checked the log house in kasauli- they had found no preet. Of course, Prem had forgotten to ask preet about it. But Preet loved meher right? Prem wasn't so sure. Their marriage was a compromise but he had seen them flirt and hold hands. Prem had thrown his marriage away but preet couldn't do that. He had to talk to heer though. He had to find out what was going on between preet and meher.

I added a twist with the Mrs. mehta- can you tell where i am going with it? 😉

Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
my spot !

edit :

loll blue really suits Mehr, she really looks pretty in that baby blue color ( like in the May 1st episode where she talks to Preet on the phone hiding in the bathroom lollz ) .. Nice color, it was a change since I used to read red color everywhere 😆 ( just kiddin ) .. but it's his naya hotel naa, so it cn be possible that she doesn't know where his cabin is, koi baat nahi =) .. Aah she shd have said her real name, but I understand she was in a dilemma, I'm afraid it cd lead to a misunderstanding .. i know it won't but still 😉 ..
Aww how cute of Mehr !! happy that she took the first step now, and that they are no more feeling awkward or embarrassed .. loll so he was on the phone, I was wndering if he was tensed or angry since he ddn't turn around when Mehr handed him the tea .. To answer u Mrs Mehta, yes she was the same girl, his wife 😆 , but dnt u know spying is a bad manner .. Ohh well afterall it was for Mehr so I forgive her ..
ohh so Prem believed it was Ash !! So it's going a bit like the Kasauli way, Premeer will reunite during this .. but what was Preet's plan then ? did he have any ( or did u 😆 just jokin ) ?? 😆
lovd this part, update the next part asap !
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
is prem gonna think its ash

cuz ash's name satars with a A

thanx 4 the pm


update soon



Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya kinda....."Ash",strts wid an "A" too....arghhh..... 😡 😡 .............al in al a wonderful updt,slightly short though bt ws fun!!!!.....thanksss!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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where evr u going????????????ur da bestttttttttt
its so fun but small:(
plz update soon and biger nxt tym...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
you updated!!
yayyy.......Ohhh another twist!!... hopefully this will make premeer come closer by tring to save their bro/sis marriage hehehe... =P
- Luv Pari

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