The Secret Garden- part 16b on page 30 (6/9 - Page 2

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hii thanx for thr pm nice update plz update sooon
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it was a cute and short update :) .. but it was very interesting .. So Meet didn't confess yet, sounds interesting, maybe tonyte ? ;-) .. No taxis, Some of the roads are closed .. Let's see what these are gonna do .. thks for the pm and update soon :) .. btw today, we are the october 31st .. happy halloween .. u wrote november 1st n ur title loll ..
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hey nyc ff yaar..........wonder wat wil happen nxt!!!!!!
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thnks for pm..m waitng for wat happens next............................update soon
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Originally posted by: tasnime

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it was a cute and short update :) .. but it was very interesting .. So Meet didn't confess yet, sounds interesting, maybe tonyte ? ;-) .. No taxis, Some of the roads are closed .. Let's see what these are gonna do .. thks for the pm and update soon :) .. btw today, we are the october 31st .. happy halloween .. u wrote november 1st n ur title loll ..

I think you can tell where i am going with this right? 😳haha and thanks for the date update- I am so lost with college applications that I screwed up the date too.
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Part 3

Preet decided this was the perfect time to do something he had been dying to do. He had to confess. " Um Meher, we are in our hotel, so we can spend the night here and then you can leave early morning tomorrow. It is our only option. You cannot argue with me on this one!"
Meher reluctantly agreed, "I know you are right, but I have to leave in the morning!"
Preet smiled and told meher he would go get them a room. Preet ran to Mrs. mehta, the head receptionist,winked and said "Hi sweetheart, can I get a key to the garden estate?"
mrs. Mehta squealed, "beta, how many times have I told you not to flirt with me, i am your mother's age and besides i have too many boyfrinds as it is. " They both laughed. mrs metha then asked preet, " Waise why do you want to stay in the garden room? while raising her eyebrows.
Preet said in a whisper, "I am here with the Mrs." and then winked again.
mrs mehta got excited and said, "beta i must meet her! i was not at your wedding!"
" Not now sweetheart, woh app ko dekhe jealous ho jayegi. or waise bhi i don't have much time." preet said sweetly.
"thik hai but next time you have to introduce me!" mrss mehta said in a motherly voice.
"Anythinng for you darling!" preet said. Mrs. Mehta slapped him lightly and with that he went off to meher.
"Come on meher lets go. " preet said grinning boyishly.
Preet led meher to the new suite that had just been built. It was a villa that was separated from the rest of the hotel and surrounded by trees, vines, flowers, and plants. the idea had been Prem's, since he was the hopeless romantic. No one had used it yet, but it had earned great reviews from hotl critics already. They were planning to build 7 more around the hotel.
"wow. Preet this is breath taking! but why are we staying here, why can't we just stay in a regular room?" meher said innocently.
Preet sighed and brought Meher to sit on the canopy bed. He held her hand and said, "Because you are not regular, we aren't regular, and neither is our relationship."
Meher looked at him wide - eyed. Was he going to say what she thought he was going to say?
"Meher, after you left i realized how i can't live with out you. You make me me smile, and always make me feel better. When you walk into a room my heart skips a beat. When you hold my hand, or actually when I hold yours( he chuckled as he said this remembering the various times he had grabbed meher's hand) my senses go numb. I love you meher. I know our relationship started out as a compromise and we were just friends, but I couldn't help but fall in love with you."
Meher stared at Preet. She was shocked. She had experience feelings for quite sometime now too, but with heer di's problems she hadn't really allowed herself time to articulate them.
However, things were different now, listening to preet made her realized that she felt those exact things. She saw preet staring at her with anticipation and they forced her to do something she would have never done before. She kissed him lightly and drew away from him. She smiled as preet looked at her with surprise now and said, "I love you too." Preet broke out into a huge smile and hugged her.
Meher was so happy. She couldn't believe what had just happened, but she wanted to live in this moment in case it slipped away. She grabbed preet's hand and led him out the glass doors of the villa into the garden. Preet said, "meher are you crazy its a torrential downpour here!"
Meher looked at him, and said in a mischeivious tone, "So, let's dance in the rain enjoy this beutiful night, unless you want to go inside and talk all night like we did in kausali."
"preet laughed at her remark, and said "wait." He went inside the villa and turned on the music system( which was loud enough to drown the thunder and rain.)
They danced to slow romantic songs. Preet held meher close and she rested her head on him while they swayed to the music. Preet twirled meher and they gazed into each others eyes. They realized their was nowhere they rather be.
So did you guys like it? Sorry for all the mistakes- i am just to lazy to edit. I think after this, the story is going to be more premeer centric for a while. But I promise a lot of MEET. I really hope you guys like it! Let me know if you have any suggestions for improvements!!!!😳
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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see, I guessed it right ;-) .. It was an amazing update and a very lovely and romantic confession .. I hope both couples end up together soon, I mean Meet are together, but they have to live together now too .. m glad preet realized his love and Mehr too =)) .. can't wait for the next part, update soon !!
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tadashi

I think you can tell where i am going with this right? 😳haha and thanks for the date update- I am so lost with college applications that I screwed up the date too.



hehe Yes, I guessed the track, btw forgot to add the secret garden in my descibtions 😃.. but I'll let the others to guess as well 😳 evn though I've given enough clues 😆 .. aww, College applications are really easy here ( in France ) lollz ..Happy HalllooooWeeen !!
Edited by tasnime - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice update
thankz for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update!
eagerly waiting to read wht hppns next!
thnx for the pm!

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